This strange world

Okay, I went through and did some editing now that I found some time to do so. I boosted the age of the main character so he isn't so young and did a few other things.

Also, I just realized how this does sound quite a bit like, "My Little Dashie" mostly from the first chapter but still.
I had no intentions of copying My little Dashie in any way... also this story isn't going to always be just boring
'David trying to go through life with Dashie by his side!'. Nah, it's going to get quite heated later in the story (NOT SEXUALLY YOU PERVERTED MINDED PEOPLE). I mean there will be a lot of action later and so on.

Anyway, thank you for giving this story a chance, I see I'm getting a few dislikes so if anyone can point out what is so bad that would be greatly appreciated.

(Also, one of the things I edited was the religion. He is still Christian but not as crazy anymore.)