The Night Commander

by TittySparkles

Rating: mature
Tags: My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Dark, Original Character, Sex
Length: 8345

A disgruntled captain deals with a tardy guard

The lunar guards. Respected, feared, and praised for many reasons. The path to becoming a lunar guard is tough and those who apply for it, rarely make it into the elite ranks. For those who do make it, they have to deal with one of the most vicious captains ever. If you cross the captain in any way, she'll make you pay. Sadly for the newest addition to the group, he learns just how she deals with insubordination.

Contains female on male rape

Proofread by SolidFire

Published 2013-06-02 02:10:01 UTC
Last updated 2013-06-02 02:10:01 UTC

Chapter 1

“Where the hell is my new recruit?” Captain Aura Gloom of the Lunar Guard scoffed as she walked back and forth in front of her office.

It was a big day for the captain. The day trainees would graduate from the guard courses and be fully inducted into the branch they wished to serve under. While lots of guards in training choose the simpler course of joining Celestia’s royal guard, a fair share would attempt to join Luna’s lunar guard. The reason for the lack of ponies wanting to join Luna’s guard rather than Celestia’s was the physical change their bodies would take. Celestia’s regiment had enchanted armor that would change a ponies natural fur colors into a pure white coat that was symbolic. The effects of the armor would go away after they would remove it and many ponies picked Celestia’s regiment over Luna’s.

Luna’s regiment was a more demanding one. There’s had enchanted armor that carried much more power for them. Old horn and wings would be removed and in their place the pony would get bat-like wings and a few other perks. Their pupils would become nearly serpentine, their eyes would become more sensitive to light, their hearing ability would increase so much that they could hear a pin drop within fifty feet, and they could use echolocation to always know what was around them.

Another perk of the transformation was that they could emit a certain frequency to disable a unicorn’s magic, making them tough enough to stand against the most deadly of unicorn fugitives. However, thanks to the many new abilities they get, once put on, a pony, no matter what race, would go through the physical transformations that would alter them permanently. Thanks to this alteration, once a pony joined the guard, they would serve under it until they got too old.

“Grr…my newest addition in almost four months and he’s late!” Aura cursed as she stopped walking and looked at the ground. “He better be on his way.”

Another notable fact about the guard training was the difficulty of it. It was another big difference in picking which regiment to serve under. Luna’s was more gruelling and most of the trainees never passed. The most recent group had only one graduate, much to the commander’s horror.

Closing her eyes, she perked up her ears to hear if he was nearby. No doubt he would be running through the hallways and she would pick up on it. Once her ears were focused, she listened. There were about four different sets of hooves going about their business and she knew three of them were her guards thanks to the metal hoof plates they wore and that the last was a castle mage thanks to a familiar limp she was used to hearing. Sadly, she didn’t hear the sound of metal clanging against the brick floors, rushing towards her.

“I swear if that little shit ran away after he was given his armor, I’ll hunt him down and break his legs!” Gloom snarled, getting to her limit with her recruit’s tardiness.

A sudden ache in her head started to surface, telling her a headache was starting to approach. With a rough groan, she reached up to her forehead and rubbed it to try to alleviate the pain. Before she could figure out to where she would start searching, her ears picked up a cacophony of metallic bangs, echoing from the floor below her.

“Well it’s about fucking time.” Aura muttered as her frown slowly turned into a grin, letting her mind wonder about how she was going to punish him for his tardiness.

Of course she already knew how she would punish him. Every time a new recruit had joined her regiment, she would use her power and authority to the greatest extremes and knew she could get away with it.

Still smiling at her thoughts, she turned for her office and entered it. The office wasn’t anything grand in terms with the rest of the castle. It held a large oak desk, dark blue carpeting, matching the coat colors of her troops, a simple poison joke plant rested in the corner, giving the dark room a bit of light color, and behind the desk was a large window, directly over the Canterlot castle grounds, giving her a perfect view to see if any ponies were planning on sneaking in to rob the castle. Of course that would never happen or the captor would find himself in a dungeon for the rest of his life, or being dealt with by the commander on shift. For Aura, nights were peaceful because lots of the troublemakers in the city knew how harsh she was.

The Commander, by far, was the most respected and most feared pony on the premise. Everyone knew to watch their words around her, unless they fancied a beating, or an ear piercing shriek that could make them deaf for a few days. The most she would ever deal out in terms of pain was a beat down that would possibly cripple the pony for life.

While many of her own troops questioned her tactics, Luna herself was accepting of them. Since Luna was an old traditional pony, she still followed her laws from the old age. She didn’t promote violence but she was a princess who believed in an eye for an eye, and those who deserve to get beaten down, unlike Celestia who simply believed in banishment or imprisonment.

