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Portentous - Lone Star's Chronicles

by Einzel
Re-starting life without memories can be difficult but friends always help. However will these friends stay true to him once his past, and his deeds and failures, are revealed?

The story is currently on hiatus due to lack of time and the loss of finished chapters (and A LOT of prepared chapters) since my notebook's HD was busted in an unfortunate accident. I am working on rewriting the story but the lack of time is killing me.


Lone Star is an earth pony pony who awakes without most any memories of his past in Canterlot, but he is fortunate enough to have a meeting with Princess Celestia and receive a single clue: his meeting was scheduled, however he couldn't remember the subject regarding such important encounter. Upon realizing Lone Star's condition Celestia sends him to rest and recover in Ponyville and there he leads a tranquil life devoid of heavy duties.

While living in Ponyville and making friends Lone Star slowly starts to remember and uncover the motives behind his amnesia.

The truth is something always desired and it can be nice, however it may be equally harsh as the past might not hold only good memories. Struggling with his sentiments Lone Star can only wonder if his friends will still be loyal and honest to him when his memories and the truth arises.


Portentous is divided in three stories with Lone Star's Chronicles being the first part.
The story is mostly told by Lone Star's point of view, thus he express different opinions about his recovery and those around him.

Everyone
Incomplete
Slice of Life
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
 
PMOO

20107 words: Estimated about 2 hours to read

7 Chapters:

  1. Chapter 1: The first day of my new life 2013-05-25 04:17:18 UTC
    2372
  2. Chapter 2: A place to call home 2013-05-28 22:28:50 UTC
    999
  3. Chapter 3: Hope comes in orange and apple flavored 2013-05-29 03:22:04 UTC
    3764
  4. Chapter 4: Knowledge in purple 2013-06-01 03:58:59 UTC
    2638
  5. Chapter 5: "Lone-less" Star 2013-06-02 07:02:11 UTC
    2513
  6. Chapter 6: With scents and sounds 2013-06-04 17:01:19 UTC
    3282
  7. Chapter 7: Cutie Mark Squire 2013-06-07 02:34:42 UTC
    4539