Harem Of Spikeby ElderBronyChaptersChapter Two: The ConfessionInput 1: Chapters 1 and 2Chapter Three: The Escape.Chapter Four: The Time Spent Together Input 2: Chapters 3 and 4Chapter 5: The Search. (Extended From Original Release On 6-15-13!)Chapter 6: The Return To Camp. Input 3: Chapters 5 and 6Chapter 7: Finale.Chapter One: The Realization.Chapter Two: The Confession"Apple Bloom?" asked Spike. "What's the matter? What are you trying to tell us, exactly?" "Well... It's just... ah have grown to enjoy the kisses where my lips also touch Scootaloo and Sweetie Belle's lips..." "So, basically..." Said Scootaloo. "... You're trying to tell us that you are afraid of being a fillyfooler, but you still love Spike." "Yeah... That's about it." Confessed Apple Bloom, "Since my family is against fillyfoolers, ah'm afraid that i'll be discriminated against just because of my sexual orintation" she finished. "Wow... I don't really have to worry about it since my parents aren't around and Rarity is a fillyfooler herself." stated Sweetie Belle. "Umm... well I guess it's okay, Apple Bloom. I mean, I like all of you girls that way and So it wouldn't really matter if one of you liked eachother that way either." Spike said. "So... then what do we do? I mean... no one in Ponyville is going to accept our harem relationship... not to mention the fact that Apple Bloom has a crush on Sweetie Belle and I as well." said Scootaloo. "Well... let's just go ask Twilight! she'll know what to do!" exclaimed Apple Bloom. -Later- "Twilight? We need to talk to you!" said Spike as he opened the door to the Library in Ponyville, where Twilight lived. "Oh, hello. I'm Darkwind, Twilight's coltfriend. Twilight is inside at her desk." said a stallion, apparently named Darkwind, as he opened the door. He had a slightly spiky blue mane, and a dark green coat. He was a Unicorn, and wore nerdy glasses, which complimented his grey, piercing but friendly eyes, nicely. His Cutie Mark was a fountain pen. "Nice to meet you. I'm Spike, Twilight's dragon assistant. And these are my marefriends, Sweetie Belle, Apple Bloom, and Scootaloo." said Spike in his friendly greeting tone. "Hi!" said the crusaders in unison. "Umm... did you just say you have 3 marefriends?" asked Darkwind, as Spike and the crusaders walked inside and he closed the door. "Hello Spike!" said Twilight after getting up from her desk to greet Spike and the crusaders. "Um... Darkwind, Let's sit down and Spike and I will explain everything." she said. -Twilight, with Spike's help, explained how Spike and the crusaders got together, and about how Spike is able to date all of them.- "Wow... I never thought that could be possible before." said Darkwind, after Twilight and Spike had finished. "Yeah, we thought it might not work at first too, but Spike, Sweetie Belle, and Apple Bloom and I all are pretty happy with it, or atleast I am." added Scootaloo. "But our problem is that no one accepts our Harem relationship, and we don't know what to do." said Spike. "You could always run away to the Everfree forest. When I was a young colt, my friends and I ran away for 2 months because my first crush's parents didn't want their child dating me. I think I still know where we set up camp. You guys could live there, after I help you reach it." said Darkwind. "Absoulutely Not!" said Twilight. "Are you crazy? What will Rarity, Applejack, and Rainbow Dash think?" "Well, i'm sure they'll understand, and it'll only be until the citizens of Ponyville promise to not discriminate against them for who they love." Darkwind assured Twilight. "Fine... I'll go tell Everyone, Darkwind, Can you do me a favor and help the crusaders gather their things? It'll most likely be a long time before the citizens of Ponyville accept them." said Twilight, as she left the Library. "Alright, Let's do this!" said the Crusaders and Spike. Author's Note I'm sorry these chapters so far have been so short. This is my first MLP story and I haven't been able to write that much. I'll try my best to increase the length of my chapters from this point forward. Also, I own none of the characters, except for my OC, Darkwind. I'll try to improve it as I go along. Thank You! Input 1: Chapters 1 and 2These "Input chapters" will be between every 2 new chapters. In the comments of this chapter, post your thoughts on any 2 chapters, as a whole. You can also post ideas for the following chapters, ask me questions about the story, and discuss the chapters the input is about with other readers. Also, each input chapter will have a short interview with one of the main characters. -Interview 1: Apple Bloom- Jakeman160(Me): "So... when did you start developing these feelings for the other Crusaders?" Apple Bloom: "Ah don't really know... Ah guess after kissing Spike at the same time as the other girls on several occasions, I started to like the feeling of my lips on theirs,and it just went from there." (Me): "How do you feel about leaving Ponyville to go to the Everfree forest with The other crusaders, Spike, Twilight, and Darkwind?" Apple Bloom: "I guess I'm fine with it... as long as we can get to that safe camp Darkwind told us about." (Me): "Okay, folks! that's all the time we have today, so we'll have to end this interview right here. Say bye, Apple Bloom!" Apple Bloom: "Bye, everypony!" (Me): "See ya next chapter!" Apple Bloom: "What chapter?" Chapter Three: The Escape.Darkwind, Spike, and The Crusaders, all went to each filly's respective home and got their things. Each filly carried some food in each of their saddlebags, and Spike had a messenger bag containing his things, and some gems he grew at the library. After everypony gathered their things, Darkwind led them down the road in Ponyville and into the Everfree forest. "Okay. Now that we're here, does anypony have any final objections before we continue?" asked Darkwind. "Nope!" The crusaders said together. "I just