A Bitter Note

by Sweet Vinyl

Rating: mature
Tags: My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Romance, Spa Ponies, Original Character, Comedy, Adventure, Sex
Length: 6181

An OC named Sharp Note gets a little more then she expected when she visits the ponyville spa.

A rather short story that started randomly one day after a conversation took a turn for the weird. Where a filly and a mare start to develop feelings for each other, although one admits it more then the other. And might I add that Sharp Note belongs to 'SimplyThePony'

The description says all you'll need to know to enjoy the story, however I'm not sure if I should leave it here or continue. Also in the story she is a unicorn but the only picture I have of Sweet Tea is of a earth pony...

Published 2013-05-24 16:30:01 UTC
Last updated 2013-06-27 15:18:05 UTC

Keep quiet or they'll hear us!

“Oh yes! Right there!” Exclaimed Sharp Note, crying out to the heavens as the pleasure rang through her like the crescendo of perfectly played symphony.

“Oh Madam Note try to keep quiet, the other guests might suspect something else is going on!” Lotus tried to stifle a giggle as her sister, Aloe, rubbed the musical ponies backhooves.

“S-sorry, it’s just been so long since someponies touched me there.” Sharp Note blushed slightly as what she said began to ring around in her head.

At this phrase Lotus lost it and had to dash out of the room to save the embarrassment from laughing. Aloe decided to give her customer a comforting smile and continue rubbing despite what had just been said.

“Oh don’t mind her, she can be a little naïve at times. I’ll go see what my silly sister is doing, meanwhile our intern will be more than happy to help you!” Aloe give another smiled and yelled for another pony to come, trotting out with a bow. Sharp Note sighed happily and decided to lie there, quite content to wait for the intern Aloe called. Aloe popped in for a second to point at Sharp Note and said “Her” then proceeded to leave, passing a green filly who appeared to be in mid bow. Sharp Note looked over at the green filly and quickly gasped, while it was a normal occurrence for ponies to see each others flanks, this particular filly appeared to have hers raised quite high as she bowed to the passing Aloe.

“Uhm, excuse me?” Sharp Note wanted to get the fillies attention before certain urges began to take over her better judgement. Sweet Tea jumped a bit before turning around with a blush and a smile.

“A-ah hello! Miss...?” Sweet Tea tilted her head rather unsure of the mares name,

“Call me Miss Sharp, are you the intern Aloe mentioned?” Sharp gave her a quick lookover, appearing to judge her on the spot. Sweet Tea however was blissfully ignorant of the mares glare and nodded quickly.

“Yep! Name’s Sweet Tea and Aloe said to give you a quick massage, I think she thinks I can handle it.” She gave Sharp an excited smile and ran to her side, rubbing her own hooves together. Sharp however, did not look as excited as Sweet, and began to shift nervously.
“Has Aloe or Lotus taught you how to massage? I can always wait for them to get back i’m in no hurry.” Sharp tried to back herself out of what appeared to be a potentially uncomfortable time.

“Not...all of it but I know what i’m doing, I happened to have read extensively on this!”

Sweet gave a little stretch before placing her hooves on Sharps back, and rubbing in small circles. Sharp let out a little gasp as she felt the pleasure from earlier starting to come back, closing her eyes and smiling. Sweet Tea closed her eyes as she continued rubbing, not paying attention to where her hooves are straying. Sharp Note held in a gasp as she felt the green fillies hooves move to her flanks and as much as she felt like she wanted to tell her to stop, a part of her actually enjoyed this more than the usual massage. She closed her eyes and decided to just enjoy it, that is until the filly accidentally brushed her snug little tailhole. Sharp Note elicited a tiny squeak-like noise and began to blush, thinking that Sweet Tea was doing this on purpose.

“Well... Rather forward are we? I should warn you though that if you continue you might...ahh...get more than you bargained for...” Sharp Note bit her lip as the ‘more’ she referred to started to get a little excited.

“Huh? Oh well i’m always like this silly!” Sweet Tea had her eyes closed in concentration, not noticing what or where she was rubbing as she started rehearsing what Aloe taught her. “Press hard...then circles...then stop pressing...” She opened her eyes as she heard Sharp Note gasp and let out her own as she finally saw what she was doing.

