The Opportunity Of Your Life

by Saint Parker

Rating: mature
Tags: Rainbow Dash, Sex, Romance, Original Character, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Length: 3977

Rainbow Dash is in heat, and she needs you to help ease the pain she feels. Second person You X Rainbow Dash clop

Rainbow Dash is in quite a predicament right now. Being in heat can be very painful to some mares. And especially athletic pegasi like Rainbow Dash. And this one isn't going away as fast as they usually do. And the pain is astounding to poor Rainbow Dash. What should she do to relieve these now growing pains? Sex of course! But not just any old stallion, it has to be a smart, fast, handsome one. One that is as athletic as she is! What if this perfect mate of hers, happens to be you?

And lets just say things can get a little steamy.

Warning, this story features explicit content, reader discretion is advised.

Also, this story is in the second person. (I.E. It's about you!) So if you don't like second person stories, (For some reason) then you should just leave now.

Published 2013-06-03 11:50:02 UTC
Last updated 2013-06-03 11:50:02 UTC

Chapter One

Your eyes are flown open by the sound of your alarm clock, screaming and going crazy like a contraption that Pinkie Pie would have made. Your late, and your boss is not going to be happy with the time you just woke up. And considering the morning weather is what most ponies see when they wake up anyway, you basically have the most noticed jobs in all of Equestria: Weather Pony.

Morning weather pony to be exact. By the time when most ponies go to work, you have already been working, exited to give them a great and beautiful morning. Trying to relieve some of the stress of work.

So, deciding to waist no more of your precious time, you hop to your hooves, and run to take a shower and get your goggles. You're not sure as to why you have to wear them, and why the head pony Rainbow Dash doesn't. But, she has been with the business a considerable amount longer than you. Or at least, that's what she tells you, and plus you know how she hounds you when you try to take them off.

You finally finish your morning shower and get all ready for work, deciding you have little to no time to eat, you skip the most important meal of the day. A decision you know you will regret, but after all, you don't really have any substantial food anyway. Just some old oats from the beginning of the week you've eaten up until to now.

'Wait?' You begin asking yourself, 'Why am i late in the first place? And why did my alarm clock go off and two hours late?' You soon remember something that makes all of this nonsense pop into place. And, making you feel quite dumb. Making it so you could have just stayed in bed for as long as you wanted, and not gave a damn who said what.

It's Saturday, the day in which you have off. The ponies who work on Saturday are usually older, and have already done most the exiting things there is to do on Saturday. Letting you have more free time, to enjoy your life. Yeah, lot of good they are doing by that. Working harder so you can do things like: Sit in water at the beach for no reason, Eat things that you know aren't good for your body, Actually think of productive things to do. Which usually fails miserably, and you usually just end up gambling or drinking your ass off.

You don't like doing that, when you were a colt you promised to yourself that you aren't going to end up a drunk, abusive father, like the one you had growing up. So, remembering the promise you made, so long ago. You decide it's best to get some air.

But instead of laying in bed all day, thinking of things to do, and unintentionally wasting more than half the day. You were going to the bring world to you. And hopefully you will have the privilege of actually accomplishing something. You cant really think of any big accomplishments you'd had, not since you became a weather pony, but all of that was going to change.

So you finally head out of your quite small, yet humble little cottage to go on an adventure, what kind of adventure it was, is entirely up to you. But you are puzzled at what you should do today. Well what ever you were leaving your house for, it felt important.

So, wasting no more time, you head out into the world. The suns vibrant morning glow burns your eyes for a couple second, and the air seems somewhat chilled. But that is only because the sun is about to heat the area quite quick. Hopefully that's the case anyway. You don't exactly 'fancy' being cold much. But the furry and worm coat your body is lined in helps against that.

But in the process of closing the door. You notice a noise in which you don't recognize. A faint tap noise. Not continual, as it was just one quiet tap. You look around to see where it could have came from. You know it was close, and you don't like getting surprised much. So you look down the door you had just came out of. When you notice something on the ground.

It's a letter, and it has your name on it. But who wouldn't just put a letter in your O.P. box in town? And why did it make a falling noise when you closed the door? You can only assume it was placed on the door handle somehow, and it must have fallen when you opened, or closed the door.

Where ever it was before, it was in front of you now, and no other way to see who sent it, or what it had to say than reading it. And with out further adieu, you open it, and it reads:

"Hello, plees meet me on clowd layeer allevan. and pleese hoorey. and B alone."