Walking to her desk, Aura sat down in her black ebony chair and patiently waited for her new addition to rush into the office, begging for forgiveness for being late. It didn’t take long until the sound of metal hitting the floor started to get louder and closer to her door.

“P-permission to enter ma’am?” A raspy and fatigued voice spoke out from behind the door.

“Enter,” She replied without emotion as she reached up and pushed a bit of her unkempt mane away from her eyes.

She watched the door opened, and her amber eyes locked onto the stallion entering her office. He didn’t look like much; in fact the first noticeable thing about him was his slightly smaller build. The few times she saw him in training, she was sure she was about two or three inches taller than him. The next thing she noticed about him was his mane was almost the same style as her’s, yet it didn’t bother her. Most of the guards in the regiment had the same styled mane, barely giving them any kind of difference from anyone else. The rest of his features were un-noteworthy to care about, but consisted of green eyes, the standard armor, and a cutie mark that resembled an echoing sound wave.

“You’re late private. You better have a good reason for this.” She snarled as she grabbed a nearby stack of papers to learn his name quickly.

“I’m sorry ma’am. I…I got…lost in the halls.” He replied as he stood at attention while still trying to catch his breath.

“That’s your reason private…Echo?” She replied as she quickly remembered his name. “I didn’t think my newest addition was dumb enough to get lost in the halls he studied.”

Echo didn’t reply and went quiet. Her words were cold but very true. Part of the training was studying the layout of the castle and knowing it perfectly.

“F-forgive me ma’am. I swear on my honor I won’t ever be late again.” He told her, hoping she would let him off easy.

Aura wasn’t going to let that happen.

“Oh, I know you’ll never be late again private, not after I’m done with you.” She told him as she got out of her seat and walked towards him.

Echo panicked and knew he was in for it hard. He listened around the castle and knew the commander was a mare that didn’t take anything lightly. As she got out of her seat and circled around the desk, Echo quickly noticed her cutie mark looked like a police baton with magic swirling around it. A fitting cutie mark for a mare like her.

“Are you eyeballing my mark private Echo!?” Aura shouted as she noticed his eyes were not looking forward.

“N-No ma’am!” He answered back in a stiffly tone.

“I don’t appreciate liars under my care private Echo, unless you want to get a hoof up your ass.” She remarked as her hoof came up and stomped against the flooring. “Now, were you eyeballing me private!?”

“Ye-yes ma’am.” His words were shaky and filled with a bit of fear.

Just as he finished his sentence, Aura quickly pulled her hoof back and punched Echo in his front foreleg, making him buckle a bit before she punched the next one, causing him to fall to the floor.

“Don’t you ever lie to me again private, or next time I won’t be as nice.” She said to him as she grabbed a bit of his mane and pulled his head up so they were looking at each other point blank.

“I’m sorry ma’am!” Echo gasped out, trying to recover from the hard blows his forelegs just took.

“You better be. Now stand back up.” She ordered as she stepped away from him.

Aura couldn’t help but smirk at her dominance over the small bat pony, and felt a shiver of excitement through her body. She always loved preying on her troops for any form of dominance over them. It’s what gave her purpose, aside from being the only female commander in the entire castle. She refused to show weakness to any pony and got a kick out of correcting another pony’s mistake.

Echo quickly pulled himself up and did his best to ignore the pain in his legs. As he found his former position, he put on a stoic look on his face and stared forward, hoping he wouldn’t screw up again.

“That’s better, now since you’re already running late for your shift, I suggest you double time it to your post! You’re positioned outside of Princess Luna’s room for the night, so get to it!” She ordered as she made her way back to her desk.

“Yes ma’am!” Echo shouted back as he saluted to her and quickly turned around for the door.

“Fucking bitch…” He muttered under his breath as he reached out for the door.

Aura froze, and quickly turned around and stared at the stallion with rage fueled eyes.

“What the fuck did you just say!?” She screamed at him, causing him to freeze in his steps.

“No-nothing ma’am! I didn’t say anything!” Echo replied realizing just how badly he screwed up, remembering bat ponies ability to hear even the quietest of sounds.

Aura snarled at him and closed the distance between them as she walked up to him, forcing him to back up into the wall.

“You think I didn’t hear that!? You useless piece of shit!” She snapped

“I’m sorry ma’am! I…I had a-”

Echo was cut off as she lunged forward and punched him in his face. Echo cringed but held back a whimper of pain as her hoof connected with his cheek, making his head whip to the side. It stung and Echo quickly noted her punch held more power than a few stallions could muster up.

“Had a what!?” She asked getting ready to strike him again.

“I…I’m sorry ma’am. I voiced my displeasure when I shouldn’t have.” He said deciding to not make an excuse for his poor actions.

