CHANGING LIVE

by prince cosmos

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Chapter 6

The road to Fluttershy’s cottage was long and winding through group of trees. Mark walked down the path, glad that the trees gave him shade from the sun. There were no clouds in the sky, he didn’t know if that meant the pegasi were working hard, or hardly working. Rainbow Dash told him it was about 2 miles from her house to Fluttershy’s, but he wanted to walk it, it would give him some time to think about his last few days. What had he gotten himself into? He felt like he shouldn’t be doing what he had been, but he knew he couldn’t pass these opportunities up.  He stared directly up at the sky and started talking.

“God? Or god like figure? Celestia maybe? Whatever. I know you’re testing me down here, and I need you to know... I’m just a C student, okay? Cut me some slack.”

He didn’t know much about the pony lifestyle, but he knew one thing for sure, karma’s a bitch, and sooner or later, he’s gonna get screwed by her, and it definitely won’t be enjoyable.

Mark was walking down the path, not paying any attention, mostly thinking to himself, minding his own business.

“NOW!” Yelled a voice coming from some bushes beside him.

I giant net fell on top of him. Mark didn’t even have time to think. He just said what he would in any situation like this.

“What the fu-”

He looked down at his feet to find three fillies decked out in camo staring up at him.

“-fudge?”

The three ponies  started running circles around him, chanting, “CUTIE MARK CRUSADERS ANIMAL HUNTERS!”

Great, these ponies. Mark pulled the net off him and started walking away, when he felt someone pulling on his tail. Mark turned around to find Scootaloo uncomfortably close to his face.

“We caught him! Did we get out cutie mark? Did you get yours?” The went on for way too long, when Mark felt like he could find a way to end this.

“Why would you want to be animal hunters?”

“We don’t know.” The three said at the same time. “We’re trying everything.”

“Well, you’ll probably get your cutie mark in whatever you’re good at already and what you like to do.”

Mark turned his head to Applebloom.

“What are you good at?”

“I’m good with animals!”

“There you go! You can be like Fluttershy.”

Mark looked at Sweetie Belle.

“And you?”

“I can sing really well!”

“Nice, you’ll be a great singer.”

Mark turned to Scootaloo to find her already staring back at him, it was unexpected how much she was staring into his eyes, and actually scared him a little.

“And that leaves you.”

“I can do awesome tricks on my scooter!”

“Awesome! Be a stuntpony daredevil or whatever.”

Honestly, Mark couldn’t care about their cutie marks, he just wanted them out of his hair for the time being. Mark started walking away, hoping that would be the end of the conversation. He was wrong. The three were spending the day at Fluttershy’s helping her with the animals. He figured this was the bad karma already starting to take effect. He just hoped it would be worth it.

Together, the four of them walked down the road, Mark was silent, while the tree little fillies wouldn’t shut up. Mark kept his thoughts to himself.

“These kids are are diving me insane! I swear if I didn’t get laid last night...”

Mark let out a chuckle, unfortunately, the three heard him.

“What’s so funny?” The three asked together.

“Oh, nothing. It’s nothing at all.”

They eventually arrived at the cottage, they were met by Fluttershy outside. Their day basically consisted of working with animals. Mark spent the day moving karts of supplies and carrying animal food for Fluttershy, seeing as he was a large Colt. The CMC messed around most of the time, but Mark got a few cheap laughs watching Sweetie Belle get chased by a chicken. Applebloom on the other hand seemed right at home, herding animals. At the end of the day, Mark and Fluttershy just sat down and watched the kids play around with the animals.

The sun went down and the three fillies had fallen asleep, leaving Mark and Fluttershy alone with each other. Fluttershy handed mark a cup of tea, and they sat down at her kitchen table. The house was silent, it was the most quiet it had been all day.

“So Mark,” Fluttershy started. “How’s your stay in Ponyville been?”

“It’s been good.” Mark had no intention of telling her about what he had been doing.

“That’s nice. Meet any nice mares?”

Mark felt his heart stop, he didn’t want to make eye contact, he took a sip of tea. He felt his body relax, a little to relaxed. His vision blurred, through his eyes he could see that Fluttershy had a smirk on her face.

“Wait a min-.” That all Mark could say. The last thing he saw was the wooden table getting closer to his head. With one thud, his head hit the table, he was out cold.

Mark woke up, his second rude awakening since he got to Ponyville, but it was probably worse this time. It was extremely dark, with one candle alongside him sitting on a table. He was tied to a bed.

“Hello, Mark.” He saw Fluttershy emerged from the shadows. Her body flickering in the light of the candle. Mark was lost for words, she had a riding crop in her mouth. This was the last person Mark expected to see.

“What am I doing down here?!” Mark yelled. “Let me go!”

“Oh, I can’t do that Mark, especially after how you’ve been acting.”

Mark was taken back.

“What do you mean?”

“You think I don’t know?!” She lashed him across his flank with the riding crop, making him scream. “I know what you’ve been doing, I’ve had my eye on you.”

“How?