It says in horrible mouth writing. Like it was done by a filly or colt, just learning how to write. The only adult pony you have ever met that has mouth writing like this was your friend and manager: Rainbow Dash. Her mouth writing was terrible, absolutely atrocious. And, not to mention, her spelling is not far behind. You can only guess she didn't care much for school when she was younger. Because you could almost never read anything she writes.

But you were almost sure that this wasn't her. She never wanted to hang out or have any interaction with you. Unless of course, it was for the sake of work. Then you started to feel a bit bothersome. Maybe this was somepony who never even went to school in the first place. Like somepony that lived on the 'edge', and have lived on the streets their whole life. Somepony that could hurt you very, very much. Why else would they tell you to be alone?

Well, why in the world would somepony like that say please. You know, you have never heard of a mobster that 'asked nicely'. But there is a world of possibility up there on cloud layer eleven. And it was waiting for you to see what it was. So no time to lose. Give or take the 5 minutes you had just spent thinking about what could be up there.

And with that, you drop the note and fly strait up to cloud layer eleven. To find whatever it is that is up there. It doesn't take you long at all to reach it, you have had a lot of practice with flying and all. And the nice thing was, even though the wind is going slightly faster up there, it is a lot warmer. But there is something puzzling you: What is that smell? And how can you smell it when you are up high in the cloud layers, where the wind is always moving. Not violently moving, just breezing. You have to get to the bottom of this smell. It very well could lead you too the reason you were up here.

Your nose leads you around for about 20 to 30 minutes, wasting your time even further. You were almost certain that the one who left you that note was gone by now. Done from waiting, and flown home. But before you quit, you realize the smell had only grown from when you got there. It's now miles more defined than before. You still couldn't quite make out what it was yet, but if you were going the right way, it couldn't be far.

But before your new search has time to begin, your mind is cut off by the sight of something quite strange. Out of the corner of your eye, you know something. But before you have a chance to look around, you are crashed onto the cloud you are on, by something going at high speeds. A pegasus no doubt, but who? Your mind comes back to you from that trans of fast thinking and pain. Your chest hurts, as well as your back. And just about everything else, in your now sad and hurting body. You are looking strait up at the sky, with a weight on your chest.

Quickly raise your head to see an angry Rainbow Dash laying on top of you. Who begins to speak:

"Do you know how long iv'e been here! Hours! Maybe days!" She says, over reacting. You knowing she could have only been there for at least and hour or so.

"What it is you need Rainbow Dash?" You ask her, not sure of why she has asked you to come to cloud layer eleven on such short notice, and more importantly, wasting your time of getting your life back together.

"Look, i need your help with something." She says, when something hits your mind. The smell you were smelling for that past half hour was stronger than ever, and Rainbow Dash was eliciting the very same smell, right now. And that's when you ask her:

"What is that smell?" You ask, very unsure of how one mare could make a smell that travels to far.

"You see, i'm in a lot of pain right now. And i need your help." You think you are in a lot of pain? You ask mentally ask her/ Then realize how rude it is, and decide against asking her that.

"Why are you hurting? Is somepony bothering you?" You ask, remembering how full of her self she is, and how she could get in a lot of trouble with that mouth of hers.

"No! I can take care of myself! I just uh..." She slows down from that random outrage. "You know that thing that happens to mares?" She couldn't be talking about what you think she is talking about. Let alone to you. But then again, you remember your past ex marefriends, and you remember what heat smells like, and that was definitely it. You wonder why you couldn't see that, much before she was laying on top of you.

"Rainbow Dash, your not?..." You begin when she cuts you off.

"Yes i am. I'm in heat, and it's way worse now than it has been in the past. I cant stand it. That's where you come in." She wasn't referring to... Sex was she? You do realize that was the only way to help the numbing pain but, why you?

"Why did you ask me?" You ask her.

"Because iv'e worked with you so long that i trust you. I know i always say i'm saving myself for the Wonderbolts. But i need you now." In the midst of all this talking, you don't even realize you have been getting harder and harder this whole time. You now growing between her back legs, and rubbing up against her ass cheeks. When she begins again:

"You don't have to say yes. But i can do something for you if you want." She begins to bribe you, so that maybe you help with the pain she feels.