“By calling me a ‘fucking bitch’ was it? Well this ‘fucking bitch’ is going to have to teach you how you should respect your superiors.” She told him as she gave him a cold glare. “You have no idea how much shit you’re in, private.”

Her words were very harsh but Echo also heard something a bit off in her voice. It almost sounded like she wanted him to fuck up in a way so she could beat on him.

“Get up and stand near the desk.” She ordered as she pulled away and waited for him to get back up.

Echo obeyed and ignored the pain he felt in both his face and pride. Pulling himself up, he quickly walked to the desk and stood beside it.

“This ‘fucking bitch’ is going to enjoy every second of this…” With a big grin, Aura bolted the door near her shut and then started to saunter back to him. “And I promise you won’t enjoy any of it.”

Echo’s mouth started to tremble as he feared what she was going to do to him. Her odd grin accompanied with her cruel tone sounded like she loved inflicting pain was a fetish for her.

“Take your armor off Echo.” She ordered as she stopped about two yards from him.

Gulping anxiously, Echo reached for the strap holding his armor in place and with a pop of the mechanism holding it in place, the armor fell to the carpet with a soft thud. Aura took a closer look at his exposed frame and quickly noted he was very fit for his small size.

“Hmm, from the file on you, I remember noticing you were a single stallion. You should keep it that way Echo. With this new position of yours, you’ll quickly learn that relationships are nothing but trouble.” Echo managed to notice a bit of pain in her words when she switched over to telling him to stay out of a relationship.

“If I may ma’am, what are you going to do to me?” Echo asked getting more nervous than he already was.

“Shut up. You don’t speak unless I tell you to!” She snapped at him as she walked to his side and kicked him in the upper part of his ribs.

Echo buckled and realized she kicked him in the exposed part of where his armor used to be. Watching him wince from the pain, Aura smiled and quickly undid her armor as well.

“Permission to apologize,” She told him, wanting a form of apology from him.

“I’m sorry…ma’am. I should have known…better.” Echo grunted, taking in large amounts of air in his throat, while nursing his sore spot in fear she fractured a rib.

“Hmph, I guess I can accept that. Fold up both sets of armor and put them near the plant.” She told him as she walked behind her desk. “Oh, and remove your hoof caps as well.” She added as she kicked each one off, before she purposely kicked the last one at his head.

As the metal shoe hit Echo in the head, he turned to Aura and snarled at her, feeling humiliated by her actions. Aura didn’t feel threatened at all and simply stifled a laugh at him.

“What? Did the little shoe hurt you? Man up and don’t snarl at me private! You’re under my authority now and I’ll treat you like shit if I want to!” She remarked as she opened a drawer to grab an item from it.

Echo wanted to tell her off but knew it would end worse than it already was. Resuming what he was doing, he neatly folded the flexible armor and placed each hoof shoe side by side.

“Good boy, now put this on. I ain’t gonna wait all night.” She ordered as she threw another item at his head.

Again Echo snarled but he didn’t turn his face towards her so she could belittle him again. Turning his gaze to the floor, his face turned red at the sight of the item resting against it.

“Is…that a mouth gag!?” He said in a much panicked voice as he noticed a red ball with two little leather scraps on it.

“Yes it is. Now shut your mouth and put it on.” She told him as she grabbed a small black whip as well. Turning his face to her, Echo quickly figured out what was going to happen to him.

“This isn’t professional Captain! I thought I was getting punished!” Echo screamed, noticing her hold the whip in her mouth with a lusty look in her eyes.

“Tch! This is going to be your punishment, private! Think of this as a way to make sure you don’t get any dreamy thoughts about me in the future. My men fear me and you will too!” She told him, taking a step closer to him. “Now shut your fucking mouth and put the gag on!”

The sentence ended with her grabbing the whip from her mouth and striking him across the face. A loud smack echoed throughout the room and Echo whimpered from the sharp sting. Aura laughed effusively, seeing him whimper like a foal before his mother.

“What scares you more private? Me telling the rest of your fellow guardsmen that you’re a whiny little bitch who cries from a little rough play or the fact that a mare like me is going to treat you like the trash you are? Unless you want both, you’ll put that gag on. Is that clear?” She said as she grabbed the gag and shoved it in his face.

“Tch, fine,” Echo growled, much to his displeasure of the whole situation.

He was beginning to see why ponies feared her as she was. If she was like this to all her men then he could see why all of them were well disciplined ponies that feared her. Grabbing the gag from her, Echo quickly put it on and felt a bit of his pride escape him. As it went on, Aura smiled and turned herself around with her tail raised. Once her backside came into Echo’s line of sight, his eyes went wide as he quickly studied her voluptuous rear.

