Dashies revenge

by mr_gusta

Rating: teen
Tags: My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Dark, Rainbow Dash, Sad, Gore
Length: 2903

Dash gets in a race but after losing, she had to find a way to get back at the "winner"

As dash was getting ready for a daily nap she was interrupted, some pony wanted to race her.
Should she have let her reputation down for once and napped? If she had known the outcome, she would have happily slept instead of raced of only she could see the future.

Published 2013-05-09 19:20:02 UTC
Last updated 2013-05-09 19:20:02 UTC

%1% The race that went wrong

It started off as a normal day for Rainbow Dash, weather duties where completed for the day so all there was left to do was take a nap. As she looked for the perfect cloud to sleep on, she was distracted by a Pegasus walking around the clouds.
“Hey Rainbow Dash, remember me?” the Pegasus asked.
“Uh, sure I do, you where a good flyer” Dash tried to avoid answering because she doesn’t remember the Pegasus in front of her.
“I remember back in Clouds Dale, we had to race each other, you won by allot” The Pegasus said this hoping it would help Dash remember.
“Oh yeh, I remember you” Dash said this is the most convincing tone she could.
“Perfect, I'm glad I found you actually, because I want a redo on the race” the Pegasus demanded.
“You think you can win a race against Ponyvile’s fastest and best pony? Not counting you lost to me all the time” Rainbow Dash exclaimed these points with pride. She forgot she had no idea who this blue coloured Pegasus with a green mane was.
“If you think you’re that good, why not prove it, you and me, right now” The blue Pegasus demanded at Rainbow Dash.
“Fine than, tell me where to start and finish, I’ll meet you at the finish line”
“Start by the cloud pillar over there, take a turn over there and than a straight run to the finish line”
“Ha, is that all you have?” Rainbow Dash said as if she was expecting a marathon.
Both Pegasus flew to the start line, crouched down ready for a fast take off. Before Dash even knew about it, the blue pony yelled “GO”. Dash was caught off guard, but that wouldn’t stop her, not one bit.
“You try to cheat, that will make my victory so much better” Rainbow dash said as she passed the pony.
The blue pony was so upset, and left to think to think of how else he could win, he didn’t notice one key factor. As Dash was turning the corner she caught a glimpse of a blue and green blur, heading towards her.
By the time the blue pony realised he was heading off course, it was too late. With a loud thud, the blue Pegasus hovered in one spot, trying to think what happened.
He started to fly down, watching Rainbow Dash’s unconscious body falling, trying to catch up to her and save her. It all seemed so slow, as he tried to shape his body to fall faster. He had no other choice but to stop and hope something was down there.
As Rainbow Dash woke up on the ground, she saw all her friends standing over her crying, even the green pony was standing there crying, “I’m sorry, I didn’t mean too. I'm sorry, Dash” He repeated this over and over.
“Well you should be sorry, you could have killed me” she said, only getting an apology in response.
“Fine, I get it, you’re sorry” she said to him.
“Why are you all crying? I'm fine now” Dash said to reassure her friends. But they all sat there crying, watching a nurse slowly walk over with a blanket, followed by a police pony.
“What’s going on” Dash asked, but still no one responded.
Dash stood up and slowly walked backwards. “no, this. this isn’t real, I'm unconscious, this a dream” she whispered to reassure herself. As she walked back all she saw was her friends, crying uncontrollably hugging each other, over a dead rainbow maned Pegasus, being covered with a blanket.

