The Life Of A Victim

by Thunderstorm823

Rating: mature
Tags: Slice of Life, Sad, Romance
Length: 10910

Dazernaze is a Sixteen year old Pegasus who has no Cutiemark, he gets bullied and picked on for years. One day he moves to Ponyville and meets the Cutiemark Crusaders, and falls in love with Sweetie Belle.

Dazernaze is a sixteen year old Pegasus who gets picked on because he had no cutiemark. Many of the others bullied him for this, as he was taken as an easy target, and he had few friends. He never told his parents about this because he believed they didn't care. One day he moves to Ponyville, which made him both happy and sad. Happy because he could get away from his problems and sad because of leaving his only friends. In his new school in Ponyville, he meets the Cutiemark Crusaders. That's when he meets Sweetie Belle. He thinks it's love at first sight. What will Dazernaze do? Will he ask her out? Or will he be rejected?

A/N the Cutiemark Crusaders are older in this story. Sorry for not mentioning this.

(The Art is Shadow Moon origin: a bullied nopony, by DeMoN8EyE on deviantart.

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2013-06-12 20:26:13 UTC

1.Trouble

"Get off of me!" Dazernaze screams at the top of his lungs as he is shoved into the corner,

"Where's my homework meat!" One of the bullies push his head against the wall.

"I told you, I'm not doing your homework for you."

He screams, The bully presses harder and lets go causing him to fall to the floor.

"Wrong answer!" they start kicking him while he was down.

"Hey!" The teacher grabs the three and pulls them away with his magic, "You three are in so much trouble!"

One of the teachers help Dazernaze up, "Are you okay?" The teacher asked, all Dazernaze did was just walk away. "Wait, you need to write a complaint!"

Dazernaze stopped and turned, "Like your going to do anything about it." Dazernaze left it at that and walked away.

He gets home and he puts his backpack in his room and falls into bed screaming in his pillow, he lays there for about an hour and gets up from his bed and out to do his chores.

"Hey buddy, how was school? What happened to your face?" Dazernaze had a giant bruise. "I... I fell in the hall." He looks away as he answers,

"Son, did you really?" Dad asked more worried checking for more bruises.

"I did, I hit the floor pretty hard." Dazernaze refused to look at him.

"Okay, just be more careful next time, alright?" His dad asked worriedly.

Dazernaze nods his head and gets working on his chores.

That night Dazernaze has a dream where he was alone in a dark room, he couldn't find anyone. He kept walking till he was transported to a graveyard, notice a funeral going on. But were no ponies.

A pony in a dark silk hoodie, I couldn't see his face. He had a Scythe with him, Dazernaze was confused when the pony in the black hoodie pointed at the grave. Dazernaze looked over and it showed a picture of him,

"What, no...No!" He started screaming and woke up crying and screaming out of his mind. His parents barge in and comfort him, "Son, What happened." He couldn't speak over the screaming coming out of his lungs, he could hardly breath and he kept breathing in and out. Grunts coming out of his breaths,

"Shhh, it's okay....It's okay, it was just a dream." His dad tried to comfort him but it didn't seem to make him stop.

The next morning at school, Dazernaze's friend Polses was talking to him about the news about him going to nationals at Cantorlot for band. He was so excited for it, he couldn't stop talking about it. He was one of the trumpet players in the band.

"Sounds great man, congrats" Dazernaze says.

"I can't wait, It is going to be so fun playing for the Princess. It's such an honor!" They both laugh as they walk down the hall, "Hey dude, check it out. Look at her, I dare you to ask her out."

Dazernaze pushes Polses,

"No way, I'm not even interested."

"Fine I'll do it." Polses says as he walks over to her, Dazernaze stayed back and watched the conversation. But he couldn't hear anything, it ended after Polses was slapped across the face.

Dazernaze starts laughing.

Polses walks over to Dazernaze. "Oh shut it!" Polses yelled,

"What did you say?" Dazernaze asked.

"I used this pick up line everyone was talking about." He says he looks around,

"You didn't please tell me you didn't!" Dazernaze starts laughing and rolling on the floor (Literally)

"What 'Lets get rocking if you know what I'm talking about' is a good pickup line."

"No...stop...haha...you're...killing..me" Dazernaze couldn't help how funny that was.

"I'll like you to try better." Polses challenges, Dazernaze stopped laughing but kept smiling.

"I don't think so. I'll just get rejected again."

Two ponies walk up, "Well look who decided to show up the next day." One of them points at Dazernaze and gets closer,

"Hey leave him alone!" Polses stands his ground, protecting his friend. Dazernaze puts his hand on his shoulder,

"I don't need you to fight my battles, Polses." Dazernaze looked at me

"Don't say that!" Polses yells back, Dazernaze nods. Polses gets pushed out of the way and Dazernaze gets hit in the face by the other pony. Dazernaze falls over, and he gets hit while he's down.

"Stop it!" Polses hits the one attacking him and tackles the other hitting Dazernaze, Polses grabs Dazernaze and they run.

They run behind the corner and the bullies run past them, not noticing. "Shit...Dazernaze you okay?"

Dazernaze nods, "Just...give me a minute." Polses checks around them,

"Come on, lets go. Class is starting." Polses says as the bell rings.

After school at home, Dazernaze hid the bruise mark on his arm with his wing. "How was school?" His father asks,

Dazernaze shurgs "Just like any other day."

"Well we have big news son." His father stands up and puts his arm around his wife.

"Were moving!" Dazernaze's mom excitedly says. Dazernaze's jaw dropped and hit the table.

"I got a promotion and we are going to Ponyville and will move in there, Isn't that exciting? Dazernaze's father asked him .

Dazernaze didn't know what to think, I'm glad or Oh no. What am I going to say to Polses? Dazernaze thinks as he covers his face, What am I going to do?

2.Moving Day

Dazernaze sighs, "I guess this is goodbye, Polses. You've been a great friend."

Polses grabs his shoulder, "I want you to do something for me."

"What is it?" Dazernaze looks confused.

"I want you to defend yourself, stand up to bullies that pick on you and others. I want you to do this for me, I'm being serious. For being your friend for so many years, I could see your struggling. Please promise me, Stand up for yourself and others. I know I'm repeating myself and you hate that but listen, I worry. You are a good person, no one should tear you down. Will you do this for me?" Polses looks at him with sadness in his eyes, making Dazernaze more sad about leaving.

Dazernaze pulls him into a hug, "I will, I promise. I'll do it for you, I love you man. I hope we see each other sometime in the future." Dazernaze lets go of him and waves goodbye while heading home.

"Come on Dazernaze the train is waiting for us!" Dazernaze's dad was getting impatiant. Dazernaze took one last look at his room.

"Goodbye room, I hope a great family takes care of you." (A/N Come on, you're telling me you never did that

on your moving day)

Dazernaze heads outside to the train with his parents. When they get on the train, they head into one of the bunkers and take a few things out of their suitcases. Dazernaze looks out the window, and waves goodbye to the town as the train horn goes off and they start heading to Ponyville.

(Ponyville)

The train stops, and they head off into their new home. Dazernaze sighs as he unpacks his things and sets his new room back up, "I think it could use more green?" Dazernaze jumps and turns to see a yellow, red haired mare.

"Who are you?" Dazernaze squeaked a little.

"Oh I'm sorry, didn't mean to scare you. I'm Applebloom, I just thought since you moved to Ponyville. I just thought I introduce myself, oh I also notice you don't have a cutie mark."