“O-oh my gosh i’m so sorry! P-please don’t tell Aloe or i’ll be fired!” She frowned as she pleaded with Sharp Note, trying to look both cute and sorry at the same time. Sharp Note looked upon her with pity, but decided to have fun with the whole situation.

“Hmm, I don’t know it was a pretty bad thing to do to a customer.” She giggled silently in her head, but on the outside looked rather serious.

“P-please don’t! I’ll do anything...” She bit her lip as Sharp began to push herself up into a sitting position. Sharp Note took this into consideration as the filly was just trying to do her job, and it did start to make her feel good...

To delve further into the plot. (Nsfw)

“Anything? Then I want you to give the that same massage!” Sharp Note smirked, feeling a little bad for the blackmail but at the same time excited. Sweet Tea’s eyes opened wide as a slight blush appeared over her face.

“A-are you sure? I read about that type of massage...but it tends to only be done for stallions...when they...” Sweet Tea looked down, ashamed that she knew that. Sharp Note smirked and looked down at thin skirt she was wearing.

“Oh don’t worry about that, now since you did my back already i’ll expect you’ll do the front?” Sharp Note smirked as her devious plan started to come together, made even better by the innocent filly in front of her.

“Y-your front?” Sweet Tea’s face turned an even deeper shade of red as she scooted forward to rub Sharp Notes thighs and hooves.

“Yes, I didn’t stutter now hop to it and start with my belly!” Sharp Note hoped her ‘surprise’ didn’t pop up too soon otherwise what was the point of blackmailing her?

Sweet Tea nodded and moved in front of her, positioning herself so that she had to lean in past Sharps backhooves to rub her belly and looked her face to face.

“Now how much is this job worth to you?” Sharp Note snickered as she saw the panicked face of Sweet Tea up close, “Because after all of that flank rubbing i’m a little...excited.” She had to stifle a triumphant cheer as Sweet Tea began to understand what she meant, and started moving her hooves lower.

“I...live here so if I get fired...” Sweet Tea frowned as her hooves moved to Sharps thighs, she wasn’t completely accepting of this but if it had to be done she had no other choice. Sharp however, bit her lip as the guilt began to pile up, causing her to choose to spare the filly, rather than get a quick ‘release’. She quickly moved her front hooves down to meet Sweets and looked her in the eyes,

“I won’t tell her, I was never going to I just...needed a relief and when you started rubbing by flank I couldn’t stop myself. It hasn’t been an easy sex life for me due to my ‘special’ case that causes stallions to shy away and i’ve been too embarrassed to ask any mares to help.” Sharp Note looked at Sweet Tea with a pleading frown, that she met with a look of understanding.

“Oh, well thanks for not telling Aloe about this. And for doing that, how about I help you out after all...” Sweet Tea smiled and winked at Sharp, slowly moving her hooves to lift up Sharps skirt.

“Wait! T-theres something you don’t...” Was all that Sharp managed to get out before Sweet moved her skirt away and gasped. Instead of a delicate little flower she instead had a,

“S-stallionhood?” Sweet Tea moved her hoof and poked at it softly as if slightly confused, having never really been intimate with anypony else before. Sharp Note looked extremely embarrassed turning a deeper shade of red as she looked away, expecting the worst. Instead Sweet Tea decided that she could look over this tiny, err... large, obstacle and moved her hooves along the length in a long stroking manner.
“Wow, how were you hiding this?” Sweet asked, “Because with skirt like that this thing would kinda just pop out.” She giggled a little, as is her nature, and began to pick up the pace of her inexpert hoofjob.

“T-this happens when I get excited, i-it’s much easier to hide when a pretty filly isn’t rubbing it.” Sharp fought to answer Sweet as she noticed the filly getting really into it, wrapping her hooves around the throbbing member. She let out a light cry as Tea licked the very tip, cleaning the pre-cum off it and looking at her quizzically.

“Tastes...bitter? What is it?” She looked at Sharp innocently, causing Sharp to panic a bit. ‘She can’t be serious...she has to know what we’re doing and what that is...’ Sharp thought, ‘Maybe she’s just acting? Let’s see how far she goes then’

“It’s called...’Excitement’ and the better you do the more excited someone becomes until they’re overflowing with it.” Sharp Note smirked, thinking she outsmarted the filly. However, Sweet Tea gasped and began licking with extra vigor. Sharp began to shake a bit having not been able to ‘release’ in a while left her extra sensitive.

