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Beyond Redemption

by Tender Ninja
"When your past and every memory is dead and buried, there is nothing left to do, but to step forward."

Have you ever been in love?

What a terrible feeling, isn't it? It makes you so much helpless, so defenseless. It tears your chest apart and opens your heart, which means somebody can simply slip into you and make a mess.

You build all those barriers around you, a whole lot of armors, so nobody can hurt you, and then one stupid person, not much different from the rest of stupid persons steps into your stupid life...

You give her a piece of you, and she didn't even ask for it. Just one day she did something stupid, looked at you, maybe smiled... and since then your life is no longer yours.

Love takes hostages. It slips deep inside you. It eats you from inside and then it disappears, leaving you alone, crying in the darkness.

Such a simple sentence, like "I think we should be friends" becomes a glass splinter, piercing through your heart, leaving wounds what will not heal, but only become worse as the time progresses.

It hurts. A true pain, not only in your head. It's a pain of soul, true pain, which enters inside you and tears you apart.

I hate love.

The story is humanized. All characters here are humans. No anthro, just human beings, but with horns and wings and all that stuff. You have been warned.

This story is being rewritten
Jeff's personality is based off of mine. You can call this a self-insert, but that's what is easier for me to create and expand. Note that it's only based on me.
I'm looking for a proofreader... Really could use one.

Teen
On Hiatus
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Romance
Slice of Life
Alternate Universe
Human
 
SPSMP

5570 words: Estimated 28 minutes to read

3 Chapters:

  1. Prologue - Gateway 2013-05-10 20:36:47 UTC
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  2. Chapter 1 2013-05-11 17:22:01 UTC
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  3. Chapter 2 2013-05-13 15:31:18 UTC
    1934