the enjoyment of torture

by derf699

thunder light

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It was a nice day in Ponyville. I was walking along the road listening to the lovely birds singing with the beautiful Fluttershy leading them in a chorus. I arrive at Sugar cube corner, my destination, on this beautiful day.

“Hi Mrs. Cake.” I say in a cheerful voice.

“Hi thorn, how are you today?” Mrs. Cake asks

“I am good how about you.” I ask back.

“Great thank you for asking. Do you want your usual treat? The donut cake.” She asks reaching under the counter to get something.

The donut cake. I love the donut cake here. They make them very well. I got to work up the courage to get the recipe one day. “Yes I would thank you.” I respond reaching into my saddle bags to pay her for the treat. When she lays down the cake I pick it up and replace it with the bits. “Thank you I will see you tomorrow. Bye.”I say while walking out of the store. As I was walking home I passed a few ponies that I said hi to but I hurried to my house. No time to wander around to socialize I have more fun at my house. When I get to my house I lock all of the locks on my doors and windows. Don’t want people to just wander in like they did last time. I really didn’t want another one of my friends to find me having fun again. Once I lock the doors and windows I sit down to eat my cake. I listen to the radio while I eat it. A few of my favorite songs come on. Once I finish my cake I double check the locks before I enter my basement.

As I walk down into the basement I got excited for the fun I will be having tonight. When I get down I see the fun. A green mare strapped to a table ready to be tortured for my enjoyment. Alongside her is the tray of tools I will be using. I walk over to them to make sure that the blades aren’t too sharp so as to maximize the pain from the cut. I check my supply of medical equipment because I don’t want the victim to die fast. I want them to feel as much pain as I can make them feel. As I see her regain consciousness I smile really big.

“Well good afternoon Thunder light. Hope you slept well and comfortable.” I say to her already knowing that she didn’t because I made it as uncomfortable as possible.

“No I didn’t. Where am I at?”Thunder light asks panicking trying to free her hooves.

“You are in my basement.” I answer.

“Why am I down here?” She asks

“Because I wanted you to be. I have always admired you everywhere you went. I know a lot about you. I was following you ever since you came to ponyville. I am just showing you my love for you.” I reply getting my gloves on.

“Are you going to kill me?” She asks hastily

“Yes but very slowly and very painfully. Now if you don’t mind I am going to get started.” I say reaching for the pliers.

“Wait, wait I have more questions.” she says trying to delay my fun.

I sigh putting down my tool I was holding and removed my gloves making it know to her of my displeasure. I pull up a chair and grab the coffee that I had sitting on the table on the other side of the room. “Okay what are your questions? I should at least give you some answers before I kill you.” I say sipping on the coffee

“Why are you doing this.” she asks

“Because to show my love for you.” I answer without hesitation

“Am I the first one to be down here on this table?” she questioned

I chuckle. "no.” I turned the table so she could see the others “As you can see I have others to have fun with later.” I answer returning the table to its original position. When the table was in the correct position I looked into her eyes and saw that she was starting to relax a little bit at the sight of the other ponies. “But don’t get your hopes up about missing out on the fun; you won’t miss a single moment of the fun that there is to be had.” I say in a creepy tone.

At this new information she started to freak out, thrashing in her chains trying to break them. But her efforts were in vain. With the little strength that she has she wouldn’t be able to ever break them. “Sssssshhhhhh it’s all right stop struggling everything will be fine.” I say calming her down stroking her mane.

“No its not all right I want to go home.” She yells.

“Well that’s not going to happen. We haven’t had our fun yet.” I whisper into her ear.

“You’re a psychopath.” She yells at me.

“And you are hot.” I respond changing my plan. Instead of grabbing my pliers I grab my clippers and turning them on. At the sound of the clippers her eyes snap to the clippers and grow big.

“What are you going to do with those.” She asks with fear in her voice

“I am going to shave you mane and you tail.” I answer with a big grin on my face.

“No, no please don’t. I don’t want to have to grow it back.” She responds trying to inch her way away from me but was stopped by the chains.

“Oh you don’t have to worry about theat. So get that idea out of your head.” I say flatly before I start shaving. The hair put up some resistance but with my industrial sized clippers it was all off in 5 minutes. “There we go that should do it. Now the real fun starts.” I say setting down the clippers.

