At Fluttershy's Cottage

by AtomicClop

Rating: mature
Tags: My Little Pony Comic, Porn, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Deer, Rarity, Fluttershy, Sex
Length: 4350

Rarity and Fluttershy threesome Blackthorn, an Everfree Deer

Rarity and Fluttershy threesome Blackthorn, an Everfree Deer.

Blackthorn is from the comic The Root of the Problem.

Contains: FFM threesome, oral, vaginal, anal, creampie eating, interspecies.

An entry for Dirty Little Secret's Dirty Little Contest!

Published 2020-03-23 14:40:01 UTC
Last updated 2020-03-23 14:40:01 UTC

A very horny deer

It was a stormy, if otherwise ordinary, day when Discord showed up at Rarity's boutique.

Rarity sat at her sewing machine, hemming a beautiful rose-gold dress.

Sweetie Belle jumped rope as a record player blasted uptempo music. Sweat dripped down her flanks and neck. A sweatband, the same greenish color as her eyes, circled her head, and smaller sweatbands circled each ankle.

Discord opened a portal through the depths of space and time and stepped into Rarity's workroom.

Rarity kept sewing. "No chaos today, if you don't mind, Discord, hmm? I have a deadline for seven bridesmaids dresses."

Sweetie Belle kept up her jump-roping. Thunder rumbled outside and rain lashed the windows.

"Indeeeeeeeeed?" Discord said, tapping his chin. "Well, then, I shall just have to find a different best friend to help Fluttershy with her problem."

Rarity dropped her sewing and looked up at Discord. "Fluttershy? Well—whyever didn't you just say so? What does she need?"

"Well," Discord replied, leaning down nose-to-nose with Rarity, "she doesn't think she needs help. She can be as stubborn as Applejack sometimes..."

"You're going to make me drag it out of you, aren't you, Discord?"

"Maybe your best bet is to just go to her cottage and see what her problem is," Discord said.

"Not even a hint?" Rarity asked.

"It's better if not."

Rarity rolled her eyes. "Very well. Sweetie Belle?

She levitated down the jump rope, and, panting hard, looked over her withers at Rarity.

"Mother and Father should be on the five o'clock train. Do go meet them at the station with an umbrella and help with their bags, yes? I'll be home as soon as I have Fluttershy sorted out."

Rarity grabbed boots, a raincoat, and an umbrella. She hustled out the door and turned toward the Everfree and Fluttershy's cottage.

Sweetie Belle looked at Discord. "You're trying to break up Fluttershy and that secret boyfriend of hers again, aren't you?"

"Not at all," Discord replied. "I'm trying to get her some fun, this time, and we all know Rarity is the most fun mare in town."

As Rarity trotted up the path to Fluttershy's cottage, she could hear sobbing or perhaps panting, even over the sounds of the storm. Discord was, apparently, dead serious for once!

Rarity turned her trot to a gallop and rushed up the remainder of the path. Barging in the front door, she leaped over Angel Bunny—who chittered angrily and waved a paw at her—landing in the middle of the living room. Her rainboots left a wet and muddy spot where she stood. Rarity paused, twisting her ears this way and that.

"Ah–ah–ah–oh..." came Fluttershy's voice, high and raspy, through the open door to her bedroom. Rarity rushed forward—

—and halted at the threshold.

Fluttershy lay flat on her back on her bed, her hips pulled off the edge. Blackthorn, the huge deer they had met in the Everfree Forest a few years back, stood with his rear hooves on the floor and his forehooves on the sheets. Fluttershy's forelegs were tucked to her chest.

They started deep into each other's eyes, noses less than an inch apart, as he rammed his hips forward, again and again, piledriving Fluttershy and rocking the bed. She gasped and cried out in time with his fervent rutting.

The smell of sweat and wet pussy filled the room.

Rarity stared at them, eyes wide, as they kept fucking, oblivious to her presence. She'd always assumed Fluttershy was a virgin, too shy and scared to get involved in a... a... a relationship.

Fluttershy wrapped her rear legs around the deer's hips, and her tail slithered underneath him, between his legs, massaging his massive and pendulous balls, and she started yanking his body forward with her legs.

"Yes!" Fluttershy gasped, voice quiet. "I'm coming! Pound my insides... please... and fill me up! Um, if it's no trouble..."

