The Dark Halls Part 1.View OnlineThe dark halls of Pinkie.The Dark Halls Part 1."Twiiilight...Wake up twilight.." Twilight's eyes slowly opened to reveal a dim lighted room, she found herself on a table, slowly regaining more of her conciousness each second that passes. When she could finally think straight, she tried to get up, but to no suprise, her hoofs were shackled extremely tightly, they also seem to be connected to the door infront of her, and the words "REDRUM" were painted in blood red on the walls. She could see a rope to the right of her, which was connected to something in the darkness outside of a small window also to the right of her, only thing she could see out of it was darkness. "Hello? Anypony there?" Twilight said to the best of her ability, but to no response. She seemed to be alone here, no sign of anyother pony anywhere. After a few minutes of thinking, she decided to try pulling the rope, as she was pulling the rope, it got brighter, revealing what was to the left of her, skulls, a peice of paper, and a cupcake. The rope she now finished pulling to the most she could, made her shackles get loose enough so she could slip them off, she didnt know how this happened, but didnt mind aslong as she was free. She immediatly went to look at the note, it read: "Hello there, Twilight, you are one of the many pony's i have decided to test, the things you face before you are going to be frightening and i suggest you stabilize yourself before continuing through the door that should now be open for you, but be warned, your other "freinds" should be here to, searching for you." This message sent chills down Twilights spine, and only made her want to continue through the door less. But she knew that she needed to continue on, and find out what is going on. At the first glance outside the door, she could notice 3 more doors to left,right, and north of her, with a dim light shining above each of them, and the rest in pure darkness. Twilight took the first step outside of the door, nothing, the second step was much different though, it was a pressure plate, which shined a light in the middle of the room, this time the light was bright, and revealed a small, tall table, with a sign above it that read: "But where?" why does nothing make sense around here? A few steps closer to the mysterious table and she could see that there was a cupcake shaped hole in the middle of it, After a few seconds she remembered the cupcake that was in the room, she slowly walked back to the room, careful not to trigger anymore pressure plates, as it was dark in the room, that was quite hard to do. When she finally reached the room, the cupcake was gone, this frightened twilight, giving her a feeling she was being watched. At a closer inspection, she noticed a blue key where the cupcake used to be, which means someone-or something- put it there. Twilight took the key and walked back out the door, back to the table, still the same old table as before. At a closer inspection of all the doors, she noticed that the handles where coloured, and numbered 1-3, coloured blue, yellow and purple. It was obvious to her that the blue key must go to the blue door, which was the case, when the door was opened however, it triggered something, like a timer starting, is this timed? Note: should i do more of this? Did you like it? Feedback?
The Dark Halls Part 2View OnlineThe dark halls of Pinkie.The Dark Halls Part 2She didnt want to think about it, she just ran, into the darkness, it seemed to go on for an eternity, until she finally collapsed on the ground from exhaustion. After a few minutes, a black outlined figure approached her body, "Get OUT!" she awoke, at the begining of the room, it was all dark, just like before. Whats going on? Why am i here? "SOMEPONY GET ME OUT OF HERE!" Twilight was now softly sobbing on the ground, frightened, "GET UP!" Who said that? she took the advice, and slowly got up, walking back into the darkness. Everything now seemed different then before, although she couldnt see anything, it seemed like it was. She finally reached the end of the dark hall, a button, with a bit of hesitation, she pushed the button, it switched on all the lights in the hall, after adjusting to the light, she could see a conveyer belt, with somepony strapped onto it, at the end of the conveyor belt, there was fire, no no no no no the somepony strapped to the table, was scootaloo. Scootaloo, for your own life, do NOT wake up! although how much she wished she wouldnt of, scootaloo woke up, and the conveyor belt started moving slowly, "Twilight, w-where are we?" scootaloo sounded nervous and scared, "I-its all gonna be okay scootaloo, d-dont worry" these words were hard for twilight to say, it wasnt gonna be okay. The yellow key was above the machine, slowly lowering the more the conveyor belt moved, a rope was to the right of her with a sign on top of it that read "There is always a way" the conveyor belt was now moving more swiftly, and twilight was searching more frantically, but there was nothing, with tears starting to form, she tried to unstrap the filly from the conveyor belt, but nothing was working, she then remembered her horn, and for some unknown reason, it wouldnt work, nothing would work, she would be alone here forever. The rope was the only option, she pulled it, the conveyor belt stopped, the key dropped to the floor, and a walkie talkie looking device was lowered from the ceiling, it started playing a message. "Your first test was to see how you acted under pressure and under a time limit, you might of saved this one, but the next one wont be so easy. You may also notice, that your slowly turning insane, the dark