Torment

Torment

Work in progress amateur writing by Bnlol, please leave contructive criticism. I have done very little writing in the past and this is likely cheesy as it can get.

It was a beautiful day in equestria. Twilight had all she needed, her friends, her books, spike, the world mostly at peace. Rainbow Dash kept stormclouds away and Pinkie did whatever it is that Pinkie does. Nothing seemed amiss.

Then she woke up. It was only a dream. It was day, no clouds in the sky and a plain field. This hadn’t been where Twilight had slept. Twilight had gone to bed in her library....

“Rainbow Dash?” She cried into the air

“Pinkie Pie? Is this a prank?”

She paused, now in a much more quiet tone

“I hope this is a prank”.

Twilight began walking on the field, which seemed almost imperfectly flat. She continued to yell pony’s names for a few minutes, met with no response, not even a echo.

After a long time, she came across a structure. It was a black cube, one side cut out and filled with a glass window. It was about the size of a normal house. Inside all she saw were a pen, roll of paper, and a timer. The ticked down to zero and made a loud yet quiet ringing sound, which appeared to come from all sides of Twilight. She turned around to see if it truly were behind her and turned back to find nothing but a burning stick marked “You forgot to write”.

This made no sense, she forgot to write what? What was this place? She had written a letter to Celestia that week, and nothing in her brain said she had to write anything else. She continued walking, the daylight just as bright.

She felt her legs lock, and everything went dark. She quickly got the feeling of falling, with air resisting her, as if telling her

“Go up, go up! You fool go up!”.

She looked up and saw nothing but darkness, except her... wings?. Not purple alicorn wings, oh no, the moisture wings that she had once given rarity. What was the meaning of this?. She had the impulse to attempt and fly and did so with ease, as if she were born with the ability to do so. A bright yellow flash blinded her, and she was falling again in darkness, with the same green flat terrain below her. She hit it, at what should of killed her and hurt. But it didn’t, she was fine.

As she sat in shock, three gray cubes surrounded her. Each one with colored text. All read “This is your fault”. The text was either colored orange, pink,  red and blue, yellow, or white. What in the world did this mean?

Twilight sat in the middle of the cubes, when she saw two white coats. No bodies, just coats, walk towards her briskly. She couldn't run as if something were holding her. The coats locked her in binds of vines, which grew around her entire body. Her first two hooves latched to her chest with only her back hooves and head free. She kicked and managed to even scream.

She then saw her best friends. Spike, Rainbow Dash, Fluttershy, Applejack, and Rarity were all mutilated and bloodied, stuck on a pole. They each screamed at her, screaming

“WHY, WHY TWILIGHT WHY, WHY TWILIGHT” at increasing volume. Twilight began to cry.

All became black for Twilight, with a loud bang.

“Doc, what’s wrong with her?” Rainbow Dash insisted

“Will she be okay? Shucks i aint even seen nothing like this in years!”

Applejack said worryingly.

“We don’t know what’s wrong with your friend, we had to put her in a straitjacket for the time being. She’s having seizures and appears mentally ill. We don’t know if or when she will get out of the hospital” the Doctor calmly stated “We will notify you if her condition worsens or gets better”