I know there are mistakes in this, I want all feedback possible.

This story takes place ten years before My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Season one. My OC replaces Applebloom with AJ, but AJ treats him like her son instead of a sibling; mainly because of Saving Angel's past he has a tenancy to over react with the slightest of gestures.

I think I did well for my first ever fan fic written.