A Perfect Storm

by anonymous browser

Rating: mature
Tags: My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Flitter and Cloudchaser, Romance, Porn, Sex, Thunderlane
Length: 3147

Thunderlane and Cloudchaser are stuck above a storm and decide to make their own entertainment.

After being sent to put a storm into motion, Cloudchaser and Thunderlane find themselves stuck above the clouds and have to keep themselves amused.

m/f clop.

This is the first piece of fiction I've written in several years. Technical feedback would be greatly appreciated.

Warning: This story contains material of a sexually explicit nature. If you are not legally allowed to view such material, please do not read this.

Published 2013-05-12 07:30:01 UTC
Last updated 2013-05-12 07:30:01 UTC

Chapter 1

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It was dark in Ponyville. An unusual occurrence for noon on a summer's day, all owed to the sky being filled with menacing black clouds. A comforting sight to the residents however were the numerous brightly coloured specks of the weather team as they tended to the tumultuous mass high above.

The small town had been enjoying an unusually long period of very agreeable weather, so to offset it the pegasi had to brew up a storm; a big one.

Two of the weather team had started to mess around as the job of compiling and shaping the storm-clouds wore on, as pegasi are often wont to do. One, a charcoal coated stallion sporting a streaked pale blue Mohawk, was kicking tufts of angry black storm-cloud towards a laughing pale lavender mare with a windswept blue and white mane. She nimbly dodged everything flung at her, much to the colt's obvious chagrin. He scooped another tuft of cloud and flung it forcefully at her head. The lavender mare simply moved her head to one side, laughing and let the cloud said on by.

“You know my name is Cloudchaser, right? You're going to have to do better than that, Thunderlane!” the lavender mare managed between fits of laughter.

WHAM!

The lump of cloud Thunderlane had thrown earlier struck Cloudchaser squarely in the back of the head, causing the pegasus mare to tumble in the sky. A multicoloured blur followed the offending projectile, coming to rest between the two pegasi. Rainbow Dash, the Ponyville weather team captain, was not amused.

“What the hay do you think you two are up to, goofing off like this? If you were actually doing your jobs we could have had this going a quarter-hour ago!”
Cloudchaser and Thunderlane sheepishly hovered in place, trying to make themselves look as small as possible under the angry mare's withering glare.

“Since you guys have wasted everypony else's time, you can both go topside and start this storm off!”

Cloudchaser and Thunderlane nodded wordlessly and with her rant over, Rainbow dash turned and flew off towards the middle of Ponyville.

“Jeez, I wonder what got her all worked up?” Cloudchaser asked. “She doesn't normally snap like that. She's asleep somewhere half the time she's supposed to be on duty anyway.”

“Well, I saw I'm pretty sure I saw the delivery mare hoofing over a new Daring Do book at the library this morning,” the stallion replied, a smirk forming at the corner of his mouth.
Cloudchaser couldn't help but chuckle.

“Our fearless leader is becoming quite the egghead, isn't she?”

“Heh, I wouldn't say that to her though if I were you unless you want to be scraping Cirrus for the next month!”
Cloudchaser winced before looking up at the roiling sky above.

“We'd better get a move on before we lose control of the storm and Dash gets on our tails again.”

“Sure,” Thunderlane replied, before putting on a grin, “I'll race you to the top? Threetwoonebye!”
With that the charcoal pegasus was off like shot, disappearing into the clouds above.
Taken completely by surprise, Cloudchaser cursed under her breath and followed him.

Inside the storm visibility dropped dramatically, with thicker patches of cloud swirling causing a chaotic, nightmarish vista being torn and moulded by ferocious winds whipping around inside the storm system. Cloudchaser could just catch glimpses of Thunderlane's light tail periodically whipping out of sight behind dark banks of cloud ahead, the only way to figure out where she was in relation to the leading stallion but soon even those brief sightings disappeared.

The wind snatched and tore at the pegasus' wings and coat, trying to cow her before it's unbridled fury, but Cloudchaser had been handling weather duties for years and deftly moved through the ferocious currents with natural and confident grace. She hurtled upwards with every ounce of power she could muster from her wings, determined not to be shown up by that charcoal stallion again.

The clouds above steadily became brighter and brighter and the wind slowly drop off as she neared the top of the storm system. Cloudchaser gave it everything in the last desperate dash to break the surface.

