Fluttering Hearts
Chapter 4 (Explicit Content)
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There are many ways for a pony to spend a lazy afternoon: Catching up on their stories, grabbing a meal at a café, or spending time with their closest friends. However, when enjoying each other’s company, some ponies prefer to be pampered to a certain degree in the process. For those in particular, Ponyville has one of the most delightful spas. Owned and run by twin sisters Aloe and Lotus, the center takes great pride in providing all sorts of refining services, from typical massages and steam rooms to exquisite mud baths and bathing seaweed wraps. This was where the yellow Pegasus Fluttershy could be found on this day, accompanied by the spas’ most frequent customer Rarity. Also with them for the first time was Rainbow Dash, who had promised to come along only on the condition that they might come with her to watch her try out for the Wonderbolts in the not too distant future.
“So, explain to me how this works again?” Rainbow asked impatiently, sitting in a large tub of mud with her hooves crossed in front of her. “Most days you wouldn’t be caught dead near mud, but now that it’s in a building you don’t mind being up to your neck in it?”
Rarity heaved a frustrated sigh as she reached up and picked off the slices of cucumber resting on her eyes. “That’s because this particular mud was manufactured right here, and isn’t covered in the filth of the outdoors. Now do you think you could please try to enjoy yourself?”
Snorting impatiently, Rainbow Dash kicked her head back and stared up at the ceiling. She mumbled something under her breath that neither Rarity nor Fluttershy could understand. “Anyway, hey Fluttershy, what’s with you and Big Macintosh?”
Sitting in the corner of the large tub away from them, Fluttershy suddenly turned towards Rainbow. “Huh? Oh um, what do you mean? What about us?” she asked having been daydreaming during her friends’ bantering.
“Well, you two have been getting pretty serious, haven’t you?”
“I guess so. I mean, this is the longest relationship I’ve ever had. Then again, it’s kind of the only relationship I’ve ever had…”
“Did you guys do it yet?”
“Um, do what?”
“You know… it.” Rainbow Dash smirked while she put some extra emphasis on the word.
“No, I’m sorry, I don’t understand.” Fluttershy stated earnestly. “Please, tell me.”
“Come on Fluttershy, you should know what I’m talking about.” Rainbow Dash began to make an elaborate series of motions with her hooves to try and illustrate what she was getting at. All Fluttershy could do in response was stare blankly as she honestly had no idea what her pegasus friend was hinting at.
“She’s asking if the two of you have had sex.” Rarity spouted with no more interest at letting this charade play out further.
Gasping deeply, Fluttershy brought her forelegs up to her face to hide her deep blush. “W-w-w-what!? Oh my goodness, no! I mean, we’re not like that! We’re just enjoying each other’s company, that’s it!”
“Well, it’s not like doing that wouldn’t let you enjoy his ‘company’.” Rainbow Dash suggested, raising her hooves up and down to simulate quotation marks around the phrase. “But seriously, you guys have been together for almost half a year now! You know he’s a great guy if he’s been sticking around without getting a little action from you. Don’t make him suffer anymore!”
“S-s-suffer? I’m not making him suffer…
“Well, it’s something you’re going to have to do at some point.”
“It is?”
“Yeah, that’s what ponies do in every serious relationship. If you don’t want to be with him in that way, then that must mean you don’t want to be with him.”
“But I do want to be with him!” Fluttershy insisted, sitting upright to confront Rainbow Dash. “He’s such a wonderful colt. He’s kind, soft-spoken, and honest.”
“So, you like him… but you’re not attracted to him physically?”
“Oh no, he’s gorgeous! His beautiful orange mane, his rigid shoulders and legs…” Fluttershy closed her eyes as she went on about the love of her life, and envisioned him in her mind. “And, oh-! His voice, it’s so strong and deep! Whenever he speaks to me, it gives me shivers…” She could barely detect it, but Rainbow Dash had started to giggle while she was talking. It was a sudden snort that broke her concentration. “Um, what’s so funny?”
“Your… your wings!” was all that Rainbow had the strength to utter. Looking to her left and right, Fluttershy suddenly realized that both her wings caked in mud and dripping were clearly rigid as they poked up from the bath.
“Eep!” She suddenly reached out for them and pressed them down awkwardly, hiding them underneath the surface along with her own face, keeping only her snout up above so she could breathe. All the while, Rainbow Dash was laughing so hard that tears had begun to form in the corners of her eyes.
“You know, Dash, you’re really ruining the experience of being here.” Rarity forcefully struck one of her hooves into the rainbow pegasus’ shoulders.
“Ow!” Rainbow Dash rubbed where she had been hit tenderly. “Hey, you’re the one who invited me here.” She snapped back.
Rarity put on a very transparent smile. “And that was clearly a mistake on my part, one I shall never make again.” Ignoring the faces being made at her, Rarity made her way towards Fluttershy, still hiding her erect wings from her friends. “There there, dear.” Rarity cooed, while lifting Fluttershy from the mud. “There’s no need for you to be embarrassed. These things happen to every pegasus. Why, Rainbow Dash gets them a few times a day, don’t you Dash?”