“H-hey Tea, might wanna s-slow doooo-” Was all Sharp Note was able to utter as Sweet Tea wrapped her lips around the tip and gasped as Sharp Note prematurely finish her concert. Sweet coughed as the sudden heat shot into her throat, pulling away and unfortunately taking one more quick load to her cheek.

“W-what the hay?” She groaned as she licked the mess off her cheeks and lips. She wasn’t disappointed however that was due mostly to ignorance of the subject, and judged how good she did based on the pleasured yet embarrassed look on Sharps face. “I-I mean perfectly accordingly to plan!” She tried to give a confident, happy smile. “Thats...it right?”

“W-well there is one more thing but you don’t have to do it if you don’t want to...” Sharp bit her lip, hoping she could get her newfound filly friend to do all the secret things she dreamed about doing to another pony.

“Well this was fun and I like fun things...so sure! As long as this sticky stuff doesnt get in my mane...” Sweet tea got up and stretched a bit after sitting down for so long, not noticing the looks that Sharp was giving her.

“Yes...it will be very fun. Now just put your forehooves on the table and move your tail aside, I’ll do the rest.” Sharp note practically bounced with glee as she said this, wondering how far the Spa intern would let her go. Sweet Tea nodded and did as told, letting out a few giggles along the way. Sharp note leaned forward and pushed her muzzle in between Tea’s flanks, dragging her tongue from her belly to her tail, eliciting a few more giggles and this time a few moans from the green filly.

“Do you like when I lick here?” Sharp note asked as she dragged her tongue against Teas clit, knowing it would make her moan.

“O-ohhh....” Was all that Tea could reply with, as her backhooves started to sway.

“And when i do...this...” Sharp pushes her tongue past Tea’s slit, rolling her eyes as a rather bittersweet taste filled her mouth. ‘Figures...’ She thought.

“Mmm...” Sweet Tea let out another low moan and nodded, clearly enjoying the attention that the rather attractive filly was giving her. Her tail kept accidentally hitting Sharp, but she didn’t mind because the pleasure she was gonna feel next was definitely worth it.

“You ready for something a little... bigger?” Sharp asked moving her forehooves to Tea’s sides.

“I-if it feels like that then yes!” Tea wiggled around excitedly as Sharp moved to mount her, gasping as she felt Sharp part her lower lips letting out the loudest cry of al-

Don't blink or like a breeze I'll pass you by.

“Tea! Where are you?” a voice called out, causing Sweet Tea to fall out of her chair and landing with a slight squeak.

“I-in here mommy!” Sweet answered, stumbling a bit as she quickly hid what she was writing under her bed. Sharp quickly ran into view and rolled her eyes as she trotted towards Tea.

“There you are, you know you’ll never make friends if you just spend all day in your room with the lights off.” Sharp blinked a few times and began to sniff the air around her, detecting a slightly musky scent. After a quick scan of the room she spotted Sweets cat, sleeping quite contently in his basket. “Bath time mister.”

Sharp levitated the cat and let out an evil snicker as she headed towards the side door. Sweet quickly hopped up on her bed and opened her bedroom window, letting a cool breeze float in and dispel the unknown scent. As she hopped down and stretched, she noticed that the smell was coming from her and not the cat. Rather peeved at the feline after he had kept her up with his constant need for affection, she decided to quietly tiptoe outside and head towards the back of the house. Passing the side door. where she could see Sharp and her cat fighting over who was really going to take a bath, she made it to the back and slipped out without a sound. Once outside she gave a little stretch and ran towards her favorite tree, an old willow that had small branches that were suitable for anyone small to climb, carefully walking up the branches she slowly slipped into a hole in the tree suitable for her to squeeze into and rest. It was a secret she had discovered when she was adopted by Sharp and was rather nervous about staying in the house.
Over the years she had gotten a little bigger and as such it became even more of a chore to make it up here, and she knew one day that she’d have to stop coming up here. But thankfully that day isn't today, she thought, because after writing that story she definitely needed to be alone and think about how she felt. Was she really in love with her? And what possessed her to write all those things down? She didn’t even know what half of the things she wrote meant.