2 Coming to terms with it

2 Coming to terms with it

After a few days, Dash finally came to terms that she was now an unnoticed ghost who was stuck on earth.
While she was walking around sho noticed her friends going to her funeral and decided to follow along to see what they had to say about her.
As dash sat there and watched each of her friends go up and say a few words, she started to cry from the thought of never being able to be there for her friends again, never being able to say her good bye to anyone.
As Dash sat on the ground, she could only think of how sweet and meaning full each of their last words where to her. Dash started to cry but forced herself to stop, she couldn’t let anyone see the toughest of all ponies cry. Than the remembrance came to her, no one could see her anymore, she could cry all day long and no one would be there to see it or ask her why.
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As Dash walked around Ponyvile, with head hung long, putting one hoof in front of the other, occasionally putting a hoof in a tear that landed on the ground, she came up with the idea to go see Fluttershy.
“Surely she could be able to see me, or at least feel me. She is connected with animals and nature” Dash said as she flew over to Fluttershy’s cabin, in a last ditch effort to be known.
As Dash arrived at the cabin, being polite, she knocked on the door. Only to be ignored.
“Huh, is someone at the door” Fluttershy whispered.
“Come in” She whispered again
As Dash walked inside she could see Fluttershy feeding some critters,
“Fluttershy” Dash said, with no response.
“FLUTTERSHY” Dash yelled, but still, her attempts went un noticed.
“It was probably just a branch hitting the door, and the wind” Fluttershy said to reassure herself.
As Dash walked out of the cabin, her head held low, tears dripping of her face.
“At least I can interact with things, just not be seen” Dash said trying to make herself feel better.
“I guess there is nothing left to do with myself but walk around and cry” She said to herself, giving up all hope.
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A few weeks had passed since the day she passed. As Dash walked back to the spot she crashed to the earth, she could only think of how much pain and torture she has gone through just because of one little race.
“How did I go from trying to take a nap, to seeing some pony who says they’re my friend, to death. If that guy has put me through torture day after day, for weeks. Then, then”
Dash stopped talking to herself when she arrived at the spot on the ground. Staring at the blood stained ground, now with a plaque reading “long live the Sonic Rain boom”.
“That’s all I was known for” She yelled.
“That is the final straw, if I have to be put through pain and suffering for the rest of my eternal life, than so shall he” Dash was now determined to do something with her eternal life.
As dash looked down, she could see some of her rainbow coloured mane, stuck into the path, soaked with her blood. She picked up as many of these as she could, then retreat to her, now dull, lifeless home.

3 Practicing the plan

3 Practicing the plan

After Dashie got back home, she decided it was time, it was time to start the search for the blue Pegasus, with a green mane. The cutie mark of this guy was fresh in her mind, a burning wing.
Now all there was to do was find this stallion, and get revenge. It was obvious where to start the search, the prison.
“I’ll fly over there, find out where his cell is and then find the best way to get back at him” Dash said, not thinking out how she will get revenge.
As Dash arrived at the prison she started to look around, not seeing the specific Pegasus she was after, but different blue Pegasus. This one had a red and black mane and a scar for a cutie mark, or so it seemed.
“He’s blue and I got to have practice before the real deal” Dash said emotionless.
As she hovered into the prison cell, she caught a glimpse at the mirror, only seeing a floating knife and 3 strands of hair, Orange, Green and Red.
As Dash got closer and closer to the sleeping stallion, she noticed his cutie mark was cut out, leaving only a scar where it use to be.
“This will fit in with it than” Dash said with a bit of laughter in her voice.
As Dash held the knife in her mouth, she looked at the sleeping pony, figuring out where to cut first? There was no time to think, Dash held her head up and than head butted the pony in front of her. As her head got closer to the body lying on the bed, she closed her eyes and felt the knife slowly go into his body. Like a knife going through butter.
When dash opened her eyes and looked, she saw a blue and red pony, screaming in pain, blood dripping from his stomach turning into a pool of blood underneath him. Dash head butted the Pegasus again. This time with allot more resistance. The silence was restored in the prison. She left the knife in the pony and looked.
Before her, there was a blue Pegasus, bleeding from the stomach and a knife sticking out of his head. His lifeless body slumped over itself, bleeding profusely. Dash stared at him, dropped the three strands of hair, and left. Hearing ponies running towards the cell made Dash thankful she was a ghost.
She hovered there, watching the guards rush in there, seeing blood all over the bed at this point. The where left speechless. This made Dash happy to see, even after life she can leave ponies speechless and jaws wide open, even if it is for a different thing.

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As Dash arrived back home she sat down, feeling incomplete. There was so much more she could have done.
“This won’t be satisfying if it’s this quick and painless for the real deal” She said to herself, getting less and less emotion in her voice.
As Dash laid down she was staring at the wall full of this Pegasus. This one Pegasus causing so much pain and anger made Dash get furious. In a split second Dash stood up, yelling “I WANT YOU TO SUFFER MORE THAN I DID” at the wall as she ripped down each and every item.
After what seemed like a minute Dash stood there, panting in anger, looking at an empty wall. Instead standing on top of a bunch of torn up photos and papers.
“I need more practice” She said, as she flew out of her house and into Ponyvile.