Rainbow Dash’s cheeks flushed suddenly. “S-so? I don’t care! It’s perfectly natural; I’m not ashamed of what happens naturally!”
“Hm, indeed.” Rarity rolled her eyes and turned her attention back towards Fluttershy. “I’m not agreeing that you need to rush something like this, but I’m afraid she does have a point; If you really love Macintosh, that’s something you’re going to have to decide on. I mean, I can’t even imagine a serious long-term relationship being abstinent throughout. Don’t you agree, dear?” Fluttershy nodded her head, while her wings slowly began to recede back to their sides. “There you go, all better! Now, can we please try to enjoy this afternoon?” Rarity pressed both cucumber slices onto her eyes in an exasperated fashion and thrust her head back towards the wall, leaning back to try and regain some sense of relaxation.
While Rainbow Dash sprawled her forelegs over the sides of the tub, Fluttershy sat in deep thought while she stared at the surface of the mud surrounding her. It’s something we have to do? She thought to herself. I never really thought about it as an obligation. I mean, he’s so honest, and he’s never once pressured me into it. She laid her head back, trying to settle down and collect her thoughts. But, maybe that’s a sign! Maybe it means he’s not like other colts, so I can trust him with my… myself… right?
“Oh my goodness, oh my goodness, oh my goodness…” she muttered to herself, twiddling her hooves underneath the mud. She’d been afraid of many things in her life, but this was on a whole new level. At this point she would have rather faced Nightmare Moon riding atop a giant fire-breathing dragon than have to consider the endeavor before her.
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Up on the second floor of the farm house on Sweet Apple Acres sat alone Big Macintosh in his bedroom, wrapped tightly in his thoughts. It had been a few days since the gathering at Fluttershy’s house. He still couldn’t believe how the two of them had almost lost themselves in passion that night. He’d thought himself more reserved than that, but he had also been surprised that Fluttershy had let him take things that far. Of course, she probably had just been too shy to say anything to object to him. He really needed to make sure that he kept his urgings under control around her.
But, had she really been opposed to his advances? He thought back to that moment when they had been together. She certainly didn’t seem to mind it when he had been crawling all over the top of her, kissing her lips repeatedly. Oh, those sweet lips of hers. He longed to taste them again. He’d never really thought about how stimulating Fluttershy’s appearance was until lately. Thinking of the image of her wings spread out as she lay down underneath him, her face full of quiet anticipation, set off all sorts of feelings inside of him.
Big Macintosh looked down and noticed a certain part of him had extended out of its sheath and up to his chest as a result of his daydreaming. He chuckled slightly as he felt its moderate pressure waiting at the ready for any sort of embrace from him. Should I…? He thought to himself. I ain't done this since I was in school. I been so busy taking care of the farm. Though he was by himself in his room, he still looked to his left and right with the shiftiest of eyes, as he turned his back towards the window and leaned up against the wall. Eh, might as well. I don’t get breaks like these too often. Reaching down, Big Macintosh placed a hoof at the base of his rod, and ran it all the way up his long, long shaft, until it reached the top. He grinned from ear to ear, remembering the days of his youth when he had just started growing up. He’d never been the type to play with himself very much, being so busy working the farm and taking care of his family. But during the winter when there was little farming to be done, he’d take the opportunity to let out some of that pent up energy he had. His thoughts centered on Fluttershy now, lying down with her back facing him in a position that drew particular attention to her rump. You can if you want to. He imagined her whispering to him, flicking her tail back and forth. I don’t mind. “Whoa, nelly…” he murmured as he shook his leg, the feeling in his groin rising at a rapid rate.
While he reminisced about his younger days and of his strongest love interest, the door swung open as Applejack stepped in with a letter in her mouth. “Hey, Mac, got somethin' for ya-AAH!” His face instantly changed from pleasure to a look of panic, as Big Macintosh hastily reached over and pulled a blanket over his lower half to cover up his shame (or pride, as some of the other mares might have called it). Applejack about faced fiercely and, clutching the letter in her hoof, began to fan her beet red cheeks burning her face up. “What in the HAY are y’all doin'!?”
“I was trying to get some privacy ‘round here!” he retorted, his voice shaking with embarrassment at being caught by his younger sister.
“Y’all shoulda warned me, Big Macintosh! I mean, what if it had been Applebloom!?”
“… At least Applebloom knocks.” He muttered under his breath, still loud enough for his sister to hear.
Staring knives at her brother out of the corner of her eye, she tossed the letter like a ninja star at him, barely missing his face. “It’s from your marefriend, if y’all are interested.” Applejack promptly stepped out and slammed the door behind her. “And y’all are too old to be doing that anyway!” she yelled through the door, before the sound of violent trotting could be heard descending the stairs.
Big Macintosh shook his head as he sat himself up on his feet. Looking in between his haunches, he realized that his rod had unfortunately receded back into its sheath, a result of his own family intruding and destroying the mood. His head a slight bit clearer, he tore the letter open with his teeth and after unfolding the parchment, began to read.