“Ugh it’s so hard being twelve!” Sweet Tea yelled to no one in particular, rather glad there wasn’t anyone around to hear her voice crack after yelling ‘twelve’. Sweet closed her eyes as she heard distant booming noises, either meaning a storm was coming or the cat found out how to use technology against the infuriated Sharp Note. After another boom, she started to hear the wind pick up and rush through the tree, mingled with light rain. It was a rather peaceful set of sounds and she was seconds from completely drifting off when suddenly, she heard someone yelling and it seemed to be getting closer to her. She opened her eyes and tried to let out a scream as she spotted a pegasus flying towards the tree, looking panicked as he flew towards her spot in the tree. She scrambled a bit to get out but failed as he crashed headfirst into the tree, managing to get his head lodged in the trees hole. Sweet began to shake a bit as she stared at this new random pegasus who was not only stuck in the tree, but blocking her only way to get out. He looked up and gave the scared filly a rather roguish grin.

“Heh, nice hole... and this tree ain’t bad either” He gave a slightly dark chuckle and managed to pull his head out, leaving Tea with an extremely confused look on her face.

“Wait, aren’t they the same thing?” She asked as she poked her head out to look at the new pegasus.

“Well...aren’t you rather precious?” He replied, stretched a bit. “Wait a moment, I know this place. Hey kid, do you know anyone named Sharp Note?”

Sweet nodded quickly and hopped out of the tree, running down the branches to meet the pegasus who knew her mother. “Of course, shes my mommy silly” Sweet smiled at the pegasus, feeling like she could trust him even if she didn’t understand his tree comment.

“Ah...maybe I should pop in and say hi, didn’t know she had a kid. Who knows you could be mine” He smirked and ran his hoof through Teas mane, stifling a laugh at her startled expression as he trotted towards the house, determined to cause a bit of chaos before his departure. But not before seeing if he could kindle some sort of flame with his old friend, “Or maybe just one with a new friend...by the way the names Gentle Breeze.” He winked at tea and headed towards the house that, after this day, would never be the same again.

Part Two: Memories...

"Fine you ungrateful feline, rot for all I care!" A disgruntled Sharp yelled as the cat happily ran away, looking quite victorious as Sharp was left covered in scratches. Letting out a sigh, she moved the bucket back to its original position and began washing her muddy hooves off. As the freezing cold water sprayed out across her hooves, she shivered suddenly feeling that something was wrong. Putting the hose back and turning off the water, she decided to run her daily tests to make sure everything was ok. Sharp stepped back to admire the rather large house, it was made of brick and was passed through her family, although she was the only one that stayed around to take care of it. After the quick once over of her estate, she ran to the front yard checking the neighborhood and her lawn to make sure both were adequate. No foals running around and the grass was a perfect one and a half inch high, she gave a little stretch as the last thing she had to check on was her favorite little foal.

"Tea! Come to the kitchen little one, its checkup time and afterwards we can have lunch!" Sharp Note began tussling around the oddly designed kitchen, opening the lock on a cabinet and pulling out a few knives and forks. The kitchen was rather simply put together, a table resided in the middle with a little space to walk around it. Beyond the table was the counters, fridge, and of course the cabinet which contained all the utensils and everything else you would need for cooking. Sharp was worried Tea might get hurt one day if she decided to search through drawers, so she put everything in the cabinet and locked it, only opening it if Sweet asked her for something.

After looking around to make sure no one was watching, especially Sweet Tea, she locked it back up and began levitating random ingredients out of the fridge. She was a rather peculiar pony, very skittish and always paranoid, although having a daughter helped her fight a few of her fears such as living with others. Of course Tea wasn't her actual daughter as the thought of reproduction scared her, but instead she was a lone foal that she found one day. She'll never forget that rainy evening as she was running from the home she now resides in, furious that she had to spend the rest of her days there because her siblings 'couldn't be bothered with it anymore'. She was afraid of change and decided that they couldn't make her stay if she left, so she ran until she nearly fainted from exhaustion.

"T-trying *pant* to make me stay in this celestia forsaken town *pant*, i've paid my dues and would rather watch this place burn." She kept her voice low in case she was followed, and slowly moved behind one of the similarly structured buildings. She tried to keep her breathing calm and closed her eyes, starting to let sleeps calming embrace take over her.

"H-hi don't tell anypony I'm here please?" Sharp tried to stifle a scream and jumped up, her eyes searching for the source.

Suddenly she saw a little green foal crawl into sight, her eyes going wide as she wondered whose foal this was.

