When I went to Ponyville

by ArtsyRainbowdash

First published January 1st, 1970 00:00

I was always the type of girl stuck in her own dream world. I had friends (of course), but I was always quiet. That was until the day I was transported to Ponyville! After that I had to make new friends and figure out to draw with hoofs instead of hands. I had to figure out how to fly and land with my new wings. I had to learn to speak my mind and not just agree with everyone else. This is the story of how I discovered who I was.

First time writing a FanFic
Story is in first person
Cover art was made by me. (I tried my best…)

Chapters

Chapter 1 rewrite

Chapter 1 rewrite
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When I went to Ponyville

Chapter 1 rewrite

Currently rewriting frist chapter, didn't really like all the negative responses. lesson learned from this experience Don't go and post a chapter that jumps from action to action that one wrote in a day. If anyone actually read a blog post i made it clearly states that i get distracted very easily so i guess i decided that i was actually going to try and post a story today. but i have learned my lesson writing a story takes time. O ya im a bad speller but i used google drive and it said that i didnt have that many misspellings next time i promise to use word. Also i think im also going to put in the author's notes now this lovely sentence. If you are going to criticize use constructive criticism and not just mean comments and also you don't need to tell me the cover art is bad i replaced it now, but i did try my best.