Dazernaze blushes and covers his flank with his wings.

"What's your name?"

"Dazernaze," he said shyly.

"Hey, wanna join our club?" Applebloom excitedly asked.

"Our? Club?" Dazernaze asked.

"Oh, they're three of us with no cutie marks like you. So we made a club called the Cutie Mark Crusaders, we hunt for our destinies." Applebloom stands tall. (their should be they're with no are either that or there are.)

Dazernaze Smiles "I would love to, when do I meet the others?"

"Right now!" Applebloom pulls on Dazernaze and drags him all the way to the club

house.

"My the clubhouse looks great, who built it?" Dazernaze asked.

"I fixed it up myself," Applebloom smiles proudly.

Applebloom shoved him in the clubhouse and he saw an orange, purple haired pony. "Hi, I'm Scootaloo." She stood tall and flapped her wings.

Dazernaze waves and looks around, "I thought you said there were three of you?"

"Sorry I'm late guys, Rarity had me try on a dress before I left." The sound of an angel brought Dazernaze to look up.

His heart started beating fast, his eyes connected with hers and he daydreamed he was in a field with her. Dancing, chasing each other, and leaning against each other. He snaps out of it when he realizes he was drooling.

"Who is this?" She spoke again, Dazernaze couldn't stop staring. His heart was ready to burst.

"Dazernaze, he is new in town and he doesn't have a cutie mark either." Applebloom informed.

"Well it's nice to meet a new member, I'm Sweetie Belle." she put out a hoof.

Dazernaze just sat there, looking at her.

"Are you okay?" Sweetie waved her hoof in front of his face.

She starts giggling, "I think he's out of it."

Scootaloo pushed him, snapping him out of it. "Wha...huh?" he snapped out of it.

Sweetie giggles more, "You're weird, you know that?"

All Dazernaze could do was shrug and smile, "I get that sometimes."

Sweetie blushes, "You're new in town huh?.

Dazernaze nods his head.

"Well let's get him comfortable, and welcome him to his new home," Sweetie then started singing.

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They show Dazernaze the town

(School the next day)

"Thank you all, I'm proud to call this place my new home." Dazernaze smiled happily. But then a voice was heard behind them.

"Well if it isn't the

Slutty Crusaders, who is this low life, another one of your people you call friends?"

Dazernaze turned around to see a Pink, purple w/white stripes haired pony.

"Go away Diamond Tiara, why are you even talking to us?" Scootaloo angrily stomps her hoof down on the floor.

"Because, I want to. And you, where are you from? Loserville?" She starts laughing.

"Do this for me, Stand up for yourself."

"What do you know? You ignorant bitch." Dazernaze had anger fill his voice.

"Excuse me, What did you just call me!?"

"You heard me, why don't you just leave? No one cares what you think anyway, and besides, you may feel like your tough but you're just a scared little filly with nothing better to do. Now I suggest you leave or I'll say something I'll regret." Dazernaze was shocked himself that he actually just did that.

"I... I've never..." Diamond Tiara started walking away from him.

It worked, I did it for you friend.

Dazernaze looks over at the Crusaders, their mouths were dropped and surprised look on their face. "What, was it something I said?"

They all walk up and hug him, "That was the nicest thing anyone has ever done for us." Sweetie Belle says in a soft voice.

Dazernaze blushes and hugs them back, "No problem, you have a problem with her. Just ask."

*Bell* *Bell*

"Time for class!" I got out of the hug and head to my first class.

(After Class)

Dazernaze smiled as he walked down the hall. Stopped by Diamond Tiara.

"What do you want?" Dazernaze asked in a rusty voice. Diamond Tiara grabbed him and shoved him into a corner.

"What are yo..." Dazernaze was interrupted by Diamond Tiara kissing him cutting off sound. Dazernaze was wide eyed about what the hell was happening. He looks over to see Sweetie Belle looking this way, with shock in her eyes.

She starts running in the other direction crying, Dazernaze pushed Diamond Tiara and started running but stopped. "I love my job." Diamond Tiara walked away, leaving Dazernaze looking down the hall where Sweetie ran.

3.Heart

Dazernaze stares down the hall, then the bell rings. He didn't even flinch, What happened?

(Flashback)

Dazernaze smiled as he walked down the hall. Stopped by Diamond Tiara.

"What do you want?" Dazernaze asked in a rusty voice. Diamond Tiara grabbed him and shoved him into a corner.

"What are yo..." Dazernaze was interrupted by Diamond Tiara kissing him cutting off sound. Dazernaze was wide eyed about what the hell was happening. He looks over to see Sweetie Belle looking this way, with shock in her eyes.

She starts running in the other direction crying, Dazernaze pushed Diamond Tiara and started running but stopped. "I love my job." Diamond Tiara walked away, leaving Dazernaze looking down the hall where Sweetie ran.

Dazernaze looks down and starts crying, "Why? It hurts, so much." Dazernaze looked up and sang.

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(Dazernaze walks home)

Dazernaze gets to his door, he then sees a note on there. It was his dad.

Dazernaze,

Out with your mother, be back soon. Go hangout with your friends.

Love,

Dad

Dazernaze smiles, then it fades. 'What friends?' Dazernaze sighs. "Locked out of the house, what else could go wrong?"

Just as Dazernaze said that, it started raining. "Spoke to soon" Dazernaze started walking away towards Sugar Cube Corner. "Maybe if I got something to eat."

Dazernaze gets to his destination and it was closed, he sighs another time. "You have got to be kidding me." Dazernaze turns in the other direction to see Scootaloo, up close and personal.

Dazernaze jumps back, the look on Scootaloo's face was filling with anger. "You should be ashamed, I thought you were helping us."

"Wait just listen..." Dazernaze tries to explain but was cut off.

"Do you know how hard you hurt Sweetie Belle? Did you even know she liked you?" Scootaloo screeched at her tone of voice.

"I...It wasn't me." Dazernaze could hardly talk, hearing that Sweetie Belle liked him.

"Wasn't you, then why did I witness you kissing her?" Scootaloo was filled with rage, she couldn't hold herself back.

"I didn't..." Dazernaze had tears forming in his eyes.

"Didn't what, Didn't know what you were thinking. Please I already heard that one before" Scootaloo started walking away. "Why don't you just hang out with your other friends and leave us alone?" Scootaloo yells.

Dazernaze then starts crying, Scootaloo was confused by this and walked back up to him. "I'm sorry, I shouldn't have said that. Why are you crying?"

"Because...I don't have any." Dazernaze starts wimpering.

Applebloom starts running towards Scootaloo and Dazernaze, but then becomes worried at the sound of him. "What happened?"

Scootaloo has confusion in her voice, "I don't know, I said to him to hang out with his other friends. Then he started crying."

In Dazernazes mind is empty, he standing there. Dark Visions of the past, zooming past him. He was alone, again. He didn't know what to do.

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It showed his dream where he was alone, with the grave. He escapes out of his mind and into reality, "I'M SORRY, I'M SORRY!" he started screaming out of control.

"What! What!" They scream back out at him, "I need to make this right, I'm not going to let this go. Where does Sweetie Belle live?"

"What about Tiara, why did you kiss her?" Applebloom asked.

"She kissed me, she shoved me into the corner and forced it. I was confused at first but she just...Where is Sweetie Belle?"

"She's at home, why did she kiss you?" Scootaloo asked.