have one thing to say," said Spike. "How deep in the forest IS your old camp,exactly?" "Well, probably about 2 miles in, which is plenty far from Ponyville,so it's unlikely they'll find you guys." answered Darkwind. And so they continued their march through the old path to the camp. -2 hours later- "And here we are!" said Darkwind with pride. Before them was a large tent. Next to it was a smaller tent that had canned foods, water bottles, and other supplies inside. The whole "Base" was inside a medium sized clearing that was surrounded by large, extremely thick trees. "Wow! This totally rocks!" exclaimed Scootaloo, As they went inside the larger tent. Inside there was 4 small beds and a large portable battery that had several electrical outlits and an unplugged small lamp on the "floor" next to it. "Yeah, not that bad for a tent in the middle of nowhere, huh?" said Darkwind. They set their things down to each one of the beds. Apple Bloom found a small broom in the supply tent and started sweeping the floor. "So... I guess i'll let you guys work on this place, meanwhile, I gotta get home to Twilight. She'll KILL me if i'm late for our date tonight." said Darkwind. Spike laughed. "Okay, then. Just be careful, okay? It'll be dark i an hour or so." "I'll be fine," Said Darkwind, with a small chuckle. "See ya." "Bye, Darkwind! Tanks for everything!" said Sweetie Belle. "No problem, Sweetie Belle." said Darkwind as he went out the Tent's door. "Visit Twilight and I sometime, okay Spike?" asked Darkwind. "I will!" Spike said. After that, Darkwind went down the path to Ponyville as everypony watched him until he was out of sight. "Wow... we can actually survive out here!" said Apple Bloom. "Yeah, I'm pretty tired, let's work on this place tormorrow." Spike said. "Wanna do our thing on more time before bed" asked Scootaloo. "Yeah, sure. Let's do it." Spike said, with slight excitement at the thought. The crusaders all leaned in on Spike and they all pressed their lips against Spike's. "Goodnight, girls." Spike happily said, as they broke away. "Good night, Spike." The crusaders said together. Author's Note Great chapter this time. I hope you enjoyed! Don't forget to Rate, Review, and post comments! Chapter Four: The Time Spent Together Chapter Four: The Time Spent Together Spike woke up during a calm cool morning and saw that he was in a tent with the Cutie Mark crusaders. He then remembered yesterday's events and calmed down, happy to have finally escaped Ponyville. He looked over to the crusaders. Apple Bloom was sleeping quietly with a peaceful, loving smile one her face. Sweetie Belle appeared to be muttering lyrics to a song. Scootaloo had a smirk on her face and was bobbing her head, probably dreaming that she was in a rock concert. Spike smiled at how peaceful mornings with his marefriends were. Apple Bloom started to wake up. "Mornin' Spike." she said, in her usual accent. "Hi Apple Bloom, what do you wanna do until Sweetie Belle and Scootaloo wake up? asked Spike, as Apple Bloom pulled herself out of her cot. "Well, we can always sit down and eat some breakfast, then make some for Sweetie Belle and Scootaloo after." Apple Bloom answered. Spike went over to the supply tent, brought out some cereal, and poured himself and Apple Bloom a bowl. "So..." He said, handing Apple Bloom her bowl. "We don't have a table, so where do we sit?" "Ah guess we could sit on my bed." said Apple Bloom. The two sat down on the small cot and started to eat their cereal. After they finished, they moved closer together. "You know, you ARE my favorite of the crusaders, Apple Bloom. But please don't tell Sweetie Belle and Scootaloo that." Spike admitted. Apple Bloom moved a little bit closer to Spike. Apple Bloom slowly wrapped a hoof around Spike's waist and pulled him closer. The two locked lips in a passionite kiss that lasted for what seemed like forever. After a minute or two they pulled away, gasping for air. "That... that was better than our Harem kisses!" said Spike in utter amazement. "Yeah...ah really enjoyed it as well. Wanna go further?" asked Apple Bloom. "Yeah..." answered Spike. Spike kissed Apple Bloom, much harder this time. His tongue was just about to enter Apple Bloom's mouth when they heard Sweetie Belle scream. "OH MY CELESTIA! WHAT ARE YOU DOING? I THOUGHT YOU LOVED EACH OF US, SPIKE?! WHY ARE YOU MAKING OUT WITH APPLE BLOOM? I HATE YOU! I'M LEAVING FOREVER!" Sweetie Belle screamed. Spike was shocked. He never thought the other crusaders would care, especially Sweetie Belle. "Sweetie! Wait!" shouted Spike. But it as too late. Sweetie Belle had ran off into the Everfree forest. Scootaloo woke up as well. "I heard everything, Spike. I'm leaving too." she said. "Noooooo!!" Spike said. He started crying in absolute sadness. Apple Bloom was crying as well. "Oh my gosh... I's all my fault ah'm so sorry, Spike." she said in between sobs. Author's Note Please, remember that in my story, Spike is 15 and the Crusaders are all 13. They are also taller and more aged then they are in the show. Don't forget to Rate, Comment, And Review! Input 2: Chapters 3 and 4Welcome to input chapter 2! Just like last time, post your comments on chapter 3 and 4 as a whole. Here is yet another interview with a character in Spike's Mares. (Me): "So, Scootaloo, what do you think about Spike kissing Apple Bloom without you?" Scootaloo: " I don't wanna talk much about it, but I was honestly really worried that Spike only liked Apple Bloom, but don't tell Rainbow Dash I said that." (Me): "Don't worry; I TOTALLY won't tell anyone." Scootaloo: "Well, even though I'm sure I can't trust you on that, I'll just pretend like I can." (Me): "And with that said, we're out if time. Look forward to the next chapter! Say bye, Scootaloo!" Scootaloo: "Dude, what are you talking about?" (Me): "Bye, everypony!" Author's Note Sorry this is so short, I promise Chapter 5 will be