Pussy juices dripped from her dock and buttcheeks onto the floor.

Blackthorn grunted, loud and deep, and slammed himself forward one last time, lifting Fluttershy's rump two inches off the bed, and she shouted and tossed her forelegs wide.

A wet splort came from their mashed-together privates, thick white deer cum splattered onto the hardwood floor, and the smell of a well-loved mare hit Rarity's nose.

Fluttershy wriggled and whined on the bed as her orgasm faded. Blackthorn pushed his hips forward another few times as her greedy pussy milked his cock. The two lovers shared a deep kiss.

Rarity began to back, very quietly, out of the room, towards the front door. She didn't know what Discord had been thinking, but she was going to give him a piece of her—

After two steps, while she could still easily see the lovers, Angel Bunny tugged on her fetlock.

She looked down at him and glared, making a silent shoo, shoo gesture.

He grinned, and pulled out a pair of cymbals from behind his back.

"No!" Rarity mouthed silently.

Yes, he nodded his head with an evil grin.

"Please no!" Rarity mouthed.

Angel Bunny crashed the cymbals together.

"I'm ever so sorry," Rarity said for the thirty-ninth time, and took another sip of hot tea.

"It's not your fault," Fluttershy said for the thirty-ninth time.

Blackthorn grunted.

The three of them sat at Fluttershy's dining room table. Angel Bunny, locked into a pet carrier, sulked with his arms crossed over his chest.

Fluttershy sat on a bath towel, to protect the chair's varnish from the massive load of deer spunk that still dripped from her glistening labia.

"I... if I... could tell you the truth?" Fluttershy started.

"Of course, darling!" Rarity put her tea down and looked into Fluttershy's eyes.

"We've been keeping our relationship a secret because... well, I wasn't sure what you girls would think, knowing I had a special somedeer. Not because he's a deer, of course! But you all have always thought I was..."

"Shy?" Rarity supplied with a smile.

"Frigid. I'm not, but I am so shy that I've had trouble acting on my desires."

Rarity nodded, and placed a hoof on Fluttershy's.

"I need sex as much as the next mare, but I've always been so nervous talking to stallions. Blackthorn, well, he and I..."

"We're not just lovers," he said. "We're good friends, now. I spend all my free time here, or Flutterbutt goes into the forest with me."

"That's wonderful!" Rarity said.

Fluttershy nodded, and her hair fell over her eyes, hiding her face. She used a wing to pull the hair away, and looked into Rarity's eyes. "It's also helping me with... aspects... of my shyness?"

"Indeed, darling?" Rarity said.

"I'm learning how to ask for what I want..." Very quietly: "...in bed."

"That is true," Blackthorn said with a chuckle. "Very true."

"Wonderful, Fluttershy," Rarity replied with a nod.

"I want... want..." the hair fell back over Fluttershy's eyes.

"Yes?" Rarity asked.

"I want a threesome. Please. If it's not too much trouble? I've never had my pussy eaten by a mare. I've never eaten pussy."

Rarity tapped a hoof on the table and thought for a few seconds. "I've never been with another mare... literally hundreds of stallions, but never a mare... this won't make our friendship weird, will it?"

"There's an ancient proverb of the Everfree Deer," Blackthorn said.

"Oh?" replied Rarity and Fluttershy.

Blackthorn smiled, and his bright orange eyes twinkled. "The proverb goes, 'It's not gay if it's a three-way.'"

Fluttershy flapped twice, landed on the bed, and then flopped onto her back, spreading her hips and wings wide.

"Rarity?" she said. "Have you ever made love to a pegasus?"

"Of course, darling."

"Were you on top?"

Rarity thought for a second. "No, no I can't say that I was."

"Wings are more fragile than you might think."

Blackthorn sidled up to Rarity, his flank rubbing against hers. "What Fluttershy is saying, Rarity, is that she's making herself very vulnerable by spreading her wings out. She trusts you, us—but do be careful."

Rarity's stomach lurched as she looked at Fluttershy's pussy. A string of Blackthorn's earlier creampie stretched from her clit to her dock, and the pink lips inside the yellow-coated mound still glistened from the earlier lovemaking.

"I— darling, I really don't know what to do. I'm an expert at pleasing a stallion." She flicked her tail, brushing the underside of Blackthorn's ballsack. "I'm finding it difficult to get started, here— YIPE!"