Mark watched as a small blue bird flew in and landed at Fluttershy’s front hooves.

“A little birdy told me.” A smile crossed her face. Mark couldn’t control himself, anger rushed through his body, he couldn’t move, just yell.

“IT WAS YOU! YOU’VE BEEN WATCHING ME! I KNEW SOMEONE WAS WATCHING ME!”

Mark felt another lash across his rump. Fluttershy raised her voice to match his.

“HOW DARE YOU RAISE YOUR VOICE TO ME?!”

Mark knew fighting was pointless, he went whisper quiet.

“...but why...?”

“Girls stick together don’t they? I don’t want you hurting my friends.”

“I would never do anything to hurt them.”

Fluttershy smiled.

“Good, but let’s make sure of that.” She walked right up to him, right until her face was almost touching his. “You’ve been very bad...” he whipped his underbelly as she spoke. “And you... Need to be... PUNISHED!” She gave one extremely hard lash along his waist, a welt appeared almost instantly. She stepped back, Mark was holding back tears of pain. He knew this was the karma coming for revenge.

“Look at you, such a filthy little insect.” She started insulting him. “You think you can just go and fool around with my friends? You’re nothing but a little slut.”

She gave him many fast whips against his rump, causing him to groan from pain.

“Oh, baby, does it hurt when mommy spanks your wittle hiney?”

Mark got mad, he pulled against his restraints. She took a step back and grabbed the candle off the table. She held it up in front of Mark’s face, he could feel the heat. She let it singe the hair under his chin. She tipped the candle and watched as the searing hot wax ran down his chest. He opened his mouth to yell, but she shoved a ball gag in his mouth, cutting him off.

“No more talking!”

Mark let out a muffled yelp. He got whipped again.

“Do NOT talk back to me.”

Mark hung his head, he didn’t say anything.

“Aw, that’s my baby boy. Did you learn your lesson?” Fluttershy said through her baby talk.

Mark said nothing. He got whipped

“I said, did you learn your lesson?

Mark let out a muffled noise.

“Good.” She grabbed a vile and held it under his nose. He was forced to breathe it in.

*Pomf*. It was an aphrodisiac. His wings stiffened and his cock went hard. His heart was beating fast and he was breathing heavily.

She whipped him.

“How DARE you! That’s no way to act in front of a lady!”

Fluttershy  moved right up in front of Mark, he could feel her breath rolling across his face.. “Aw, look at you.” She stuck her riding crop between Mark’s legs, using it stroke his member. “All full of sexual desire.” She removed the riding crop from between his legs. “And no way to get off. How’s that for punishment?”

She whipped his hind end again, making him groan.

“Don’t you talk back to me!” Fluttershy whipped him again.

Mark groaned, he got whipped again.

He snorted, he got whipped again.

He tried to beg her to stop, he got whipped again.

Mark finally held his tongue.

"Good." She said darkly. she got up on top of him and lowered her wet pussy to his snout. Mark knew what he had to do. He reached for it, rubbing the ball gag against her slit and clit. He couldn't like her, he couldn't taste her, all he could do was pleasure her. Fluttershy used her forehooved to gently caress his cock. She teased it just enough for him to almost cum, but never be able to. Mark was on edge, he could get off any second. The aphrodisiac had taken over him. What Fluttershy did next caused Mark to squirm and pull against his restraints. She opened her mouth wide and began sucking him. Mark was bound to go at any second. He could feel his body going crazy. His restraints kept him grounded as he tried to move any more than a few inches. This was it, he was bound to cum, he was completely set to do it when Fluttershy stopped. Mark's eyes widened, he couldn't believe it, of all the things she did to him, whipped him, burned him, tied him up, this was the worst.  She had finally broken him. Tears rolled down his face.

Fluttershy released him, Mark lay limp on the bed, beaten and bruised. He had no strength to move. She stood over top of him. She took one hoof and lifted Marks head so he could look at her as she spoke.

“I didn’t want to have to do this, I was watching you, luckily you haven’t done anything unforgivable... yet.” She leaned down, and looked dead into his eyes. Mark looked back into hers, and stretched forward just enough to kiss the tip of her nose. Taken back, she threw a rag in his face, Mark got dizzy, chloroform, and was out cold once again.

Mark woke up on the couch back inside Fluttershy’s cottage, his rump was still in horrible pain he his stomach was burned from the candle wax. Mark didn’t know what to think, he actually enjoyed last night, it was probably the aphrodisiac. Mark stood up and met Fluttershy at the door. She seemed back to normal, or whatever normal is now. She told him that he had to go to Rarity’s now. But he turned to Fluttershy and kissed her on the tip of her nose again.

“Thanks for last night, enjoyed it.”

He headed down the path, he saw Fluttershy blush, and as she closed the door, he could hear a faint giggle. Mark thought to himself.

“Hehe, looks like I was the one... to break her.”

He stood up on his back legs and yelled “YEAHHHHHHHHHHHHH!” out loud as he moved his arm as though he he’d strummed a guitar.

(I'm sorry for that)

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