great, though! Chapter 5: The Search. (Extended From Original Release On 6-15-13!)Spike and Apple Bloom just sat and cried for the longest time that day. When lunch came, they didn't even bother making any food, despite the fact that their stomach's were growling. They just couldn't stop thinking about Sweetie Belle and Scootaloo, and how they ran away after they saw them kissing. -Meanwhile- Scootaloo ran to catch up with Sweetie Belle. They had both ran off the path in their utter shock and had gotten lost. "What are you doing, Scootaloo? why don't you just go make out with Spike and Apple Bloom without me?!" Sweetie Belle said, tears clear in her eyes. "Because I'm hurt by that as well!" Scootaloo shouted over the rambling Sweetie Belle. "Ugh... yeah right. There's no way i'll believe something like that." Sweetie Belle replied. "Look. I'm just as upset about this as you are, but we both need to move on. Obviously, He dosen't love us. Let's just return to Ponyville and find new coltfriends." Scootaloo said, trying to calm the white pony. "Okay, but how are we going to do that if we're lost?" Sweetie Belle asked, realizing for the first time that they weren't on the path. "Uh oh..." Scootaloo said. -Back to Spike and Apple Bloom.- "What are we gonna do?" Spike said, as he and Apple Bloom stopped crying at last. "Well, let's get something quick to eat and then find them. I bet they probably got lost when they randomly ran off into the forest." They made some daisy sandwiches, each got a bottle of water, and ate hurriedly. "Okay, let's get a move on!" Apple Bloom said, very eager to find her lost friends. "Yeah. Let's do this." Spike said, in a serious tone. They headed out the tent door, each carrying a flashlight as the Everfree was always dark. Spike and Apple Bloom entered the forest. They walked down the path, but suddenly Apple Bloom stopped. "Spike, look!" Apple Bloom said, while pointing to an orange Pegasus feather on the trail. "Oh wow! Good eyes, Apple Bloom!" Spike remarked. "Yeah, ah think this will definately help us find Scootaloo!" Apple Bloom said, enjoying Spike's praise. -With Scootaloo and Sweetie Belle again- Scootaloo and Sweetie Belle had been looking for the path to Ponyville for hours, and nothing good came of it. They had ended up going in circles several times around the same trees, and Sweetie Belle kept tripping over the tree roots. "Ugh... we'll never get out of this damn forest!" Scootaloo cursed. "Scoots, please stop that. You know how barbaric cussing is." Sweetie Belle scolded. Suddenly, Spike and Apple Bloom walked out of a large clump of bushes and found them. "Aha! I knew ah'd find you girls!" Apple Bloom said, shining the flashlight on the two fillies. "Get away from me!" Sweetie Belle said, looking away in discust. "Look, i'm really sorry, okay? I didn't mean to exclude you girls in my kiss with Apple Bloom!" Spike admitted. "Yeah! We were just caught up in the moment, that's all." Apple Bloom said. "R-really" Scootaloo asked. "Yes." Said Spike, as he pulled all three crusaders closer in a kiss. "I love you all equally, no matter what you may think. Now c'mon, let's get back to camp." Author's Note I'm sorry if this took longer than my other chapters, I've just been distracted during the past 2 days and didn't get around to it. Thank You, and don't forget to Rate, Comment, and Review! P.S. Today is the release of Equestria Girls, bronies! Comment on what you thought of it, but please don't spoil anything. Chapter 6: The Return To Camp. Chapter 6: The Return To Camp. After about and hour and a half of searching for the correct path and walking home, the Crusaders and Spike had finally reached their humble abode. (As Spike tended to jokingly call it.) "So, now that we have made up and you girls aren't upset anymore, what do you wanna do?" Spike asked, adressing Scootaloo and Sweetie Belle. "Ah dunno... but I do wonder how Twilight and Darkwind are doing with getting the ponies in Ponyville to accept us. -Meanwhile, In Ponyville- Twilight was nervously walking down the streets of Ponyville. She was extremely worried about how Rarity, Apple Jack, and Rainbow Dash would react when they found out about the Crusaders running away, Assuming they haven't already noticed their disappearance. Finally, Twilight reached her first destination. Floating above her was Rainbow's cloud mansion. Liquid rainbows poured all over, and the building was built to resemble Ancient Greek architecture. Quickly, Twilight casted the same spell that gave Rarity wings on herself. She spread her wings and flew up to Rainbow Dash's "humble" home. She chuckled to herself as she thought that the modesty of the rainbow pony's home reflected the owner's own self esteem. As she reached Rainbow's door, she called out to her, hoping that the pony wasn't taking one of her long afternoon naps. As expected, there was no response. "Rainbow! Are you there?" shouted an impatient Twilight. She once again knocked on Rainbow's door, trying to gain the attention of the most likely sleeping rainbow mare. Finally, the door opened to reveal an obviously very tired pegasus. "Twilight? Why do you have wings and what *yawn* are you doing here?" Rainbow asked the purple unicorn, slightly tilting her head in confusion. As Twilight told Rainbow Dash about the situation with the Cutie Mark Crusaders, her jaw dropped farther and farther as Twilight spoke. "What?! Why the hay did you let them do that, Twi? What if they get eaten by a Hydra or something?" Rainbow asked/screamed at Twilight. "Calm down, Rainbow! I'm sure they'll be fine with Spike to protect them. Besides, all we have to do is just make sure that everypony will accept their Harem relationship and stop judging them for how they live!" Twilight reassured the Pegasus mare. "Okay... but if Scootaloo gets hurt in any way, I will pulverize whoever did it!" Rainbow said, as she flew into the air