"I don't know, I think she found out Sweetie Belle liked me. Then took advantage of it." Dazernaze gets up and starts running towards the Carousal Boutique.

*Knock* *Knock* *Knock*

"One second, dear." Rarity called out.

*Knock* *Knock* *Knock*

"Alright, give me a second."

Rarity opens the door, "What is it?" her eyes are in shock as she sees Dazernaze standing in the rain shivering and shaking.

"Can I see Sweetie Belle?" Dazernaze asked.

"She locked herself in her room, she won't come out. I don't know what happened, I can hear her crying. Which makes me worry." Rarity turns and looks upstairs. "I wonder what made her so upset?"

"Which room is it?" Dazernaze asked quickly.

"First door on the right...Hey!"

Dazernaze runs past Rarity and runs upstairs.

*Knock* *Knock* *Knock*

"Go Away!" Sweetie's sweet voice has turned to screeches.

"Sweetie, please." Dazernaze tried to open the door, but to no avail.

"Just leave me alone." Sweetie crying just made it worse.

Dazernaze couldn't bare not hearing her sweet voice, "I'm sorry."

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"Please, come out. I don't want to lose you." Dazernaze looks down, he looks up when he hears the door unlock. He pushes the door open. "Sweetie?"

Dazernaze looks around, Dazernaze was tackled from behind by Sweetie Belle. As they land Sweetie Belle cried into his coat, Dazernaze held her close. "I'm sorry, I didn't know she would do that."

Sweetie cried for a while and pulled back still revealing tears, what Sweetie didn't expect was Dazernaze leaning forward and kissing her.

Sweetie closed her eyes and her horn started glowing, Dazernaze's wings spread out in satisfaction. They stayed together for the rest of the night.

(School)

Dazernaze wrapped his wings around Sweetie Belle and held her close, "You're an awesome singer, just pointing this out."

Sweetie Belle blushes at the comment, "You aren't so bad yourself." She says back.

They smile and held each other as they watched Applebloom and Scootaloo hoof wrestling over the last cupcake.

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"Tiara, your plan didn't work. It just brought them closer together." Silverspoon informed.

"I noticed, but don't worry. I've got another plan." Diamond Tiara smiled as she did an evil giggle.

TO BE CONTINUED

4.The Date and Disaster

"Oh my, that suit looks smashing dear, Sweetie Belle your date is here!" Rarity hollered.

"Stall him!" Sweetie yells back.

"Oh I have the perfect idea, come here dear." Rarity used her magic to open a drawer and pull out a sketch book.

"What's that?" Dazernaze asked.

"Pictures of Sweetie when she was little, come sit next to me." Dazernaze sits next to her as she turns the pages to the book, there were a lot of them. "Oh, this one is from the wedding." Rarity squealed, Dazernaze and Rarity smiled and laughed as they looked at her pictures.

"I'm ready!" Sweetie calls out, Rarity instantly put away the book and Dazernaze turned around. His mouth dropped, she was wearing a blue dress with diamond earrings, and sparkling blue shoes.

"Wow...you....look great." Dazernaze was stunned by her beauty, Sweetie blushes and puts her hoof to her mouth.

"Shall we?" Dazernaze pointed towards the door.

"We shall." Sweetie chuckled as they walked out.

"Have fun you two!" Rarity yelled from a mile away and shuts the door.

"So where are we going?" Sweetie asked curiously.

"Crazy." Dazernaze jokes.

Sweetie pushes Dazernaze, "No seriously, Where are we going?"

"You'll see." Dazernaze nuzzles Sweeties cheek, "Trust me, You'll love it."

(Flashback)

"Son before you go, take this" Dazernaze's dad gives him 500 bits, "Have fun, I love you and happy for you." Dazernaze was in shock.

"How did you get all this bits?" Dazernaze asked as his dad.

"That doesn't matter, take her to a nice place."

"Oh my gosh! No way you have reservations to Equestrian Breeze." Sweetie looks around the restaurant in amazement, "I've been trying to get Rarity to take me here!" Sweetie hugs him hard, tight.

"No problem, lets just say my dad is very generous." Dazernaze walks up to the front counter.

"Reservations for Two?"

"Your name?"

"Dazernaze" he answered.

The Host checks off the name on the paper and grabs two menus from the bin, "Okay, right this way." The Host leads them to the tables and hands out the menus, "Our Specials are, Daisy Sandwiches, Hay steak, and The Surpreme. Drinks?"

"Water please?" Sweetie asked.

"Make that Two." Dazernaze added, "So, what are you getting?" He asked Sweetie Belle.

"Probably the Daisy Sandwich. What about you?" Sweetie asked back.

"Oh, I don't know. Probably the Hay steak." Dazernaze puts down his menu, "Yeah, I'll just get that. So, how have you been doing? Haven't went on a date in a while."

"Oh I'm fine, I haven't really did anything lately. Still don't have my cutie mark." Sweetie sighs.

"Hey, don't worry it will come. Trust me." Dazernaze cheers up Sweetie, making her blush.

"What was Rarity showing you while I was getting ready?" Sweetie asked concerned.

"Uh...Nothing" Dazernaze says nervously.

"Dazernaze..." Sweetie gets more concerned and stares at him.

"She...Showed me...your filly pictures." Dazernaze finally lets out.

"Rarity! She always does this." Sweetie rants.

"Wait, it's okay. I thought they were cute." Dazernaze tries to calm her down.

"I know but it's embarrassing." Sweetie tries to hid herself behind the menu.

"Here are your drinks, are you ready to order?" The waiter puts down the drinks and pulls out a note book.

"Can I get the Daisy Sandwich?" Sweetie started.

"I'll have the Hay Steak." Dazernaze added.

"Okay, I'll take your menus. Your food will be here in a few minutes." The waiter heads back to the kitchen.

"Like I said they were cute." Dazernaze reminded.

"Stop, just it's really embarrassing. Why are you doing this to me?" Sweetie was squealing, Dazernaze sat back and smiled. "Why are you smiling?" She tried to hid herself behind the table.

"I find it so cute when you're embarrassed." Dazernaze laughed, "I really like your voice, you should be a singer." Dazernaze added.

"But I have stage freight." Sweetie tried to hide herself more.

"You didn't have a care in the world when you sang at the clubhouse." Dazernaze explained.

"Here are your food." The waiter put down their meals on the table next to them.

"Thank you." Dazernaze licked his lips, "Oh this looks good,"

"Thanks for saying you like my voice, I..." Sweetie started

"What is it?" Dazernaze asked.

"I like you...a lot." Sweetie let out.

"I like you too Sweetie Belle." Dazernaze said flatly, even though inside he had knots in his stomach.

"Really!" Sweetie came out of hiding. "I'm mean...Really." going back into her hiding spot.

Dazernaze starts chuckling, "Celestia, you're cute." Sweetie leans more down and blushes.

(After eating)

"Here is your bill." The waiter puts down the receipt. 247 bits, way less then what his dad gave him. Dazernaze puts the bits in the bag and hands it to the waiter. "Have a nice day." the waiter calls out as they leave.

"I'm stuffed." Dazernaze said in a raspy voice.

"Me too" Sweetie said holding her stomach.

They stop in front of the Carousal Boutique.

"Well, I guess this is goodbye." Dazernaze breathed

"Yeah, I guess." They stand there, awkwardly.

"Bye." Dazernaze said.

"Bye." Sweetie said.