Rarity's entire body tensed as Blackthorn nosed under her tail and licked up between her pussy lips. Then, after she realized what was happening, she relaxed and raised her tail to give him easier access.

"Oh my, yes..." Rarity muttered as his long tongue began to probe in between her folds, her nethers slickening and warming and his tongue working deeper, deeper, deeper as her channel warmed and relaxed.

Fluttershy squirmed and writhed on the bed. "Someone please... I mean... if it's not too much trouble..." Her tail battered the bedsheets, and her clit winked desperately.

Rarity whined as Blackthorn pulled his face out from under her tail. He stepped past her, licking his lips, and hopped onto the bed, kneeled down between Fluttershy's spread hips, and slowly inserted his huge erection into her wetness.

Fluttershy arched her back and moaned as he entered her, her eyes clenching. Rarity watched, rapt. His member was bright pink, almost red, whereas pony's cocks tended to be the same color as their coats. He was a bit on the narrow side, but as long or longer than even Big Mac, and his cock was nicely pointed at the tip.

Raising her tail further she decided that, yes, indeed, this was going to be a very interesting afternoon.

"Rarity?" Fluttershy whispered. "Come on up here, if you want..."

Blackthorn leaned down and kissed Fluttershy's lips, and the two of them moaned. He wasn't rutting her, just holding himself hilted, still, as Fluttershy squirmed her hips underneath him.

She took a hesitant step toward the bed, then another. Did she really want to do this? Join in on the two lovers' play? Be the third?

A large glob of excitement dripped out of Rarity's pussy and splattered onto the hardwood of Fluttershy's bedroom floor.

Yes. Yes, she did want to be their third.

Rarity placed her forehooves onto the bed and lifted herself up.

Blackthorn and Fluttershy broke their kiss, and Rarity leaned down and gave Fluttershy a kiss on the lips. She tasted sweet, and a hint of floral perfume touched Rarity's nose. Fluttershy's tongue came out and traced around Rarity's lips, feather-light, and Rarity closed her eyes as the sensation exploded across her, down her spine, and intensified the fires burning under her tail.

Fluttershy's lips moved to the line of Rarity's jaw, and teeth gently nibbled. Goosebumps and chills ran down Rarity's back and—

Blackthorn's lips met Rarity's, and her eyes popped open.

His orange eyes were but an inch or two from hers, and she stared into them as Fluttershy nibbled down Rarity's jawline to her neck.

Rarity and Blackthorn kissed, shallow at first, then deeper, their tongues twining and intertwining, and she pressed her tongue into his mouth, tasting him—tasting his species—for the first time. His tongue was longer than a stallion's, and it wrapped around hers, pulling it into his mouth as he kissed and sucked. Rarity's entire body trembled with the wonder of the sensation, a kiss unlike any of the tens of thousands she had ever experienced before.

Interspecies! Why had she waited so long? She vowed to fuck somecreature of every species should could find, as soon as possible... Hippogriff, griffon, kirin, donkey...

Fluttershy bit Rarity's ear, and Rarity moaned into Blackthorn's mouth.

"Come up on the bed," Fluttershy whispered. "Now. Please."

Was she ready? Was this really what she wanted?

Rarity hopped up, her rear hooves joining her forehooves on the bed. "I... I don't know what..."

"Lie down on top of Fluttershy," Blackthorn said.

"Which way?" Rarity asked.

Blackthorn pulled his hips back, until the very tip of his cock was barely brushing against Fluttershy's glistening pussylips. "Put your head down here."

"Wings," Fluttershy whispered.

Rarity turned herself around and straddled Fluttershy, her own bottom above Fluttershy's face, and arranged her legs and hooves carefully around Fluttershy's wings.

"Like this, Darlings?" Rarity asked.

"Exactly," Blackthorn said. "Lower your snatch so Fluttershy can reach it."

A blush formed on Rarity's face, hot across her cheeks. "I've never—never with a mare—"

"Me either," Fluttershy whispered.

Rarity looked under her own barrel, at Fluttershy, and saw she was blushing just as brightly. Rarity lowered her hips. Fluttershy lifted up her head from the pillow and stretched out her tongue until—

A sensation like lightning struck Rarity, right in her twat, as the soft tongue touched her clit, swirled around it, and then snaked back, along her labia, and then up into her channel. Rarity sucked in a gasping breath as the muscles in her legs and belly clenched and her tail shot straight up.