and did a hoof pump. "Glad to see you're so energized," Twilight laughed. "But we really have to hurry and tell the others before it's too late!" "Gotcha, Twi." Rainbow eagerly replied. "Now I believe we have a certain cowgirl to speak to!" Author's Note Not terribly short, is it? Hope you enjoyed! Input 3: Chapters 5 and 6Welcome to input 3! Once again, post comments in the comments below on chapters 5 and 6 as a whole! And now, it's time for the annual interview with one of the characters of Spike's Mares. Fillies and Gentlecolts, I present to you: Sweetie Belle! (Me): "So, Sweetie Belle, what did you think when Spike and Apple Bloom went looking for you and Scootaloo, even though you guys ran away?" Sweetie Belle: "Well, I began to feel some hope that Spike still loved us after all, and that maybe it was a misunderstanding. Or at least, if my sis Rarity was there she would have said that." (Me): "How do you think Scootaloo felt?" Sweetie Belle: "I guess since it took Spike and Apple Bloom to convince us to come back, and because Scootaloo was pretty stubborn at first, I think that she was still pretty shaken up for a little while." (Me): "Well, it looks like we're out of time here, folks! Look forward to Chapter 7, it'll be a good one!" Sweetie Belle: "What chapter? Are we actually in a story or something?" (Me): "Nothing... Bye, everypony!" Author's Note Hope You Enjoyed! Chapter 7: Finale.And so, Twilight and Rainbow Dash found Rarity and Applejack and convinced them that the Crusaders would be okay. Applejack, of course, was stubborn but was eventually convinced completely when told that Apple Bloom was being hated for her love. "How dare they hate Apple Bloom for who she loves! Ah think she has that right, am I right y'all?" exclaimed Applejack. "Yeah!" Twilight and Rarity agreed, putting their hoofs together. Together, they all trotted down the road from Sweet Apple Acres to Ponyville, ready to gather a following and protest. -Meanwhile- Spike and The Crusaders lazily sat in their house/tent, sick of the heat inside the tent since it didn't have air conditioning. "I'm bored..." Apple Bloom said, trying to fan herself with a hoof. "Hey! I have an idea! Maybe we can go swimming in a lake! We're in the middle of the woods, there's got to be at least a creek or something!" Spike said. "Yeah! Let's go!" said Scootaloo. About a half-hour later, they all left the tent and were ready to go swimming in an attempt to reduce the heat's effect on them. After 20 minutes of walking through the forest and bearing the intense heat that was summer, Spike and his Marefriends finally found what they were looking for. A beautiful, clean pond was in front of them, glistening in the light that managed to get through the tips of the tall and spooky trees. "Wow *pant* who ever thought there could be something so pretty *pant* in the middle of the Everfree forest!" Sweetie Belle remarked, despite her panting from the heat. "Cannonball!" Scootaloo shouted, jumping into the pristine pond. The others followed suit, happy to finally evade the hot, summer day. "Gotcha!" Spike laughed as he splashed Sweetie Belle. "Hey! No fair, I wasn't even able to get ready yet!" Sweetie Belle pouted, but quickly recovered and splashed Spike back. Soon, It turned into an all-out splash war, Spike getting splashed by the crusaders and Spike splashing them back. "Hey, wanna do something really fun?" asked Sweetie Belle with a slight smirk. "Yes?" asked the others, wandering what the white unicorn could be thinking. "When I had a magic lesson with Twilight and Rarity, Twilight taught me a spell that could create a large bubble underwater. Wanna have an underwater kiss?" Sweetie Belle finished. "Sure! It'll be a great experience, right girls?" Spike said to Scootaloo and Apple Bloom. "Awesome!" they said in unison. Sweetie Belle then cast the spell. Everypony went deep down into the water, and were instantly surrounded by a protective bubble. Spike pressed his lips against the Crusader's, invoking a slight moan in pleasure from the 3 young mares. "Sweetie Belle, Scootaloo, and Apple Bloom?" asked Spike, hoping to gain their attention. "Yes Spike?" They asked together, wandering what he was going to say next while hoping it was what they thought it was. "I love you." Author's Note Wow! I can't believe I finally finished it! Thank you all for reading and look forward to the upcoming Epilogue, and maybe even a sequel! Thanks again, ~Jakeman160 Chapter One: The Realization.Spike looked over at Sweetie Belle, Scootaloo,and Apple Bloom. They had recently begun dating, but the three fillies were sort of "sharing" Spike's companionship. (If you haven't read "Gem Girls", this won't make much sense!) "So... what do you girls wanna do?" asked a bored Spike. "How about we kiss? We haven't done that in a while, and ah really enjoyed it." said Apple Bloom, with a fairly noticable southern accent. They were in the CMC clubhouse, sitting, backs to the wall, and quite bored. "Okay!" exclaimed Scootaloo. The three fillies leaned in on spike and pressed their lips against 3 corners of his. When they did this, each fillie's lips pressed against another's, but they didn't mind. "Wow! I have to say, you girls are growing to be quite proficient kissers!" Chuckled Spike. "I have to admit, though. I'm starting to feel like I love all of you, ya know...love love" said a slightly concerned Sweetie Belle. "Yeah... About that..." said Apple Bloom. Me: "Ooh! Cliffhanger! Look forward to the next chapter, and don't forget to rate and review!" This IS, after all, my first story. Please don't hate on it, if you find it boring. Author's Note Yeah... This chapter is extremly short and I'm sorry about that. The next chapter will be much longer, though. EDIT: Sorry I made this chapter so bad, The next chapters have greatly improved since then. Please don't judge the rest of the story by this chapter.
