The Rift

by jager

First published May 30th, 2013 11:40

A story in which a JRPG called Ni No Kuni's lore is mixed with MLP. The story presents Oliver finding a rift in the other world that seems to send him and his friends into Ponyville during a Princess' Celestia visit.

Chapters

2. Equestria
5. The Return of the Dark Djinn
1. The Rift
3. The Trial
The Truth

2. Equestria
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The Rift

2. Equestria

They travelled to where the rift was. Something was strange about it. Powerfull light was coming from it in those shadowy lands.

"We must go through it!" Said Marcassin.
"Let's go, Oliver! We will come with you!" Said Esther.
"Ok..... Here it goes!"

And they went through the rift. But, they found a land full of peace and harmony.
"Oooi! Ollie-boy, 'dis place looks like heaven!" Said Dripppy
"But what is that noise?" Asked Oliver.

"Hello everypony, I present you Princess Celestia and Princess Twilight Sparkle. They have got an announcement for you!" A white pegasus in gold armor announced.
"Ponies??" Asked Esther being very surprised. "And pegasus, unicorns AND alicorns!"
"We would better talk to one of these 'princesses' " Advised them Khulan.

Author's Note

For those who don't know, Oliver is a 13 year old boy that looses his mom in an accident. In agony, he cries on a doll from his mom that brings it to life. The doll shows up to be Drippy, a tear fairy, known as "Lord High Lord of Fairies", from anothet world. He tells Oliver that he is known in his world as "The Pure-Hearted One" and that he can bring his mom back if he defeats Shadar the Dark Djin. And so the adventure begins...

5. The Return of the Dark Djinn
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The Rift

5. The Return of the Dark Djinn

After the events in Ponyville, Oliver temporaly moved to Ponyville to learn the secrets of the magic of harmony with the help of Twilight. But he was also learning very advanced spells from Princess Celestia and chaos spells from Discord, which was very surprised of the spell "Evenstar".

"Where did you got this spell from?" Discord once asked Oliver.
"From... one of my and mom's friend" Oliver said, starting to cry.
"Uuh, what happened? Did I said something wrong?" Discord said.
"No, it's just that..." Oliver responded, telling him the story of his adventure.
"That's a sad story..." Discord told him.

While Oliver was learning magic, many things were happening. The princesses were working with Marcassin to close the dangerous rift and open a safe one from Ponyville to Hamelin. Princess Luna went to a visit to The Ivory Tower to see one of her friends: Queen Cassiopeia. They were trrying to turn the ruins of the old kingdom Nazcaä lived again by both ponies and humans.

Oliver was staying with Twilight Sparkle while Marcassin and Swaine were staying at Sugar Cane Corner. Esther and her father were staying at the Apple family. Nearly everyone had something important to do: Oliver prepaired for a magic test, Marcassin prepared to bring Queen Cowlipha Lowlah of Al Mamoon and King Tom XVI of Ding Dong Dell in a royal visit while Esther was having a concert where she was going to use the mighty Clarion. Only Swaine wasn't having anything to do. He was hanging with a grey pony called Derpy Hooves.

In the night before Oliver's test, Oliver was in Twilight's library prepairing for the test and silencious training.
"I see you are prepairing for the test." The princess wake up and came down into the library.
"Uh, I wish I haven't waked you up." Oliver said.
"No, I ussualy wake up at this hour to eat a snack." Twilight calmed down Oliver.
"Oh... O.K..." Oliver said, continuing his training.

While training, he seen a very fammilliar shadow, but he
couldn't remember where he seen it.
"Jeepers, Twilight, did you seen that?" Oliver asked Twilight, pointing the shadow.
"Yes. It looks dangerous. We shall follow it!" Twilight respond. "It's heading to the main square."