****

Thunderlane was rewarded with brilliant bright sunshine after a few minutes of high speed ascent through the murky interior of the storm. He cast his gaze around in all directions looking for Cloudchaser. When the pegasus mare was nowhere to be found amongst the rolling, dramatic cloud landscape, a grin plastered itself on Thunderlane's muzzle. He trotted over to a pile of cloud protruding from the surface, easily several times his own size.

One swift buck will kick this lot off and let Cloudchaser know that I was totally here first! The pegasus thought to himself as he turned away from the pile of clouds, lifting himself onto his front legs and drawing back his back hooves. Tensing, he let fly with a powerful buck which connected squarely with its target.

BOOM!

Thunderlane found himself flying and ploughing head-first into the soft clouds as the pile of vapour he had kicked exploded with a tremendous thunderclap. He found himself stuck with everything up to his wings stuck fast in the unyielding clouds. He struggled and thrashed but couldn't shake himself free.

****

Cloudchaser punched through the top of the storm into the clear blue skies above. She flapped hard to get well clear of the cloud's surface and scanned the tumultuous landscape for any sign of her companion. Finding no trace of him, she settled back down on the clouds. After a couple of minutes her eyes settled on a large pile of cloud sticking up from the surface. Her face lit up with a wicked grin as an idea came to her mind.

This'll get Thunderlane's attention for sure, she thought, turning and giving the tuft a mighty kick.

The resulting explosion knocked Cloudchaser into the air and she turned to look at the now inexplicably smoking crater in the clouds where she had bucked the pile just moment before. A rumbling wave reached her ears as lightning started on the edges of the storm as planned. The shock had literally kicked the storm into motion.

I suppose it saves me a job later at least, Cloudchaser thought to herself.

Movement further afield caught Cloudchaser's eyes- a charcoal rump and wings stuck out of the surface of the clouds, wriggling like a worm on a hook. Cloudchaser fluttered over and landed, putting a hoof to her mouth and sniggering at the sight before her. Thunderlane was well and truly stuck, his back legs straining against the surface of the storm-cloud, with his wings and tail thrashing wildly in the air. Cloudchaser could swear she heard muffled cursing coming from somewhere under the surface. Quickly growing bored of the distressed stallion's antics, she darted forwards, gripped his tail in her teeth and heaved backwards. To the surprise of both parties, Thunderlane came free like a cork from a bottle and the pair ended up in a tangled mess of limbs, fur and feathers.

“We keep ending up like this, don't we?” Cloudchaser groaned.

“I suppose it's not too bad though,” Thunderlane said, shifting and snuggling closer to the other pegasus, who for her part didn't seem to mind.
A flash and rumble from the storm beneath the pair broke the ponies from their reverie.

Cloudchaser groaned and clambered to her hooves.

“Looks like we're going to be stuck up here for a while. What do we do now?”

*Thump*

Cloudchaser stumbled forwards from the lump of cloud hitting the back of her head. She whirled around to find Thunderlane sporting a shit-eating grin.

“You little..!” she exclaimed, before leaping into action and tearing up some cloud to throw back.

****

“OK you win!” Cloudchaser exclaimed.

The pair's cloud fight had devolved into a playful wrestle, leading to Cloudchaser's current predicament of being pinned by Thunderlane, who was currently grinning like an idiot above her.

“Who's the best pony in the world?” he asked, success clearly having gone to his head.

“You are,” Cloudchaser relented, “but you already knew that.”

The mare lidded her eyes and leaned up to capture Thunderlane's in a sudden kiss. The effects were almost instantaneous, the stallion practically melting. Cloudchaser wrapped her hooves around his neck, pulling him closer. With a surprising burst of strength, Cloudchaser flipped the pair over, straddling Thunderlane beneath her.

He looked up at her like a puppy that had just been kicked.

It worked every time.

“Don't give me that,” Cloudchaser crooned, leaning down and locking her mouth with the stallion's again. She slipped her tongue between his lips and started to explore Thunderlane's mouth before wrestling his own flexible muscle for dominance.

Moaning into the heated kiss, Cloudchaser started grinding her hips against Thunderlane, feeling heat flush between her legs.

Thunderlane groaned, unable to ignore this stimulation, the head of his cock emerging from its' sheath and starting to harden sandwiched between the two ponies. Cloudchaser soon noticed and rolled off of him, sitting on her haunches and grinning devilishly down at him.

