Pony cruise vacation

by themysteriousbrony2013

Rating: teen
Tags: Main 6, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Other, Romance, Spike, Comedy, Cutie Mark Crusaders, Discord
Length: 1615

Twilight Sparkle won a free cruse with 11 guest but only 10 they could find and Discord is the only one available. So how could the mane 6 take the news?

Twilight Sparkle won a free cruse with 11 guest but only 10 they could find and Discord is the only one available. So how could the Mane 6 take the news and how would it be. And Pinkie is the only one who is exited is she hiding a secret *Wink wink*

P.S. There's more characters but due to the maximum 5 characters i couldn't put them all.

P.P.S. Cover art WANTED.

P.P.P.S I'm Still alive.
--GLaDOS

Published 2013-06-15 06:10:01 UTC
Last updated 2013-06-15 06:10:01 UTC

Telling Everypony

A boring day on Ponyville. It was summer the day was hot not a single wind.

''So hot in here''. Twilight said as she was in the ground sweating.

''Tell me about it''. Spike said as he was sweating on the ground to.

They heard a knock on the door. Twilight use magic to open the door, it was Derpy the mailmare.''Oh hey Derpy''.Twilight said when Derpy entered the door. "How many letters we got today?". Twilight said.

''Just one''. Derpy replied giving her the envelope to Twilight.

''Thanks Derpy'' Twilight said

Derpy left closing the door. Twilight opened the envelope using her magic.

''CONGRATULATIONS'' Twilight reading the letter outloud. ''You won a free cruse with eleven guests for tomorrow''.

''WOW eleven guests that's fantastic''. Spike jumped excited. "But wait, eleven guests. With you, me, Applejack, Rarity, Fluttershy, Pinkie Pie and Rainbow Dash even if we invite the Cutie Mark Crusaders where only ten." Spike questioned

''But it has to be eleven guest or we won't get in.'' Twilight said as she read the rest of the letter.

''You know, Discord's with Fluttershy since he got ''reformed''." Spike quoted.

''Oh nononononononono HAY no." Twilight said quickly.''He will ruin our vacation."

''Oh come on Twilight give him chance, maybe he'll be good...''

''Or maybe he'll snap his fingers make an iceberg appear out of nowhere and sink the ship." Twilight interupted.

''Uuh, Twilight i think your over reacting and the cruse has a huge pool,pleeeeeese." Spike said with his puppy dog eyes.

Twilight thinked for a moment.Her hoof in her chin."Oh all right but if he mess one thing I'll send him back here."

''ALRIGHT, pool here i come here i come." Spike said with excitement.

''I'll go tell everypony, you stay here''Twilight ordered Spike.

''Okay''.Spike nodded

''First up,Applejack''.Twilight ran to Sweet Apple Acres and closing the door behind her.

Twilight ran through town to Sweet Apple Acres.She arrived at the barn looking for Applejack but the barn was empty''Hello?Applejack are you here?''.As she checked the barn.

''Yeeeeeeehaaaw''.Twilight heard someone.It was Applejack, she was bucking trees in the field.She sees Twilight so she ran to the barn.''Hiya Twi what brings ya here''.

''I just wanted to know if you and your sister Applebloom could go on a cruse with us''.Applejack smiled of happiness but then her smile dropped as she realize something,at that moment a big red stallion arrived it was Big McIntosh.

''Hey sis whats up''.Big Mac quickly saw her sad.''what's wrong sis''

''Oh nothing it's just that Twilight invited me and Applebloom to a cruse, but who's gonna take care of the farm''.

''I can take care of the farm''.

''Are you sure Big Mac''.

''No problem sis beside you to relax anyway for all your hard work''.

''Awe, thanks Big Mac''.

''Great, the cruse is tomorrow''.Twilight said.

''Good i got to go pack and tell Applebloom the good news''.Applejack said.

''Oh,Applejack one more thing''.Twilight said before she left.

''Yea sugarcube''.

''Discord has to come with us''

''What in tarnation does Discord has to come with us''

''Because it has to be 11 guests and I dont know who i can invite but don't worry I swear that he'll be good''

''Okay Twi''.

''Bye''.Twilight left the farm.

A few minutes later Twilight arrived at Rarity's boutique.Twilight knocked on the door.

''Hello,Rarity are you here''

A voice came in.''Its open darling''.

As Twilight open the she saw Rarity making a dress (as usual).She was holding a needle with her magic and a ball of yarn

''Hello Rarity I was wondering if you and Sweetie Belle could go on a cruse with us.''

Rarity froze and dropped everything she was holding she opened her mouth and said with excitement ''A cruse oh how fabulous I heard that in every cruse there's a ball, I would look beautiful in my new dress that in almost done oh this is a dream come true.

''One more thing, Discord is coming with us.''

At that moment Rarity's dream has turned into a nightmare.''What, Discord's coming, oh this is The.Worst.Possible.Thing''. She pulled her 'Dramatic chair' and laid down dramaticly.

''Calm down Rarity I promise if Discord mess one thing I'll use my my magic to send him to Princess Celestia.

''Okay''.Rarity said with a small smile.

