First story on the site. Feel free to leave your criticism as long as its positive and encouraging.

An evil banished long before the rulers of the sun and moon has returned, bringing along with him three new heros to Equestria. Though they may not be the first option to help defend the land, they are the only hope Equestria has. They will fight to the death if it means protecting this once peaceful nation, stopping at nothing until it is returned to its once peaceful stature. They have what no other hero could ever obtain, earn, or take. This is there Friendship Undying.