figures are a lie, and so is this message, so have fun." Scootaloo and the machine dissapeared, she was back into the starting room, the door dissapeared, and the only thing left to do, was to open the next door. The door creeked open, a dim light at the end of the hall wasn't so reasuring considering the events that have just occured, but she needed to continue, if she already saved one pony, then there must be more to save. She finally reached the end of the hall, there was a table with some sort of rock on it, she touched the stone very lightly just incase something was rigged, but nothing, she grabbed the rock, lifting it up slowly, the whole room starting falling apart, what the fuck! she ran away as fast as she could, but the door was now 20x more far away then it was when she first came in. She was finally almost there, the rocks behind her were so close she could almost feel them, now running at an alarmingly fast speed, she jumped out the door as the rocks piled in and blocked the door even more. Nothing happened for a minute or so, as only small noises of rocks moving were heard slightly, and she decided, at this point, to get up and look for anything in the rubble she could see. There was a key on top of the rocks, the final, purple, key. So, can we finally get this over with now? all she wanted was to be out at this point, so she hurried to the next purple door, and put the key inside. It was actually bright inside this time, atleast at the beginning, the rest was darker then the other doors were. After the first couple steps, nothing happened whatsoever, so she hurried it up a bit more now, but still was careful to not trigger anymore traps. She was now going into the dark part of the room, which was as scary as you would think, after a good 20 or so steps, the lights turned off behind her, quickly looking behind her, nothing was there, but the door was open, did something come in? she didnt want to know, she quickly ran away, into the unknown darkness before her, quickly looking back, there was a dark figure behind her, in some sort of hood, but quickly vanished into the unknown. "Twiiilight...Come say HELLO!" "SHUT THE FUCK UP!" now she was just angry, why was she here? Who would do this to somepony? The lights flickered back on at the end of the hall, and twilight just laid there, exhausted from running for so long, she could hear footsteps behind her, and infront of her, but was to tired to see what it was, CLIFHANGER! I made this one a bit more longer than the other one, and plan to keep going up in chapter size each time. Would love to hear some feedback!
The Dark Halls Part 3View OnlineThe dark halls of Pinkie.The Dark Halls Part 3(I just felt like putting this here, but i use caps lock to make things capital and not shift. anyone else do this?) (anyone else play binding of isaac also? im gonna start continuing writing now, was just interested :P.) Something was carying her, it felt like she was incredibly high up in the air, then suddenly, all went black and she was falling at the speed of 1000 rainbow dashes racing at max speed. ....."Twilight....i...i lo" the voice was glitching out "HATE" Twilight was back were she laid, feeling rested and disturbed. Actually, it turned out she wasn't back were she laid, she was in a big box, with no lights,no door, no nothing, just her and a metal box. While waiting for something to happen, she sat down in the corner compiling the things she had found and done in a journal she found in the box, hopefully it will keep her a bit more sane and will make things easier and less insane for her. Or its just a place to keep notes and random things in. About 10 minutes later, sounds could be heard from outside the box, like a robot walking and talking, and it was coming to the box, I hid in the far right corner for safety. It stayed there for a few minutes, then starting smelting through, my eyes werent adjust to the light yet, it was getting in fast, but when it actually got in, it wasnt a robot at all, it was some sort of monster pony, it had patches of skin taken off, no eyes, but blood where the eyes actually where. I sat there in the corner not making any movements or sound, and it slowly approached me, "Dont leave again" i was back where i was, laying there with blood coming out of my mouth and a pool of it on the floor, a sign on the wall said "welcome back" someone is definatly watching me... a quick look around for cameras and shes back up, walking back into the unknown. There was stairs, great, creepy stairs weres theres no light and nopony around with her, lets just go i guess. The first few floors nothing seemed to happen, there was no windows, and nothing to help to see, it was just stairs and her. At around the 14th floor, a shadow quickly ran past, but nothing to unusual for this hellhole. a few more floors in and something was breathing loudly, very loudly. slowly walking down now, Twilight wants to turn back, but if she turns back now, where will she go? A door at the end of the staircase, the breathing had stopped now, but was still hesitant to open the door. I slowly opened the door, peeking through there was a shadow walk by, but nothing else. I stepped in, there was a room infront of me intitled "The room where you most likely die and you shouldnt come in here." how does that even fit on there? i guess i should take its hint anyway. for now. Walking to the left, there was a door aswell, that one was titled "Level 1" well, its a game now. my life is a game now. lets just enter "level 1". (Thanks for the support everypony! Its really nice to hear people enjoy my fanfiction. I also will cliffhanger you alot just to piss you off. Have fun!)