Big Macintosh read the letter with an increasing sense of dread as he kept repeating that one phrase in his mind. Thinking about us. Thinking… about us. Big Macintosh hadn’t had many serious relationships in his life, but he was smart enough to know what that meant. He’d stepped in it big this time. She was thinking about breaking up with him. He knew he shouldn’t have pushed her that night, no matter how enchanting he found her. She was just too pure for that kind of thing. He slowly made his way to his bed and sank his head into his pillow. As he lay down and mulled the end of his relationship over in his head, he could feel his eyes burning with incoming tears.
Now, Little Mac, there’s many reasons a colt should ever shed tears, he could hear his pa’s voice telling him one day after he’d fallen down and scraped his hindleg. Cuttin’ onions, losing every bit you’ve ever earned, when a loved one passes away. You leave the tears for the mares of the family You gotta stay strong, ya hear?
Taking a deep breath, the red colt tossed the pillow away and made his way back towards the window, staring off into the direction that he knew Big Timber was located. “Sorry, Timber, but I really need to kick something right now.” Wearing a face of grim resolve, Big Macintosh made his way down the stairs and out to the farm, headed towards the only object on the farm that could brave his untamed strength.
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Big Macintosh made his way towards Fluttershys’ cottage at a slow pace. It’d been a day since he’d received her letter, and the night before had been torture for him. When he wasn’t out on the farm bucking apples without so much as a word to Applejack, he was in his room skulking. He hadn’t eaten so much as a bite until that morning, when Granny Smith had refused to let him leave without a decent breakfast. Now that he’d had a few (rather large) helpings of apple pancakes and syrup, his head felt much clearer. Fluttershy had told him the night before he’d left that she wasn’t angry at him. And they’d had their arguments before, but it was nothing that Fluttershy had been that upset over. And this might not even be a big deal for them; he might be worrying for nothing. Still he couldn’t shake a sense of dread in the back of his mind, as he was just approaching the front door to her house. Raising his hoof to give it a knock, the door suddenly swung open as he pushed his foreleg forward, and fell flat on his chest inside.
“Oh my goodness, I’m so sorry!” Fluttershy piped as she dipped down to help him up off the floor.
“Fluttershy!” Big Macintosh took her hoof in kind, but mostly pulled his own weight off of the floor. “How’d you know I’d be here so soon?”
“Oh, I was waiting by the window when I saw you come by.”
“Oh no, was I making you wait? Sorry.”
“No, it’s fine, you’re right on time.” Fluttershy reassured him. “I’m just… really ready to get going.”
“Going? Where to?” Big Macintosh asked. “I thought you wanted to talk to-“
“We will, but I want to take you somewhere before we get started.”
“O-okay…?” Wearing a puzzled look on his face, Big Macintosh followed Fluttershy out the door and towards the forest, walking in awkward silence beside her the whole way.
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“We’re here!” Fluttershy finally cheered, as they stepped in an open field of the forest, a pond with some lily pads off to the side. As Big Macintosh took in the beautiful surroundings of nature, he could see that this particular area received more focus of sunshine than any other part of the forest. “Do you know what this place is?” Fluttershy asked him.
Macintosh tilted his head upwards in thought. “Can’t say I rightly do.” He responded finally.
“It’s where I first got my cutie mark. I told you about how I got it after I fell down from the pegasus race Rainbow Dash was in, right?” he nodded his head as she laid down on her stomach and recalled her chronicles of self-discovery with a smile on her face. “Well, I can’t tell you how magical it was for me. This place, this wonderful place, helped put me on the path to who I am. So, every now and then, when I’m feeling confused or uncertain about something, I like to come here and think it over until I can sort things out for myself.”
Big Macintosh mulled her words over in his head for a bit before asking. “So… what’s got you so confused right now?”
Fluttershy’s smile faded as she averted her eyes to him. “I’ve been thinking… about that night that we were together…”
“I’m real sorry about that, Fluttershy; I know I stepped out of bounds.” Big Macintosh began. “I won’t ever let anything like that happen again, I prom-“
“Macintosh!” Fluttershy stood up suddenly and trotted closer to him. “I told you already, I’m not angry with you. I was just confused. I needed to take some time to really think about what I wanted, from you and from myself.”
“And that is…?”
Fluttershy looked down at the ground, before lifting her eyes up back to him and smiling. “I just want to be with you, that’s all.” She leaned forward and planted a kiss on his mouth, pushing him over onto his back to embrace him. Big Macintosh took her into his hooves, stroking her back tenderly as he held her.
“Oh, Fluttershy!” he cried out, breaking the kiss. “Thank you. I really needed to hear that today, you don’t know how badly. I love you, sugarcube.”
“I love you too, Mackie.” She gave him another quick kiss before she rolled over to his side, once again lying on her tummy. “So, is there, um… anything you want… from me?”
“Well, I just want the same thing, to be with you.”
Fluttershy smiled at his righteousness. “Oh, I know that. But is there anything… more you might want?” At this, she began to wiggle her cutie mark at him.
Big Macintosh took a powerful breath through his nostrils as he watched her shake her rump at him. “I, uh… n-n-Nope!” He replied, smiling sheepishly.
A disappointed look came over Fluttershy’s face, before her eyes moved down his body and widened in surprise. “Oh my…” she said putting a hoof over her mouth. Big Macintosh looked down and realized that yet again his pride had unsheathed itself for him and his marefriend to behold. “You’re a terrible liar.” She teased, whispering in his ear.
