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                 When I went to Ponyville                  
                   -by ArtsyRainbowdash-                   
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                     Chapter 1 rewrite                     
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Chapter 1 rewrite
Currently rewriting frist chapter, didn't really like all the negative responses. lesson learned from this experience Don't go and post a chapter that jumps from action to action that one wrote in a day. If anyone actually read a blog post i made it clearly states that i get distracted very easily so i guess i decided that i was actually going to try and post a story today. but i have learned my lesson writing a story takes time. O ya im a bad speller but i used google drive and it said that i didnt have that many misspellings next time i promise to use word. Also i think im also going to put in the author's notes now this lovely sentence. If you are going to criticize use constructive criticism and not just mean comments and also you don't need to tell me the cover art is bad i replaced it now, but i did try my best.