Level 1.View OnlineThe dark halls of Pinkie.Level 1.(Sorry for making each chapter so short, this one and the next ones will be longer :) ) Twilight slowly opened the door, there was grass and a hill going upwards, it looked like outside but it wasnt actually outside. After taking some fresh air in, she started to walk up the hill, as she walked up the hill, it seemed to get higher the more she walked up it, this really wasnt odd anymore considering all the random shit that has happened so far, so she just shrugs it off and keeps walking. "Twilight, why did you leave me?" "Fluttershy! W-why are you here? I never left you!" Fluttershy was looking backwards against the wall, with her head down, "J-j-just LEAVE ME HERE! TO FUCKING DIE WHY DONT YOU!" Twilight was knocked back by these words, her usually quiet and shy freind is now yelling at her, with deep anger. After a minute of thinking what to say, she went up to fluttershy, and put her hoof on her shoulder, "Fluttershy, i-its okay, just calm down, i would never leave you, your my freind!" "OH, FUCKING REALLY? YOU REALLY FUCKING BELIEVE THAT I WOULD BELIEVE YOU?!?! WHERE THE FUCK HAVE YOU BEEN, HUH! WELL, IM SORRY YOUR SO FUCKING BUSY! I'VE BEEN HERE SCARED AS SHIT! GO TELL THE OTHERS HOW MUCH YOU "LOVE" THEM! YOU LEAFT THEM TO! WE ALL HATE YOU TWILIGHT! JUST FUCKING DIE!". Twilight was starting to cry, fluttershy was swearing, and angry plus, she was yelling, "W-why? I-just....Please? I didnt mean to hurt..you." Fluttershy looked at twilight, fluttershy was covered in blood, her nose was bleeding and broken, her mane was filled with blood, and her body was ripped and scarred, "Fluttershy! W-what happened!" "Oh, you should know that one, Twilight! You act like you dont know what has been going on, and now your trying to be the good pony! I hate you." "W-what did i do to you? Fluttershy? "To much." Fluttershy turned grey then vanished from the hill, twilight sat there, and just cried, Fluttershy wouldnt do that, would she? What did i do? Was that even REAL? Twilight just stepped back, and continued walking, it seemed like a better decision then just sitting there. After a few more minutes of walking, she noticed a note on the ground, she picked it up, it read: "Hello there again, twilight, i thought i should give you a bit of an update on what is going on. Your freinds hate you, so just give up and kill yourself right now." There was a knife next to the note, she decided to just keep it, she might need it. After a bit more walking, something else popped up, "Rainbow dash? Where ae your wings?" Rainbow dash was up in a grey cloud, looking down to the cloud on the other side of it, "Dont ask about the wings, twilight. What the fuck do you want?" "Are you real?" "Why the fuck not." No direct answer, im gonna say maybe. "I met fluttershy earlier. Why did she hate me?" "Why not? You made her cry, twilight. And NO PONY makes fluttershy, cry. You bitch." "I DIDNT DO A FUCKING THING TO ANYPONY!" Was it right to yell at her? "Hey, twilight, guess what." "What?" before twilight had time to react, rainbow dash jumped up from the cloud and lunged at her, tumbling her to the ground at a menacing speed, "DIE!" rainbow dash turned grey, then started punching twilight as hard as she could. Twilight had no choice, dash was gonna kill her, she had to use the knife, she