“Looks like somepony's getting excited,” she teased, gently stroking a hoof along his sensitive member, eliciting a groan from the stallion.
With quick, practised strokes Cloudchaser coaxed Thunderlane's flesh until it was standing stiff and throbbing at attention.

Thunderlane couldn't help but stare at the lithe mare jerking him off, his wings spread against the cloud beneath him.

“Hmm, let's change things up a bit, shall we?” Cloudchaser practically purred, removing her hooves from Thunderlane's twitching shaft.
In their place, she spread her wings and bought their surprisingly dexterous tips to Thunderlane's sensitive organ. The stallion gasped at their contact and started instinctively bucking his hips at the delicate stokes of Cloudchaser's feathers while moaning his approval.

The mare grinned. Thunderlane had always had a thing for wingjobs and now he was putty in her hooves. She felt her own arousal grow and knew she wouldn't be able to restrain herself much longer.

Thunderlane meanwhile was ecstatic, each light touch firing bolts of pleasure up his spine. He felt one of Cloudchaser's wings move to caress his testicles for a fleeting moment before moving to gently brush over the rest of his body. The stallion arched his back and groaned in response.

Cloudchaser couldn't take it any more. She had to have him. Now. With a jump and a flap of her wings she straddled the other pegasus again, grinding her marehood against his length, coating it with her juices as she ravished his neck and face with kisses. The mare changed the position of her hips slightly and practically screamed when her clit brushed against Thunderlane's cock.

“I need you inside me!” she groaned into his ear. Cloudchaser half stood up, using one of her forehooves to guide the tip of Thunderlane's throbbing tool to her soaked entrance.

Without wasting any time, she let her hips fall, impaling herself on Thunderlane's rigid member and letting out a short gasp of delight at the feeling of his flared head spreading her most intimate of reaches and leaving her feeling so full. Thunderlane joined with a grunt of his own as he felt himself get enveloped by Cloudchaser's warm, moist tunnel, squeezing him as if to draw him deeper inside.

Cloudchaser sank Thunderlane into her as far as she could take him before stopping, pausing for a moment to enjoy the wonderful sensation of his length inside her, sensing his pulse racing in excitement before raising herself up so just the flared tip of his penis remained inside, then slowly settling back down. The mare continued this slow rhythm for a while, leaning her forehooves on Thunderlane's chest, before gradually increasing the pace of her thrusts. Thunderlane started bucking his own hips to meet her, his hooves on her flanks to guide her. Cloudchaser positioned herself so he hit all of her sensitive spots with each thrust.

“Oh fuck you're good!” Cloudchaser cried in ecstasy, rapidly nearing her climax. All Thunderlane could muster in response were groans at the mare wildly grinding herself atop him.
The pegasus pair started moving at a wild pace, the rumble of the storm below almost struggled to make itself heard over their breathy moans and the lewd slapping of flanks together.
Cloudchaser was barely hanging on, teetering on the edge of climax and desperately trying to resist for a little longer to try and outlast Thunderlane.

The stallion beneath her could feel her tight snatch clenching on his member and knew she was close. They'd played this game several times before, so he knew exactly how to set her off. One of his hooves moved from her flank, trailing up her back and moving to caress the joint between her outstretched wing and her body. Cloudchaser felt the hoof on that sensitive piece of pegasus anatomy and let out a girlish squeal, all of her resistance evaporating.

“Oh fuck, I'm gonna cum!” Cloudchaser cried, much to Thunderlane's pleasure.

Cloudchaser thrust down, taking in as much of Thunderlane's cock as she could, rolling her hips a couple of times before finally giving in completely to her pleasure.

The mare practically collapsed on top of Thunderlane, her wings twitching with the ferocity of her orgasm and her slick inner walls rhythmically squeezing his dick, trying urgently to milk him of his seed and making a mess of his crotch with her juices.

For a while, Cloudchaser could do little but lay there, holding Thunderlane close as she gradually came down from her incredible high. For his part, Thunderlane was content to affectionately nuzzle his lover. They remained this way for several minutes, until a peal of thunder underneath them roused Cloudchaser from her stupor. She sat up, immediately realising that Thunderlane's cock remained buried in her and still hard.