"What're you doing out here little one, outdoors aren't the best place for such a cute little filly like you. Now let's go find your parents." Sharp moved to pick up the foal when she noticed that its eyes had grown wide and filled with tears. "W-whats w-wrong? Was it something I said?"

"I...d-don't have p-p..." The filly began tearing up even more, unable to finish the sentence before bawling. Sharp realized the error of what she said and quickly picked the little foal up, rocking her in her hooves to help calm her down.

"T-there there...uhm...now tell me how you got out here and where you're supposed to be." Sharp proceeded to pet her mane, hoping it would cheer her up a bit. The green filly pointed towards the building they were leaning on and sharp nodded, hoping to quickly drop her off and that hopefully she could eventually forget this huge blunder. Sharp put the foal on her back and trotted around the building, quickly barging through the front door before the filly got sick. Her eyes opened wide as she saw a bunch of mares catering to groups of tiny colts and fillies, her hoof instinctively hitting her face as she realized that she was perched against an orphanage. Sharp moved closer to one of the mares that handled the front desk and moved to introduce herself and drop off the filly.

"Excuse me, I found this foal and I..."

"Hold on I'll get the adoption papers right out!" Sharp looked bewildered as the mare excitedly took off.

"N-no I don't think you underst-..."

"Alright here we are, I'll just fill this out...Race...earth pony...name...Sweet Tea...blah blah blah...Now I'll just sign here and what's your name madam?"

"Its Sharp Note but I dont wann-"

"Ok now just sign here and you'll be able to leave with your adorable little filly" The mare smiled brightly and notions for Sharp to sign the sheet, Sharp leaned in and saw that the mares name was Care Taker and that she had filled out just about everything that would enable her to adopt the now sleeping foal on her back.

"No...you see I was behind your building and I found her, I was just returning her to where she belonged." Sharp sighed and smiled, feeling that this mess was all cleared.

"Aww and you wanna adopt her? That is precious! And i'm glad she's taken a liking to you as well, makes this process a lot easier." Care Taker gave her unusually bright smile and kept looking at the sheet, expecting Sharp to sign it.

"Taken a liking to me?" Sharp asked, rather confused seeing as the foal was just sleeping on her back.

"Yeah normally we cant get her to calm down, she's always very hyper active but with you... I mean she clearly sees something in you! I mean she's sleeping on yer back for celestias sake." Care Taker giggled lightly at the confusion that was still on Sharps face. "Trust me darlin', I'll even make a deal with you. You take her home and if within a week you decide that maybe parenting isn't your thing you bring little Tea back here and we'll never speak of this again!"

Sharp Note sighed and signed the waiver, deciding she could at least give the poor filly a warm place to sleep and a few meals before bringing her back. "One week...I'll see you then..." Sharp walked out and decided to go back to the Manor, thinking that maybe having a little company would make her inevitable stay there at least semi bearable.

"Cant believe that was nine years ago...boy does time fly when your a mother." Sharp giggled as she finished making the salad for the both of them. She turned around expecting Sweets smiling face to be there to greet her and smiled as she was proven correct, however she let out a light gasp as she noticed a very familiar stallion next to her.

"Hello Gentle...and what brings you near my daughter?" Sharp glared daggers at him and dropped the plate near Sweet.

"Oh well I just happened to run into her and was surprised to hear that my favorite mare had such a cute little foal..." Gentle Breeze snickered darkly, brushing Sweet Teas mane with his hoof. Sharp's horn glowed and Gentle felt his hoof being forcefully moved away from the filly. "Well then I seem to have hit a sore spot, I know that it takes quite a bit to make you use any type of magic."

"Don't test me colt...I know how you are around the..." Sharp leaned in so Sweet, who was busy scarfing down the salad, wouldn't hear her. "...Fillies...and I'd recommend that if you get 'those' urges again to stay as far away from her as possible, or else this time it wont just be a near death accident...understand?"

Sharp moved away before he could respond and sat down at the table, proceeding the eat the portion of the salad she made for herself. She sighed, knowing that Tea was safe around him if and only if the problem wasn't still around.

"Don't worry about that, I'm better now! And Tea also let me know that your in need of a foalsitter, and I know how you are with trusting people so here I am!" Gentle smirked deviously, as he played agains't Tea's trusting nature and Sharp Notes clear flaws.