Chapter Two: The Confession"Apple Bloom?" asked Spike. "What's the matter? What are you trying to tell us, exactly?" "Well... It's just... ah have grown to enjoy the kisses where my lips also touch Scootaloo and Sweetie Belle's lips..." "So, basically..." Said Scootaloo. "... You're trying to tell us that you are afraid of being a fillyfooler, but you still love Spike." "Yeah... That's about it." Confessed Apple Bloom, "Since my family is against fillyfoolers, ah'm afraid that i'll be discriminated against just because of my sexual orintation" she finished. "Wow... I don't really have to worry about it since my parents aren't around and Rarity is a fillyfooler herself." stated Sweetie Belle. "Umm... well I guess it's okay, Apple Bloom. I mean, I like all of you girls that way and So it wouldn't really matter if one of you liked eachother that way either." Spike said. "So... then what do we do? I mean... no one in Ponyville is going to accept our harem relationship... not to mention the fact that Apple Bloom has a crush on Sweetie Belle and I as well." said Scootaloo. "Well... let's just go ask Twilight! she'll know what to do!" exclaimed Apple Bloom. -Later- "Twilight? We need to talk to you!" said Spike as he opened the door to the Library in Ponyville, where Twilight lived. "Oh, hello. I'm Darkwind, Twilight's coltfriend. Twilight is inside at her desk." said a stallion, apparently named Darkwind, as he opened the door. He had a slightly spiky blue mane, and a dark green coat. He was a Unicorn, and wore nerdy glasses, which complimented his grey, piercing but friendly eyes, nicely. His Cutie Mark was a fountain pen. "Nice to meet you. I'm Spike, Twilight's dragon assistant. And these are my marefriends, Sweetie Belle, Apple Bloom, and Scootaloo." said Spike in his friendly greeting tone. "Hi!" said the crusaders in unison. "Umm... did you just say you have 3 marefriends?" asked Darkwind, as Spike and the crusaders walked inside and he closed the door. "Hello Spike!" said Twilight after getting up from her desk to greet Spike and the crusaders. "Um... Darkwind, Let's sit down and Spike and I will explain everything." she said. -Twilight, with Spike's help, explained how Spike and the crusaders got together, and about how Spike is able to date all of them.- "Wow... I never thought that could be possible before." said Darkwind, after Twilight and Spike had finished. "Yeah, we thought it might not work at first too, but Spike, Sweetie Belle, and Apple Bloom and I all are pretty happy with it, or atleast I am." added Scootaloo. "But our problem is that no one accepts our Harem relationship, and we don't know what to do." said Spike. "You could always run away to the Everfree forest. When I was a young colt, my friends and I ran away for 2 months because my first crush's parents didn't want their child dating me. I think I still know where we set up camp. You guys could live there, after I help you reach it." said Darkwind. "Absoulutely Not!" said Twilight. "Are you crazy? What will Rarity, Applejack, and Rainbow Dash think?" "Well, i'm sure they'll understand, and it'll only be until the citizens of Ponyville promise to not discriminate against them for who they love." Darkwind assured Twilight. "Fine... I'll go tell Everyone, Darkwind, Can you do me a favor and help the crusaders gather their things? It'll most likely be a long time before the citizens of Ponyville accept them." said Twilight, as she left the Library. "Alright, Let's do this!" said the Crusaders and Spike. Author's Note I'm sorry these chapters so far have been so short. This is my first MLP story and I haven't been able to write that much. I'll try my best to increase the length of my chapters from this point forward. Also, I own none of the characters, except for my OC, Darkwind. I'll try to improve it as I go along. Thank You!
Input 1: Chapters 1 and 2These "Input chapters" will be between every 2 new chapters. In the comments of this chapter, post your thoughts on any 2 chapters, as a whole. You can also post ideas for the following chapters, ask me questions about the story, and discuss the chapters the input is about with other readers. Also, each input chapter will have a short interview with one of the main characters. -Interview 1: Apple Bloom- Jakeman160(Me): "So... when did you start developing these feelings for the other Crusaders?" Apple Bloom: "Ah don't really know... Ah guess after kissing Spike at the same time as the other girls on several occasions, I started to like the feeling of my lips on theirs,and it just went from there." (Me): "How do you feel about leaving Ponyville to go to the Everfree forest with The other crusaders, Spike, Twilight, and Darkwind?" Apple Bloom: "I guess I'm fine with it... as long as we can get to that safe camp Darkwind told us about." (Me): "Okay, folks! that's all the time we have today, so we'll have to end this interview right here. Say bye, Apple Bloom!" Apple Bloom: "Bye, everypony!" (Me): "See ya next chapter!" Apple Bloom: "What chapter?"