quickly pulled it out of her pocket, and stabbed her, hard in the chest, "I DIDNT WANNA DO THIS! BUT YOU MADE ME!" "Twilight...why?" "Pinkie pie?" twilight was in sugercube corner, she had just stabbed pinkie pie, What the hell? a shadow came into focus from the corner of twilights eye, then dissapered quickly, "twiiiilight" "Huh?" twilight was smashed in the head with a hammer, then was back on the hill, rainbow dash was gone, and a small pool of blood was on the ground, "Im not continuing up this hill anymore." she started walking backwards, back to the room, to find a different "level". Its been 15 minutes, nothing is happening, the hill is just growing more and more, how is this even physically possible? then suddenly, ruining her trail of thought, a pony sitting on a small stool, holding a cello started to play, "Why oh why, are you continuing down this hill, your freinds hate you just kill yourself noooow."that is the worst song i have ever heard. The pony dissapeared, and there was a door on the end of the hill, the sign on top of it was titled: "Death door." "Im not going to COMMIT SUICIDE!" "Then continue up the hill" twilight quickly turned her head to see who said that, "Your not scaring me!" might as well just continue up the hill. "Twilight" Pinkie pie was sitting on the edge of the hill, looking down to the nothingness below, "Pinkie? D-do you hate me to?" just to not waste time. "Come sit down, twilight." The fact that her freind actually said something welcoming, was very welcoming. Twilight sat down next to her freind, she looked...normal, no cuts or bruises, no rips or tears, she was just...fine, "Pinkie, do you know whats happening here?" "Your freinds hate you, and want you to die. I thought it was obvious!" "Well how do you know all this?" Pinkie pie didnt respond, but slowly put two fingers on twilights forehead, and slowly pushed her down, she was now laying her back down on the hill, "Just relax...." what is even happening anymore. Pinkie pie jumped infront of twilight and grabbed her head while looking deep into her eyes, making flashes of seriously depressing images and thoughts race through her head, but Pinkie had dissapeared, like everything else did. Twilight was now crying, I still have that knife...whats it worth living without freinds? Twilight grabbed the knife, aiming it at the heart, she slowly lifted it down, then pulled it up high, and charged it into her heart. All she could hear was the beating of her heart, but it slowly stopped, flashes of when they had fun together, "cupcakes, so sweet and tasty, giggle at the ghostly..." something was running at her, a grey figure, everything was turning black though.... "I cant live without you, twilight." W-what Twilight awoke in a space that looked like space, "Congratulations on being dead, twilight sparkle." Suddenly, a deep hole was under twilight, forcing her to plummit down the hole at alarming speeds. She smacked the ground hard, breaking most bones, over the fuzzy vision, the grey figure was back, "I just came to tell you, that you beat the first level." She was back in the corridor, the level 1 door was locked, and the level 2 door, wasnt. She didnt really feel safe going inside it, but looking to the right of her, it was blocked off by wall, None of the things that happen here are possible by any means.
