If you don't like tell me why, I need the feedback. My first fic.

Anthro-ponies. Takes place years after season 3, but no Twilicorn.

A soul scarred human seeks to die in battle to atone for his one horrible failure in life, only to fail by ending up in Equestria in a body foreign to him for a second chance.

A magical anomaly appearing at the old castle of the Royal Pony Sisters alerts the princesses as Nightmare Night draws ever closer and reports of increased diamond dog attacks keep pouring in. Faced with only one solution, they send the Elements of Harmony to check it out, but find the surprise of a lifetime.

Only the OC is mine, mlp:fim belongs to Hasbro
Incase any of you are Zecora fans, I don't plan on putting her in the story often, if at all. Don't misunderstand, Zecora is my third favorite pony next to Applejack, who's in second, but I suck worse than a leech when I try to rhyme and I don't have anypony to help, so, sorry to all Zecora fans.

Also, I'm doing a bit in this where until the OC goes to Equstria, his thoughts will be like this, and his voice will be like this. After that, it'll be normal.

My first story, comment please.

[EDIT] New characters are in the mix, some of which is not mine. I'll put a list to show which one are mine and which are not.

MINE: Night Shadow, Soul Wraith, Absolute Zero.

NOT MINE: Lightning Ace, (Owned by Lightingace) Skyedge Hurricane (Owned by Tabos)

More will be added as the story moves on. Send your character ideas to me and I'll put them in.

EDIT: The story has been redone, I thought it needed some big changes