the dead elements

by personwholikespie

Rating: mature
Tags: Tragedy, Dark, Sad, Romance
Length: 1023

big mac kills all the elements of harmony

big macintosh has many admirers and he kills all of them #EVIL

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2013-05-18 08:00:04 UTC

preface

Big Macintosh was a well liked stallion in the city of Ponyville, receiving praise for last years apple bucking season. He had more than just fans, he had a couple admirers. This is what happens if you get too close to him.

Chapter 1 Fluttershy

It was a cool summer day, everyone was sitting around doing their thing. Fluttershy had feelings for Big Mac for a while, and she figured the worst thing he could do was say no so she went for it. "Um excuse me Big Mac i wanted to ask you something." Big Mac replied,  "go on then, Fluttershy." she said, "I was just um wondering will you go out with me?" "Why, sure Fluttershy" big mac said

He took Fluttershy to sweet apple acres where she was introduced as his girlfriend. He took her to his room and layed her down on his bed, started gently kissing her, then things started to get wilder. After they were done having sex, Big Macintosh pulled out his favorite apple slicing knife and slit Fluttershy's throat it was a really bloody scene.

he had to find a place to hide the body, so he thought for a while and he chose to go to the everfree forest.  he dumped Fluttershy's lifeless body into a ditch and left it there to rot and decay. he had not felt ashamed about what he did, he just wanted more he loved the adrenaline rush of if anypony would find out or if they were to stupid to know it was him.  after he dumped poor innocent Fluttershy's body he had to clean up the bloody mess that was his bedroom.  He finally managed to clean up everything ,and then he went to Ponyville.

chapter 2 twilight sparkle

the next month his victim was twilight sparkle, he asked her "will you be my girlfriend?" she replied "ooh i've read books about romance,  dreamed about having a boyfriend,and- "is that a yes or no" big macintosh replied annoyed. "YES YES YES!!!!" twilight sparkle said happily "perfect" he said to himself quietly. he took twilight to a hotel instead of his room. when they were in a hotel he did what he did to fluttershy but worse he took her into the shower fucked her  then he stabbed her 37 times in the chest,  after poured a gallon of lemon juice on  her then took her into the everfree forest and placed her next to fluttershy (you could hardly make out who the corpse was anymore.)  he still wanted more.

chapter 4 don't trust him

"Wow you did a great job pinkie,"

"Thanks," she said "call me pinkamena"

Big macintosh went to carusel boutique where rarity was sound asleep. "Lets do it," pinkamena said. This time big macintosh held her down and pinkie cut shapes and skinned her torturing her but then, she liked it. the pain made her realize she likes hurting herself "wait, big mac please let me join you,"

"Why do ya want that?"

"It feels so good on yourself-" rarity kept feeling her wounds, then went on "- I wonder how it feels to do it to others"

they pause for a bit then start again

"we have 1 victim left" big mac said

" ohhhhhhhh who is it"  said rarity

Pinkie screamed "WHO?"

"SHUT UP PINKIE-" he yelled at pinkie "-rainbow dash"

pinkie and rarity stood there eyes open staring then they managed to blink

"Rainbow dash......" rarity trailed off

Pinkie was mumbling but all big mac heard was "she'll kick the crap out of us,"

pinkie, rarity, and big macintosh went to twilight's library and found a spell to have them walk on clouds

"Rarity, can ya study this spell?" big mac asked

"I think so," rarity casted the spell and they took a late night hot air balloon to rainbow dashes house

"shhh, guys ill act like im throwing a late night party and i'm inviting all of our friends" pinkie pie goes into rainbow dashes house "surprise!!!!!!"

"Pinkie, whats your deal cant you just go to bed like everypony else?"

"NOPE," rarity and big macintosh  jump into her house and hold her down

"HAND ME THAT FUCKING KNIFE I NEED TO SHOW THIS BITCH WHAT HAPPENS WHEN YOU SHOW OFF TOO MUCH IN FRONT OF PINKAMENA DIANE PIE," pinkie pie takes the knife from big macs mouth stabs rainbow dash with it 36 times then gives it back to big macintosh. big macintosh takes the knife and tells pinkie and rarity to come to them.  big mac takes the knife and slits both of their throats and left not bothering to clean up the evidence he wants to kill someone else now.

chapter 3 the team up

while he sat in his bedroom he pondered about his next victim, "who should it be" this thought went in his mind back and forth, back and forth until he came to his decision.....pinkie pie. he came to sugarcube corner and saw pinkie pie,she had been madly in love with him longer than fluttershy had. "pinkie i have to say i've loved you for a while and i was wondrin' will you do me the honor and  be my girlfriend?" pinkie replied a bit more enthusiastically then twilight "YES, I WILL BIG MAC I LOVE YOU I WILL DO ANYTHING FOR YOU YES,YES,YES." big mac got excited  maybe he could get her to kill with him. he said to himself  " I guess i can spare 1","pinkie, can ya' do something with me?" she replied "OF COURSE!" "i need you to help me kill somepony."   "who are we killing" she said, she sounded happy.

"Applejack," he said " YAY i've been wanting to get rid of that bitch for years she always shows off and i'm FUCKING SICK OF IT." Pinkie said.  They arrived at sweet apple acres and applejack was sleeping  pinkie held her down while big macintosh brutally raped his sister and pinkie did the honors of stabbing her she did it full of rage and pent up aggression after they dumped her in the ditch like the other 2, maggots started eating away at both of them fluttershy was almost gone.