The Mask

by bonecollector38

Rating: teen
Tags: Main 6, Princess Luna, Gore, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Comedy, Other, Romance, Queen Chrysalis, Adventure, Princess Celestia
Length: 1903

Two brothers, a grudge, and a mask.

Two brothers fight to the death. The eldest seeks power and to rule ,the youngest seeks revenge to the brother that murdered his wife. Do to the death of his wife, he must hide his pain and shame by wearing a mask. The only way he can remove the mask is if he finds love again. Unknown to the youngest brother and his family, the eldest found a magical dagger that allowed him to travel to different universes where both these brothers find themselves in the land of Equestria.

Published 2013-06-17 00:40:02 UTC
Last updated 2013-06-17 00:40:02 UTC

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The sun rose over Mount Ebeckick onto a valley of death and blood shed. Bodies lay every where as it makes it quite certian that there was a great battle here.Despite the deaths the battle still raged on against two worthy apponents so evenly matched that they fought for a great amount of time. Neither one wanting to surrender. A masked pegesis with a gray coat and a white mane was flown in the air spinning around until he landed on his back hooves in the burnt dirt.his armer was a light black and lookt quite simalar to an equestrian gard but much lighter and mor room to move arouned.
Sliding back a great distance, his right hoof extended behind him in the air slightly allowing the sun to reflect off the blade that came off a strap placed tightly around his hoof.

As the masked stallion lunges forword at a great speed he brings his sword around and smashes it into his apponents blade sending him back quite a distance.The other stallion had a red coat and a black mane. He was closely the same size as the pegesis but a little bigger and was a unicorn. he wore the same armer but much darcker. His right eye was a crimson red while the other had a scar across it making it white and dead.

While they both got there bearings they starred at each other intensely, this went on for quite a while. Then the black maned stallion grew a smile then it grew into a snicker then to a foul out laugh.

"Hold your tounge brother, AND FITE ME!" The masked pony said angerly. ''HA ha ha ha ha...... ahhhh how's that mask treating you brother how long has it been, two years?"

The pegesis anger grou rapidly. "The most painful years of my life Markis. You made me wear this mask, now you will pay!"

The pegesis lunged forword connecting his blade with the Unicorns. They remained fighting, throwing blows at each other unable to get a final blow until the Unicorn was able to buck the masked stallion sending him back a couple feet. Markis scoffed loudly.

"Do you really think you can beat me Andrew. You're more pathetic then I thought. Just a little filly trying to be a hero." "Ha ha ha ha haaaaa......."

"I still remember the look on her face Andrew dont you, you know when i stabbed my blade through her heart."

"SHUT UP!" "THIS ENDS NOW MARKIS, your armies are dead and so is this land, theres nothing left for you to rule here!" The black maned staillion showed a sly grin.

"True little brother true but what makes you think that i'll stop at this, when theres millions of other dimensions that i can conquer."

"What do you mean Markis." Markis was now chuckling slightly.

"Do you honestly thinck that this land, this world that we live in is it, that theres nothing more then the world that we grow up in." "Theres millions of dimension far accross areas we cant even reach some similar to areas some, completely different." "But you know what makes them simailar brother, there all right for the taking."

"You speak blasphomy brother." "Oh do I now Andrew, the staillion scoffed." Then I guess I should show you.

Then the black maned stallion pulled a dager out from his side saddle bag. The handle was made of wood and and was carved to look like a dragon and the blade was a dragons tooth. He brought it up and sliced the air leaving a trail of a bright white light along the area he swung the blade.

"Lets play a little game little brother.its caled hide and seek, you remember dont you when we were little, i'll hide and you seek." He laughed mindlessly before jumping through the crack of light.

"NO!" Andrew shouted before leaping after him going through the crack just before it closed.

seen brack:

Twilight sparkle is always willing to help her friends at anytime. But do to the fact that Spike was at home sick Rarity asked twilight to help her with searching for gems. Twilight gladly excepted to help her. Now looking back at the wagon stacked to the brim with gems she’s beginning to rethink the friendship is magic concept.

"Theres a few more right over here darling." Twilight groaned before levitating a shovel over to the spot rarity was pointing to. Twilight began digging unaware of the perusing gaze of the demand dogs behind the bushes.

"O these are lovely darling. This should be all that I need to make my dress just perfect, lets heed back."

"Finally!" Exclaimed twilight but before they could do anything two diamond dogs came out of the ground and grabbed them. At the same time five more dogs came out of the bushes, a couple of them holding vary large sticks.

"Oh no not these brutes again" Rarity said with a hint of annoyance and fright. "What do you want diamonddog" twilight sed.

