Chapters The Surprise (Been edited.)
Author's Note
Did a bit of editing on this chapter and I agree with you on this...my writing really needed improving. sorry about that. If there are still some mistakes on the first chapter please inform me so I can fix it.
~xxXFluttershyXx
The Surprise (Been edited.)
It's just a normal day for Fluttershy, well so far, so far anyway. It is seven in the morning, the time she would usually get up during the week since angel would always wake her up for food.
"Aright angel i'm up" she said tiredly
"hmm" angel stamped his foot on the ground.
And then fluttershy stopped, she just remembered that Rainbow dash was coming round to help her with the animals and that she had to go to the spa with rarity, see twilight for some reason, then look after the CMC.. Oh but don't forget to help pinkie make cakes.....Oh so much to do in so little time!
First fluttershy needed to feed the animals and so she went to go and get some food for them all, but instead of food she saw Rainbow dash feeding the animals. With of course the wrong food, but fluttershy just said "oh ok".
Then Rainbow saw her stare at her curiously " Err Flutters, u ok? "
"Oh erm y-y-y-yes I-'m just a little tired that's all, but I thought you were coming at 9:00am?"
then Rainbow dash looked at her saying "Well my clock must be wrong then..."
To Rainbow dash that's the least she could do for her because Fluttershy had done many things in her life for her and Rainbow just Needed to do something back in return, so that's why she is early. So Rainbow and Fluttershy took all of the animals outside for the rest of the day, but as usual, angel and the other lazy rabbits would not move away from there beds, so Rainbow found some carrots and Fluttershy helped her attract the rabbits to lead them outside, finally they were out and fluttershy closed the door behind them.
Suddenly Fluttershy said happily to her friend, " Oh thankyou thankyou thankyou so much dash! I couldn't of done it without you."
"It's all in a days work my friend, i'm happy to help you anytime" she replied.
then unexpectedly fluttershy asked dash "err so what game should we play with the animals then because there just standing around." and then the cyan mare answered, " Game! ohhh game right....*thinking*..........................*thinking*..........ahh why don't we have a race!"
"I...I...I'm no good with my wings, I can hardly fly!" a scared voice said quietly/slowly
then Rainbow sighed, "Not you silly! the animals of course!"
"Ohhh, right well guess we could but.........."
"YES! oh yeah now we're talking, so guys did you hear that! (they nodded) then good, lets get started!"
As Rainbow quickly zoomed off to get some things for the race,(um, it is not that important! but I guess it is because we are talking about dash aren't we?) fluttershy went inside to get tea for herself and when she heard knocking at her door, "Oh I wonder who it is, I might be dash though", Fluttershy quietly went to open the door and to her surprise it was twilight.
"Oh Hello fluttershy I just wanted to know if rainbow dash was here that's all." she asked politely to the quiet mare.
Fluttershy replied "Well she just left actually to get some things for a animal race, but she should be back any minute now so don't worry, would you like to come in?"
"Sure" said Twilight.
Twilight walked inside fluttershy's home and settled down in one of her comfy chairs, then fluttershy asked twilight "so why exactly do you want to see me this afternoon anyway since now your here?" then twilight paused.
A couple of minutes later Fluttershy and Twilight had finished there tea and sooner or later twilight had left, and in her replace came Rainbow dash with a flag and other stuff. "Oh there you are rainbow dash!"
At last fluttershy is there and waiting, then not a moment later rarity came trotting to her........with APPLEJACK? then she said to her "oh hey ya'll how are you?" applejack said happy as always. then fluttershy said "err applejack, I thought you h...hated the s-s-spa?" Applejack laughed and said "Oh no I don't think I would even think about going there it's torture, ugh I can't even look at it because it's such a horrible thing cleanness! anyways I gotta go before rarity kills meh bye." Applejack ran away laughing, at Rarity's face when she heard that and she said "I will get my revenge for sure" she said going mad. Fluttershy quietly said to rarity " R....Rarity please don't hurt applejack she did not mean it" and then rarity said "Darling, I did not mean it that way don't worry darling. but I think we should go inside now don't you?" and fluttershy just nodded.
After about an hour they were out from the spa going home and fluttershy then visited pinkie pie and the cakes, then went home tired, when fluttershy got home she cooked supper for herself and then took the animals in and then fed them, ate her supper then read a couple pages of the book "Everything you want now about NATURE" and finally went to sleep. Suddenly there was a loud BANG on the door, fluttershy was absolutely terrified. BANG, there it was again but this time somepony said "OPEN up or we will do it for you", by now fluttershy was panicking and they knew she was in there so she just had to open the door but first she tiptoed up to the door and looked though the peek hole and just stared at them and she noticed a letter in there hoof, it was from Princess Celestia.
It has been 2 hours since the sun rose up, and now she had awoken. Fluttershy walked to the mirror to look at herself....she was a state, her eyes were sore from crying nearly all night because at the 2am she had cried herself to sleep. Fluttershy picked up her brush and started to brush her hair, for the last time...