4 The real deal

4 The real deal

As Dash was flying around Ponyvile to find another practice pony, she saw a good target. There was a sad, blue Pegasus walking around Ponyvile.
“This pony will regret walking around” she said happily.
As she got closer to the lonely pony she noticed the green mane. Dash stoped and looked a bit closer, finding a burning wing on his flank.
“How could this get better” she asked herself with excitement.
As the blue Pegasus walked closer to Dash’s plaque, he felt an uneasy feeling and felt a cold gust of wind from above him.
“It’s nothing, just a different weather thing happening, however that stuff works” the Blue Pegasus said to reassure himself.
This made Dash furious.
“I was the one who made the weather work, no one will ever experience the perfect weather again because of you” Dash yelled as she tried to tackle him in frustration.
When she stood up sho noticed the Blue guy had gone.
“I had my chance, but I blew it” Dash hung her head low as she realised she may not see him again.
“What the heck” A confused look came across the Pegasus face as they looked down at a puddle and saw, a dark blue Pegasus staring at them with a green mane.
“I’m inside him” Dash hesitated in disbelief to say these words as she slowly came to realisation, she was now in the Pegasus body.
“This is so awesome” Dash said with excitement.
As dash walked around Ponyvile she felt over excited because she wasn’t a ghost for the first time in a long time. During her walk she stopped at Twilights tree.
“I'm in the body of some pony else, why not make him hated” Dash thought as she reared up to Twilights door. Hind legs folding up, ready for the loudest and biggest kick she had ever done. With no second thoughts, Dash released her enormous kick, after the initial bang, Dash could hear Twilight scream as Dash happily skipped away.
“I Will Find You And Make You Pay For This” Twilight yelled as Dash was leaving, without a care in the world.
“now for my business” Dash whispered to herself as she flew off to her house.

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As Dash sat in her house, she decided to light the fire and think. She found clamps and placed them in the fire, “These could come in handy later” she said with slight excitement.
“So being mad made me go into it, maybe relaxation gets me out” Dash thought, which was surprisingly cleaver for the first attempt.
As Dash laid on the floor, she thought it would never work, it was time to think of another idea.
“What just happened, where am I” The Pegasus questioned in a state of confusion.
With that Dash sat up with excitement. “IT WORKED” She yelled, without even noticing.
As the blue Pegasus started to walk towards the door he felt the same uneasy feeling than, before he knew it, he was on the floor in a puddle of blood.
As Dash stood there with a knife in her smiling mouth, she looked at the helpless pony with his ankles cut open.
The helpless Blue pony forced himself to his feet and started to walk out, but the pain was too much for him. As he spread his wings open Dash panicked.
Without hesitation, Dash plunged the knife into the ponies back, making him fall to the blood soaked cloud. While he was down, Dash took this opportunity and grabbed one wing with heated iron clamps she had waiting in the fire pit. As he was screaming in pain Dash quickly got some storm clouds to hold him down (after all she is the best weather pony).
“This will only hurt allot” Dash said with pleasure, as she started to pull on the chain attached to the clamp. The lowed pop sound over powered the Pegasus scream, only to make him scream even louder by seeing the skin and muscle tear apart from the, now one winged, Pegasus.
As Dash stood back and looked at this one winged blue Pegasus, bleeding on her floor, she said “you took away my life, my skill and my talent, I will take away yours”.
As Dash walked over to the bleeding pony, she took the knife out of his back and moved towards his cutie mark. As Dash slowly cut around the burning wing, she could only hear faint screams of pain. “Don’t worry, it will all be over soon” she said, sadistically reassuring.
As Dash stood there, looking at a pony with ankles sliced open, a hole in his back, one wing ripped off his body and two skinless patches where his cutie marks where, Dash could only think of two things left to do.
Dash took a quick flight to a butcher in Ponyvile. As she threw rocks into the window to smash in, she quickly grabbed what she wanted and flew out before the owner came down stairs.
“I’m back, did you miss me” She said with pleasure.
As Dash looked at the body she put a meat hook through the ponies’ bottom jaw and out the top of his mouth. He tried to open his mouth and scream a bit, but they where muffled.
Dash dragged the body out of her house and into a clearing of cloud. She hovered with the meat hook in her mouth and a pony attached to it.
“Pay back, MY way” She mumbled as she let go of the hook.
As the Blue pony realised he was falling to his death, he tried to flap his wings to stop him, but it was useless. His one wing was doing nothing at all for him.
Dash followed the Pegasus to the ground with a couple of things in her mouth. As she touched down she looked at a pile of mess, barely able to tell that it was a pony before.
She placed the wing on top of the mess, followed by the two cutie marks she removed.
“At least they will know who you where” Dash said sadly to the pile in front of her, than she laid a six strands of hair down, green, purple, blue, red, orange and yellow.
“My vengeance was better than I expected” Dash said, as if she was ready to celebrate.
As dash was staring at the Pegasus before her, she heard sirens and hoof steps. Everything started to fade away, the mess was going and the sounds where becoming whispers. Until everything went white, than a new world appeared, a world where she belonged.