"What do you think we want. We want our gems and with your magic well be able to find all the gems in Equestria." "And your not going to get away with your whining this time."

"I wasn’t whining I was complaining, This is whining". "Shut up!" Screamed the diamond dog. "This should teach you a lesson."

Then two diamond dogs stepped forward holding the two large sticks in the air about to beat down on the poor helpless mares. But then all at once their was a grayish White blur moving at lightning speed around the mares then just as quick as it came it disappeared.

The diamond dog didn’t move once. Their eyes are wider then diner plates and they showed no expressions on their faces. The grip that the dogs had on the mares weakend. Then all at once the four diamond dog collapsed to the ground around the mares.

The three other dogs were terrified. Two of the diamond dogs ran of leaving the leader all alone. The demined dog was terrified. "Who are you, where are you!" The dog screamed sourcing around franticly.

"I’m everywhere"

The dog is frozen, terrified to turn around to the voice of the monster behind him. Slowly he turns around to end up face to face with a masked stallion. The Pegasus eyes shoot straight threw the poor dog leaving it two scared to breath. His armor was battered and smoke was coming off his body as if he had just ran threw hell itself.

The stallion rose his right hoof reviling the strap around his hoof. Then slowly a blade began to extend from the strap as if some kind of magic was placed on this strap to hold this sharp blade. The stallion leaned In closer to the demined dog. He could see beads of sweat and tears coming down its face.

"Boo!" All at once the dog ran of crying like a little baby in to the woods. The masked stallion then tapped his blade on the ground causing it to retract back to the strap.

The two mares stood in shock at what they just saw. They shook their heads back to reality and went to see the mysterious stallion collapse to the ground. They ran over to him concern in their eyes.

"I...I... is he all right" stammered Rarity. "Yes he’s just unconcious." Twilight looked over the salon as a million thoughts raced threw her head. "Where did he come from?"

Author's Note

Ha everyone I hope you like this chapter and i'll try to get the next one in as soon as possible. This was my first fanfick so Let me know what you think about it and i'll get back to it as soon as I can.

Those eyes!

[The beginning of this chapter begins by taking a look what goes on in side the main characters head. So this first part is mainly a flash back of his childhood. This will happen throughout the rest of the story.]

Lucious green grass extended as far as the eye could see. A few houses were strung out across the land along with a large castle perched just behind the buildings. Two filly’s were playing and laughing in an open field not to far from the castle walls. "Come on Andy you know you cant beat me. I’m the oldest and the strongest and some day I’m going to rule this land just like father."

The gray little Pegasus crossed his hooves and started to pout. "I can do anything you can Mark, Quit treating me like a baby." Mark just snickered at his little brothers willingness to be grown up.

"All right then if you think your so grown up then lets play a game." "What’s it called," the curious little Pegasus asked. "Its called hide and seek. You close your eyes and count to 10. Then after your done counting you say, ready or not here I come! And you got to try to find me."

"Ok that sounds like fun. Ready?" The little gray filly then covered his eyes with his hooves then began counting. "1…..2…….3......" the little unicorn then ran around franticly for a hiding spot."4….5….6….7……. "As the little Pegasus continued to count, everything began to become very blurry as the little filly’s voice became distant.

Scene break...

Twilight and Rarity carried the unconscience Pegasus to the library carrying him up the stairs removing his tattered armor and set him on twilights bed. The two mares were still a bit shook up about what had just happened. They stared intently at this strong mysterious looking stallion and they couldn’t help but blush slightly. Twilight noticed how the mask covered his entire head showing only his eyes. She was curious as to why he chose to hide his face. Apparently Rarity had the same idea as she slowly began to remove the mask. Twilight stopped her though.

"What are you doing?"

"Oh come now darling aren’t you a bit curious? If he looks this strong he must have a dashing face to go with it."

"Its an invasion of someones privacy Rarity. Why don’t you go get a wet rag to put on his head."

"Oh fine groaned Rarity, before beginning to walk out the door, but stopped to say one thing before trotting of to get the rag. Dibs!"

Twilight just shook her head before turning back to the stallion. She looked up and down the masculine colt. Then her checks glowed a bright pink. She looked over her shoulder then turned back and slowly began to remove the mask. When the mask was at his lips, his eyes flew open and on instance he grabbed twilight and flung her on her back on the other side of the bed. He reared back ready to strike the fool that dared to touch his mask but stopped dead when he saw who it was. Their eyes met and all at once everything just seemed to disappear around them. They starred into each others eyes quite intently. Both of them were thinking the same thing at that moment."Those eyes."

Author's Note

Hey everyone this is the second chapter and again let me know what you think. I’d like to know what you think about it.