Chapter Three: The Escape.Darkwind, Spike, and The Crusaders, all went to each filly's respective home and got their things. Each filly carried some food in each of their saddlebags, and Spike had a messenger bag containing his things, and some gems he grew at the library. After everypony gathered their things, Darkwind led them down the road in Ponyville and into the Everfree forest. "Okay. Now that we're here, does anypony have any final objections before we continue?" asked Darkwind. "Nope!" The crusaders said together. "I just have one thing to say," said Spike. "How deep in the forest IS your old camp,exactly?" "Well, probably about 2 miles in, which is plenty far from Ponyville,so it's unlikely they'll find you guys." answered Darkwind. And so they continued their march through the old path to the camp. -2 hours later- "And here we are!" said Darkwind with pride. Before them was a large tent. Next to it was a smaller tent that had canned foods, water bottles, and other supplies inside. The whole "Base" was inside a medium sized clearing that was surrounded by large, extremely thick trees. "Wow! This totally rocks!" exclaimed Scootaloo, As they went inside the larger tent. Inside there was 4 small beds and a large portable battery that had several electrical outlits and an unplugged small lamp on the "floor" next to it. "Yeah, not that bad for a tent in the middle of nowhere, huh?" said Darkwind. They set their things down to each one of the beds. Apple Bloom found a small broom in the supply tent and started sweeping the floor. "So... I guess i'll let you guys work on this place, meanwhile, I gotta get home to Twilight. She'll KILL me if i'm late for our date tonight." said Darkwind. Spike laughed. "Okay, then. Just be careful, okay? It'll be dark i an hour or so." "I'll be fine," Said Darkwind, with a small chuckle. "See ya." "Bye, Darkwind! Tanks for everything!" said Sweetie Belle. "No problem, Sweetie Belle." said Darkwind as he went out the Tent's door. "Visit Twilight and I sometime, okay Spike?" asked Darkwind. "I will!" Spike said. After that, Darkwind went down the path to Ponyville as everypony watched him until he was out of sight. "Wow... we can actually survive out here!" said Apple Bloom. "Yeah, I'm pretty tired, let's work on this place tormorrow." Spike said. "Wanna do our thing on more time before bed" asked Scootaloo. "Yeah, sure. Let's do it." Spike said, with slight excitement at the thought. The crusaders all leaned in on Spike and they all pressed their lips against Spike's. "Goodnight, girls." Spike happily said, as they broke away. "Good night, Spike." The crusaders said together. Author's Note Great chapter this time. I hope you enjoyed! Don't forget to Rate, Review, and post comments!
Chapter Four: The Time Spent Together Chapter Four: The Time Spent Together Spike woke up during a calm cool morning and saw that he was in a tent with the Cutie Mark crusaders. He then remembered yesterday's events and calmed down, happy to have finally escaped Ponyville. He looked over to the crusaders. Apple Bloom was sleeping quietly with a peaceful, loving smile one her face. Sweetie Belle appeared to be muttering lyrics to a song. Scootaloo had a smirk on her face and was bobbing her head, probably dreaming that she was in a rock concert. Spike smiled at how peaceful mornings with his marefriends were. Apple Bloom started to wake up. "Mornin' Spike." she said, in her usual accent. "Hi Apple Bloom, what do you wanna do until Sweetie Belle and Scootaloo wake up? asked Spike, as Apple Bloom pulled herself out of her cot. "Well, we can always sit down and eat some breakfast, then make some for Sweetie Belle and Scootaloo after." Apple Bloom answered. Spike went over to the supply tent, brought out some cereal, and poured himself and Apple Bloom a bowl. "So..." He said, handing Apple Bloom her bowl. "We don't have a table, so where do we sit?" "Ah guess we could sit on my bed." said Apple Bloom. The two sat down on the small cot and started to eat their cereal. After they finished, they moved closer together. "You know, you ARE my favorite of the crusaders, Apple Bloom. But please don't tell Sweetie Belle and Scootaloo that." Spike admitted. Apple Bloom moved a little bit closer to Spike. Apple Bloom slowly wrapped a hoof around Spike's waist and pulled him closer. The two locked lips in a passionite kiss that lasted for what seemed like forever. After a minute or two they pulled away, gasping for air. "That... that was better than our Harem kisses!" said Spike in utter amazement. "Yeah...ah really enjoyed it as well. Wanna go further?" asked Apple Bloom. "Yeah..." answered Spike. Spike kissed Apple Bloom, much harder this time. His tongue was just about to enter Apple Bloom's mouth when they heard Sweetie Belle scream. "OH MY CELESTIA! WHAT ARE YOU DOING? I THOUGHT YOU LOVED EACH OF US, SPIKE?! WHY ARE YOU MAKING OUT WITH APPLE BLOOM? I HATE YOU! I'M LEAVING FOREVER!" Sweetie Belle screamed. Spike was shocked. He never thought the other crusaders would care, especially Sweetie Belle. "Sweetie! Wait!" shouted Spike. But it as too late. Sweetie Belle had ran off into the Everfree forest. Scootaloo woke up as well. "I heard everything, Spike. I'm leaving too." she said. "Noooooo!!" Spike said. He started crying in absolute sadness. Apple Bloom was crying as well. "Oh my gosh... I's all my fault ah'm so sorry, Spike." she said in between sobs. Author's Note Please, remember that in my story, Spike is 15 and the Crusaders are all 13. They are also taller and more aged then they are in the show. Don't forget to Rate, Comment, And Review!
Input 2: Chapters 3 and 4Welcome to input chapter 2! Just like last time, post your comments on chapter 3 and 4 as a whole. Here is yet another interview with a character in Spike's Mares. (Me): "So, Scootaloo, what do you think about Spike kissing Apple Bloom without you?" Scootaloo: " I don't wanna talk much about it, but I was honestly really worried that Spike only liked Apple Bloom, but don't tell Rainbow Dash I said that." (Me): "Don't worry; I TOTALLY won't tell anyone." Scootaloo: "Well, even though I'm sure I can't trust you on that, I'll just pretend like I can." (Me): "And with that said, we're out if time. Look forward to the next chapter! Say bye, Scootaloo!" Scootaloo: "Dude, what are you talking about?" (Me): "Bye, everypony!" Author's Note Sorry this is so short, I promise Chapter 5 will be great, though!