Her rear was so toned that it would put an earth pony’s muscles to shame; in fact, Echo suddenly had the thought of her being an earth pony before her transformation. If that was the case, then it would explain her foul behavior, considering there were always racial tensions between races. Before Echo joined the guard, he was a Pegasus pony who had often found himself commenting on how useless earth ponies usually were. Now it seemed karma would get him back. Of course he was just making speculations on her past and had no real intention of asking her about it.

For a brief second she smiled at him, before she bucked him in the shoulder, pushing him into the wall.

“Sit down on your ass so we can begin.” Turning herself back around to face him.

Echo pulled himself up and did as he was ordered, putting his back to the wall and sat down with his legs slightly spread for her. He couldn’t believe his first night on the job would result in him getting sexed up. He should have been happy, if it wasn’t for the glaring fact he was being treated like trash.

Turning his eyes to her body, he felt a tinge of hate for her whole being. He could almost feel her confidence oozing off her being, almost eating away at his. Not wanting to look at her, he turned away and hoped he could get through it. Aura in turn brought the whip to his face, hitting the previous spot from before.

“You’ll keep your eyes on me, private!” She snapped as she moved the whip away from his cheek and towards his chin, pushing it up so their eyes could meet. There was a brief silence before she struck him again.

Echo whined and shifted his body. For a second he used the gag to his advantage and cursed at her, knowing she wouldn’t make it out. All Aura did was grin at him as he thrashed and whined at her.

“Psh, can’t even take two hits and you’re already whining like a foal. You’re not supposed to enjoy this, but you’re not allowed to whimper like a foal either.” She said quietly as she dropped the whip and moved her hoof up to his face to caress it.

Echo panicked, thinking she was going to strike him again but much to his surprise, she simply rubbed the sore spot.

“I can be a warm hearted mare too you know. You gonna stop pouting at me now? Because I’m getting sick of hearing you whine.”

Her soft touch quickly disappeared as he felt the edge of her hoof dig into his sore spot. The only response he gave her was a hiss of pain, along with him shifting his body slightly. Aura smiled at him as he tried to muster through the pain without whining.

“See? Not so hard to take a bit of pain.” She told him as she pushed her hoof across his cheek, over his ear, before it landed on the wall behind him. Echo said nothing and just breathed heavily, while restraining himself from attacking her.

“Hehe, are you getting mad?” She asked him as she moved a bit forward, letting her head become adjacent with his lap.

Quickly moving her hoof up, she put it to his nuts with a rather hard push. Echo groaned loudly and forced himself to stay up, without crumpling to the floor from the pain. Aura followed up by massaging it, in an effort to get him hard for her enjoyment.

“Better pray that you’re not a disappointment at all private.”

Echo just panted and nodded nervously, knowing it would get worse if she wasn’t pleased. Aura chuckled and moved her head close to his, letting her forehead rest against the wall, while her mouth was positioned right beside his ear. Letting her tongue travel out, she ran it over his ear like a snake getting ready to feast on its meal. The touch made him shiver and he tried to pull away. Aura felt his body move and grunted with a bit of displeasure, before putting most of her weight on her head so she could move her other hoof more freely.

“Don’t resist me you little prick…” She told him as she brought her free hoof up as pushed it against his face, not allowing him to be able to move it at all. “We haven’t even got to the best part yet.”

Her words sounded evil yet carried an eerie tone of playfulness. Echo wasn’t sure what to think anymore. On one hand the captain was a gorgeous mare who deserved attention. She was well toned, confident, and very beautiful. The only downside to her was her brutal behavior that erased those good traits of hers. Swallowing back his pain, Echo was about to mumble and shake his head, telling her he would listen, before he felt a fang rub against the upper part of his ear. He quickly froze up and hoped she wasn’t planning on biting him.

“Hmm? Are you scared to get a little ear piercing?” She teased at him, giving her lips a lick. “Funny I thought you were almost enjoying this…” Her words were accompanied by the feeling of her hoof moving from his balls and upwards to his erection.

That was when he realized that he was hard.

It wasn’t fully erect, but steadily coming out of its sheathe. There was about an inch of sensitive flesh peeking out and Aura quickly started to rub her hoof against it. Letting out another whine, Echo tried to fidget, but found his body pinned.

“Look at you. You whine from the pain but you still get hard from it. I love watching little shits like you failing to control yourselves when I do this. Of course you better not blow your load too quickly when we start Echo. If I don’t enjoy myself…well, calling me a ‘fucking bitch’ is what led to this. What do you think being a disappointment in the sack will get you?”

Echo’s mind started to flood with brutal thoughts on how she would treat him if he was a disappointment for her. All of them nightmares in their own right.

“So you better make me a happy mare Echo.” She added as she moved her hoof away from his growing erection, before she moved her hoof towards one of his own, grabbing it and bringing it to her chest.