Fluttershy tiptoed slowly over to the door leaving angel going mad, some other animals kind of calm about but not so many, finely she had got outside her house and flew towards Ponyville. She had tried her best to not be seen but it didn't work very well as rarity had caught her head low on the ground, but it was too late to hide now.
Which... somebody else stopped her, Rainbow dash had just because she had something to say which is..."Hey Futtershy! I never knew you could go that fast, I mean umm o-ok err you alright?"
"But why exactly are you crying in the first place, I mean is because one of your birds died last week?"
Soon enough the two Pegasus got there safely to fluttershy's cottage and they both rushed in and Fluttershy asked dash if she wanted a cup of tea and she replied "yes please but do you mind if I have two teaspoons of sugar?" Fluttershy answered "of Couse" an while she said that Fluttershy was quickly feeding all the animals since she had the fee in her hooves anyway, plus angel and his friends were climbing up her back for it.
"I-I can't, I just s-simply can't, I'm sorry dash but I don't want to just stand and watch them cry in front of me like that, I just really can't rainbow..."
Author's Note
Well here is another little chapter, sorry it took so long...It did because I've been quite busy lately and I will be quite small chapter for another three weeks. I hope you enjoyed this baby chapter and feel free to comment and like, don't forget it!
PS stay tuned for more chapters but the story WILL get harder to work out though, buuuut anyway...
HOPE YO LIKED IT!! over and out -xxXFluttershyXx
"W-well I don't know..." Fluttershy said worrying
So Rainbow Dash left Fluttershy's home and zoomed towards her own house, and looked down at her home town Ponyville and said to herself "Oh how much I will miss my friend but my life is now officially going onwards, so this is goodbye to my old friends (that I had) and goodbye to my fans and family, well all that's left of my family which is Scootaloo..." Rainbow Dash walked into her house slowly and went to find the brown backpack that she had when she was little, Rainbow Dash had put it into her bedroom somewhere but didn't know exactly where because her room was so messy.
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Fluttershy closed the door and said to angel "I'm glad you and Rainbow Dash are coming along with me, but I wish my other animals friends could come too but I don't think I will have enough space for you all to fit in my backpack. But don't worry my little friends I asked my cousins Blue bell and Phoebe to come and take you all to Canterlot where you all can have as much as food as you please and each one of you will always have loads of tender and care from them too, sounds good?" All the animals nodded, especially at the "Get as much food as you please" part, "Good, Um angel do you know where my backpack is? Because I can't seem to find it."
Thump, thump angel jumped on Fluttershy to wake her up because her cousins were here, as well as Rainbow Dash. "Oh thank you angel but I must get a move on, since I'm seventeen seconds overtime." Angel nodded and when outside to do whatever he does best leaving Fluttershy to deal with everything...again. Fluttershy opened the door to see Rainbow Dash needing to gallop inside her house to get away from her cousins, she said "Who are those people at your door Fluttershy, cause they're creeping me out!"
"AH Fluttershy! long time no see eh?" Blue bell said happily to her, Fluttershy replied "Oh hello girls, I guess I haven't seen you in quite a while I-I think...w-would you like to come in?"
It did not take long for them to know what they were doing, as they said there goodbyes and then Fluttershy and Rainbow Dash got there things together and starting to leave the house where Fluttershy used to live, and now they are flying down the path making sure that nobody could see them (especially there best friends) because they would be asking so many questions and demanding for answers, plus Fluttershy and Rainbow Dash wanted to keep it as a secret anyway.
C5 Maybe a friendly zebra can help!
"Ugh, we flew all the way here just to find nopony? Unbelievable!" Rainbow dash moaned loudly. "U-Um a-actually she is over there picking those poison joke flowers....if you didn't already see her that is." Fluttershy squeaked.
"OF COURSE I KNEW SHE WAS THERE I'M NOT BLIND!!...............sorry" said rainbow dash putting a friendly smile on her face, but when Fluttershy didn't reply, she just rolled her eyes in which Fluttershy saw.
"eak" squeaked Fluttershy when zecora came to them to see what they were doing here, but I think she already knew about it because she actually smiled for once...Rainbow Dash thought
They both said "hi" but before they could speak she replied " I know you seek me, but for escape I see?"
Soon after Zecora led Fluttershy and Rainbow Dash into her little home but for Rainbow Dash it's a tiny hut because that's what it really is...Then she settled us down by talking though what happen in the last two weeks which helped by an inch I guess. Finally she said something about Princess Celestia not being the real Celestia if you get what I mean, and there is only one pony who can be responsible for that.............
THE QUEEN......................................
....................................OF CHANGELINGS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Note
So, looks like it wasn't actually Celestia in the end...But then where is the REAL celestia? what happens now? wait for the next chapter coming soon to your eyes!
PS The next chapter is called "Now that's what you call a freaky twilight!"
"Please look in this mirror, because it may flow by time like a river" Zecora said while holding the mirror in front of us, both, (Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy) gasp and whimper at what they saw with there own eyes.
