Breaking The 4th Wall

by huskypaw02

Rating: everyone
Tags: Raindrops, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Colgate, Alternate Universe, Original Character, Comedy, Cutie Mark Crusaders
Length: 1812

Susan`s father is Dialga, God of time...

Susan`s father is Dialga, God of time. She can do things with time but space like her half sister. One day she gets a note from her father. But then the note opens a portal, and sucks her in. What will happen to her now!?

Published 2013-11-24 16:20:01 UTC
Last updated 2014-01-25 14:14:53 UTC

In 2 Minutes Flat

I looked down at Faolan his green eyes shined like sea foam. A small melody flowed in my head as i walked to it. The three filles , the CMC talked joyfully behind me. Finally we got back to the little house i woke up in. Before i didn't really look around but know i saw it was much bigger inside. There was a kitchen, bed room and hallways that lend into another house. It was not a house thought, it was a waiting room.
"Wait here guys, come on Faolan," I told them. They sat on some chairs as i walked with Faolan around this new place. It was a dentist. 3 rooms with chairs , one with equipment and another one filled with papers. One catch my eye.
"Dad." I looked at a paper, it was my Dads handwriting. "I miss you" A tear dropped on it. I shook my head and walked to one of the rooms. "GIRLS IN HERE!" I yelled to them. Three fillies rushed into the room . They each garbed something. "What in the hay dose this do?!" asked Applebloom. She held up a toothbrush in her hoof. I looked at her hoof bug eyed. "Its a toothbrush der!" answered Sweetie. "How YOU CAN PICK THINGS UP WITH A HOOF ITS ROUND SSEE!" I drew and circle on my hoof as I yelled that. Scootaloo looked at me confused. "Um what, plus you have a horn you know" She reminded me. Now do I use it? That would help but I just face-palmed myself. "Anyways.." I said. I started to explained what each thing was and how it worked. When I finished I was surprised I knew it. Faolan looked at me in confusion. "Hehe,..yeah" The three fillies jumped up and started testing each other. "OH and remember to brush for 2 minutes flat " I added. The CMC nodded but then Applebloom yelled, "WE HAVE TO GO !" The other 2 knew what she was talking about cause they said goodbye and followed her out. I sat down. "Wow im tired,.." I said I felf my eyes closed till,..
"HI COLAGTE!" the yellow pony from before flew above me.
"Raindrop" I asked unsurely. She smiled and hugged me.

Im Susan

Part 1 - Im Susan

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Hi, My name is Susan! My father is Dialga, God of time. I can freeze time. I live in Time and Space Zone with my half sister, Liz. I only see her a little because she always going to other dimensions. I can only go to the mortal dimension like most kids in these god zone. One day something happened to me it was crazy........

“Ok , My mom asked me to help her take a mortal out of a god zone.” Said Liz.
“Ok....” I said. A flashing portal opened and Liz went in. I went to the edge of the time part. A huge row of trees came the us apart. Liz told that her side was filled with portals, lots of them. II tryed to go in but, it never worked. Then I decided to get up, I stopped looking at the trees. My side had trees small trees that you could climb but not hold you. There was one big tree that no one could climb and there was a medium size one that I always swigged on. Anyways, I started running arounding looking for my pet, Faolan. He`s a Wolf-Dragon. I finally found him, he was carrying a note.
” HERE FROM YOUR FATHER.” He yelled. I opened it up, then BOOM! a portal opened and sucked me in.

Welcome To Ponyville

Part 2 - Welcome To Ponyville

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I woke up in a bed like a toothbrush and the pillows were the bristles. I got out of the bed. It smelled like hay and dry grass everywhere. I got up on my feet or should I say hooves. I fell down and looked at them I HAD HOOVES LIKE A HORSE! I guessed the only way to walk her was on four so I did it was wired for sure, but that was just the start. I looked up at my head i had a horn. LIKE A UNICORN! I had to clear my mind. Why of Olympus would my dad bring me here. I hoped that someone could tell me where I was. I got outside and looked for the closest person or animal I could find. Sadly in was another pony and it talked and SO DID I!

“Um, hello? I asked a pony that was pink.

“Hi! I'm Bowlo, you must be the the new dentist everypony is talking about.” the pony named Bowlo said.

“DENTIST,..*GLUP*.., I mean yes! :) Wait everypony?”i mumbled.

“Ya! But nopony is really going to use your toothbrushes you know? Our town had won dirties moths, hum.” Bowlo said. A a yellow pony looked like she was falling to us. Then I noticed she had wings!

“COLGATE! COLGATE!” she yelled. She landed on the floor. “Its me from Fillydelphia, remember! Remember!” My eyes and horn glowed. They flash for about minute then they stoped. Soon I remembered a whole different time, a ponyful timezone.