"How so?" You ask the mare as puts her front hooves around your head and forms a big pillow with the clouds behind you. Making it so you can sit up easier. Then she gets lower, looking at your surprised and already exited member. Studying it as she takes it in her hooves, and speaks:

"I can make you feel good, if you promise you will help me with my pain." This can't be happening, the most beautiful and fastest mare in all of Equestria, has asked you to have sex with her. And is so desperate, to the point where she is literally going to suck your stallionhood, in order for you to have it in her later, as if you couldn't decide. But you weren't going to just waste a perfectly good opportunity to have some fun, and see Rainbow Dash literally begging for your sex.

"I don't know... Why should i?" You mess with her, making her not mad, but sad and scared. Sad she might have chosen the wrong stallion for the job. And scared that her pain might be extended even further past how long she has already been kept waiting.

"Please! I'll do anything!" She begs.

"Anything?" You ask with a grin, trying to make this as cliche as possible. "What can you do with that mouth of yours Rainbow Dash?"

She turns redder than you have ever seen a pony turn in your whole life. "Oh... I can um..." She says before she licks all along it. Starting from the base, right above your balls, and going all the way to the tip. Getting you aroused, even further than before. Making it easier for you to get ready for her. "Is this good?"

She shouldn't even ask, you were feeling better than you have in a long time. Not from what she has already given you, but what you know she will be doing very soon. So, you play with her mind further. "You call that good? I've seen a rabbit lick better than that." You lie to make her angry, as she accept the challenge you just mentally gave her.

"What?! No way!" She says, knowing she can do just what she has been asked to do. Putting the tip in her mouth as she strokes your large member with both front hooves. Now going deeper and harder. Making a very loud popping sound every time she comes up for air. Her tongue already finding it's way around your cock as she bobs and spins her mouth on you. And her wings, which were stoking your legs are now helping her rub your shaft, even better, giving you a: Hoof job, wing job and blow job, all at the same time. "How about now?" She asks in a feeling accomplished voice, so into the task at hoof, she has probably forgotten about the pain of her heat in the moment.

"Better. But i want to see you gag." You tell her. Her eyes lock onto your erect shaft as she goes down as hard as she can. Her hooves and wings stopping so she can focus on this. Her eyes begin to water as she feels like throwing up, but before she can, she gags, coughs and comes back up, with watery eyes. "H-How about now? Ready to fuck me yet?" She impatiently asks you.

"I'm not so convinced you can really make me feel as good as you say. Make me cum, and maybe i will fuck you." You say wanting her to make you climax before you begin rutting her. But her eyes drop to the bottom of your heart as she gives unintentional 'puppy dog eyes'. Which makes you want to cut your heart out and give it to her, if it will at least make her stop looking so sad. "Alright." she says in a very sad voice as she goes to suck it again.

"Wait, you know what Rainbow? You've done enough. Stand up." Her expression changes 100% as she flies up instantly, then back down again, facing the opposite way from you. Her awaiting, and hurting doors open and visible to you. You rub your hoof over them. and give them a large smell, to tell just when the right time was to give it to her. Her heat is very quite vivid in your nose.

"Enough of the foreplay okay?" Instead of getting mad at this, you simply just comply to what she is asking. You try your best to keep your balance with your hooves and wings as you jump up with your front hooves onto her back as you line yourself up. Then you press the tip of your large appendage into her. Not wanting to hurt her by to going to fast.

As your erection penetrates, you hear her moan in only the pleasure of that pain being lifted of her heat, and filled by the good feeling of you going inside of her. Her and you loving every second of it, as you go in deeper, making more soft moans, from her. And you are sure you can hear her whimpering adorably.

"Please go more." She politely asks, which is weird for her. She is not herself right now, she is calm, and okay with you taking the reins in this. You do what she asks and go in deeper, then to her surprise, back out again. Just before she is about to say something, you go back in. Even deeper than the last.

You would definitely consider yourself very big compared to most stallions. Not just in muscle, but your stallionhood was something to behold, and definitely something to be proud of. With that, you go in and out again, even deeper than the last time. And yet, you are still not giving even half of your length. You can only assume it is her first time, by the way she said: "I know i tell ponies i'm saving myself for the Wonderbolts." So you find it okay if you just go slow for a bit. You don't want to rush this, or hurt her after all. "Have you done this before Dash?" You ask her.