Rarity lowered her hips another inch, lowered her belly to Fluttershy's, and Fluttershy dug in deeper, lips and tongue working to suck and massage, and Fluttershy's moans and groans vibrated up into Rarity's snatch.

"Ahhhhh...." Rarity gasped.

Blackthorn lifted Rarity's snout up with a hoof, and placed another kiss on her lips as he simultaneously pressed his hips forward. His cock made a squelching sound as it reburied into Fluttershy, and Fluttershy arched her back underneath Rarity.

"Try tasting Fluttershy off of me," Blackthorn suggested, pulling his hips back again. His cock popped out of Fluttershy and bobbed, bouncing with his heartbeat, just a few inches from Rarity's snout.

"Ohhhhh," Fluttershy moaned, forlorn, when he pulled out.

Sniffing deeply, Rarity smelled a hint of stag, different from stallion but pleasant and wonderfully male. The scent of Fluttershy's flower-sweetness swirled around her, making Rarity's head light, and there was a hint... just a hint... of Blackthorn's wonderful spunk, still dripping from Fluttershy from their earlier bareback lovemaking.

Fluttershy's tongue moved from Rarity's channel, back to clit, and Fluttershy sucked and swirled her tongue over Rarity's nub and Rarity shouted and closed her eyes as wetness, hot wetness, blossomed across her pussylips and began to drip onto Fluttershy's face.

Opening her eyes, Rarity saw the glistening mare juices slicking Blackthorn's long cock, and a few spots of his own cum...

Rarity's tongue reached out and licked one of the gobs from his cock.

The taste was unlike anything she'd ever known! She recognized the taste of pussyjuice, of course. She'd licked her own pussyjuice off dozens, if not hundreds, of cocks over the years, licked it off her own dildos practically every day of her life since she'd been a teenager, but something about Fluttershy's taste was different... more delicate. More feminine, perhaps.

She rolled the mixed fluids around her tongue, and the stronger taste of Blackthorn's cum contrasted with Fluttershy's, and Rarity raised her head and swallowed. "Exquisite, darlings," she said, and leaned down to take Blackthorn into her mouth.

Beneath Rarity's tail, Fluttershy still sucked and massaged, tongue flicking and rubbing her clit and vagina, Rarity's eyes watering from the wonderful sensation. Her tail bobbed in time with the throbbing in her pussy and asshole, and Fluttershy changed her rhythm, going out of time with Rarity's own throbbing, driving her even more insane with pleasure.

Rarity looked up and met Blackthorn's eyes, which widened as she slid her mouth around and down his throbbing shaft, taking him fully in, and into her throat. She breathed through her nose, her breath ragged as Fluttershy drove Rarity close to an orgasm, her tongue and lips and a hint of teeth stoking Rarity's fire.

Blackthorn panted as Rarity's lips and tongue and throat massaged the length of his cock. She pulled back, his tip slipping out of her throat, and lifted her head up, mouth open, tongue running along the bottom of his shaft until it slipped off his tip.

"Most gastronomically enticing, Blackthorn."

"We aim to please."

"You certainly—oh!" Rarity cut off as Fluttershy's tongue moved from her clit to her vagina again, driving in deep, and the sudden orgasm caught Rarity off-guard. Her rear legs clenched around Fluttershy's shoulders as a massive flood of her pussy juices ran across Fluttershy. Gooseflesh broke out across her hips and flanks. The muscles surrounding her womb clenched and her pussy spasmed, gripping down on Fluttershy's tongue. Fluttershy pushed in, harder and deeper, and Rarity felt the fire expand to engulf her whole body as her orgasm doubled and redoubled and Fluttershy just kept licking! Rarity rode through another spasm, then another, dripping and squirting onto Fluttershy's face over and over again as she just kept licking and burrowing into Rarity's twat!

Fluttershy gave a final long lick, starting at Rarity's clit, slowly up and between her pussylips. Her tongue pulled away, skipping past Rarity's asshole without touching it, and then that wonderful, skilled tongue met Rarity's dock. She nibbled the white coat just below where it met the purple of Rarity's tail hairs.