“Sorry. Okay, I guess there are some… things I might want.” He admitted, turning his gaze from her. “But I ain’t gonna push you into nothing you ain’t ready for. Granny taught me better than that.”
“And I really admire that about you, Mackie. But, what if I am ready for it? Would you be willing to go that far if that were the case?”
“Well, yeah, but…” before he could finish, he was cut off by a loud pompf that filled the air. He looked over and saw Fluttershy’s beautiful wings extended similar to the night they’d spent together at her house. Although her cheeks wore a slight blush, she didn’t seem to mind them much at all.
“Oh, these silly wings of mine.” She began, twiddling her hooves together. “I just can’t control them anymore. I used to be able to tame them, but whenever I think about you Mackie, they just get so… stiff.”
Big Macintosh smiled at her as he sat himself up. “You know why I fell in love with you? It’s because of how innocent you are. That’s what really drove me to you. Pure and sweet Fluttershy of the forest, that’s how I saw you.” Even with his stallion shaft rock hard, he still strived to keep himself composed. “And I’m afraid that if we do… this, it might sully you. I don’t want to ruin what makes you so wonderful, Fluttershy.”
Fluttershy gazed at him, before a small amount of tears welled up in her eyes and she broke out into a smile. “That’s so nice of you, Mackie. Thank you.” She kissed him on the cheek gently. “But I want this from you. I need it. I’m asking you to help me, as someone I love and trust. Please do this for me.”
“Are y’all sure? I mean, what if we just-!”
“Big Macintosh!” Fluttershy exclaimed impatiently, causing a swarm of birds to take flight from the trees surrounding them. Taking a deep breath, she turned herself away from him, placing her head on the ground and raising her flank in the air, moving her tail to the side to reveal her round cheeks and soaking wet vulva to him. “I’m ready…” she whispered gently.
Big Macintosh bit his lip as he felt his erection throb between his legs. Even he couldn’t muster the strength to protest anymore. Pulling himself up, he quickly mounted the back of Fluttershy. His forelegs hung over her sides and touched the ground, his size so much larger than hers. He gently pushed his penis inside of her, feeling the tight walls of her vagina stroke downwards as he inched his way in. This tightness he felt, there was no arguing that this had to be her first time. It was only when he was about three quarters in that he felt the tip hit a stopping point, eliciting a high-pitched squeak from the pegasus beneath him.
‘Y’all okay?” he asked, stopping himself dead in his tracks, not wanting to hurt her in the slightest.
“I-I-I…” Fluttershy stammered, her voice trembling as her hindquarters wavered with failing strength. Gulping loudly, she fortified her haunches with resolve and stood ready to take him. “I’m fine. P-please keep going…” Nodding, Big Macintosh slowly pulled his hips away from her, and pushed forward back into her properly. He wanted so badly to go faster, but the way her pussy was gripping him, he felt that if he went any faster he might tear something inside her. Making love to her was such a delicate process for him, but for every time he felt his tip push against her womb, the more satisfying it became.
Fluttershy whimpered below him as she took in his large cock repeatedly, his massive weight bearing on top of her. He reached his head down and licked her ears in a loving manner. “Atta girl, don’t worry. I gotcha.” He whispered to her from time to time.
“It’s- it’s so… wide!” She piped out as he talked to her.
“You’re doing great. Just like that.” His reassurances seemed to take effect as she looked up into his caring eyes. As he drug his tongue across the back of her neck, she closed her eyes and crossed her front hooves over in delight, now finally developing a rhythm with his thrusting’s.
“Oh, so wide… so big… big… Macintosh!” Fluttershy cried as her hips moved in tune with his cock deep inside of her. “More…”
“What’s that?” Macintosh asked, pausing from his tending to her head.
“I want more. Faster. Harder, harder! Um, please…” Big Macintosh’s eyes broadened at hearing the delicate pony below him cry out for him to step his game up suddenly. He still didn’t have the heart to push all the way, but he increased the speed of his thrusts nonetheless. “Oh, oh my, yes!” She moaned, her mouth forming a most satisfied grin as she was being drilled by him. This was getting better than he’d expected it to be. Before he could control himself, his right hoof reached back and gave Fluttershy’s buttocks a good and firm slap. “Eep!” she squealed out as he struck her.
“Sorry!” he shouted. “I didn’t mean to-!”
“Again!” he raised an eyebrow at her request. “Please, again!” He raised his hoof and brought it down upon her flank a second time, as Fluttershy squealed in delight. “Oh, yes! Yes! Ah, ah, ah, ohhhh~!”
“What’s wrong, sweetie? Y’all need me to stop?”
“Don’t you dare stop, Big Macintosh!” she shouted, looking back at him with a fierce passion in her eyes. “I’m almost… almost… oh-oh-oh-oh-mmmm~!” Fluttershy let out a loud high pitched whine as she released a large torrent of fluids over Big Macintosh’s large pony rod, giving him an easier time to slip in and out of her; not that he needed it; a few seconds after her climax, Big Macintosh gritted his teeth together as he felt his seed rushing forth from inside of him “Hee… yaaah!” At once, his pony semen exploded from inside of him, filling the inside of Fluttershy’s tight pussy and slightly spilling out its lips. Exhausted, he pulled out from inside of her, dripping a few strands on the ground as he laid back to catch his breath.