“You didn't finish?” Cloudchaser said, “you should've said you great lump!”

“You just looked too comfortable,” Thunderlane mumbled in reply.

Cloudchaser pulled herself off of Thunderlane, dragging his shaft from her depths in the process. She turned away from him and took a few steps, swaying her hips and flicking her tail seductively. It got all of Thunderlane's attention and Cloudchaser knew it. She looked over her shoulder back at him, giving him the most sultry look she could muster.

“Like what you see?” she purred.

Thunderlane could do little but nod dumbly in response.

“Well, I'm all yours,” Cloudchaser said, looking away again and moving her tail aside, giving the stallion the perfect view of her soaked nethers.

It only took a few seconds after that for Cloudchaser to feel his familiar weight pressing on her back as Thunderlane mounted her. Not in the mood for teasing, he used one of his fore-hooves to line his throbbing stallionhood to her slit.
He thrust in with one long, smooth stroke. Even though she'd been riding him with reckless abandon just a few short minutes prior, Cloudchaser still let out a pleasured sigh as he penetrated her again.

Thunderlane quickly built up to a steady rhythm, slapping his flanks against hers as he pistoned in and out of the mare, grunting in pleasure. Cloudchaser let out her own moans, bucking her hips back in time with his and enjoying the rutting he was giving her. She knew she probably wouldn't climax again before he finished but it was satisfying nonetheless.

Cloudchaser almost screamed when she felt Thunderlane lean his head down and put his mouth around the base of her left wing, gently caressing it with his lips and tongue. The sudden pleasure made her squeeze him involuntarily and he groaned, gently rubbing one of his hooves along her other wing. Thunderlane was in heaven, revelling in the feeling of Cloudchaser's velvety walls hugging his dick as he thrust into her. If his tongue wasn't occupied with Cloudchaser's wing it probably would have been lolling out of his mouth. The stallion felt a familiar pressure building and knew that he couldn't last much longer.

Thunderlane released Cloudchaser's wing and moved his hoof back to her cutie mark. He leaned over, gently nibbling an ear to elicit a groan of satisfaction from Cloudchaser before speaking desperately into her ear.

“I'm really close. Where do you want it?”

Cloudchaser almost squealed in reply.

“Oh Celestia come inside me! I want you to fill me with all of your seed!”

She didn't talk dirty often, but it turned Thunderlane on enormously when she did.
Thunderlane started thrusting into the mare below hard, biting her mane on instinct as he gave in the the unbearable pressure between his legs. He let her mane go and let out a cry.

“Oh! Cloudchaser!”

The head of Thunderlane's cock flared as he thrust into Cloudchaser one final time, the flare stretching her deepest crevice. Cloudchaser pushed back against him, her walls squeezing and tugging at his member, milking him for everything he had. Thunderlane groaned as he loosed eager spurts of thick cum into her, his hips lightly humping her and his wings twitching out of instinct as he filled her with his seed.

The mare moaned in delight as she felt the stallion on top of her empty himself into her, his flare forming a clumsy seal and letting his warm semen build up against her deepest barrier.

Before long, Thunderlane's jets petered out and he slumped over Cloudchaser's back, panting.

“So, you enjoyed yourself, huh?” Cloudchaser asked, looking back over her shoulders and grinding back against him.

“Yeah... you're the best... Cloudchaser...” the stallion replied.

Cloudchaser smiled warmly in response and nuzzled the tired Thunderlane, a gesture to which he responded.

Thunderlane's stallionhood softened rapidly, the seal of his flare breaking and allowing some of his cum to trickle out and mix with Cloudchaser's juices.

Thunderlane pulled out and lay down on the cloud, quickly joined by Cloudchaser.

Another rumble came from below, reminding the pair that the storm was still in full swing below.

“Well, I guess we're stuck here for another couple of hours,” Thunderlane said, making himself more comfortable.
Cloudchaser snuggled up beside him, her own tiredness beginning to creep over her.

“There's nowhere else I'd rather be right now, than here with you,” she said quietly.
Thunderlane wrapped a wing around her, murmuring in approval.

“Me neither.”

The two pegasi quickly drifted off to sleep, enjoying a well deserved nap and the comfort of each other.

Author's Note

As noted in the description, this is the first piece of fiction I've written in many years, so my use of grammar and formatting may be rusty. Feedback of any kind would be greatly recieved.