Sharp gasped and looked at Sweet, knowing that she was old enough to make her own decisions. "Little one...do you want Gentle over here to be your foalsitter?"

Author's Note

To be continued!

Trust

"Well Gentle seems nice mommy, so I don't mind!" Sweet smiled at Sharp, not noticing the slight chuckle emitted from Gentle.

"You're...old enough to make these decisions I suppose." Sharp glared at Gentle, not even slightly buying his story about just wanting to be Tea's foalsitter.

"Great! How about I start today while you bath your cat, I can smell him a mile away." Gentle snickered, gesturing towards the feline who was currently enjoying his second after-morning nap. Sharp shivered slightly as she thought about trying to bathe the very irate cat a second time and sighed.

"Fine...but I'll be on the side of the manor so don't try to pull any funny stuff" She looked at them both, but only meant the last line for Gentle. She levitated the snoozing kitty onto her back, the cat instantly curling up and purring, and started walking towards the side door, giving the two ponies behind her a quick look. She heard a whistle and blushed, quickly rushing out the door due to her social anxiety. Gentle actually let out a genuine laugh and looked down at the giggling filly with a smile, he thought about what sharp said and decided that messing with her daughter right now wasn't the best course of action. Of course theres always later, he thought with a devious smirk, but right now lets just see how naughty sharps been while he's been gone.

"So Tea, what do you like to do all day?" He asked, waiting to ask about sharp until she was sufficiently distracted in order to get the whole truth from her.

"Well I have a little garden in the back where I grow stuff! And then I take some herbs to the tree we met at and..." Tea kept talking as she walked out the back door. Gentle shook his head as he followed her, thinking about how easy it was to deceive foals. "...I've figured out a few herbs with those healing properties and mommy has even read my studies about how certain magic can be improved on by using a mixture of herbs!" Sweet looked positively ready to burst that someone was interested in what she was doing, but was oblivious to Gentles lack of attention as he looked upon the random assortment of plants with indifference.

"Yeah cool, uhm hows your mother been? Has she ever brought any stallions home...toooo...uhm...inspect your garden? Or do anything else?" He gave her an unconvincing smile but she wasn't paying attention as she thought about the question he asked.

"Well there was one time she was talking to someone named Market, but she told me to stay out in the backyard so I don’t know what it was about...” Sweet Tea shrugged this off but Gentle got a rather devious look on his face.

“Market you say? Sugary Market?” He asked her, knowing the answer but making sure it was really him.

“I dunno, probably? Not many ponies named Market around here silly.” Sweet giggled as she pulled up a few plants and put them in the saddlebag that sits near her farming patch. “Hey its finally full, wanna see me make some herbal pastes and test their prop...” She frowns as Gentle flies off, leaving her alone with her plants.

“I’ll be back!” He called out to her but she didn’t hear him, not that he cared as he flew towards the side of the house.

“Hehe...think your so clever dont you Kitty? Well you cant scratch magic, so good luck escaping!” Sharp smirked as she scrubbed the cat thoroughly, she looked around to make sure Tea wasn’t nearby and leaned in to whisper to the cat. “One day...You...Me...and the safari if you catch my drift.” She gave the cat an evil look and started an evil laugh, that is until Gentle landed quietly next to her and put his hoof on her shoulder. She let out a slight scream and jumped high in the air, the cat sensed his time to escape was now and took off around the corner, when she finally landed she glared at Gentle with a look that would make even Princess Celestia think twice.

“So what were you doing with our friend Market?” He grinned even in the face of a furious Sharp, but as he predicted her face fell quickly.

“Asking my daughter foolish questions already are we? Couldn’t even wait a day?” She sighed, exasperated with Gentle already.

“Oh come now Sharpy my dear, you know me too well to think i’d just not talk to a cute little filly. So why is he here? I thought you two weren’t in danger after the murder case got settled up?” Gentle tilted his head, honestly curious as to why a mercenary was here without some sort of ulterior and hopefully devious plan.

“Well...I needed a …” Sharp mumbled the last few words and looked away, clearly embarrassed. Gentle sensed this and began laughing at her expense.

“You brought Market around to get your rocks off? But Sharpy dear...I’m always here for you...” He smirked as he moved close enough to hear every word she said now, also taking this time to reach out and rub her cutie mark. “Especially for these luscious and toned flanks.” Sharp gasped and brought her hoof down upon Gentles head with enough force to knock him onto the ground.