The grass felt so nice upon his back as he lay there, admiring the scenery around him. Though he’d always had a taste for the outdoors, the forest was so much different than his farm. This wasn’t cultivated where everything had been harvested and planted by his hoof. This was a spectacle of nature’s own will, as it grew in any direction it saw fit. No wonder Fluttershy was so enraptured by its spirit.
As he lay upon the grass reflecting upon the forest, he felt a pair of hooves grasp his shoulder and chest as Fluttershy reached up and kissed him deeply, before resting her head upon him. “Thank you, Mackie.” She whispered sweetly, a look of contentment spread across her face.
Smiling, Big Macintosh wrapped a hoof around her shoulders. “You’re quite welcome, sugarcube. I take it you enjoyed yourself?”
“Oh, I did! I had no idea it would be that enjoyable. You can’t imagine how much I needed that.”
“Heh heh, I reckon I could.” He replied, noticing his shaft finally becoming flaccid and relaxed before him. “You really surprised me back there. I didn’t think you’d get into it so much.” He leaned down and kissed her affectionately on the head. “Glad you enjoyed it though.”
“Um, Mackie?” Fluttershy asked as she righted herself up above him
“Yeah?”
“Do you think we could… do it again?” She put on a wide grin as she pulled her forelegs up under her chin.
“…Beg pardon?” Big Macintosh asked taken aback.
“I, um, want to go again… if that’s all right with you.”
He sat with his mouth slightly open in shock. Did she actually want to go through all of that again, and so soon after their first time? He’d had a few flings with the town mares before when he was younger, and even the savviest of mares found themselves barely able to move after sessions with him. It wasn’t something he took pride in, being with other mares out of a serious relationship, but sometimes he just found himself unable to resist his own urgings in those years. “Come on, Fluttershy, y’all don’t wanna overdo it now, do ya?” Ya might end up hurting yourself.”
“Oh, I think I’ll be alright. It didn’t hurt that bad. And even when it did, I really liked it.” Fluttershy pulled herself on top of Big Macintosh, her hooves propped on both sides of him while she stared down at him with a seductive smile. “Come on, I’ll bet you’ve got some more energy to spare, don’t you?” She lowered her head down to his chest and began to drag her wet tongue up to his muscular neck. At once, his powerful cock again began to build up hard as it brushed up slightly against Fluttershy’s hindlegs.
“Okay, fine.” Macintosh admitted, a slick grin forming on his face. “But only ‘cause you’re insisting.”
Fluttershy winked, as she kissed his chest, and brought her body down lower on him, leaving a trail of kisses as she descended downwards. She finally arrived at his long pony shaft, taking a grip into her delicate hooves as she eyed it up and down. She closed her eyes and began to uncurl her lips as she approached it.
“Wait, don’t!” Big Macintosh protested suddenly.
Fluttershy opened her eyes instantly at his objection. “Oh, what’s wrong?”
“Don’t… don’t do that.” He advised her plainly. “That’s just too demeaning. I can’t have you doing that, no matter how much you say you’re fine with it. Please, Fluttershy.” Although his penis throbbed with passion, his face wore a look of solemn discomfort. He honestly felt uncomfortable with Fluttershy going that far with him.
Fluttershy seemed to understand, as she moved her head back. “I understand.” She muttered. Big Macintosh closed his eyes and breathed a sigh of relief at her response. However, he felt a small peck against his rod as his eyes flew open and he saw Fluttershy place a gentle kiss upon the large shaft in her hooves. “You’re such a sweetheart, Mackie!” She then began to crawl back up towards him with her legs wide open above his waist. Taking great care, she lowered herself until his hard stallion cock penetrated the sopping lips of her marehood. “Ahhh!” she let out a loud moan as she moved down, letting him move as deep inside as her body could allow. Her face changed quickly from one of pain to pleasure as she grew accustomed to his size. “Oh, Mackie!” she cried out, moving her hips upward, her vagina tugging firmly against the skin of his shaft.
She repeated his pet name as she moved herself down and up, while Big Macintosh could only lie back as she savored her own motions along him. “Heh, I didn’t think you had it in you, Fluttershy.” He said to her nervously.
Fluttershy looked down towards him and formed a mischievous grin on her face. “I didn’t. Not until you put it in me.” She stuck her tongue out at him, and licked her lips seductively.
“Whoa, w-what’s gotten into you?” he asked, surprised by her enticing double entendre.
“You have, silly. Can’t you feel it?” Bringing her chest up a bit, she placed her hooves onto his chest while she continued her motions on his crotch. “Don’t you just love the feeling of being inside me?”
Big Macintosh’s’ haunches began to shake, as he could feel his dick beginning to reach an early climax. “Hey, come on, that ain't fair!”