Dazernaze walked away, Sweetie sighs and walks into the house. Dazernaze stopped. Why is it so hard, I did it before. Maybe it was different. I should have kissed her.

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Dazernaze pulled his lips off of hers, "Goodnight." Sweetie still breathing from the long kiss.

"Yeah, Goodnight." Sweetie breathed.

Dazernaze gave her one final kiss, and walked out the door. "Yes!" He flew in the sky spinning around and doing tricks, "Woooo, Hoooo!"

Then Lightning struck hitting his wing, "AH BUCK!" it burned like Tartarus. Causing Dazernaze to tumble to the ground knocking him out instantly.

5.Truth

"How is he doctor?" Dazernaze could hear his father but in mumbles.

"We're so worried," he could hear his mother cry out.

"He will be fine. He is in a coma but he will be out in a few weeks. But his wing, here is the bad news. he suffered quite a fall, and the lightning strike hit him pretty hard. I don't know how long it's going to be before he can use it again." The doctor explained.

'What... I can't move, but I can hear everything around me. I'm in a coma? I might not be able to use my wings anymore?' Dazernaze starts to freak out but he can't move, he can scream but no one would hear him.

(Weeks later)

Dazernaze can feel his body tense up as he regains consciousness, he looked around the room confused and his wing started to burn. "What the...Agh!" Dazernaze grabbed his back.

"Ah, you're awake. You've been out for quite a while now, your parents are worried and there is someone crying about you." The doctor informed him, "You can get up but, it will feel weird. It will feel like you are walking for the first time."

Dazernaze pulled himself up and staggered around as he tried to walk, "Whoa there, be careful." The doctor reached out thinking he was about to fall, but Dazernaze regains his balance and heads for the hall.

As Dazernaze walked out he saw Scootaloo and Applebloom comforting Sweetie Belle.

Dazernaze walked up to Sweetie Belle and hugged her. "Sorry for the scare." Sweetie opened her eyes from the sadness. "I love you." he lets out.

Sweetie wrapped her hooves around him hard, "I love you too!" She cries hard into his coat. "I was so worried!" She pulled on him harder and harder, soaking his coat even more.

Sweetie cried and cried and cried. She was so soar by the pain, her heart felt like it was going to die out. "What....Happened?" She cried out.

Dazernaze sighed, "I wish I could tell you, but I have no clue. I think it was lightning." Sweetie hugs him tighter, Dazernaze looks at the others. "How long has she been here?"

"Over a week." Scootaloo answers.

Dazernaze puts his hoof under her chin and raises her head to meet her eyes, she had bags under eyes. She looked exhausted.

"Sweetie!" Dazernaze looked at her depressed, tired face. "Oh my..." Dazernaze pulled her close. He then started to cry himself, "I'm so sorry I worried you so much."

"Son!" His dad ran and joined his hug, with Sweetie, "You're okay! I was so worried."

His mother also joined the hug crying.

(The next day)

Dazernaze woke up in pain, "My back!" Dazernaze grabbed the medication the doctor gave him, and poured two in his hoof and swallowed (hehe) them dry.

The pain begins to drift away as Dazernaze gets ready for school. He headed downstairs into the living room where his dad was waiting for him, "Are you going to be okay? You can stay home if you like."

"I'll be fine dad, I think I can handle a few pains now and then." Dazernaze says as he heads towards the door.

"Okay, Be safe alright?" His dad give him a hug before he leaves, "Remember to stay off your wing."

"I got it." Dazernaze shut the door and headed to the Carousal Boutique to walk Sweetie Belle, "Ugh." his wings started hurting again, "Come on it's just pain, you can get through it." Dazernaze then began to think of something else other then the pain, when he saw Sweetie Belle come out. The pain stopped.

"Ready for school?" Sweetie tapped Dazernaze's shoulder.

"Yeah, I can't wait for school today," Dazernaze smiled.

"Oh really? Why's that?" Sweetie asked.

"Cause I get to be with you." Dazernaze grinned, Sweetie smiled, puts her hoof on her chin, looked down and blushed.

Dazernaze kissed her head and they start walking to school.

(School)

Diamond Tiara's boyfriend found out that Diamond kissed Dazernaze, and well lets just say he is about to break some legs.

"Hey, I'm going to head to the bathroom. I'll be right back." Dazernaze kissed Sweetie Belle on the cheek and he heads to the bathroom.

As he walks into the entrance he sees a black colt with a red mane, he ignored him and walks in the bathroom. The black colt follows him into the bathroom.

Dazernaze entered and two more colts come out; a brown stallion with a black mane, and a purple colt with a grey mane. "Well, well, well. Look at what we got here." The purple colt shoves Dazernaze.

"Hey, I just wanna use the bathroom." Dazernaze said.

"Oh, you wanna use the bathroom. You wanna kiss my girlfriend while you're at it." Purple colt gets angrier and pushes Dazernaze close to the corner.

"Who's your girlfriend?" Dazernaze starts to get worried.

"Diamond! You little shit!" The purple colt puts his forearm over Dazernazes neck and pushes him against the wall, hittng his injured wing on the wall.

"AGH...Woah, wait up. I didn't kiss her, she kissed me. This is a big misunderstanding." Dazernaze tried to explain but instead he got a hoof across his face.

"You little bucking liar! Tell me the truth!" The purple colt hits him again.

"I just did, please let me go!" Dazernaze started struggling but then he got a punch in the stomach, and another across the face.

"TELL ME THE TRUTH!" The purple colt starts screaming.

"I JUST DID! SHE KISSED ME!" Dazernaze started screaming back. But instead of being let go, the purple colt pushes him more into the wall. It was causing his injured wing to hurt even more, and he could hardly breath. "GET OFF OF ME!" Dazernaze throw a punch knocking the purple colt back.

"Oh...You're so going to get it." the rest of the colts hold him down, the purple colt pulls out a kinfe. "I'm going to love this!" as he gets close to his arm with the knife, it turns blue and is lifted up. The purple colt looks over to see a blue unicorn with a brown mane.

"Leave him alone!" The voice sounded familiar to Dazernaze. The blue unicorn uses his magic to pull everyone away, "Get the buck out!" He uses his magic and throws him out the door.

"Dazernaze, you okay" The familiar voice got closer, Dazernaze looks up to see, Polses. "Dazernaze, shit lets get you to the nurse." Polses uses his magic to put Dazernaze on his back.

(Nurses office)

"He has a few bruises but he'll be fine. Might wanna get his wing checked out, it took a nasty blow." The nurse explained.

"More like smushed," Dazernaze mumbled under his voice.

They left the nurses office, "Hey, what are you doing here?" Dazernaze asked.

"Well, right when you left I got home and my parents told we were moving in a month, and well here I am." Polses pulls Dazernaze into a hug.

"Oh look at her, she's cute." Polses snickers.

"Going after girls again?" Dazernaze asked chuckling.

"You should ask her out." Polses dares, Dazernaze pulls him out of the hug and looks over.

"Dazernaze!" It was Sweetie Belle. Sweetie ran up and gave him a big kiss.

"Oh my Celestia, dude you've improved!" Polses laughed.

Dazernaze pulls out of the kiss, "Sweetie Belle, I'd like you to meet Polses."

Polses and Sweetie Belle hoof-shake, "It's nice meeting you, hey watch this kid. He is nuts!" Polses jokes.

"Charmed, and I will," Sweetie bowed.

"Polses," Dazernaze grabbed Polses.