Echo watched his hoof get pressed against her soft body, and was astonished on how soft it was. Just the feel of it told Echo that her fur was well groomed and properly taken care of. Aura smiled coyly at him, before making his hoof glide down her stomach, towards her pussy. As it got closer, Echo was sure he felt more heat coming from between her legs, before he felt a bit of wetness greet his hoof.

“You should feel proud Echo. I haven’t been this excited in a long time.” She told him as she pressed his hoof into her pussy. “Now rub it gently.”

Echo listened and rubbed his hoof against her. She was really wet, showing Echo just how much she loved the depraved situation they were in. With a relaxed sigh, Aura moved her hoof away from his face, allowing him to move it freely. Of course she didn’t give him much room, as she pressed her hoof against the wall beside his head, before she refocused back on his ear, gingerly nibbling at it.

Echo felt his erection starting to near its fully erect point, and wished she would touch him again. Her hoof was still guiding his, leaving his penis twitching in agony. Looking down at his penis, he shifted his body a bit so she would acknowledge him.

“Haha, before you didn’t want me to touch you, yet now you’re as hard as a rock, almost begging for me to touch you. How pathetic!” She told him as she moved her hoof, guiding it towards his erection before giving it a hard slap. The slap caused Echo’s hips to jerk forward slightly and his dick stung a bit.

“But I’ll be nice and return the favor I suppose…” Aura sighed as she pressed her hoof against his flesh, before giving it a long stroke from the tip to his balls. That time Echo groaned from the feeling of it.

“Look at you. Getting off from just a hoof alone. Your hoof is barely doing anything for me Echo. Put some effort into it!” She snapped at him, pressing her hoof at the bottom of his shaft, eliciting a painful groan from him.

Echo listened and quickly put more effort into working her pussy. Moving his hoof in a spastic circular motion, he did his best to please the disgruntled captain. Aura smiled and shifted her legs slightly further open to let him get a bit more access for his hoof. She was getting aroused from it, but she refused to give him the satisfaction of knowing that.

“Keep up like that and I may just let you stick it in me.” She teased as she pulled the mouth gag away from his mouth to hear him talk to her.

“I…I’m already late enough for my shift. Can’t I just stick it in no-” Before Echo could finish his protest, Aura pulled herself away from his body. He was then greeted by the feeling of a hoof, moving from his erection, and towards his face. The force she used was great enough to knock the words from his mouth. His cheek stung as he looked at his captain with apologetic eyes.

“You think you can ask me to do that so quickly!? We don’t go at your pace private, we go at mine!” Her voice sounded very sour and her eyes were filled with rage.

“I…I’m sorry. I just wanted to…” Echo quickly stammered out trying to avoid any more unwanted damage to his body and his mind.

“Listen you little shit. You should be more thankful I’m doing this to you. You get to fuck your captain and I get to have some much needed fun. Now unless you want to leave here with a set of aching balls and a pissed off mare at your backside,” She told him, stuffing the gag back where it belonged. “I suggest you keep your stupid thoughts in the back of your mind, and focus on giving this ‘fucking bitch’ a happy time.”

Echo simply groaned in response.

“Kinda wish I had a different pony graduate instead of you. I would have preferred one who wasn’t a disappointment. Well…least you didn’t blow your load yet, so that counts for something.”

Her words hurt and Echo felt very small and inadequate. He never felt so humiliated in his life and wished he would have never joined the lunar guard if he knew this was going to happen to him. Aura could see a bit of sadness and regret in his eyes, causing her to calm down a bit. Moving her hoof back down to his erection, and resting her head against the wall, she started to stroke him again. Echo tensed back up as she moved her hoof in a rather calm manner.

“God dammit, don’t pout at me. Look, I’ll make you a deal private. Stop your whining and I promise I won’t slap you around like the worthless foal you are ok?”

Echo took a second to think about her proposal, yet knew it would be the right thing to accept. He still wished she would ease up on the verbal abuse she was so keen on giving him. Quickly nodding his head, Aura pulled her body away from his and let her eyes focus purely on his erection.

“That’s better. Now just how close are you to cumming?” She said softly as she sat on the floor and put her nose to his penis. As her cold nose touched him, his dick spasm slightly, showing he was greatly aroused as well.

“Heh, something tells me that deep down you’re actually enjoying this more than you’re letting off Echo. Seems it’s in your nature to be a submissive bitch. Maybe I should have you guarding my office every night so I can enjoy you. Most of the other guards were usually still soft and struggling against me on their first night, but you seem to be turned on.”

Echo didn’t know what to think of her words. Every part of his being loathed her for what she was doing but for some reason he was also enjoying it as well. After his shift was over and done with, he would have to give his fetishes a look over.

