dash was in dessert sun it hurting her wing she can feeled it apoclipse beat her ninja wing. twilight sparckle try to halp her but sand stop her magik from doin magikal stuf.dash was bing hurted fro the sand and soon they were left in the dessert burnin and wings hurt and magik failed dem, and they were on the verge of life. hopfully flutershi wuld com and halp them but for now they almost dye. the next day they wake up then sand is go ne and magik and wings feel better. now they can go betterer thoughted twilight then a sand tornado started and they had to run so soon they would b safe and at home. but then they escaped it and so tey thout but twiligt look around and find no rainbo dash, now se has to go back and find her in the hot dessert sun but as she went back she found dash on the ground almost!
ALMOST DEAD
2 b continued. jk probally knot