"Yeah?" Polses asked.

"Thanks." Dazernaze smiled.

"Hey, no problem. Anything for a good friend."

Sweetie looks over and sees Polses doesn't have a cutie mark either. Sweetie gasped, "You wanna join our club?" Sweetie excitedly said.

"Huh?" Polses grunted in confusion.

"Oh, yeah. Dude Sweetie and her friends have this club for people who have no cutie marks." Dazernaze explained.

"No way!" Polses shouted.

"We're serious." Sweetie smiled.

"Then why are we still standing here, I wanna meet the rest."

They run to find the rest, they found them at the eating area. Polses wide eyed, mouth open.

"This is Scootaloo and Applebloom." Dazernaze introduced. Polses just sat there, staring.

"Why are you staring at me?" Scootaloo blushed.

"Hey Polses?" Dazernaze waved a hoof in front of him.

"Uh...huh, oh sorry!" Polses snapped out of it.

"Uh...Polses, you're drooling." Dazernaze started chuckling.

"Huh?" Polses wipes his mouth. "Oh...Sorry. I got distracted."

Scootaloo blushes more.

(Meanwhile)

"Diamond Tiara, it still didn't work." Silver Spoon reported

"Paying the pegasus wasn't enough to take him down, neither did my boyfriend. I got one more plan that just might work." Diamond Tiara gives one chuckle and a giant grin.

6.The Dance

It's been years since I wrote in you. I'm sorry for that, but a lot has changed and I don't really believe what is happening.

I moved to Ponyville, I met this pony named Sweetie Belle. It was like love at first sight, but then Diamond Tiara came into the picture and kissed me when Sweetie came by. I got her to listen, saying she forced one on me. I sang to her, Sweetie also sings. She is really good, but she is afraid of being on stage. I'll help her get over that fear somehow.

After our date, I kissed her. I did it before, but it was different. I flew in the sky feeling so alive, then a light struck and hit me. I woke up in a hospital about a few days later.

At school Diamond Tiara's boyfriend and a few of his friends ambushed me in the bathroom, I was pushed up against the wall and I punched him after he did a few times. He then pulled out a knife, which made me fear. He was so close to cutting the flap of my arm off, but for a long time friend you know as Polses.

He saved me, after we went to the nurse I introduced him to my new friends the Cutie Mark Crusaders! They took me in, and my friend because...you know we don't have Cutie Marks. I'm glad to see my friend falling in love, I could see it in his eyes as he stared at Scootaloo. I'm going to give him a few tips! Hee hee.

Dazernaze slammed his journal shut as his dad walks in, "Son, how's your wing?" His dad asked as he peered through the corner of the door.

Dazernaze looked at his wing and flapped it a few times, "Yeah, it's doing well, I think I might be able to fly soon," Dazernaze said as happy as a bee.

"I'm glad." Dazernaze walked in more and sat next to him on the bed, "Son, I think we need to have the Talk." he was serious.

"The Talk?" Dazernaze tilted his head confused.

"How long have you been going out with Sweetie?" His dad asked.

"About a year now." Dazernaze was still confused.

"Yeah, well..." His dad started "You know how me and your mother met right?"

"Yeah, Mom made the first move!" Dazernaze started laughing.

"Shut up!" His dad pushed him, laughing. "Well, when we met we knew we were perfect for each other. After Senior Prom, I asked her to marry me. She said 'Yes!' In that squeaky sound she makes, I was happy. After graduation, we planned and planned. Then we got married, Now I need to tell you...Did you ever learn the word 'Mate' In school son?"

"No..." Dazernaze leaned back, bracing for what he was about to say.

"It's about being responsible, and it's about love. But you don't want to do it early, that's a bad thing. But I'll tell you what it means," Dazernaze's dad took a deep breath. "It means when two ponies love each other very much, they have a special ritual. That what created you." Dazernaze was then more creeped out. "There is a spell to prevent that, but I want to tell you... Whatever decisions you make, I will be there. Just try to make the right one."

"Dad...what does 'Mate' mean, The descriptive part of it?" Dazernaze sat closer.

"Well, are you sure?" Dazernaze's dad asked.

"Yeah, it is about love but..." Dazernaze stopped to let his dad continue.

"It means...(Sigh) It's sex." his dad let out.

Dazernaze sat there thinking. He didn't know what to say, but all he knew was that it was about love.

"I let you get thinking, lets hope they teach you about diseases that come from it." Dazernaze's dad gets up and walks up to the door, "Remember, the decision you make, I'll be there," he softly closed the door behind him.

Dazernaze sat there, then looked up. Sex...Is mating? I never knew that, dad waited. So I will too.

(School)

Dazernaze looked around the school as he walked, noticing different things. Ponies wearing strapless clothing, showing off their chest. They call this sexy? he thought, he then came across a girl with a lot of makeup. Like A LOT of makeup.

"Dazernaze?" Sweetie snapped out of it.

"Huh? oh, sorry" Dazernaze said looking more.

"Are you okay?" Sweetie asked.

Dazernaze looked back at Sweetie, but in a different way. he felt different, like he was..."huh?" Dazernaze felt something in his pants. But he decided to ignore it, but it started hurting.

"I'm fine, I'm just a little tired." Dazernaze lied.

"Alright." Sweetie looked back through the hall way, then leaned against Dazernaze.

Dazernaze wrapped his wing around her, Dazernaze looked over at a poster on the wall.

ATTENTION, HOMECOMING.

COME ALL, HAVE A NICE DANCE AND A NICE ROMANTIC DATE IF YOU HAVE ONE!

August 21st

Dazernaze smiled, "Hey Sweetie?" Dazernaze nuzzled against her cheek.

"What?" She said giggling from the nuzzle.

"Wanna go to Homecoming?" Dazernaze stopped her and stared into her eyes, daydreaming of life with her.

"I would love to." She smiled and they kissed, then started walking down the hall.

*******************Sweetie's Position**********************

"Diamond, why won't you leave me alone?!" Sweetie yelled at Diamond.

"Because, you just like all the other ponies at this school: A slut!" She screams back.

"Why do you have to be such a BITCH?!" Sweetie screamed at that word.

Diamond then gets pissed, "YOU'LL REGRET CALLING ME THAT!" Diamond started running away, crying?

"Sweetie!" Dazernaze ran up, "What happened?"

"I...Called her a bitch, she said I will regret calling her that and just ran." Sweetie stared down the hall, Diamond ran into.

"Hey, it's okay she is." Dazernaze wraps his wing around Sweetie, and she blushes.

Sweetie felt something...It felt good but in a weird way, she never felt like this before. I keep quivering, I never felt like this. I stare at him and I...don't know the word for it. I wonder what is making me feel this way.

"Come on, lets go." Dazernaze said unwrapping his wing around her, "Lets get something to eat."

"Alright." Sweetie heart was beating fast, What's happening she thought.

*************Home (Dazernaze)******************

"Oh, you look so cute!" Dazernaze's mom squealed as she fixed up his bow tie.

"Mom." Dazernaze groaned, "It's just Homecoming."

"This time you have a date, I'm just excited."

"Son?" His dad came around the corner. "You have a great night, I'm going to work."

"Can you get the camera!" his mother asked.

His dad walks in and hands the camera to Dazernaze's mom, "Smile."

*Capture*

"Have a great time!" His mother yelled out before he closed the door.