“Do you remember me? You just stood there,...” the yellow pony asked.

“Wait you didn't see my eyes glow?!” I asked and yelled. The shock their hands. “ I guess I do remember you,...”I began to remember more ponyful memorizes. “Raindrop?’ The yellow pony, know as Raindrop nodded and smiled.

“Sorry but I should get going....” I told them.

“AHH! This soon... well i guess you need to know the town since you just moved in.” Raindrop whined.
I waved and walked away.

“I wonder why she asked if her horn glowed....” Bowlo asked. Raindrop shrugged.

Cutie Mark Crusaders Dentist!!!

Cutie Mark Crusaders Dentist!!!

Part 3 - Cutie Mark Crusaders Dentists!!!
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My feet , I mean hooves slammed into the pavement as I ran as fast I could. Nothing mattered , I ran and ran intill I felt a magic sager.
"Please, please" I thought. Why? Cause I had these before something of time is calling me. I followed it intill I saw three fillies petting a wolf. Wait that wasn't just any wolf, it was Faolan. His wings tucked in so they would think he was a dog. I could see his wings cause he was a symbol of time.
"FAOLAN!" I yelled , he looked up and ran to me. "Hi buddy" I played with his neck fur. The three fillies look at me sadly.
"Um lady is that your dog" said the red maned one. I looked at them ,
"Er well yes but he"s not a dog he"s a wolf." I told them. The orange Pegasus flapped her wings.
"THATS SO COOL! You have a wolf for a pet!?" She asked. I nodded.
"Faolan you got sucked in to?!" I asked my pet wolf-dragon. He looked at me his eyes glowed so did mine. I could hear his voice but his lips didn't move.
"Yes, I cant show them my true form, I'm sorry" He told me.
"Don't be, all that matters is that your here." I answered. I smiled but the last filly, a unicorn looked at my eyes.
"Your eyes glowed, why is that?" She asked.
"Nothing.." I looked into the sky.

The first filly spoke up again, "Anyways I`m Apple Bloom and this is Sweetie Bell and Scotaloo! We are the Cutie Mark crusaders.! "
"We try to find our cutie marks together!" the Pegasus, Scotaloo added.
"What dose your mean?" the unicorn, Sweetie Bell asked.
"Er I'm a dentist! " I told them my smile could not fool anyone at home but they yelled, making me fall,
"CUTIE MARK CRUSADER DENTISTS!" I rubbed my head.
"Can you show us how we can be one?" Sweetie asked.
"Sure, this way." I answered and walked with Faolan at my side and them walking behind me. It can be that hard right?

A Drop of Rain

A Drop of Rain

Yes, I have a flying pet wolf dragon. Yes, I am a demigod. Yes, I can time travel. No, I am not, a never will be a unicorn who's best friend , I didn't know about in till now is a Pegasus who can fly. If answered yes to all this questions you have now gone totally insane.
Raindrop let go and flew up.
"MAN! Its been so long!" She squealed. I smiled and nodded, not know clue how long that was, like an hour, I believe? "So,....hows life, what you been doing in this parts...er and stuff" I asked to move it along.
"Well tell you , if you will go on a walk with me" She answered. I nodded and followed her out the door. As we walked she explained how she is now part of Ponyville Weather Flight Team. She showed me her moves and then it got late.
"Aw,...we should get home and get some rest" Raindrop told me.
"Um where is home?" I asked. She laughed.
"Here I got this" She answered. Raindrop grabbed me and pulled me into the twilight skies. I WAS FLYING! It was so amazing, and it turned out I am a unicorn who's best friend , I didn't know about in till now is a Pegasus who can fly. She landed next to my home.
"Night." She flew off. I stood there in the cold night air. I waited till I couldn't see her at all. When the last bit of her neon blue mane was not visible I turned and walked into my house. It was very dark but I found a candle, and after many tries my horn made it glow. I hadnt looked around the room in till now. It was very small but good for me. I saw picture on the ground near my nightstand. "I guess it fell this morning." It wasnt cracked hopefully. I picked it up and placed back. I looked it. "Violet...." I found myself saying. I had this picture, back in my real home. But there weren't two ponies, it was me and my best friend Violet. A tears fell on to the nightstand. Oh how is mess her. When I very yound, before I knew my father. We were best friends, but but she was killed in the struggle to find safety and find my father. Our words echoed in my head.
"VIOLET NO! You cant die, please don't let go....." "No Sue, you have to find life, you can do better, Im a no one, and no one love me....." Her hand slipped from mine. She fell as the hot lava bubbled below.
"NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!" I blinked , I stood looking at the picture, "No, don`t let it happen to me again...."