“What’s not fair? Oh, you don’t like it when I’m assertive, huh? Why? Is it too much for you to handle, big boy?” Fluttershy closed her eyes and laid her chest back as far as she could go. She now had her head up towards the sun as her forehooves reached back near Big Macintosh’s hindlegs, revealing her plump mammaries nestled between her haunches.
Wincing, Big Macintosh realized he wouldn’t be able to last much longer at this rate. He had to do something to gain the upper hoof. He reached out a hoof and seized her breasts, rubbing them firmly in small circles. His touch elicited a small squeak from Fluttershy as her eyes and mouth opened wide in shock.
“W-w-what are you doing!” she stammered.
“Playing dirty, that’s what!”
“Oh, you’re such a cheater!” she exclaimed, as her head tilted back, her eyes and mouth shut tight in passion.
“Oh, you’re one to talk.” He snapped back, lunging towards her and pinning her to the ground. “Acting all dominant when I been used to you being so dang sweet and innocent. Now that ain’t fair, I tell ya what!” With that, Big Macintosh began to fiercely pound away at Fluttershy’s vagina. He’d abandoned his notion of control and lost himself in a furious fit of lust inside of her. As he continued to furiously hump her, Fluttershy clenched her teeth to brace herself from his strength, gasping and moaning at each thrust he gave her.
“Oh-oh-oh-oh-oh, Macintosh! Ohhh!” She raised her hooves up to cover her eyes as she could hardly form words at this point. Her small pegasus lips spurted jets of wet orgasmic fluid as he pounded away relentlessly inside of her. He smirked defiantly as he watched her submit to him. He’d regained control of her, finally. The feeling of being the one on top restored the confidence that had been wavering just a moment ago.
After a few minutes, tears began to form in the corners of Fluttershy’s eyes. Seeing them began to stir other emotions inside of Big Macintosh. He began to realize how hard he was actually going at her. He was quite likely the largest stallion in Ponyville, and she was known for being so small and delicate. Was it really right for him to treat her like this? He looked at her face as thoughts of guilt ran through his mind; her tearful eyes opened up and gazed at him. Her beautiful glassy eyes met with his as he felt his own begin to sting. He opened his mouth to say something; he didn’t know what it would be. Before he could utter a word though, she bit her lip innocently as she let out an adorable high pitched whine. It was the same noise she made whenever she met somepony new, the same one she’d made that night at the play when everypony’s eyes had turned on her. Those who’d heard it felt their hearts instantly melt at her awkward charm.
Hearing her frail cry of intimidation, Big Macintosh felt his legs waver underneath him. His eyes rolled up into his head as his mouth hung open, his face lacking any sort of composure. “Huhh-ahh-ohh- ohhh, Fluttershyyyy! Ahhh!” A powerful wave of semen erupted from his cock as he gave one last attempt at thrusting into her, before he collapsed onto his chest, taking care to fall to the side and avoid crushing Fluttershy. Truly spent, he laid there wheezing as he struggled to catch his breath. He didn’t know whether he enjoyed himself or just felt ashamed. He could barely even form thoughts; his head was spinning so much. After a minute of lying down, he finally turned his head over to look at Fluttershy, lying ever still on her back, her head facing away from him.
“Fluttershy?” he called her as he shook her gently with a hoof. “Fluttershy, y’all okay? Please tell me you’re okay!”
Fluttershy began to stir a bit as she turned her head over, her face wearing the most beautiful smile he’d seen in a long time. “Never better, sweetie.” She replied, beaming at him. She began to giggle as she looked into his flushed face. “I guess you really do like it when I’m meek and shy, don’t you?”
He furrowed his brow for a moment. “You mean… at the end, when you did that…” His ears drooped as he recalled that beautiful noise she made to usher in his climax. “Y’all were faking?”
“Oh, no!” she exclaimed, sitting up suddenly. “There was no way I could fake something like that. I really really loved all of it. And that... sound… that was real too. I just made sure to really look into you and make sure you noticed it.”
“But what about when you were all talking down to me, like you were challenging me?”
“Oh, that…” Fluttershy’s cheeks reddened as she thought back. “Well, I had a feeling you were being gentle with me before, so I thought maybe if I was more assertive like my friends say I should be, then maybe you’d get enticed to… you know.”
Big Macintosh was dumbfounded. This filly had him played him like a fiddle; she knew exactly which strings to tug in order to get the best performance out of him. He turned his head away from her as he looked down to the ground.
Fluttershy gasped as a worried look formed on her face. “You’re not mad at me, are you?”
Big Macintosh heaved a heavy sigh. “Fluttershy… after all the months of being with you and being in love…” he turned towards her with a reserved smile on his face. “Looks like I still got lots to learn ‘bout ya.” He leaned in and kissed behind her ear playfully.
“Yay~!” she piped gleefully, leaning into his face as he tickled her head. “I mean, I’m glad.”
Big Macintosh draped a hoof over her shoulder and brought her close to him as he took in the aroma of her mane. Even covered in grass and sweat, its sweet smell gave him such a calming feeling. “Just don’t ask me for a third one, ‘kay?”
“Well…” Fluttershy shuffled her hind legs underneath her in an antsy fashion.
“Fluttershy!”