Chapter 5: The Search. (Extended From Original Release On 6-15-13!)Spike and Apple Bloom just sat and cried for the longest time that day. When lunch came, they didn't even bother making any food, despite the fact that their stomach's were growling. They just couldn't stop thinking about Sweetie Belle and Scootaloo, and how they ran away after they saw them kissing. -Meanwhile- Scootaloo ran to catch up with Sweetie Belle. They had both ran off the path in their utter shock and had gotten lost. "What are you doing, Scootaloo? why don't you just go make out with Spike and Apple Bloom without me?!" Sweetie Belle said, tears clear in her eyes. "Because I'm hurt by that as well!" Scootaloo shouted over the rambling Sweetie Belle. "Ugh... yeah right. There's no way i'll believe something like that." Sweetie Belle replied. "Look. I'm just as upset about this as you are, but we both need to move on. Obviously, He dosen't love us. Let's just return to Ponyville and find new coltfriends." Scootaloo said, trying to calm the white pony. "Okay, but how are we going to do that if we're lost?" Sweetie Belle asked, realizing for the first time that they weren't on the path. "Uh oh..." Scootaloo said. -Back to Spike and Apple Bloom.- "What are we gonna do?" Spike said, as he and Apple Bloom stopped crying at last. "Well, let's get something quick to eat and then find them. I bet they probably got lost when they randomly ran off into the forest." They made some daisy sandwiches, each got a bottle of water, and ate hurriedly. "Okay, let's get a move on!" Apple Bloom said, very eager to find her lost friends. "Yeah. Let's do this." Spike said, in a serious tone. They headed out the tent door, each carrying a flashlight as the Everfree was always dark. Spike and Apple Bloom entered the forest. They walked down the path, but suddenly Apple Bloom stopped. "Spike, look!" Apple Bloom said, while pointing to an orange Pegasus feather on the trail. "Oh wow! Good eyes, Apple Bloom!" Spike remarked. "Yeah, ah think this will definately help us find Scootaloo!" Apple Bloom said, enjoying Spike's praise. -With Scootaloo and Sweetie Belle again- Scootaloo and Sweetie Belle had been looking for the path to Ponyville for hours, and nothing good came of it. They had ended up going in circles several times around the same trees, and Sweetie Belle kept tripping over the tree roots. "Ugh... we'll never get out of this damn forest!" Scootaloo cursed. "Scoots, please stop that. You know how barbaric cussing is." Sweetie Belle scolded. Suddenly, Spike and Apple Bloom walked out of a large clump of bushes and found them. "Aha! I knew ah'd find you girls!" Apple Bloom said, shining the flashlight on the two fillies. "Get away from me!" Sweetie Belle said, looking away in discust. "Look, i'm really sorry, okay? I didn't mean to exclude you girls in my kiss with Apple Bloom!" Spike admitted. "Yeah! We were just caught up in the moment, that's all." Apple Bloom said. "R-really" Scootaloo asked. "Yes." Said Spike, as he pulled all three crusaders closer in a kiss. "I love you all equally, no matter what you may think. Now c'mon, let's get back to camp." Author's Note I'm sorry if this took longer than my other chapters, I've just been distracted during the past 2 days and didn't get around to it. Thank You, and don't forget to Rate, Comment, and Review! P.S. Today is the release of Equestria Girls, bronies! Comment on what you thought of it, but please don't spoil anything.
Chapter 6: The Return To Camp. Chapter 6: The Return To Camp. After about and hour and a half of searching for the correct path and walking home, the Crusaders and Spike had finally reached their humble abode. (As Spike tended to jokingly call it.) "So, now that we have made up and you girls aren't upset anymore, what do you wanna do?" Spike asked, adressing Scootaloo and Sweetie Belle. "Ah dunno... but I do wonder how Twilight and Darkwind are doing with getting the ponies in Ponyville to accept us. -Meanwhile, In Ponyville- Twilight was nervously walking down the streets of Ponyville. She was extremely worried about how Rarity, Apple Jack, and Rainbow Dash would react when they found out about the Crusaders running away, Assuming they haven't already noticed their disappearance. Finally, Twilight reached her first destination. Floating above her was Rainbow's cloud mansion. Liquid rainbows poured all over, and the building was built to resemble Ancient Greek architecture. Quickly, Twilight casted the same spell that gave Rarity wings on herself. She spread her wings and flew up to Rainbow Dash's "humble" home. She chuckled to herself as she thought that the modesty of the rainbow pony's home reflected the owner's own self esteem. As she reached Rainbow's door, she called out to her, hoping that the pony wasn't taking one of her long afternoon naps. As expected, there was no response. "Rainbow! Are you there?" shouted an impatient Twilight. She once again knocked on Rainbow's door, trying to gain the attention of the most likely sleeping rainbow mare. Finally, the door opened to reveal an obviously very tired pegasus. "Twilight? Why do you have wings and what *yawn* are you doing here?" Rainbow asked the purple unicorn, slightly tilting her head in confusion. As Twilight told Rainbow Dash about the situation with the Cutie Mark Crusaders, her jaw dropped farther and farther as Twilight spoke. "What?! Why the hay did you let them do that, Twi? What if they get eaten by a Hydra or something?" Rainbow asked/screamed at Twilight. "Calm down, Rainbow! I'm sure they'll be fine with Spike to protect them. Besides, all we have to do is just make sure that everypony will accept their Harem relationship and stop judging them for how they live!" Twilight reassured the Pegasus mare. "Okay... but if Scootaloo gets hurt in any way, I will pulverize whoever did it!" Rainbow said, as she flew into the air and did a hoof pump. "Glad to see you're so energized," Twilight laughed. "But we really have to hurry and tell the others before it's too late!" "Gotcha, Twi." Rainbow eagerly replied. "Now I believe we have a certain cowgirl to speak to!" Author's Note Not terribly short, is it? Hope you enjoyed!