''good and the cruse is tomorrow.''

''Then I'll better go start packing and tell Sweetie Belle the good news.''

''Bye''

''Good bye darling see you tommorrow.''

Twilight left the boutique and Rarity started packing.

A minute or so Twilight arrived at Sugarcube Corner, Pinkie Pie was at the cash register sleeping.Twilight got closer to the pink mare. ''Pinkie Pie'' said Twilight with a quite voice gently shaking the Pinkie Pie.

Pinkie's head rised fast. ''AHH, Welcome to Sugarcube Corner can i take your order''.

''Don't worry Pinkie it's me Twilight''

''Oh, hi Twilight what's up u know i dreamt that i was a chicken and scootaloo was there a dont know why and then Rainbow Dash appeared out of nowhere as a goose and-''.Pinkie talked for a whole ten minute until she eventually stopped and said
''So what brings you here''.Pinkie giggled.

''Oh i was thinking if you wanted to go to a cruse with us''

''That's great you know what every cruse has a party''.Then confetti dropped out of nowhere then Pinkie laugh.

''There's only one thing Discord's going with us''

''Oh that's great''.Pinkie said with excitement.

Twilight raised an eyebrow because that wasn't the exprecion she was looking for.''You DID here me right DISCORD is coming with us''

''As i said that's great, ooh maybe he'll turn the pool into choclate milk''.Pinkie said with a huge grin.

Twilight said quikly "No Pinkie, Discord isn't doing any funny business okay."

''Fine Twilight you take the fun out of the cruse."

''That's not fun that's chaos." After a few moments of silence Twilight broke the silence ''Anyway, the cruse is tomorrow''.

''Okay Twilight ''.

Twilight closed the door and left Sugarcube Corner.

A few minutes ago she arrived at Fluttershy's cottage she took a deep breath and before she could knock on the door she stopped for a moment and started thinking who else she can invite ''I can invite Big Mac, but she promise Applejack he would take care of the farm, maybe Carrot Top, but she has a business, or Derpy, but she's the mailmare but she isn't very good and she kinda has a crush on that weird Dr.Whooves fella, So i guess Discord is our only option.'' She knocked on the door.

''It's open''A deep voice came in.

Twilight open the door and she saw Discord helping Fluttershy feed the animals ''Hi Fluttershy-'' she saw Discord with a bored face ''-and hello Discord.''

''That's odd i think i got a headache when Twilight came in.''Discord said with a divious smile.Twilight frowned at Discord.

''Now Discord be nice to our friend Twilight.''Fluttershy said to Discord.

''Oh come on Fluttershy it was-''Discord started to shrink himself ''tinny tiny little joke.''With a blink of an eye he grew back to his normal size.''So Twilight what brings you here.''

''I was wondering if Fluttershy would go on a cruse with me.''She took a deep breath ''And Discord your invited to''

Discord laugh'ed out loud ''Good one Twilight you inviting me to a cruse, this must be a joke'' Discord continue laughing

''It's not a joke.''Twilight said angrily ''You want in or out''

Discord snapped his eagle claw finger an soon he was in a scoobadive outfit ''Of course I'm in.''

''Good how about you Fluttershy are you in.''Twilight said

''I don't know who's gonna take care of the animal.'' At that moment Angel was passing by ''Umm, Angel Bunny i know this is a big favor but can you take care of the animals while i'm gone'' Angel slapped Fluttershy in the face ''I'm guessing that's a no''

Discord saw what Angel did to her, so he snapped his lion fingers and Angel's eyes turned green. Angel hoped to to Fluttershy's head and gave her a hug.

''Does that mean you'll do it Angel.''Fluttershy said. Angel nodded yes.

''Great the cruse is tomorrow'' Twilight continued ''Oh and Fluttershy could you go to Rainbow Dash's Mansion to tell her about the cruse''

''Sure, Twilight'' Fluttershy flew away to Rainbow Dash's Mansion.

As soon as Fluttershy closed the door.Twilight looked at Discord angrily and said "Alright Discord I know what you did to Angel."

"What did i do" Discord said with a innocent smile.

"Dont play innocent on me."Twilight said raising her tone a bit."You turned Angel good so you could go on the cruse."

"Oh come on Twilight I did it for Fluttershy and Angel can be flank-hole most of the time."

Twilight eyes widend because Discord did have a point and Angel CAN be flank-hole most of the time. Twilight walked to the door without saying a word she paused as she was in the door she turned her head to Discord "As Celestia as my witness if you do something bad on our vacation I will turn you into an earth pony so you cant use magic."

"Don't worry Twilight i'll be good."Discord opened his mouth and pull out his heart and a marker and drew an "X" in it."Cross my heart..." The heart grew wings."And hope to fly..." A cupcake appered in his hand."Stick a cupcake in my eye." And he sticked a cupcake in his eye.

Twilight walked out the door and closed the door leaving Discord.

When Twilight was trotting under Rainbow Dash's manshion she could hear something from above

"Whaaaaaaaaaaat Why discord tell me why."Rainbow Dash said screaming.

Twilight said "I'm guessing Fluttershy told Rainbow Dash."