She began to giggle. “I’m only joking! Don’t get so flustered.” She kissed his cheek softly to try and calm him down, his face stiff and red from embarrassment. “Anyway, I really need to get going. The animals at my cottage probably need to be fe-!” As Fluttershy moved to stand up, her hind legs quickly gave out beneath her, as she plopped hard onto the grass underneath her.
“Whoa, Fluttershy!” Big Macintosh hustled to her side, looking her over quickly. “What’s the matter? Y’all okay?”
“I-I don’t know.” She replied, shaking her head to clear its fuzziness. She feebly pulled her right hindleg up, but as soon as she put any weight on her hoof, it immediately gave way beneath her “I can’t seem to… put any weight on my legs.”
A frown appeared on Big Macintosh’s face “Oh, dang it, I probably wore you out, sugarcube. I kinda lost control back there and went at it harder than I should have.” Taking a look at her legs, his eyes travelled up to her rump, where he took a closer peek at her. He could see the yellow flesh around was red and had been fairly bruised as a result of his intense love-making. “Oh, Fluttershy, I’m so sorry.”
“It’s fine, really. I mean, inconvenient as this is…” Fluttershy swished her tail to the side as she spoke with joy. “It was worth it.”
Big Macintosh smiled and shook his head. “Oh, sugarcube, what am I gonna do with you?” He suddenly leaned down and pushed his head underneath her rump.
“Wha-wh-what are you!?” Fluttershy cried as she felt her hindquarters being lifted into the air.
“Relax, it ain't whatcha think.” Big Macintosh moved his body, so that Fluttershy’s legs draped properly over his sides. “I’m just gonna help ya get home.”
“Oh, no, you don’t have to do that! I don’t want to be any trouble-!”
“But nothing. I did this to ya, least I can do is give ya a ride home.” Big Macintosh gave her a slight bump as he repositioned her on his back. “Besides, y’all weigh lighter than a barrel of apples. It ain’t no trouble.”
Fluttershy smiled as he began to move out towards the edge of the forest in the direction of her home. Kissing him on the back of his neck, she nuzzled her head into his fur. “Hey, Mackie?”
“Eeyup?”
“I think I might fall asleep on you for a bit. I hope that’s okay.”
He chuckled blissfully. “You go ahead and sleep all you want. I’ll wake ya when we get there.”
“Thank you…” she let out a soft yawn as she again rubbed her cheek into his neck, breathing gently onto him as she fell into a deep sleep.
As he made his way out of the forest, he noticed that the sun had been shining brightly on them the entire time. He gazed up at it as much as he could without letting it blind him.
Princess Celestia’s sun… he raised a hoof to his chin in deep thought. “Y’all weren’t watching us now, where ya?” A few seconds after he spoke, the sun quickly began to shift over, disappearing behind a stray cloud that might have been lost by the weather team. He laughed loudly as he turned away from the sun. “Oh, Princess…” he shook his head and smiled. “Hope we put on a good show for ya!”
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Big Macintosh made his way through the forest, navigating through an unorthodox gathering of trees and bushes. Eventually he came to a point where a large multitude of wilderness kept him from advancing any further. He could have easily brushed it aside, but he was afraid that he might disturb Fluttershy, sleeping so peacefully on his back. He hung his head in frustration, when he noticed a small brown rabbit on the ground looking up at him. It turned its head towards Fluttershy, and cocked his head in confusion.
“Hey there! Don’t mind us, we’re just passing through.” Big Macintosh explained. “Well, trying to anyway.” The rabbit immediately sprinted towards the nearest tree and gave it a few swift kicks to its base. After a few seconds, a flock of birds flew out of the hollow of the tree towards the higher branches blocking the pony couple while a few more bunnies had appeared to help their friend with the lower branches. “Oh, thanks partner!” Big Macintosh gingerly stepped through the path that had been cleared for him. Letting go of the branches, the group of animals trailed him closely as a family of squirrels hopped from tree to tree to the right of him. A swarm of butterflies began to gather above him, adding to the large crowd of woodland critters following him already.
Even while she’s sleeping, she’s got such a way with creatures, Big Macintosh thought to himself while he admired the company following him. Fluttershy, you’re really something else. A sense of calmness swept over him as he admired everything around him. Had he wings of his own, they would have begun to flutter on their own, letting him float the rest of the way to the cottage. He began to experience the sheer joy that his marefriend must experience on a daily basis when she became one with nature. He held onto the feeling as long as he could, letting nature’s will guide him to the edge of the forest, not letting a single worry enter his mind.
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Finally arriving at the edge of the forest, Big Macintosh could see Fluttershy’s cottage ahead of him. Stepping onto the clear ground ahead of him, he turned back and bid farewell to all the creatures that led him here as they scampered back into the forest. He turned his head forward and made his way to her front door. He had almost made it to the small bridge when he heard a voice call out to him.
“Big Macintosh?”
The red pony turned his head quickly as he saw the familiar form of Twilight Sparkle gazing awkwardly at him. “Oh, uh, howdy Twilight.” He responded curtly. “W-whatcha doin’ here?”
“Me? Oh, I was just on my way to Zecora’s to pick up some ingredients for some special tea.” She explained. “What about you? What’s Fluttershy doing on your back? Is she okay?” She trotted over to him and inspected her pegasus closely.