Level 2.View OnlineThe dark halls of Pinkie.Level 2.(Took a break from writing for a few days, but im back to writing now! Hope you guys enjoy!) Twilight thought about it for a moment, wondering whether she should actually go in the room or not, well, i guess theres no other choice. Twilight slowly started opening the grey metal door, peeking in at first, then opening it wide open. It was dark and cold inside the room, she couldnt see anything because of how dark it was, so she just didnt move, and just waited for a light to flicker or something. After a few minutes of waiting, she decided to take another step, but as she did, the door slammed shut and a dim light flickered on, reavealing a hallway infront of her. The hallway was unbelievebley dark, no lights anywhere in it, not even one at the end of it, this only made her want to stay in the room and just not do anything, but she needed to find out what's going on, so she took her first step into the darkness, and slowly proceeded forward. After a minute of walking, she found a match on the floor, after striking it on the ground, it made seeing a bit easier, though it was weird to see a bright light again. Twilight started to hear faint sounds of a filly crying, she started moving slower now, taking a bit more time with each step and trying to block out the depressed sounds of the filly, but it kept getting louder, she was getting closer, each step made the crying louder and louder, until it felt like the filly was next to her. Twilight felt disturbed, she sat there to calm down for a while, gathering thoughts and writing in her journal, the journal felt like the only thing that kept twilight from going insane, it was like a buddy to her, whenever something weird or scary/strange happened, she would record it in the journal. After a few minutes break, she continued on her path, it felt like the filly was right next to her, but she wasnt getting any closer. Now it felt like the fillly was getting farther away from her, it didnt make sense at all, she had never even encountered her yet. "T-twilight" the filly barely managed to say, "Where are you?!?" twilght was very urgent in her words, "Infront of you" the filly suddenly popped up out of nowhere, sitting in the corner of a bend, with a hoody on. The filly was still crying, and putting her head down on her hoofs, "Whats wrong my little pony?" twilight sat down next to the filly, trying to sound as nice as possible, "You shouldnt be here, I shouldnt be here, it doesnt make sense." the filly was obviously frightened, trying to sound like she was not scared, "its okay" "ITS NOT OKAY! YOUR DEAD TWILIGHT! DEAD!" the filly dissapeared, and twilight was back in the room and out of the hallway. This better not turn out to be a dream. Wait, yeah, i hope it is a dream! The room was still dark as ever, and with nothing in it, she just walked around the room for a while, looking for usefull items or objects that she may need, but nothing was in the room, nothing at all. This room reminded her fondly of the room she woke up in way earlier, the one with the robot, could this be the same place? Something was happening, the room started to shake, and the filly appeared once again in the corner of the room, it was like a earthquake was happening, the whole room was breaking, the door was now completely destroyed and so was most the floor. Twilight was forced to the corner of the room, she heard a click, she had set off a trap, immediatly after, a spike from the wall darted at the filly, and pierced her in the throat, she obviously was dying, and twilight couldnt do anything about it, she just had to watch in horror and this young filly die infront of her eyes, after she dyed, the room turned back to normal and a light was turned on, she immediatly ran at the filly, taking her hoodie of and taking a look at her to see who it was, "scootaloo! she...she didnt even get her cutie mark. SCOOTALOO!" Twilight started crying, she couldnt bear the thought of not discorvering who you are before you die, "We are the cutie mark crusaders..." This was her breaking point, she just cryed in the corner, thinking about all the things that had happened, and all the memories of her and her freinds, and when she first came to ponyville, they were all freinds, everything was going great...Twilight lifted her head up,I remember now..everything was going great, then they came, the...what where they again...R.E.C. Royal equestrian containment... all the memories came rushing into twilights head all at once, she didnt know what to think first, or what to do first. Maybe if i recount all the events leading up to waking up here, then i can find a way out. After they came, they started taking everyone away, fluttershy, rainbow dash, pinkie pie, everyone. But they didnt take me where they took them, i was took into a psychological containment center, they did things to my mind, made me think things i didnt want to, i started losing memorys, and gaining new ones, seeing things that i didnt want to and that didnt exist. Then they made me...made me....hurt them...i didnt want to, but i couldnt stop, "I COULDNT STOP!" the sound of the yelling echoed, reminding her of how lonely she was, *Sigh* okay, so what happened next...oh right, after they made me hurt them, they threw them all into different rooms, and then i dont remember anything else after that, except that they didnt throw pinkie pie in for some reason, and i didnt have to hurt her as much as the other ponys. They think im a monster, i didnt want to though, it wasnt my fault...it wasnt... Twilight raised her head once again, the door was back open, she slowly walked out of the room, her mane in a mess, and body scarred and flithy, but she didnt care about it, she just wanted to be out, out of this place, she wanted to tell her freinds that it wasnt her fault, but she only just realized what has been happening, its to late now./i] Twilight turned the corner of the hallway, which led to another door, which didnt have any sign on it, she didnt want to enter, *but what if its the way out? She was willing to risk it, there was nowhere else to go anyway. She opened the door, inside was something horrific, everyone was stone, everyone except for her freinds, they were frozen in place, as if they were turned to stone while running, or trying to dodge or turn a corner, "Whats been going on? HELLO?" just echoes, the end of the hallway was a chair, no one was sitting on it, it looked like a throne, like a king or queen would sit there.* (TURN OF EVENTS DUN DUN DUNNNNN! Its really fun to write, i decided to listen to music while writing, it actually inspires me sometimes to add something new to the story, (Thats where the stone thing came from, try and guess witch song inspired me to write THAT. You: (probably not you but FUCK YOU) CHALLENGE ACCEPTED.)
