Im not in Sparta anymore

by little big pony
Maril, a Reasuin warrior from Reasu,ally and friend of sparta falls through a hole escapingBetrayal

Currently under editing I've gotten some complaints about grammar and I'm fixing it





Marvil, a Reasuin warrior from Reasu, ally and friend of Sparta falls through a hole escaping a betrayal that nearly kills him. after he falls though in lands in a Mysterious land with no way to get back. did i forget that there are talking ponys. Can the ponies change the battle hardened warrior into something better… or worse?

Rated mature due to violence and language.

Please write me and tell me what you think:)

3rd person at first but then gets to first person.

Teen
Incomplete
Tragedy
Adventure
Human
Romance
Comedy
 

42244 words: Estimated about 4 hours to read
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35 Chapters:

  1. Ch.1 Prolouge 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    195
  2. Ch.2 The night before the raid 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    1072
  3. Ch.3 We get screwed 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    1715
  4. Ch.4 Introductions 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    1650
  5. Ch.5 Celestia tries to read my mind 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    1355
  6. Ch.6 My Arrival 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    1961
  7. Ch.7 I give the girls a talking to and get a job 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    1118
  8. Ch.8 I Make Big Plans 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    1635
  9. Ch.9 We party till everyone passes out and I make a deal with Luna 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    1392
  10. Ch. 10 I build my bitchin house 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    1585
  11. Ch.11 Getting Settled in 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    1877
  12. Ch.12 I go fishing 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    1004
  13. Ch. 13 I get Celly back 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    1309
  14. Ch. 14 I help out a cutiemark crusader 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    1077
  15. Ch. 15 I do Celestia a favor 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    1590
  16. Ch. 16 Realization 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    1356
  17. Ch.17 I go to the spa 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    1363
  18. Ch.18 A day out with Scoots 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    1140
  19. Ch. 19 I catch a dog and Dash gets some advice 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    1305
  20. Ch.20 I get another roommate 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    1160
  21. Ch.21 getting settled in ( again) 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    825
  22. Ch.22 I go fishing with gods 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    1143
  23. Ch.23 Estrus gives me the reach around 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    1303
  24. Ch.24 In the woods part 1 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    1376
  25. Ch.25 in the woods part 2 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    1105
  26. Ch. 26 Death 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    1406
  27. Ch.27 Relationships 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    1086
  28. YOU DECIDE! 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    69
  29. Ch. 28 meeting the parents part 1 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    1232
  30. Ch.29 meeting the parents part 2 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    1376
  31. Ch. 30 The Forger gives me a job 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    1271
  32. Ch.31 Homecoming 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    1094
  33. Ch.32 Man time 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    976
  34. Need editors 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    58
  35. Ch.33 A Hunting we will go (part 1) 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    1065