The Rainbow Factory: Escape From Hell

by Amanda Dianne

Rating: teen
Tags: Dark, Adventure
Length: 132

A re-telling of the famous grim-dark, can Scootaloo and Rainbowdash escape the hell that is the rainbow factory?

A re-telling of the famous grim-dark, can Scootaloo and Rainbowdash escape the hell that is the rainbow factory?

This is a more…. "Friendly" version of the Rainbow Factory I guess?

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2013-06-16 12:08:34 UTC

Chapter One: A Failed Test

I stood on the edge of the white cloud, calculating the jump. I focused hard, this should be easy. I gave a leap into the air, the wind brushed against my face as I landed.

"Scootaloo! You seem to not be using your wings! Is there a reason for that?" I glanced over to my instructor, her cold steely eyes fixated on me.

"Nnnno mam! Of course not!" I chirped, smiling happily. She squinted her eyes, maybe I was too happy?

"Carry on." She barked.

Phew, that was close... A bit too close... The next cloud was a free-fall, I judged the height. Not too bad. I dove down, and tried my best to fly. It kinda worked; well enough so my instructor didn't comment, anyway.