Input 3: Chapters 5 and 6Welcome to input 3! Once again, post comments in the comments below on chapters 5 and 6 as a whole! And now, it's time for the annual interview with one of the characters of Spike's Mares. Fillies and Gentlecolts, I present to you: Sweetie Belle! (Me): "So, Sweetie Belle, what did you think when Spike and Apple Bloom went looking for you and Scootaloo, even though you guys ran away?" Sweetie Belle: "Well, I began to feel some hope that Spike still loved us after all, and that maybe it was a misunderstanding. Or at least, if my sis Rarity was there she would have said that." (Me): "How do you think Scootaloo felt?" Sweetie Belle: "I guess since it took Spike and Apple Bloom to convince us to come back, and because Scootaloo was pretty stubborn at first, I think that she was still pretty shaken up for a little while." (Me): "Well, it looks like we're out of time here, folks! Look forward to Chapter 7, it'll be a good one!" Sweetie Belle: "What chapter? Are we actually in a story or something?" (Me): "Nothing... Bye, everypony!" Author's Note Hope You Enjoyed!
Chapter 7: Finale.And so, Twilight and Rainbow Dash found Rarity and Applejack and convinced them that the Crusaders would be okay. Applejack, of course, was stubborn but was eventually convinced completely when told that Apple Bloom was being hated for her love. "How dare they hate Apple Bloom for who she loves! Ah think she has that right, am I right y'all?" exclaimed Applejack. "Yeah!" Twilight and Rarity agreed, putting their hoofs together. Together, they all trotted down the road from Sweet Apple Acres to Ponyville, ready to gather a following and protest. -Meanwhile- Spike and The Crusaders lazily sat in their house/tent, sick of the heat inside the tent since it didn't have air conditioning. "I'm bored..." Apple Bloom said, trying to fan herself with a hoof. "Hey! I have an idea! Maybe we can go swimming in a lake! We're in the middle of the woods, there's got to be at least a creek or something!" Spike said. "Yeah! Let's go!" said Scootaloo. About a half-hour later, they all left the tent and were ready to go swimming in an attempt to reduce the heat's effect on them. After 20 minutes of walking through the forest and bearing the intense heat that was summer, Spike and his Marefriends finally found what they were looking for. A beautiful, clean pond was in front of them, glistening in the light that managed to get through the tips of the tall and spooky trees. "Wow *pant* who ever thought there could be something so pretty *pant* in the middle of the Everfree forest!" Sweetie Belle remarked, despite her panting from the heat. "Cannonball!" Scootaloo shouted, jumping into the pristine pond. The others followed suit, happy to finally evade the hot, summer day. "Gotcha!" Spike laughed as he splashed Sweetie Belle. "Hey! No fair, I wasn't even able to get ready yet!" Sweetie Belle pouted, but quickly recovered and splashed Spike back. Soon, It turned into an all-out splash war, Spike getting splashed by the crusaders and Spike splashing them back. "Hey, wanna do something really fun?" asked Sweetie Belle with a slight smirk. "Yes?" asked the others, wandering what the white unicorn could be thinking. "When I had a magic lesson with Twilight and Rarity, Twilight taught me a spell that could create a large bubble underwater. Wanna have an underwater kiss?" Sweetie Belle finished. "Sure! It'll be a great experience, right girls?" Spike said to Scootaloo and Apple Bloom. "Awesome!" they said in unison. Sweetie Belle then cast the spell. Everypony went deep down into the water, and were instantly surrounded by a protective bubble. Spike pressed his lips against the Crusader's, invoking a slight moan in pleasure from the 3 young mares. "Sweetie Belle, Scootaloo, and Apple Bloom?" asked Spike, hoping to gain their attention. "Yes Spike?" They asked together, wandering what he was going to say next while hoping it was what they thought it was. "I love you." Author's Note Wow! I can't believe I finally finished it! Thank you all for reading and look forward to the upcoming Epilogue, and maybe even a sequel! Thanks again, ~Jakeman160
Chapter One: The Realization.Spike looked over at Sweetie Belle, Scootaloo,and Apple Bloom. They had recently begun dating, but the three fillies were sort of "sharing" Spike's companionship. (If you haven't read "Gem Girls", this won't make much sense!) "So... what do you girls wanna do?" asked a bored Spike. "How about we kiss? We haven't done that in a while, and ah really enjoyed it." said Apple Bloom, with a fairly noticable southern accent. They were in the CMC clubhouse, sitting, backs to the wall, and quite bored. "Okay!" exclaimed Scootaloo. The three fillies leaned in on spike and pressed their lips against 3 corners of his. When they did this, each fillie's lips pressed against another's, but they didn't mind. "Wow! I have to say, you girls are growing to be quite proficient kissers!" Chuckled Spike. "I have to admit, though. I'm starting to feel like I love all of you, ya know...love love" said a slightly concerned Sweetie Belle. "Yeah... About that..." said Apple Bloom. Me: "Ooh! Cliffhanger! Look forward to the next chapter, and don't forget to rate and review!" This IS, after all, my first story. Please don't hate on it, if you find it boring. Author's Note Yeah... This chapter is extremly short and I'm sorry about that. The next chapter will be much longer, though. EDIT: Sorry I made this chapter so bad, The next chapters have greatly improved since then. Please don't judge the rest of the story by this chapter.
