Wake up

by Erebos

Rating: teen
Tags: Dark
Length: 1079

Someone needs to wake up.

Sometimes it's best to wake up to a crappy world than dream in a happy one

Inspired by a creepypasta of the same name

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2013-06-02 05:20:01 UTC

Wake up

Wake up

hey you read fimfiction in the dark light setting that's cool but I would read through this story first on normal light settings just a suggestion

It was nighttime and six ponies and one dragon were out camping. It was an amazingly beautiful night, there wasn’t a single cloud in the sky the moon was full and shining, the stars were dazzling like pearls. Applejack was having a great time, every thing seemed to perfect.

It had reached that hour where you must tell scary stories. Rainbow dash shot up like a rocket as soon as twilight said. “Who wants to go first?”

“Alright Rainbow go ahead.” Twilight said, and Rainbow began her story

Twilights found her guys

Once upon a time there was a party, now at this party these two ponies called Engine and Diesel   had a little too much to drink, and decided to explore the towns haunted mansion. So they decided to go to the haunted mansion. They stepped inside and it was old, but nothing scary happened.

After about an hour of walking the two ponies looked out the window and laid eyes on something very odd. It was a zombie it eerily turned and looked at them head on dead in the eyes. Engine fainted, and his friend looked at him and said. “Dude WAKE UP. “ he decided to put his friend on his back and get the hell out of the mansion.

As the years passed the two remained good friends until Engine passed away. They had an open casket funeral and when it was Diesels turn to view the body he was shocked as engine looked exactly like the zombie they had seen that night at the mansion.

oh thank goodness I was getting worried

“ So was that awesome or what.” Rainbow said feeling very proud of herself for her story puffed her chest out.

The others were less scared than she thought they would be.

“Oh come on!” she said with a defeated tone.

“ Well who is next?” twilight asked to prevent anyone from making a snarky comment at rainbows remark.

Pinkies hoof went into the air and without even waiting for approval began her tail.

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Oh this is splendid news

So there Were two ponies and they were in A very Kind and loving rElationship

Until one day a Pony approached the man and said. “WAKE UP, my dear daughter is fooling you she Will kill you tonight be cAreful, the pony scoffed, she was Kind hE knew that this was jUst stuPid when he got home he told her about the experience and she laughed and said.

“I’m an orphan how could he know my plan.”

And before the pony knew what had happened his lover decapitated him and left the house.

But the real question is why didn’t he WAKE UP.

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hooray I can throw an Applejack isn't dead party

As everyone berated pinkie for her sub-par story telling Applejack began to feel uneasy.

Am a’h the only one who noticed that ending? She thought to herself.

“Umm… I would like to go next if that’s okay.” A voice said that belonged to none other than Fluttershy.

Every pony welcomed this as Fluttershy rarely got involved with this part of the camping.

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A long time ago there was a small colt who would have frequent nightmares. The nightmares were the same every night, he would be in a pitch black room, and then a pony with a grey coat would walk toward him as he got closer the skin on the head of said pony would fall of and by the time he got to the young colt all that was left on his head was the skeleton and he would lean down and whisper.

“wake up.”

And the colt would wake up screaming. His parents had tried everything they had been to some of the best doctors, psychologists, magicians, they even looked on the black market but they still didn’t  find any help, they even tried exrocising him, multiple times but it did nothing.

Then they met Dr. Psychosis. He had an idea that ghosts inhabited the mind and caused nightmares his advice to the boy try not to wake up.

So the next night, the same thing happened and the skeleton head looked at the colt and said.

on girls thank goodness you are here something bad has happened

“WAke up.”

The colt just stood there.

“WAKe up.”

The colt stood his ground

“WAKE up.” The skelton would have frowned if it could.

The colt stood there.

“WAKE UP!” it was a scream.

But the colt stood his ground

The next morning his parents awoke and went into his room what they saw made them scream.

The young colt was missing. And in the room was a note and it only had two words written on it.

WAKE UP

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is she dead

“Alright that’s it!” applejack shouted. “ What is up with all this waking up nonsense. At this point Twilight intervened.

“Applejack, you need to calm down scary stories are all similar in one way or another.” She said with a matter of factly attitude.

“ Now I would like a turn.” Twilight said and the rest of the ponies nodded their heads absent mindedly while still looking at applejack.

no much worse

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(It has been reported that some victims of torture, during the act, would go into a fantasy world from which they could not WAKE UP. In this state, the victim lived in a world just like their normal one, except they weren’t being tortured. The only way that they realized they needed to WAKE UP was being told they were in a fantasy world. However sometimes parts of the mind would attempt to prevent the victim from WAKING UP. It often would take a strong group of friends made before to convince them to WAKE UP and to tell them about their condition, but even then the mind would do everything in its power to prevent the victim from learning she had to WAKE UP. PLEASE WAKE UP.)

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At this point everyone was looking at applejack begrudgingly she folded. With a pain in her heart she looked over at spike and said.

all 5 of the ponies yelled constantly that night never relenting while there were many voices they all said the same thing

(“Wake up.”)