I see her start to open her mouth to say something but before she could I grabbed the pliers and grab onto her front tooth with them. This really freaks her out. She was starting o go cross-eyed looking at the pliers. The look in her eyes is the look I love to see in all victims. Fear.

“I Bet you are wondering what I am going to do with these.” she nods. “Good. I am going to rip out each one of your teeth very slowly.” I said giddy with excitement. I look at her face and see tears running down it. I lean down and lick them off her face. They tasted great. I love the tears of my victims. “Here we go.” I say pulling the pliers. After a couple minutes of pulling I start to feel the tooth start to come out this makes me pull harder on the tooth. I look into thunder lights eyes to see what she is feeling. Extreme pain. Good, finally the tooth comes out with a tearing sound and a scream of pain. I see the blood come out and smile. “Wow thunder light you have very healthy teeth. I didn’t expect that after all of the times I have seen you in sugar cube corner ordering the tooth killer cake.” I say in amusement “Now time for you other teeth.” I declare leaning in.

“No please no I don’t want to lose my teeth.” She hastily responds closing her mouth tightly.

“Now now don’t be a bad little filly and open up or you will have to be punished.” I say with disappointment. She doesn’t open her mouth.  “ok.” I say grabbing her muzzle and squeezing her nostrils closed. After 30 seconds she opens her mouth to breath and I grab another tooth. We continue fighting each other trying to get the other to stop. I eventually win. Once all of her teeth are gone I lean down and kiss her forcing my tongue into her mouth and licked the blood that was coming out of her gums. Once I am done licking the blood I pull back seeing that there are tears running down her face. I lick them up.

“Was that so hard now. If you just would have opened you mouth when I said to then I would have been done a lot sooner. But I enjoyed it none the less.” I say putting down the pliers

“What are you going to do now?” She asks through her sobs.

“I am going to drip battery acid on you.” I say reaching for the hose attached to the barrel labeled acid. I pumped the hose so that the acid gets in the hose. “Time to get started.” I say positioning the hose over her stomach so she could see it every time it drips. When the first drop hits I hear her scream and I get chills up my spine. I love it. Time goes on and I continue to listen to her screams and get chills of pleaser down my spine. I move the hose around her body so that it doesn’t just stay in one place and I could hear that first scream of pain when the acid hits the body. Just pure ecstasy. As time goes on I get bored of just watching the acid just drip, so I grab a scalpel testing the blade to make sure the blade isn’t too sharp. When I get done inspecting the blade I start cutting at the base of the throat and go down till I reach her belly button. Then I cut the top in a t shape. I pull open her chest cavity and peer inside to look at its contents. I smile looking at all of the juicy organs. “Wow look at all of these wonderful organs I think I want to play doctor while you are awake. Shall we begin the operation on fixing the spine?  I think I am going to have to remove all of these organs that are in the way.” I say with a devious smile. “Let’s begin, shall we.”  I look at the ribs to remove them first before I could get to anything else in there. Once I remove the ribs I look at what I am going to get next. I spot the large intestines and aim for those. As I am I hear thunder light start to scream again. I look up at her.

“What are you doing? My chest is on fire.” She manages to scream through the pain

“I am removing your organs to fix your spine because it is crooked.” I say while removing the large intestine.

“My spine is fine just pleasing stop doing this.” Thunder light says through every scream.

“No it is not fine I have seen your back, and I won’t stop because this is just too much fun, right?” I ask.

“Yes yes this is fun.” She screams trying to get me to stop.

“Good, then I am going to continue.” I say reaching for the small intestines. When I got those out I went to get a bucket to put all of the organs in so that I don’t lose them. They will make a great stew later. I next go for the kidney. Then the stomach. “Let’s see what you have in this stomach of yours. I see some of that tooth killer cake, some candy, oh and some donut cake.” I say with surprise. I set the stomach down and go for the spleen, then the lungs and finally the heart. I find the heart still beating and take a bite out of it. Tasty. I see that thunder light doesn’t have much time to live so I lean down and kiss her good night. When I break the kiss I see that she has finally died.

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