The Feeling

by TheDerpyOutcast

Rating: teen
Tags: My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Dark, Rainbow Dash, Sad, Other, Original Character, Random, Adventure
Length: 1072

Snowbelle gets a feeling....

Snowbelle gets a feeling, and knew exactly what it meant.
But she didn't want it to be true...
(This was the first ever fic I've written. My first was not Connected, this was, and now you will see how I originally wrote.)

Published 2013-05-29 00:00:01 UTC
Last updated 2013-05-29 00:00:01 UTC

The Feeling

I can't believe it. It all was so..... odd. I didn't actually hear or see it.... I just knew.

My name is Snow Belle. I'm one of Rainbow Dash's lost sisters. There are 7 lost sisters, excluding Dash. Dash barely remembers us, but we know each other when we see each other.

I felt it and so did my sisters.... we felt Dash fall to the insanity of it all. A curse of working at the Rainbow Factory. We knew it would come, but we were shocked at the feeling of a piece of our selves slip away. We knew then our sister had gone.

I rushed to Ponyville to grab a small gold cylinder that had turned black, and went to the Rainbow Factory.

I found Dash with an evil look in her eye. I used a special magic to see that she had lost her memory with her sanity.

I didn't want to use the cylinder, but if my magic of the eighth side failed I would have to. Others may see Rainbow Dash, but I only saw insanity.

The usual reddish magenta eyes were red. The demons that had been waiting for eternity was free. The monster.

I saw Dash transform. Her blue coat was black, the colors of her mane darkened, her wings had bandages on them. I knew then that Rainbow Dash was gone.

Rainbow Death was free. Awake. I screamed"Daaaaaash!!!" I knew she heard me. But I knew she was lost. I knew that I might have to destroy her if the eighth side failed. Before I continue, I should tell you something; The eighth side is a strong magic that the eight of us use that also keeps us together. But there are actually 9 of us. Rainbow Death is an evil sister that was Dash's twin. But that twin's spirit was so afraid of defeat it put some of its self in Dash using the mysterious connection shared by the twins.

My sisters and I knew that the Rainbow Factory would eventually release Death, but much later than when it did. I got the cylinder from Dash/Death's house. Only her cylinder can stop her in the case of being possessed, just like the rest of us sisters.

Death was defeated but the part of her connected to Dash lived. Back to th story. I mentally contacted my sisters to ask what I need to do.

Celestia said 'We will come to assist you. Use the eighth side to keep her from moving till we get there.' I knew that Tia was right. Death might kill me if I don't.

I focused on her and tried to freeze her in place. But Death sensed the magic from my horn and bolted. I still don't understand how she could sense the magic, being the only non alicorn in the family.

I connected to Tia again and screamed in my head 'she's on the run!'

Tia responded 'ok I'll track her using the eighth side.' '

Ok I will too.' I activated the eighth side and followed my sister. I flew at top speeds. I was pretty fast but Death is faster. I suddenly faced the reality that if I couldn't catch her I lose Dash permanently. I flew at sonic speeds and caught her.

I performed the spell and waited for the others. Tia looked the most worried of all.

"How far gone is she?" "Completely, from what I know." I responded sadly. Then Death's eyes flashed white, then they were reddish magenta.

“do what you have to" Rainbow Dash pleaded.

"Just free me. Keep me from destroying Equestria. Please... ENOUGH YOU!"

Dash was suddenly repossessed by Rainbow Death.

"Tia try to remove the evil from Dash's body."

I'll try..." Celestia said, knowing the consequences of failure."belle, release Death." I did. BIG mistake.

Death randomly got a knife and cut my leg. I screamed in pain. The monster of my sister grinned. She enjoyed the pain and suffering of others.

I could feel my strength draining. I handed the cylinder that I had feared of using over to Tia.

" you have to.." my voice trailed off. Tia nodded. I touched my horn to it, and my sisters did the same. A flash of light. My leg healed, and Rainbow Dash was in a cloud of black smoke, fighting Death. I watched. The smoke formed a broken heart, then it was formed to a full heart, which lowered and left two pegisi.

We all ran and hugged Dash, then our attention was drawn to Rainbow Death.

Her eyes were closed and she was shaking, the same way she was when we destroyed her. Slowly, her eyes opened, and flashed red. All we heard was crying.

"Its ok." Rainbow Dash comforted her twin.

"HOW CAN YOU SAY THAT!? I JUST TOOK OVER YOUR BODY FOR PONY'S SAKE!"

Wow. She can scream LOUD. Probably needed to scream after all that happened. Maybe her energy built up powerfully. Who knows? The point is she's back, and now we came alter the ruling of Equestria to fit the changes. And who knows, maybe one day the world will except the two pegisi as princesses. Till then, the world will be shadowed from this secret.
And I, Snowbelle Rainbows, Princess of winter, vow to keep this with my life, for the sake of my sisters, and Equestria. Throughout time I will forget but that is another story for another time.

As I write this, Rainbow Dash and Rainbow Death are sitting on the couch, laughing their heads off. Sometimes I look back at what had happened to both of them, and wonder how that was them. They did horrible things, made mistakes, and regretted it all.

And they found forgiveness in us, their alicorn sisters; Celestia, Luna, Jed Fire, Autumn Mist, Spring Bloom, Summer Breeze, and me. They will always have a place in this world, no matter what happens, no matter how many mistakes, even if they killed, they will overcome all obstacles, and join the race. They are my sisters.

Author's Note

I actually edited this, other wise you would we a wall of poorly written text.
Keep in mind, I was younger and less experienced when I wrote this, and it's more or less better than Spectra..
Also, I have a longer version of this from Rainbow Dash's point of view in progress.