She says nothing, to lost in your movments to say anything at all. She only turns her head from side to side slowly. Finishing your questions and giving you a sense accomplishment that you were her first. But now you realize just how tight she is. Her virgin vagina hasn't been stretched out to fully accommodate you yet. And you realize just how fast you were going, at this still slow, but sort of fast speed, she could be breaking inside. After all, she has the body, barely larger of that of a filly. If you didn't know any better, you would guess she was under aged!

"Don't slow down." She says, asking you to give her more, and breaking your attempt at giving her less and a more enjoyable experience. But, at her command, you comply and actually speed up. Deeper, quicker as her moans get louder and louder. Her whimpering and mental begging getting louder in her mind, she wishes she could ask you to hurry up and start going crazy in her already, but all the pain mixed with pleasure has got her tongue tied in knots of love making, and so she does as much as she can to tell you:

"R...R...R... Rut me already!" She involuntarily blurts out, begging for more of your huge cock inside of her, filling her up until her insides turn red. Drunk from being in heat is making her bite of more than she can chew, but that is going to have to be worried about later. Now, you have to give the mare what she wants. And what she wants is for you to go as deep as you can. Fucking her until she screams for more, or less.

You go for it. Rutting deep into her once virgin pussy as she screams in joy, almost like one huge voice crack as she moves along with your movements. Helping get more of your hard shaft inside of her. Going almost your full length as you hear her screams turn into more of really loud whines as you feel her juices explode from the inside of her, and onto her ass and all over your shaft and balls.

"I want it all!" She yells, knowing that you are holding out on her. You go all the way in, and quickly stop. She screams louder than any time all today. You feel something in your pelvis when you whisper in her ear: "Dash, your in heat, so if i cum i will... Get you pregnant." She knows this and smiles at you.

"Please, i want this. I want you, I love you." She says in a calm and collected voice. You blush as you cannot find words to say, forgetting how to speak for many moments. Lost in her eyes, and beauty to even say anything at all. Stuck in a trans, and your mind flooded with visions of what you hope the future holds. You see her and you at the alter, having the most amazing wedding. Having foals together, and helping each other through the trials of life. You see you and her seeing and traveling Equestria together. Then growing old in each others lives, the passion still there, burning in your hearts, through it all. Through thick and thin. But your mind is taken back by Rainbow Dash.

"So, what do you say?" You give her the most passionate kiss you could ever give, then utter: 'I love you too.' Then she says: "Then lets finish this." At this you begin again, going faster, not so much trying to get as deep, but trying to go fast. You feel yourself getting closer to climax, and for some reason, you start to feel pain from all this work. You tell her: "D-Dash... I-i-i can't... It hurts i!" You get very nervous, before she tells you:

"Don't worry, you can do this. Just let go, i'm here for you." She says very calm, and in a voice that is very much not like her. But you love it none the less. You get closer until you finally cant hold on any longer. You let your load go inside of her. Shooting hot sticky seed deep into her bowels as you stop to let it all come out. Her vagina feels as though it is milking your cock for all it has, and being greedy about it too.

You and her fall to the ground as she falls off of your still beating, slowly sheathing, and satisfied penis.

She does this so she can turn around and hold you tight, as she kisses your lips like you and her have never been kissed anypony before. "Good job. And thank you." She whispers. "No problem..." You say, as you both slowly pant for air. Holding each other in your hooves, and never wanting this moment of pure loving bliss to end.

"Please, move in with me... I don't ever want to be far from you again." She says to you, looking into your eyes with her huge and beautiful rose eyes. 'I will never be far from you ever again Rainbow Dash.' You assure her. She and you share another kiss and smile into each others eyes, followed by closing them and whispering to one another:

"I love you Rainbow Dash."

"I love you too. Now, and forever"

The End. (Or is it?)

Author's Note

Well, there you go! I hope you enjoyed this quick little clop. I was bored so i just sort of wrote it one night. I'ts the first clop that iv'e posted, so i'm sorry it's not the best. My whole life, people have told me i was a really good writer. But i didn't and don't really believe them. So if you think it was alright, i would really appreciate it if you let me know how it was in the comment section. And i hope to do more second person clop in the future. If you have a story you would like to see, or if you just want me to keep writing. Tell me about it! It might just be my next story! Thanks so much for reading this story!

-Saint

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