The End Is Neigh.View OnlineThe dark halls of Pinkie.The End Is Neigh.(i love writing this story, and you guysesesesesesees support makes it all the more better. Thanks guys!) Twilight walked hesitantly to the throne, some of the stone statues were looking at her, and at other times they werent, it seemed like they were moving, and changing, but they didnt actually change all that much. Twilight was about a meter away from the throne, at this point, a figure jumped out of nowhere onto the throne, and a puff of white smoke filled the room. After a few minutes, the smoke dissapeared, leaving the figure now visible, "PINKIE?" it was Pinkie pie, she had red eyes, and she looked beat up and scarred, her eyes werent there, and she didnt even breath, it was like she wasnt alive anymore, just a soul inside a body. "Let me, explain, you see, when R.E.C took us all away, they kept me, as they kept you, but me for a different reason, they kept me because i had it, i had the soul. They only realized who i was in the middle of your brutal beatings, twilight, you see, i was the only one that knew all this time, the others are gone, they are still doing there tests, you were the lucky one to be the one to inforce the beatings, even though you didnt want to." "Why...Why did they put me in there? Why am i here now? Why...." "You see,R.E.C is meant to help people, but all they want to do is test the pony, testing to see how they react to certian things, its all fake, twilight, they are messing with your head, they have complete control of what you see, hear, and think. They usually dont take control of your thoughts and things you say, only in drastic measures, that is how you are suddenly teleported to places, they make you move then fill your memory with something else, everything you know could be a lie." Twilight sat there, stunned at what her usually energetic and happy playful freind just said, it sounded so...serious, and pinkie was never serious, nor was she ever beat up or scarred, or deep and emotionless. Everything seemed so out of place, so...different and scary, she knew they werent real, but she couldnt help it, it all seemed so realistic. "I hope you had the time to process what i just said into your beat up mind, they cant control us here, everypony who gets caught here gets turned into stone, but you see, i am the leader here, the boss, the controler, the one who was watching you this whole time, the one who killed scootaloo, yes, that was real." "I..." the knife! I must kill her, its the only way..the only way..out. "Pinkie, i..want to join you, i want to...be like you.." pinkie somehow made a tinyer throne right next to hers, "Come, young one. You have much to learn..." pinkie had an evil grin on her face, as if she was trying to scare a beast away, "Your wish is my command, master" twilight slowly walked up to the throne, and quickly took out the knife and jabbed it straight into pinkies heart, the shadow leapt out of her body, "Why twilight..why?" huh? Twilight was at sugarcube corner, she had just stabbed her freind, the shadow was in the corner of her eye. Twilight quickly let go of the knife, and pinkie dropped to the floor, no longer looking beat up and scarred, and no longer looking like a mess, she was normal, except for the knife in the heart thing, "PINKIE! NO I DIDNT MEAN TO!" twilight was starting to cry, "I DIDNT MEAN TO! NO, WHY CELESTIA WHY?" twilight was practically hugging pinkie now, she cryed, she didnt mean to, but she also did. After a minute, the sounds of helicopters and police cars were outside, they rushed into sugarcube corner, it was R.E.C, they took everypony away, including twilight, everypony was being tied and gagged, being sent to a facility. Once they arrived, they all got shoved into different rooms, twilight was sent onto a table, a quick flash was sent through her eyes. "Twiliiight....Wake up twiiilight..." (I am so proud of this right now. I did not expect it to be as good as this. Even if you guys dont think the same, i love the fuck out of this ending. Thank you everypony for supporting me through this 5000 word story, i never expecting anypony to like this, and it turned out great. Also, i would like to personally thank mrminimii for the comment he put in life is a party, it truely did make my writing a shit ton better. Anyways, the next chapter in two days? YEP. Just decided to write a bunch, got bored. THIS HAS GONE ON FOR TWO LONG NOW. Next fanfic will be (hopefully) as good as this! i got some damn good ideas, son.)