“She’s fine, I promise. She’s just sleeping. She’s had a busy day.”
“Doing what?”
“Nothing!” He responded rather loudly. He cleared his throat before he continued. “I mean nothing important.”
“Nothing important? Fluttershy had such a rough day that she fell asleep on your back from doing ‘nothing important’?” Twilight’s eyes narrowed as she glared at him accusingly. “You’re hiding something from me, Big Mac, and I don’t appreciate it when somepony hides something about my friends, especially when they could be hurt.”
“Twilight, please! I promise you she ain’t hurt, she’s just tired!”
“Tired from what?!” Twilight shouted. “You’re not making any sense! I mean, what could two ponies do together all alone that could exhaust one of them so much they-!” Twilight stopped mid-sentence as her jaw dropped, a figurative light-bulb clicking in her head. A wide grin appeared on her face as she projected the most intense stare at him.
“Twilight, it ain’t what ya think.” Twilight ignored his statement and continued to stare at him. “Really, it’s a big misunderstanding! Stop looking at me like that! Y’all better listen to me!”
Leaning her head in, she whispered in his ear “So… you made a mare out of her, huh?” His ears drooping, Big Macintosh placed a hoof over his eyes in embarrassment. “Ha ha ha, no way!” Twilight squealed in delight as she began to prance around him in a fashion similar to Pinkie Pie. “I can’t believe it, I can’t believe it, I can’t believe it!”
“Twilight, settle down!” he barked at her suddenly. “You’re gonna wake her up!”
“I can’t believe it, I can’t believe it, I can’t believe-!” the bouncing purple unicorn stopped in mid-bounce and slowly lowered herself to the ground as a sheepish smile formed over her face. “Heh heh, sorry. I’m just so surprised at this. To think that sweet innocent Fluttershy would ever do… that. And that you would be the one to do it to her. It’s a lot for her to handle. The responsibility, that is!” she exclaimed suddenly, seeming to catch herself in some unintended innuendo. Big Macintosh shook his head in confusion.
“Well, now you know, alright? Just do me a favor, and don’t spread this around needlessly.”
“Okay, I promise.”
“I mean it, nopony. Swear to me!”
Sighing in frustration, Twilight raised a hoof as she performed the rehearsed actions of a Pinkie Pie swear. “Cross my heart, hope to fly, stick a cupcake in my… eye.” She paused for a second to shut her eye before placing her hoof over it, completing the sacred promise.
“Thanks Twi, I appreciate it.” A relieved smile formed on his face. ”I don’t need nopony else to go getting all out of sorts because of what Fluttershy done. I still want her to be seen like she’s always been seen, ya hear?”
“Oh yeah, I’m with you on that.”
“I mean, seeing the way you took the news, I can’t imagine what all your other friends might do. I’m already gonna have a tough time keepin' it from AJ.”
“Yeah, I guess you could look at it that way.” Twilight responded absent-mindedly.
Taking notice of her reply, Big Macintosh looked back at Twilight, and caught her with her head lowered, her face looking towards the underside of his hindlegs. “You looking for something?” he asked angrily.
Her head shooting up suddenly, a deep blush overcame Twilights cheeks. “Huh!? No no no, I’m not looking for anything, especially not that!” Her eyes darted in every direction as the two were trapped in the most awkward of silence. “Well, uh… I better get going. I have to be at um…”
“Zecora’s?” Macintosh filled in the blank for her.
“Zecora’s! Yes, I have to go to Zecora's hut for-for-for, uh…” she tapped her hoof on the ground, desperate to get her scrambled thoughts together.
“Tea.”
“Yes! Tea! Have to get some tea! That’s why I was out here to begin with, and that’s what I’m gonna do! So, um… bye!” Twilight sprinted off towards the EverFree forest, her tail tucked firmly between her legs.
Big Macintosh shook his head as he watched the unicorn prance away from him. Turning away, he crossed the bridge and made his way up the path to her door. He opened the door and walked towards her sofa, slowly lowering his knees and rolling her onto the sofa. Fluttershy began to stir for a moment, until she rolled onto her back, her legs facing up in a relaxed stance. He watched as her chest rose and fell with each soft breath that she took as she continued to sleep. A large yawn escaped his mouth as he shook his head.
“Whew, I guess I’m a bit worn out myself, sugarcube.” He spoke to her softly, not wanting to disturb her slumber. “Guess I was so focused on being a gentlecoltly I didn’t realize how much you took out of me.” He leaned down and kissed her cheek, causing her to move her hoof up to her face and rub it without thought. Big Macintosh lowered himself onto the floor underneath her, laying his head atop his forelegs. “I guess I could sit a spell here. ‘Sides, it’d be rude to leave you before you woke up.” His eyelids began to sag over his vision, as he felt sleep’s embrace swiftly overtaking him. “Goodnight, Fluttershy. I love you.”
“I love you too.”
He couldn’t tell if Fluttershy had really said that just now, or if he was already dreaming. It didn’t matter; awake or asleep, he could feel his heart flutter with the sensation of her love within him.
THE END
