Darkness of the Sun

by 55brony55
Celestia has dark past that even Luna doesn't know. will it stay that way? or will it be discovered? read and find out.

Everypony has a dark secret even the princess of Equestria. Celestia did something really bad thousand years ago, not long after she banished Luna to moon. If anypony were to know nopony can forgive her for what she did. Everypony who know about it are already dead because of old age, there is no recordings of it anymore Celestia made sure of it, not even her sister, Luna, knows. But what if she didn’t destroy all evidence? And there is a pony who might know about it? Will the secret be forgotten? Or the truth prevail?

(story is rated teen and gore because mention of blood and fight)

NOTE: I am writing this for my English skill improvement. Please tell me what you think about the story and improvement I can make. Sorry for the bad English I was not from English origin so…, but I am learning. Please help me improve my English.

P.S: This is first story I have ever written, again sorry for bad English.

Teen
Incomplete
Dark
Romance
Adventure
 

5021 words: Estimated 25 minutes to read

4 Chapters:

  1. Luna’s vacation 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    1130
  2. Confronting Ursa Major 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    1663
  3. Star’s Home 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    1033
  4. Star’s Memory and Luna’s Feeling 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    1195