
Another world
Him fic. This is my first fic so lots of feedback!
Hi this is my first fic. It's a HiE fic please read and give lots of feedback but try not be to harsh but tell me what you think I should do to improve it and if it's good what I should do to expand on it. it was inspired by " how did i get here" and "le retour" i would read those stories because they are awesome but its not mandatory to





1842 words: Estimated 9 minutes to read
2 Chapters:
- Shy beginnings 2012-02-16 14:47:34 UTC1014
- A Trip Through Ponyville 2012-02-17 03:43:45 UTC828