Rarity panted for a moment, then leaned down and clamped her lips around Flutterhy's clit. The short hairs on her yellow mound tickled Rarity's lips, and her tongue found the pink of Fluttershy's nub.

Pink, wet, throbbing, glistening, and huge, Blackthorn's cock slid forward and split Fluttershy's pussy open, slowly driving in a few inches, while Rarity sucked and nibbled her clit. Fluttershy squirmed, her lungs and chest heaving under Rarity.

"Oh, oh, oh..." Fluttershy gasped, he voice tiny and thin but her pleasure clear. "Please..." Fluttershy said. "Rarity, eat me out."

Fluttershy wriggled up the bed, out from under Rarity, pulling off Blackthorn's cock. Feathers brushed Rarity's legs and oh sweet Luna a feather brushed across Rarity's still-engorged and flaming clit.

Fluttershy moved, sitting up against the headboard, her hips spread wide and her tail swishing against the bedsheets. "Eat me!"

Rarity turned around and lowered her chest to the bedsheets, forelegs flat, her nose barely an inch from the throbbing yellow mound and its thick smell of mixed pussy juices and cum.

Looking over her own withers, Rarity raised her rump and pulled her tail to the left, presenting her soaking wet pussy to Blackthorn. "You know, darlings," she said, "I've used all sorts of lube in the past, but this shall be the first time I used my best friend's pussyjuices."

Fluttershy shuddered. Rarity leaned down and licked from the bottom of her slit, just above her asshole, along her left lip, to the clit. Fluttershy squeaked and a gush of fluid wet Rarity's lips as she sucked, and ever-so-gently nibbled, on Fluttershy's nub of soft pink flesh. Rarity then licked back down, down the right pussylip, back to the bottom of the slit, and buried her tongue deep into Fluttershy's canal.

So wonderful! Why hadn't she ever taken another mare before? Fluttershy's taste and warm wetness were simply exquisite. Although Rarity still, and always would, love stallions (or stags, now), mares were most certainly on her menu from now on.

Fluttershy screamed in delight, and then Rarity's scream joined hers as Blackthorn hopped up onto Rarity's back and drove his cock in, hilting her with a single brutal thrust, his massive balls hammering into her clit as his tip poked into the bottom of Rarity's womb, his length filling her with hot wetness.

Blackthorn leaned down and bit, hard, on Rarity's left ear.

"I feel your juices, my dear Fluttershy," Rarity crooned, then put her tongue back up Fluttershy's snatch. The sweetness of her friend's pussy almost overwhelmed Rarity, and she licked harder, deeper, digging as deep as she could, her nose and chin buried against Fluttershy's vulva, and a new taste, a different taste and texture, found her tongue. She recognized its robustness and wriggled her tongue, getting the wad of Blackthorn's seed, and pulling it out of Fluttershy and into her own mouth. Rarity rolled it around, over her tongue and palate, and she swallowed before diving back into the soft, fragrant yellow snatch.

Blackthorn began pumping, still gripping her ear in his teeth, his strokes long and steady, hilting himself every time, his balls slamming into Rarity's clit, his musclar ramming running up Rarity's spine and into Fluttershy's twat as Rarity nibbled and sucked and tongued.

A wonderful fullness took Rarity as he slammed into her, again and again, slick with Fluttershy's juices, and her own, as her pussy, throbbed with delight at the sensations both familiar and new.

Deercock, she decided, was just as wonderful as ponycock, but wonderful in its own way.

As Rarity sucked and licked, pushed forward into her twat, Fluttershy came continuously, wave after wave of pussyjuice soaking Rarity's nose and cheeks and chin as Fluttershy screamed, gasping incoherently.

Rarity moaned, unable to speak, nearly eyeballs-deep in Fluttershy's snatch, using her tongue to capture every drop of Blackthorn's seed and Fluttershy's hot gush. Blackthorn grunted with every thrust. Rarity concentrated, clenching her pussy around him, and he gasped and increased his pace.

"Wow," he said, releasing her ear. "What is...?"

Rarity pulled her tongue from Fluttershy with a slurp. "My secret talent, darling," she said. "Oh! And Fluttershy... try my other secret talent..."

She buried her face back into Fluttershy's dripping snatch and lit her horn. Soft blue magic coalesced around Rarity's nose, and then moved down, down, and formed a glowing orb over and around Fluttershy's puckered asshole, and slowly entered, stretching the pegasus's anus just slightly, and the magic began to buzz as it vibrated.