When they got in the main square, the shadow was... transforming. Immediatly, it got a horribly form. Luckly, everyone was there.
"Lucien! But why do you are here?" Oliver asked.
"Hah! That weak soul... You got me rid of it! I am The Dark Djinn, the despair that corrupts souls!" The shadow said.
"We will not let you do this!" The young princess said. "Spike, the Elements of Harmony!" She told to the little purple dragon which gone back to the library to bring them.
"Ooi mun, got to fight 'im again!" The fairy said.

1. The Rift
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The Rift

1. The Rift

In the war-like Empire of Hamelin, the Great Sage Marcassin, known also as "The Porcine Prince", had a meeting with the other Great Sages, Rashaad and his daughter and Khulan. At the meeting was also present Swaine, Marcassin's brother. They started a disscusion about a rift to a mysterious world.

"What should we do?" Asked the young prince.
"A rift is very dangerous. It can bring unbalance, and with it, destruction" said the Great Sage Rashaad.
"But, father, we all know who can get rid of this rift!" Said Esther, the great sage's daugther.
"Yes, I think Oliver can do it." Said Khulan.
"But how we can bring Oliver here?" Asks Swaine.

On the palace's door enters Drippy, a tear fairy.

"Hello, mun! Y you wanted me 'ere?"
"Drippy!" Said the prince. "We need to get Oliver here!"

After the prince said the words, out of thin air appears Oliver.
"Oliver!" Says Esther! "Haven't seen you from a long time"
"Oliver, we need your help to close a dangerous rift." The Great Sages said.
"Sure!" Said Oliver, being ready for another adventure.

Author's Note

And so the way to Ponyville starts...

3. The Trial
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The Rift

3. The Trial

"Twiiilight!!!!!" A pink pony yelled, looking at the strangers.
"Pinkie Pie, it's not the best moment... Oh my goodness! Humans?!" The princess said.

"We come in peace! We only wish to destroy the rift that sended us here." The young prince said.
"We don't need anymore intruders! May I remind everyone what happened at Princess Cadeance's weeding?" The other princess said.

Suddenly, the princess's horn started to glow, and a mighty light showed, attacking the strangers.
"Stay back!" The brave Oliver said. He got his wand and said loudly: "Astra!"

After the both casted their spells, everything was shrouded in a light aura. When the aura was gone, Oliver wasn't having any scratches, but the Princess Celestia was lying down on the ground.
"Princess Celestia!" The other princess runed desperatly to her.
"Don't worry Twilight, everything... was a test for Oliver." Celestia said, after both Oliver and Twilight said "What?"
"That's right" A voice came from nowhere. Suddenly, the mighty Gallus appeared.

"Oooi! I tink we will 'ave some much talking, mun!"

The Truth
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The Rift

The Truth

"Oliver, because you helped me bring my daugther back to normal and saved the world, I seen the rift and talked to my old friend, Princess Celestia, to help you learn the most powerfull magic: Magic of Harmony." The ghost said.
"Ahh... The old good times, Wizard King" Celestia said. "Anyway, Twilight will teach you."
"M..Mee?" The young princess said. "It will be a pleasure"

"Wait a second, YOU are the mighty WIZARD KING?!" Rashaad and Khulan said.
"Yes, this is correct, and Queen Cassiopeia is my daugther." The Wizard King respond "Gallus was just a mask... It was one of my best friend's title in the Council of Twelve."
"Horace, the Sage of Ages!" The prince respond.
"Yes, we were very good friends."

"...But the manna... It was my creation" Celestia responded.
"The past must stay in the past, Celestia." The ghost responded
.
"Ahh, so someone found this world.." A voice came from the other end of the rift.
Queen Cassiopeia came from the rift.
"Oliver! I'm glad to see you! Wait a second... That's the missing Zodiarch! But, your just an illusion!" The Queen said.
"My little Pea... You grown so much..." Wizard King said.
"You got a beautifull daugther, friend..." Celestia said.

"F..Father?" The Queen was surprised.
"Yes, Pea, I always watched you." The ghost said.
"Eeh! I luve heppy endings, mun!" Drippy said.