"Celestia...My mother." Dazernaze smiled and started walking towards the Carousal Boutique.

Dazernaze knocked on the door, "Sweetie, I'm here."

Sweetie opens the door, he sees her in a red dress, red shoes, and red earrings.

"Wow...you look...amazing." Dazernaze stunned.

"Thanks," Sweetie blushed, "Ready?"

"Yep, lets hit the road." Dazernaze held the door open and let her through, closing it behind her.

Dazernaze wraps his wings around Sweetie Belle, and she leaned into him more and nuzzled his chin with her head. Dazernaze smiled and they walked to the school.

At the dance they found their friends on the dance floor. Polses walked up to Dazernaze. "Hey man, wanna be my wingman for the day?" He asked rather softly.

"Yeah, what you need?" Dazernaze asked.

"I need you to tell Scootaloo, to meet me on the dance floor."

"Don't worry dude, I got your back." Dazernaze started walking, "Hey, Scootaloo?"

"Yeah?" Scootaloo looked over.

"Meet Polses on the dance floor, he wants to talk to you." Dazernaze said smiling.

Scootaloo blushed, "Lets see." Scootaloo left towards the dance floor.

Dazernaze walked up to Sweetie Belle and pulled out a hoof, "May I have this dance?" He grinned.

"I would love to." Sweetie grabbed his hoof, and Dazernaze dragged her onto the dancefloor.

"Follow my lead." Dazernaze said, "Step one hoof in, now step back, see not that hard. Repeat the steps, there you go. See you can dance." Then Dancing music came on, "Oh, now we just shake it." Dazernaze said as he lost his mind in the music, showing off his skills.

Sweetie started laughing, and then blushed as he waved her over. She walked over and started to copy his moves, "Nice, come on. Just shake it!" Dazernaze stared at Sweetie as she danced, "Good, good, you are doing great! Now, I want you to do something with me."

"What!" Sweetie asked over the music.

"Lets sing!" Dazernaze shouted back. Sweetie started to blush, and shook her head. "Come on, it'll be fun!" He grabbed her hoof and dragged her on stage, "Sing after me, alright?" Dazernaze was standing on stage, Sweetie nodded her head and got on stage with him.

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The crowd cheers as he walks down the steps, "Sweetie, when you sing. Just think you're singing to me, alright? You'll be fine." Dazernaze taps her back, "I believe in you and love you. I'll help you."

They both got on stage and Dazernaze nodded, "I'll start the first part and make things up, alright? You got this!" Sweetie took a deep breath.

(They didn't have the music I wanted so I just used the music video, just listen to the lyrics)

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As she finished singing her flank began to glow, it shined bright blocking Dazernaze's vision. His flank also began to glow.

As their vision came back, Sweetie squealed "MY CUTIE MARK!" Dazernaze looks at his flank, he had a Cutie mark of a love music note, she had the same. Their destinies were a singing couple.

Sweetie tackled Dazernaze kissing him hard, she was truly grateful for what he has done. "I love you, thank you so much!" She was kissing him a lot. Her horn began to glow, Dazernazes wings spread out wrapping it around her. Then they started floating in air, and a heart formed over them.

They finally pulled apart, breathing very heavily and then descended to the ground. "Thank you, I love you." Sweetie kissed his cheek.

"I love you too Sweetie, I told you that you would do great." Dazernaze nuzzled her nose and they leaned on each others heads.

"We have matching Cutie Marks." Sweetie softly said, she couldn't stop smiling.

"I know, I can't believe it either." Dazernaze said back, he couldn't stop smiling either.

******************************

"They got their Cutie Marks, what are you going to do?" Silver Spoon asked.

"It's time to end this! That slut is going to get what is coming to her. As for Dazernaze," Diamond Tiara then began to laugh like a maniac.

TO BE CONTINUED...

7.The Kidnapping

"Shit, what happened." Dazernaze asked the officers why they were in front of the Carousal Boutique.

"It's just a missing persons case, nothing bad." One of the officers grabbed his radio, "Yeah, I got it. See ya kid."

Dazernaze in shock he ran into the store, to see Rarity sitting down on the couch crying. Dazernaze walked up, "Rarity, where's Sweetie Belle?" Dazernaze's heart felt like it was going to burst.

"I don't know, she didn't come home last night." Rarity started looking down and tears started to drip to the floor, leaving a puddle of tears.

Dazernaze ran up the stairs and tried to open the door, Locked. "Why is this door locked?" Dazernaze looked around, and then at his wing. *Ding* He knew exactly what to do.

Dazernaze ran back downstairs and outside, he looked up to the wall to the window of Sweetie's room. "It's open!" He looked at his wing, "Come on, it's time!" He jumped up and started flapping his wings, at least he could fly again. He heads up to her window and looks through it. Dazernaze's mouth dropped and more shock hits his body.

"What happened here?" The room was destroyed, stuff everywhere. "Someone was looking for something," then Dazernaze looked down. "or someone." He sighed and entered her room. As he stepped in he tripped and fell over onto the ground, "Shit!" He stepped one hoof down to push himself up, when he noticed something. He picked up and it was a piece of hair, it wasn't from Sweetie Belle.

It was brown, it came from the hair on their head. He then noticed Sweetie's Journal, open. "I can't...but something could be of value." Dazernaze got up and grabbed the Journal. A page from the Journal was ripped out, it seemed like it was the most important one. Dazernaze then thought, "My Grandfather was a detective, he showed me how to get information from a ripped Journal." He grabbed a pencil on the floor and set it on the coffee table. He set the pencil sideways and started scribbling leaving white words left on the paper. "It's readable now." He set down the pencil and began to read.

I feel as if I'm being followed, I don't know who or what. But I know it wants me, Dazernaze I need him. I feel so alone right now, I wish he would come. I need to tell you this before I'm taken, he has done this before. He kidnaps and kills, slowly. I've been reading about him, when I found out his name. He came for me, he is probably waiting outside. Please, I hope someone is reading this. His name is Tho... the rest is scribbles.

Dazernaze started crying, "She was taken. She didn't go missing." Dazernaze ripped the page, folded it and put it in his pocket. 'Tho... the only pony I know that has that first part of his name is...Thorn? But he is the most friendliest pony I ever met.' Dazernaze was confused, he jumped out the window and started to walk home. 'Nighttime' he thought. then he heard a noise behind him. "Shit!" 'HE KNOWS, I GOT TO GET OUT OF HERE!'

Dazernaze turned and ran scared out of his mind, he ran and ran. He knew he was being followed, "Where you going, Dazernaze?" His ghostly voice zoomed into his head, he ran and started to scream for help. But nothing, he looked behind him and there was no one there. He stopped running, 'Thank Celestia!' he shouted in his mind. He turned and started walking forward. He ran into something causing him to jerk back, he looked up and was stopped dead in his tracks. Thorn...

"Lets have some fun!" Thorn laughed as he swung his bat knocking Dazernaze out. Blackness is the only thing with him right now.

8.Author's Notes

9.The Basement (First Person)

Warning: Contains Gore

*******************Dazernaze's Point Of View*********************

My vision blurs as it regains itself, not knowing what is going on. “What...where am I?” I stutter trying to get rid of this spitting headache. I try to reach for my head, but I'm strapped to a table being lifted.

“Why hello, Dazernaze,” An ominous voice says behind me. The last thing I remember was Thorn standing over me knocking me out.

“Oh no. I am not where I think I am?” I ask the voice behind me.