“Well that’s another night to worry about. Now, if you cum in my mouth right after I start sucking it, I swear I’ll bite it off.” Her words were accompanied by her moving her face to the bottom of his shaft, before sticking her tongue out and letting it run against it.

Echo groaned even louder and was sure he was about to cum from just the touch of her tongue alone. He felt a tingle in his nuts causing him to rock his hips forward a bit, knocking her in the nose slightly. Aura ignored the feeling of his dick poking her nose and simply grabbed his erection so she could keep it in place for her.

Without a word, Aura brought her lips around the tip of his erection, and let her tongue swirl around the tip of it. Echo moaned through his gag, and moved his hips in accordance with her tongue.

“Settle down Echo. You should feel ashamed that I’m going to pleasure a dick as small as yours. Out of all my troops, I can safely say you’re the smallest.” Aura told him pulling away for a second before inspecting his size. He wasn’t big by any standards, and thanks to his smaller frame, it made him look smaller in the sack.

Echo felt ashamed, yet very dirty she was making fun of his small dick. His pride was slowly slipping away from him every time she spoke up. He wished she would shut up, but knew that would never happen.

“Well if you can last a long time without cumming too soon then we can forget about it, and maybe, just maybe, I’ll give you credit for doing something right.” She told him as she wrapped her lips back around his erection, letting her fangs brush gingerly against the sides of it.

“Mmph…” Was all Echo could say as he felt her sharp teeth gliding against him, giving him a friendly reminder to not cum or else.

Aura stifled a chuckle before taking more of his dick in her throat. Thanks to his smaller size, she didn’t have to work much of her throat to have all of it in her. Turning her eyes upward a bit, she saw the pitiful look of agony mix in with pleasure on his face. Wanting to abuse him a bit more, she reached for the whip near her and tapped the end gently on his cutie mark. The response she got was him quickly tensing up, but surprisingly enough he didn’t whimper at her at all. Pulling away a touch, she brought the whip to his penis and tapped it again, getting another rise out of him. Giving it a slightly harder smack, she felt a bit of precum squirt out of him and into her throat. She instantly knew he was dangerously close.

Stopping her movements, Aura simply kept her head around the tip of his erection, preventing any kind of simulation to take place. As disappointed as she was, she was going to milk his erection for as long as she could.

For the next few minutes, Aura slowly started to bob her head again, only to stop a few seconds later. The more she did it, the more Echo wanted to beg for a release from the impending climax. He could never get off, and it was almost like she knew exactly when to start and stop on him. She could see the pain on his face and loved every second of it. Eventually she got bored of prolonging the end and pulled her mouth away.

“How badly do you want to cum you little shit?” She asked, pulling herself up before pulling the gag away from his mouth.

Once the gag was moved, Echo took in a large amount of air into his lungs and gave her a pleading look.

“Please…” He whimpered as his hips fidgeted slightly.

In response she simply let the ball go and watched it fly back into its rightful place. Echo let off a painful grunt and just pictured himself kicking her teeth in. Clearing her throat a bit, Aura smirked at him as she brought the hoof she used to pleasure herself with to his erection and started to stroke it.

“Cum for me then, but don’t you think we’re done yet.” She told him knowing very well she still wanted to get off.

Closing his eyes, Echo tried to enjoy the feeling of her rough hoof stroking him off. It didn’t take long for the feeling to build back up and true to her words, Aura didn’t stop stroking him. For a brief few seconds he held it in as long as he could, before he felt a large spasm in his dick which was followed by his orgasm. Considering he was being edged for a good few minutes, the load was a big one. The initial squirt flew towards her face, and landed on her chin before the rest fell to his chest. The next few ones went the same direction but there wasn’t enough force to make it, instead landing on his crotch, coating it in a white viscous fluid.

“Impressive load,” Aura told him as she quickly covered the head of his erection, making the rest cover her hoof. “And thankfully you’re still a bit hard.” Echo heaved and groaned as he felt his erection slowly die down, before it started to harden up thanks to her hoof.

“Look at this mess. I’m going to have to give the cleaner a real good excuse for this mess.” She told him as she brought her cum stained hoof up to her face, before she whipped it in the direction of the wall, making the excess land on it. “Least you made up for your small size in a big load.” The latter was accompanied by her bringing her hoof up to her face, before giving the salty semen a slutty lick.

Echo just stared and breathed heavily, trying to get his heart rate back to a proper level of acceptance. Bringing his hoof up to his face, Echo rubbed off a bit of saliva that was escaping through the bottom part of the gag. He wanted to remove the accursed item, but knew she would disapprove, most likely striking him for it.

“Mmm…your semen has a good taste to it.” She said to him as she quickly grabbed the gag and ripped it off with her clean hoof. “Why don’t you have a taste? You can repay me for that orgasm by cleaning my hoof.”