“No...I wanted Market to be her foal sitter, which would’ve probably been a much better idea than a pervert such as yourself.” Sharp sighed and shook her head as she began to wonder how she ever got to know a colt like Gentle. She suddenly remembers their first meeting with disgust, he had tried with all his misguided foolishness to try to mate with her for one night. He wanted to convince her to let him stay the night, knock boots, and then in the morning he’d be gone. As if she would let someone like him anywhere near her or her precious books. “Speaking of being a bad foal sitter...what is your grand excuse for leaving my daughter alone?”

Gentle went to speak but for some reasons word escaped him at this moment, “Touché I’ll make my way back to your cute little filly...” he winked and took off with renewed vigor. Sharp looked at the ground and sighed, ‘Am I a bad mother? I try my best but I can only work with what I get. I mean for Celestias sake I’m only one pony and even though I’m not her real... What am I saying of course I’m her real mother’ Sharp shook off her doubts and walked into the house, intent on finding out where exactly the duo were. As she was trotting around her manor, looking for Gentle and Tea, they were out in the back near the tree where she first met him.

“So Sweet, I was curious about you. Have you felt funny around other colts or fillies?” Gentle looked at her with all the charm he could muster.

“Felt funny? What do you mean? Like telling jokes?” She smiled as she trotted into the tree, not noticing that gentle was not flying beside her but behind her as she walked up the branches. He let out a slight whimper as he imagined caressing the underage filly, spreading those perky little cheeks and putting his big me- wait did she seriously not just get what he said?

“W-what? No...like have you ever had a crush on anypony?” He asked as she went into the hole in the tree, this time he was looking at her face rather than her flanks.

She turned a cute rosy red, “M-me? Crush? N-nope...” Gentle smirked as the nervous filly tried to deceive him.

“Don’t lie to me sweetie...I’m just curious.” He squeezed into the narrow opening of the tree but once he was inside he found it to be rather roomy. ‘Perfect...’ he thought, ‘More than enough space...’

She began to rub her hooves together and looked at him as he moved closer to her, “W-well...there is a mare...who I think is the prettiest in all of equestria. But you can never tell her!”

Gentle couldn’t contain himself as he thought of the innocent little filly trusting her body to a mare, their lips meeting and the mares hoof moving down the tiny frame towards her...

“Its my mommy...” Gentle gasped and had to hide himself as the mysterious mare turned to Sharp, showing her foal the ropes.

“Wow...thats ho-...I mean...well good you should pursue that! But...have you ever had a crush on a stallion?” He was using his hooves to hide his ‘happiness’ as he asked these questions, not keen on letting her see anything lewd just yet.

She shook her head at this question, “I don’t know any stallions....besides you. Just like my mommy is the only mare I know.”

“That explains a lot...well have you ever had your first kiss?” He gave her a warm, comforting smile that she returned. He wraps his wing around tea and pulls her even closer, leaning his head in to nuzzle her gently. He noticed her face turn an even deeper red.

“Y-yes...o-one day mommy had a bunch of wine and when I went to sleep in her bed she leaned in, wrapped her hooves around me, and pressed her lips against mine. I-is it bad i-if I liked it?” Sweet looked up at Gentle for confirmation to her fear, she could feel her heart racing as if she just ran a marathon.

“Well...yes mares often like mares in this society as there is a lack of stallions, but since I’m the only stallion you know... how would you like to have your first male kiss?” He moved one of his hooves to stroke her mane, smiling as the filly bit her lip.

“I...I don’t know...but I-I’m in love with sha-” She was slightly cut off as Gentle shushed her with his hoof, moving his lips closer to hers. Her eyes quivered with fear of the unknown and her heart threatened to beat out of her chest, if it was like kissing Sharp then maybe it’d be okay. But the problem was it wasn’t her, instead it was a stallion she barely knew. He moved his hoof from her mane to her chest, then down to her belly. She wasn’t responsive and was shaking, unaware of what was happening and what he was doing all she knew was that she wished it was Sharp here. Maybe if she imagined he was, then everything would be ok. She closed one eye but right before she closed the other she felt her horn spark up suddenly and a dark object appeared in front of her.

“Hi Mommy!” Was all Gentle heard before everything went black.

Author's Note

Longest chapter yet...woo! I'll try to update frequently...if anyone cares :p