“Yes. You are in my basement. Do you know why?” Thorn asks behind me.

“Because you wanted me too, correct.” I ask.

“No. You are here because Diamond Tiara had me do this. She actually gave me a great sum of bits to torture you and not kill you.” Thorn said. I hear a snapping sound. I hear him curse under his breath. “That is the last time I buy iron tools.” I hear Thorn say to himself.

“Diamond Tiara told you to do this! That fucking bitch! I knew she was going to do something crazy like this!” I yell.

“Yes she was very… diabolical when she told me to do it. She said that she wants her to watch.” He said pointing to the corner that was in the dark. “Hey Diamond can you turn the lights on, so he can see our guest?" He says to Diamond Tiara that was behind me.

By the tone of his voice and the knowledge that Diamond Tiara is here means only one thing. The lights go on and it confirms my thought. Sweetie Belle is right there tied to a table facing me. I hear someone walking behind me and they appear in view, it was Diamond Tiara going over to Sweetie Belle.

“I told you would regret calling me a bitch.” She says turning around. “Now you get to watch as Thorn here torture the one that you love. Go ahead Thorn.” She says walking out of view. I look back more into Sweetie's eyes, she has eyes of fear.

“Finally I am getting tired of waiting.” Thorn says fiddling with something. “Get ready Dazernaze for a hell of a lot of pain.” Thorn says walking around to where I can see him. He was holding a clamp that had a spike on it.

“What is that for?” I ask getting nervous. I try to fiddle with the restraints.

“Your arm.” He says unscrewing the clamp. He then puts the cramp on my arm and tightens it. “Now we are going to play a game. Every time you answer a question wrong I will tighten the clamp three turns. Ok.” He says smiling.

“Ok.” I say feeling the spike start to bite into my arm. “What if I get them right?” I ask hoping that if I get enough questions right then I will be able to go.

“Nothing will happen.” He says getting ready to ask a question. “Alright, what does Diamond Tiara’s cutie mark represent?” He asks.

“Being a bitch,” I chuckle trying to direct the answer at Diamond Tiara sitting behind me.

“Nope wrong,” he says turning the clamp three turns. I felt the spike jab into my arm, clenching my teeth from the enormous pain. but I didn’t cry out because I knew that would just make him happy.

“One more try,” He said.

“Is it being a snob just because she can win beauty pageants?” I say, breathing heavily from the pain.

“I guess that is right.” Thorn says, “next question. What is my favorite method of torture?”

“Is it breaking every bone in the victim’s body?” I guessed.

“Correct. Next question. Who is my one and true love?” Thorn asks smiling.

“Fluttershy.” I answer.

“Wrong. I love Derpy Hooves the most.” Thorn says tightening the clamp once more, feeling the pain I clench my teeth hard. By this point the spike is tapping my bone. I know that Thorn wants me to scream and give in to the pain but I won’t let this psycho get what he wants.

“Alright last question. Do you truly love Sweetie Belle?” Thorn asked

“Of course I do what kind of question is that.” I reply trying to get mad. I can't get mad because I am in too much pain.

"I don’t believe you.” Thorn says tightening the clamp as much as he can.

“AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!” I scream, feeling the bone splinters in my muscles as the spike forces its way into the bone and out the other side. He removes the clamp and storms over to the table and pulled a weird whip out of the chest that was open near his table. It looked weird, it had nine other whips coming out of it.

“This toy is called the cat o nine tails. It is very painful.” He says walking over to me. He sets the whip down and undoes my restraints. I wanted to fight back to escape but my arm was in too much pain for me to do anything. He flips me over so my back and re does my restraints. “Now I will whip you 10 times right now. One.” He calls out. I hear the whip go back then pain.

“AHHHHH!” I scream each time the whip hits my back, jerking back from the pain.

“Yes keep screaming!” Thorn yells over me. 'Please let it stop' I hear him put the whip down. “Now I will make sure you are never going to be able to fly again, okay?” He says walking over to my back.

“What are you going to do?” I ask.

“I am going to rip your fucking wings off,” He says putting clamps tightly on my wings.

“No don’t you touch my wings I just got them back.” I say squirming around on the table. I feel a sharp pain in the back of my head because he slammed his hoof down on it.

“Stop squirming now.” Thorn said in a very authoritative voice making me freeze instantly. The effect was almost the same feeling as when Fluttershy uses the stare on you. After a few seconds I hear Thorn say “here we go.”

I felt the clamps start to pull on my wings. The tugging started to get really bad to the point where it hurt. I hear a popping sound then no pain. My wings have dislocated. A couple of seconds go by and I feel them start to tear off.

“NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!” Is all I was able to scream before they tore off.

“Yay more trophies. I am going to mount these right on my wall. What do you think Dazernaze?” Thorn asks.

The pain was so intense, I breathing so hard I can't even speak. "You......Monster." I let out.

“That’s not very nice at all.” Thorn says sounding like he is going to cry.

“Ok Thorn, I think you have had your fun now. I am going to have my fun now with Sweetie.” Diamond Tiara says.

“Awwwww but I want to kill him,” Thorn complains

“Remember I payed you extra just so you won’t kill him.” She says in an intimidating voice.

“Yes I know.” Thorn says obviously not impressed. I see Diamond walk to the table where Sweetie was at. I hadn't looked at her since the beginning and I didn't realize that she was crying. I also didn’t realize the table was on wheels.

As Diamond left, Thorn turned and smiled. "Now that she is gone, lets have just a little more fun."

"Why?" I cry.

"Because, I want a little more to keep the adrenaline running." Thorn went to his tools.

"Please, just let me go, and why, you're coming between love. What would happen if Diamond kept Derpy away?" I couldn't feel my back, it was completely sore.

Thorn pulled back away, he then forcefully grabbed a drill and walked over to the back of me. "Lets start with the thigh."

As the drill got closer, I was bracing for impact. then the doorbell rang, "Are you kidding me? Come on!" Thorn puts the drill down on the table I was on, and walked up the stairs.

"Now is my chance." I started to pull on my right hind leg, trying to get it out of the restraint. As it slips out, I kicked the drill turning it on. I kicked it up to my right arm and forced the chain against it, it cut clean off. I quickly pulled off the restraints on the rest of my limps and get off the table.

My back, it all hurts.

I look over on one of the tables and see a machete, I limped over and grabbed and ran to the room Diamond went in.

Busting through the door, I swing hard towards Diamond knocking the weapon she had in her hand away. I held the knife at Diamond.

"How did you escape?!" Diamond screams, "THORN!"

I swung the machete cutting the skin of her thigh. Hearing her scream eased the pain in my arm. "Scream one more time...I swear." I pushed the machete against her neck.

Tears started forming from her face, "Please don't kill me!" She shouts.

"Kill you? How about I do the same things you did to hurt us? Bitch." I stabbed through Diamonds arm, hearing her scream. 'Shit Thorn might come back' I looked around the room, noticing a bag.

I walk over to the bag and looked in it. 500 bits! Oh, this might work. The door slammed in came Thorn.

"Thorn" I put my hoof up, "I'd like to make a proposition for you."

"What is it?" Thorn sounded intrigued.

"How much Bits did Diamond give you?" I ask.

"About 200, why?" Thorn smiled as he looked at the bag.

"In here is about 500 bits, but there is a catch."

"What?" Thorn sighed.