Echo went wide eyed at her request and just gave her an insulted look. Once she saw his expression, a smug smirk got plastered on her face before she leaned forward, shoving the hoof mere inches from his mouth.

“That’s an order, private. If you spit any of it out, I’ll make you lick it off the rug.” She told him in a serious tone.

“You’ve got to be fucking kidding me…” Echo said, quietly ashamed to even think about cleaning up his own mess with his tongue.

“Does it look like I’m kidding, private?” She told him, not moving an inch from her position. “Are you regretting ever being late and mouthing off to me? Because if you aren’t, then I’m not doing my job good enough it seems.”

Echo was indeed regretting his tardiness and rash actions from before. Of course nothing could have prepared him for what was happening to him anyway. Swallowing back his pride, he leaned forward and got his mind ready to do the foul act.

The second his tongue touched his semen, he made a disgusted face as he was sure he felt it moving on his tongue. It was pasty and held a very unsatisfying taste to it. He wanted to spit it out on impulse but knew better. Giving her a nasty look, he continued on.

“That’s a good pet. After you clean my hoof, you can clean the bit you got on my face.” She added, tilting her head upward a bit, letting him see the line of semen, traveling down her chin to the bottom of her neck.

Echo ignored her as he forcefully swallowed back his own semen. He could feel it almost slither down his throat, before it rested in his stomach. For a few seconds he knew what a mare felt like when they were forced to swallow a load, and started to feel a bit sorry for them. The feeling left as he noticed her stick her tongue out, licking at a bit of semen just in reach, before smiling back at him. Done cleaning her hoof, he pulled himself up slightly to lick her chin.

“Hm,” she said softly, as she felt him start on her. “This will teach you from getting my perfect coat messy with your unwanted seed.”

Echo stayed quiet as he quickly cleaned her up, before he rested against the wall. With a disgruntled sigh, he wiped his tongue on his foreleg to get rid of the putrid taste in his mouth.

“Now,” She said quietly to him as she grabbed his body and shoved him so his back was on the floor. “Lie down, shut up, and don’t move.”

Echo begrudgingly obeyed, as he stayed still and watched his captain start to walk over his body. He felt both her front hooves brush against his face, letting her hooves rest right beside his head, not giving him any room to move it or even look away. Next he felt her back legs, brush against his knees before she lowered herself down slightly, letting his sloppy erection brush against her crotch area.

“Remember, no moving or talking. Last thing I want to hear from you while I’m climaxing is your insufferable whimpering.” She told him as she moved one of her back legs, and gently kicked his sensitive dick.

Echo gave off a small grunt but stayed silent for her. Taking a deep breath, Aura lowered herself down on him, letting his erection breach her lips. She was very wet and his dick moved in with relatively ease. Her insides were warm and it only made his dick twitch that much harder. Aura loved the feeling of the dick inside of her and grinded her hips slightly to let it move around a bit more freely inside of her.

“Hmph, it is small sadly. I was hoping it would have felt bigger inside of me.” She told him a bit miffed, finally taking it all in without much of a problem. Echo ignored her, instead reveling in the feeling of her warm pussy enveloping his shaft.

“Bah, least you’re easier to push around than the rest. You’ll make a fine addition to this regiment Echo.” She told him as she pulled herself up slightly before ramming her bottom back down on him.

“Shit…” Echo mumbled out as he felt her ass slap against his lap.

“I said no talking private, or is your damaged brain not getting thoughts right?” She snapped, hearing him speak up.

“Sorry…” He grunted in response.

“I said, shut up.” She answered back, putting her body back up enough so the end of his penis is only partially inside of her.

It was far enough out for him to feel an empty feeling, yet close enough to make him want to lunge his hips forward into her. Hoping she would follow up on him listening, he shut his mouth and waited patiently. Content with his silence she pushed herself back down on him.

Echo’s first response was to rock his hips forward but remembering her words, he stayed still. It was nerve racking, staying still as his captain started to work against his dick, and having to deal with the big grin on her face as she kept staring into his eyes. The stare would have been enough to kill his boner, if it wasn’t for the fact that she was milking it. He didn’t even care for getting off the second time. He just wanted to get out of the office.

As much as he hated it, there was a certain enjoyment to it. To feel her hot tightness massaging his dick was a god send. She knew how to properly work him to get the best experience out of it. It was just making him feel inadequate, and that hurt him the most.

Aura quickly pulled herself up a bit so she was properly sitting upright on his lap, without stopping her movements. Moving her hooves to his chest, she braced herself against him and pushed as hard as she could on his lap. Turning her attention to a clock on the far wall, she noticed Echo was already over an hour late for his shift. No doubt the guard stationed at the door would be annoyed. Of course she didn’t care for his needs, and merely focused on her own, to certain limits at least.