Fluttershy screamed, seemingly loud enough to hear back at the Boutique, her back arching, tail thrashing against Rarity's chin and the bed, wings spasming.

"Don't stop! Rarity—don't ever stop that!"

"What's she doing?" Blackthorn asked.

Rarity smiled as she increased the speed of the magical buzz and pushed her tongue deeper into Fluttershy's vagina.

"She... she... sheeee... my asshole... in the name of Celestia I had, had no idea..."

"Asshole, eh?" Blackthorn said. "Say, Rarity?"

She wiggled her rump and raised her tail vertically, exposing her anus in consent.

Blackthorn shifted his legs on her flanks, pulled his cock from Rarity's pussy, and lifted himself another inch. Fluttershy kept screaming as orgasm after orgasm crashed down on her.

I shall need a shower, Rarity thought. She's soaked me to my shoulders!

She felt pressure on her anus as Blackthorn positioned his cock. "Ready?"

"Mmmhmmm!" Rarity mumbled as she continued eating out Fluttershy.

Slowly, he pushed himself forward and she felt pressure as her ass resisted him, and then suddenly he popped in, and he filled her, a wonderful fullness she could hardly describe.

He hilted himself again, his length driving her mad as he slid through her tightness, the sensation of his cock splitting her ass open driving her wild. Her legs shook but she held herself up against his weight, and an orgasm ripped through her and she concentrated, clenching her ass muscles down on his cock, squeezing on it as hard as she could.

"Sweet Goddess of the Forest!" he yelled. "Do that again!"

She squeezed on his cock once more, her well-practiced ass muscles clamping down hard. She pulled her mouth away from Fluttershy's pussy just long enough to say, "I know more about using my bottom than ten other mares know about using their pussy, Blackthorn. Do yourself a favor and pull mostly out so I can clamp down on your tip."

"Indeed?" Blackthorn muttered.

"Don't—don't stop—" Fluttershy gasped and reached her forelegs down, grabbing the back of Rarity's head and pushing her face back to Fluttershy's snatch.

Rarity licked and sucked, desperate to drive Fluttershy to new levels of pleasure, and Blackthorn slowly pulled back. As his slick cock slid against the tightness of Rarity's asshole, she shuddered again in yet another orgasm and her ass clenched so hard on Blackthorn's cock that he grunted and struggled to keep pulling it from her.

Once he was almost out, his tip right at the tightest point of her butt, right at the hole, Rarity clenched, clenched, clenched, as hard as she could, as if she was trying to pinch his cock off.

He shouted and his forelegs clamped hard on her ribs and his hips shot forward again, his whole body spasming, his cock jumping so hard Rarity felt it deep inside herself as he unloaded spurt after spurt after spurt. His massive balls, pressing hard against her pussylips, spasmed and jerked, and that sensation drove her into another, final, mind-numbing orgasm, her entire body clenching, her vision going dark, her pussy spraying juices all over his balls. Her face drove deeper into Fluttershy and her magic spasmed in Fluttershy's asshole and the pegasus screamed, a high-pitched howl as she joined the orgasm, all three of them driving each other to greater heights, and the entire bed, the entire cottage, shook with the pleasure the three of them gave to each other.

Rarity's magic cut off. Fluttershy's asshole relaxed, back to its usual puckered self, and the pegasus collapsed against the headboard, wings and legs splayed. Rarity lifted her head from Fluttershy's snatch, a last string of mixed marecum and deercum connecting her nose to Fluttershy. She pulled the string into her mouth and she swallowed, and then rested her head on Fluttershy's soaking wet, still-shaking mound.

Blackthorn pushed his hips back, his cock popping out of Rarity's ass, and a huge wad of his cum dripped out of her asshole and onto the bedsheets as he flopped down on his side, next to Rarity.

"Wow," Blackthorn said.

"Erk," Fluttershy said.

"Exquisite," Rarity said.

Blackthorn turned his head, looked over the side of the bed and reached down. He pulled a fluffy white towel off the floor and used it to wipe his cock.

After one swipe, the towel began to chitter and wave its arms angrily.

"Angel?" Fluttershy said, her eyes popping open. "How'd you get out of the cage?"

Author's Note

Constructive comments are always welcome!