I point at Diamond, "You let us go, and torture her. You can kill her if you want." I smile

"Done!" Thorn grabs the bag and rushes over and grabs Diamond, and walks out the door, Screaming in terror as the door closed. This is the last time I will see her. Do I care? No!

I rush over, Sweetie was knocked out. I undue her restraints, and carry her on my back. Shaking off the pain I head out the room and upstairs. "By the way, Thorn. This will be our little secret." Thorn smiled as he got to work on Diamond.

My arm was visible to the public, so I grabbed a bandage before I left. Sweetie was already covering my back, so. I go up to the door and walk out of the house. I took a long walk to the Carousal Boutique.

"Sweetie Belle!" I hear a high pitched, accented screech run up. "What happened!" Rarity shouted looking at the red bandage.

"Oh I landed on a branch and it went straight through." Rarity grabbed Sweetie off my back, "Wait..." as she was pulled off my back.

My back was revealed, "YOUR WINGS!" She shouted rather loudly.

I look down, 'Well this is going to be hard.' I thought "uh..." I stutter 'shit' "Well you see..." I stutter again 'What am I going to do?' "Just take me to the hospital." I give in.

***************Hospital*****************

As I got some sleep, my vision decide to awaken. As I wake, I see two things. Sad expressions and Princess Celestia. 'Shit, someone get me out of this situation.'

TO BE CONTINUED...

10.Goodbye

(As the story ends listen to this song)

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"You're awake." Princess Celestia calmly said.

Dazernaze sighed, "Just ask your questions."

"What happened to your wings?" Celestia asked.

Dazernaze looked at his back, "I fell down a cliff and both my wings got caught in between rocks. If you're going to ask about my arm, it stabbed through a branch on a tree."

"Where is Diamond Tiara?"

"Like I care, no I don't know where she is."

"I'm guessing you are wondering where Sweetie is, am I right?"

Dazernaze nodded his head, and leaned forward.

"She is next to you," Celestia pulls back the covers, "She suffered from a heart attack. She is stable."

Dazernaze stared at her, whispering, "I'm so sorry." He said it so soft Celestia couldn't hear him.

"Now, Dazernaze. There is something I need to tell you." Celestia's expression changed. "You are dying."

Dazernaze shot his eyes wide open, "Wha..?" He could barely talk after the shocking news.

"You have only 8 hours. I'm sorry Dazernaze." Celestia looked down, "There is nothing we can do."

"How did this happen?" Dazernaze asked as his eyes began to water.

"Your heart, after the accident you had. You pushed yourself too hard and some of the blood to keep you alive escaped your body and your heart is the only thing keeping it up right now. But it won't keep up for long." Celestia informed. "I'll let you say goodbye to your family and I'll see you in 8 hours." Celestia turned and exited through the door, then his entire family came in.

************After saying goodbye to his family*****************

"Polses, you came." Dazernaze whispered, then before he knew it. They all came, Scootaloo and Applebloom walked in the door with him. "And I see that you two got along." Dazernaze chuckles.

Polses had his arm around Scootaloo, "Yeah, it's thanks to you." Polses took his arm off of her and walked up to Dazernaze, while the others checked on Sweetie Belle. "Hey."

"Hey." Dazernaze lifted his injured arm and put it on Polses shoulder, "I need to tell you something." Polses leaned forward to listen. Dazernaze sighed, "I'm dying."

"Don't say that!" Polses grabbed his arm, "You are not going to die on me, keep pushing. You can make it."

"I pushed through to know that Sweetie will survive, now that I know she is safe..." Dazernaze was cut off by Polses.

"Shut it! You are not going to die, stop it!" Polses shouted.

"Polses...I lost a lot of blood, listen to me..." Dazernaze started to slowly close his eyes.

"Daze! Don't you dare, Come on you can make it!" Polses eyes started to drop tears.

"The Princess said I'm not going to make it and I already said goodbye to my family...You have been a great friend, knowing Sweetie is safe..." Dazernaze started to lose consciousness. "tell her I love her." Dazernaze let go of Polses's shoulder, and his eyes shut and his heart stopped.

"Daze, Daze! Don't leave, no!" Flatline sound played on the monitor, "NO! DAZE! DAZE!" Polses shouted, "Come on, don't die. DON'T DIE!" Polses pulled away and cried more.

"He really is gone, what is Sweetie going to do? I'm not going to like this." Applebloom started to freak out.

Polses laid on the ground crying. "No! This can't be happening!"

Sounds of moaning brought there attention to the bed next to them. "What...where am I?" Sweetie grabbed her head. She looked around the room, noticing Polses crying and her friends looking at her with worried faces. She looked over to the sound of a loud beep sound, she turned to the bed next to her.

"I'm so sorry Sweetie Belle. He didn't make it." Scootaloo said as she put her hoof on Sweetie's chest.

Glistening in her eyes, tears formed from her face. "No... it can't be..." Sweetie started to cry more and more, Scootaloo and Applebloom comforted Sweetie Belle.

Sweetie cried and cried. "No, please don't leave me... I don't want to be alone. Please, come back." Sweetie wished and wished, but she knew her wish wouldn't come true.

***************Funeral*************

"...and today we will celebrate Dazernazes life, not his death. He was loved by many. Today we cherish The Life of A Victim." The Priest called everyone to bow there heads. "Princess Celestia, we call apon you to treat this pony the way he should be treated, with respect."

Walking by his casket; everypony said goodbye, gave him gifts, or cried onto his suit. Sweetie gave him her necklace, for him to remember her. Polses gave him his most priced possession, his favorite wonder-bolts toy of Spitfire.

Burying his grave, the tombstone read:

Here lies Dazernaze

A Great Friend and Son

[Date of birth] - [Date of death]

Everyone cried and hugged one another. "May this pony, Rest In Peace."

20 years later...

The life of Dazernaze has been shared and loved by others who didn't know him.

Diamond Tiara still remains missing.

Sweetie Belle lived on and married but she would be with him when she dies. "Honey, are you okay?" Her husband asked, Sweetie jumped at his voice. "I'm fine dear, I just have a lot on my mind." Her husband gave her a kiss on the head and walked out of the room. As he left Sweetie grabbed a notebook from her desk and started writing her new song, Dazernaze Will You Wait

Scootaloo and Polses got married and had 2 foals, a filly and a colt. The colt had wings and Polses smiled as he held the colt in his arms, "Honey, can I name him Dazernaze?" Polses asked his wife and she nodded her head, "Hey buddy, I'm your dad." Polses began to tear, as he looked at his son. When Polses was at home, he looked at a picture of Dazernaze and him. Tears formed from his eyes, Polses had a cutie mark that had a quill and a book. "You know what..." Polses said to himself, he used his magic to grab a book from the shelf and opened it. he started writing. The Life of a Victim.

Who gives a fuck about Silver Spoon?

Applebloom grew up and raised the farm.

Thorn grew old and died happy knowing his victims died in pain.

Princess Celestia did what the Priest had asked and treated Dazernaze the way he was meant to be. Dazernaze waits...till one day he will see Sweetie Belle again. "I miss you." Dazernaze laid back in his bed, flapping his wings he got back and holding the necklace. "I'm waiting..." Dazernaze closed his eyes and watched as his dreams took over.

"Waiting for our happy ending."

The End

9.The Basement (First Person)

8.Author's Notes

So my best friend came to me (he is a brony as well) and said this song is like this story I said "Sure what is it?"

This is what he showed me

Youtube Video

Tell me, is this story like this song?.