“Might as well finish up, least your small dick is good enough to make me happy for the night.” She told him quietly as she reached up to her forehead and pushed away a bit of her mane.

Echo wasn’t sure if he felt praised or insulted, and simply looked towards the door. As his eyes locked onto the wooden frame, he noticed a small wooden sign that read ‘Don’t forget that you’re here forever.’

Seeing the words put an empty feeling in his gut and knew he was stuck being a guard until he grew too old to serve. To serve under the sadistic mare that was raping him on his first night, for the rest of his life was that of a nightmare he wouldn’t escape. It was a scary feeling, to be weak and powerless to a mare with a higher power of authority. He would have to be perfect if he wanted to avoid her sadistic gaze while on duty. He was beginning to see why the lunar guards were always so stern and cold.

A soft moan escaped Aura’s lips, bringing Echo’s mind back to reality. The mare on top of him was going at a feverish pace, completely lost in her own lust. He refused to look at her and simply continued to stare at the sign that seemed to mock him.

“Eyes on me you little shit!” Aura told him as she slapped his face, forcing him to look back at her.

Echo winced and forced himself to stare at her again. He could her serpentine eyes were nearly shut, showing she was fully focused on getting herself off. He could see a bit of sweat on her forehead thanks to the dim office light above, giving her dark fur a soft shine.

“I’m almost done anyway.” She said as she bit her lip and quickly picked up her pace.

“Al-also you’re not getting paid for this first hour private. It was your own back talk that put you on the floor under me.” Aura put the biggest smug look on her face as she spoke to him. “Of course the next time, I’ll be generous and pay you by the hour since I can easily see you being my bitch until I get a new recruit or just get bored of you. You’re a small pony who whines like a baby but enjoys it.”

Her words were like a knife, getting relentlessly stabbed into his chest. Every syllable carried the tone of a sadist that didn’t care what her troops thought of her. He wished he could go soft before she climaxed but sadly he knew he couldn’t. As mad as he was, he knew she was right about him enjoying it a bit.

“Fuck, I’m almost there…” She groaned softly finally nearing her limit.

Echo knew she would get off before him and had a sinking feeling he would still be left with an erection before he exited the room.

The feeling came quick for her, as she seized up and stopped moving. She gave off a loud moan that almost sounded like she was a small filly, before Echo felt her warm insides clench around his dick. Her orgasm was a big one, and savoring the last few seconds, she bounced a few more times to make sure every bit got soaked onto his dick.

“God, that was much needed.” She said, quickly pulling her body up and off of his.

His dick left with a squishing sound and, for a brief second, he noticed a line of semen connecting the both of them together before it broke and landed on his sack.

“That was moderately enjoyable Echo. Congratulations. You may be a small dick but you were a decent lay. Now go clean yourself up and report to your station. Just tell the guard there you were late because I was making you learn your place in this regiment.” She said as she put on her proper commanding tone, regaining her womanly composure, before she walked back to her desk.

Echo got himself back up and with a pained groan; he grabbed his armor and quickly put it back on. Before, when he first put it on he felt pride in wearing it. Now it felt like a collar being forced on a pet.

“Oh! And you may want to relive yourself in the bathrooms as well.” She said in a cocky tone as she looked at him in the corner of her eyes, and saw his cum soaked erection still begging to be finished off.

Echo said nothing to her and turned for the door.

“Aren’t you forgetting something private?” She said to him, trying to get his attention one final time.

Echo stopped and turned around trying to figure out what she wanted. He quickly noticed her standing at attention with her left hoof over her chest. He quickly recognized it as the salute for the lunar guards and though he wanted to tell her off, he mimicked her stance.

“That’s better. Now, you’re dismissed.”

Echo nodded his head and turned back for the door, nearly seething with hatred and hurt pride, and he quickly unbolted the door and went into the hallway.

“Where is the fucking bathroom…” Echo cursed as he started walking on the hallway, still hard as a rock.

Back in her office, Aura smiled and simply sat at her desk, before she leaned back and stared up at the ceiling.

“God I love being in charge. The best part is I’m too damn good at my job to be demoted. Those guardsmen wouldn’t dare speak to Luna about me and I highly doubt she would do anything. She’s still the princess of the night, so dark desires and thoughts are what she loves.” She said to herself as she brought up the hoof that Echo cleaned earlier on.

There was no doubt in Aura’s mind as she knew she could get away with whatever she wanted. As long as her activities were only under the guise of the night, she would be safe from any consequences. Getting out of her seat, she turned for the window and looked to the ground below. She saw a few guards below doing their rounds and not a single troublemaker was about. It was peaceful, as it should’ve been.