"U-Um I m-might as well tell you now Rainbow, I am pretty sure that w-we don't need to go to earth now because we just need to go to twilight and hope she forgives us and get her to investigate the princess in Canterlot!...I mean if you want to that is." Fluttershy bellowed and then Rainbow Dash mumbled to herself that nopony could hear "Oh come on!, I was looking forward to that you know!" But obviously they did hear.
......Wednesday the 11 March 2002......(The next day in easier words!)
"U-Um Z-Zecora?" the shy mare with yellow coat and light pink mane named Fluttershy, reputedly asking her to wake up in her usual way of shyness of a life. "Zecora? its 6:00.59 seconds past! y-you really need to get up now!!" I mean if you want to that is.."
"ha-ha Pop goes the weasel they say this is, says Liz." Zecora said while Fluttershy completely stares blankly at the *THING* that scared her out of her own skeleton. Zecora looks at her face and explains to her "Sorry about that dear Fluttershy, I do like to have a little FUN, but I guess that will have to pass by...for now!" which turns her frown upside down!
Suddenly.....Out of nowhere an Earth pony appeared and shouted "DID SOMEPONY SAY F-F-F-F-F--F-FUN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HUH, HUH DID YA, DID YA" The pink party pony "Pinkie Pie" said pinkie screaming her head off which is full of happiness.
"Well I think we are all up now so lets have breakfast and go to twilight so she can hopefully sort this all this mess out!" Rainbow Dash said which left Fluttershy and Zecora just simply nodding their heads.
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"So Tia when can we have a vacation? I think I need one." A depressed Luna slowly asked her big sister, in which she replied "Oh don't worry about that my dear s-sister (Ugh I hate saying that, it seems so nice...which is a bad thing.) it will be soon....Hopefully.
So they both went back to where they came from in the first place: To Zecora and Rainbow Dash. Then Discord said from out of nowhere "One last thing....you might need these!" he dropped three things and vanished again.
Author's Note
Woah looks like somepony has made another chapter! And the longest so far! Awesome! If anypony is interested in being my epic editor please just tell in the comments or PM me! Oh and Please tell me if you like the story! *-*
One Knock...
Two Knocks...
Three Knocks...
Four Knoc-- "YES! I heard you the first time.... Oh it's only rainbow dash, fluttershy and zecora spike, you don't need to worr~ WAIT WHAT?!" Twilight shouted much louder then expected.
"Err, whats up?" Rainbow Dash quickly asked her, taking no thought about what she had said, since Fluttershy and zecora were just standing there like there was some in front of them or something, their faces is what you should really see right now!
"whats up...WHATS UP! YOU ALL JUST STANDING AT MY DOORSTEP IS WHATS UP! well apart from zecora of course, I mean what do you want anyway?" She said, giving up on the shouting that came out of her mouth.
"If it involves as such, I will listen, but I hope this answers why the liar and the serial killer are at my doorstep. But please come in." Twilight fake-smiled
Instead of twilight answering, spike did this for her. "But what about Princess Celestia? where is she if Chrysalis has taken her place?" Spike pleaded Zecora to tell him but that did not happen.
Twilight gulped, Fluttershy and Rainbow lowered their heads like they were saying. 'Am I that bad that I cannot be your friend anymore?'
This was going to be a long day for them.
Author's Note
Alright, sorry for the massive wait, I had loads of things to do thought out the course of time. but I know this is a short chapter, but I'll make it up to you I promise. first off, I really need an editor, so bad. as you can see in my writing. if you want to be my editor, please either message me privately or say it in the comments below. Any questions about my story please let me know.
Many thanks,
~xxXFluttershyXx
"h-hello?" Fluttershy said frightened
then one of the guards replied to her "are you Mrs Fluttershy?" he said bravely
even more frightened she said "y-yes I am w-why d-do you ask? I-if you don't mind that is"
the other man replied "you don't know about what happen earlier on?" fluttershy quietly said a no. She overheard one of the guards asked the other guard if he really was sure if she was her or not and the guard just nodded, then the guard spoke again
shocked at what the guard had just told her, she took the letter out of his hooves and started reading the letter she had been given, it said...
Dear Fluttershy
I am very disappointed with you lately, as you have murdered one of my dearest friends Chrysalis. As for your punishment, I shall banish you from Equestria forever, and yes you should be ashamed of yourself for doing such a thing, you have to be gone by sunset in three days from now and I will make sure that you are. Also there is one thing you will need to know before you go, is that your element WILL be taken from you and replaced, the other is that you will no longer have a cutie mark as such so this is my goodbye fluttershy.
Princess Clestia
By now there were tears flowing down her eyes, she asked the guards to leave and she also noticed that there were tears down there eyes as they left, but she just still didn't believe it fluttershy...banished...forever? those three words were zooming around her head, in the end she had passed out.
Author's Note
Sorry if this is a really small chapter but I kind of tired so I will do a bigger, better chapter for you guys tomorrow also a couple of chapters away is like "My Little Dashie by the way just to let you know......
