The Sparkle In His Eyes.

by hghmpegasister

Rating: everyone
Tags: Romance
Length: 974

Comet Tail doesn't know how to tell Twilight his feelings.

The day Comet Tail meets Twilight Sparkle he is in love with her. But he does not know how to tell her. But Comet Tail is not her only lover. There is another stallion with his eye on Twilight. Who will Twilight go with to the ball?? Will Comet Tail get the girl?? Find out in my newest story The Sparkle In His Eyes.

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2013-07-26 04:10:03 UTC

Chapter Two Hoofing Around Town

Comet Tail was walking around his sunny new home. He moved here a week ago from Canterlot with his friend Noteworthy. But Comet Tail. found out he made friends easily. His first week in Ponyville. He already had a group of friends. Noteworthy, ThunderLane, Caramel, Soarin, Pokey Pierce, and Written Script. They went everywhere together. The Bowling Alley, The Coffee Bean their favorite place for coffee, and their favorite club Club Pony. Comet Tail was headed for the music store Pony Jamz. He saw Vinyl Scratch  at the counter listening to some music.

"Hi Vinyl!!" said Comet Tail cheerfully. " Is Noteworthy Here ??"

"Yes!! Noteworthy!!" Vinyl yelled

"Yes Vinyl??!!" said Noteworthy as he walked up.

"Comet Tail is here to visit you." replied Vinyl

"Oh hey bro whats up??!!" smiled Noteworthy

"Do you want to go to the coffee bean??!!" Comet Tail questioned.

" Sure!!!!!!!!!" smiled noteworthy "Lets go!!"

Comet Tail and Noteworthy walked through town when suddenly.

"Ah!!!!!!!" said  Comet Tail falling.

He looked up and saw a yellow stallions body shadowed above him.

"Hello Comet Fail!!!!!!!!!!!!!" said the stallion meanly.

"Goldengrapes!! Comet Tail said disgusted.

"Here let me help you up!!?" said Noteworthy "How dare you??!! What did Comet Tail ever do to you??!! "

Golden Grapes laughed and ran away.

"What a loser!!" said Noteworthy watching Goldengrapes run away.

They stepped inside the Coffee bean for their java.

Comet Tail sat down with the coffee .

"So hows your girlfriend??"  asked Comet Tail politely.

"Oh Octavia shes great!!" replied Noteworthy. "But a little nervous about being first chair in the Canterlot orchestra."

"Speaking of girlfriends!!" said Noteworthy "Do you have one yet??'

"Oh no I recently got here so I haven't really got a chance!!" said a sheepish Comet Tail.

Come on man you must like some mares. said Noteworthy

"Actually no but I am planning on going to the library this afternoon. Want to come??" asked Comet Tail.

"The library aye well I think i um am busy." said a smiling Noteworthy.

"This is perfect!!" thought Noteworthy "Comet Tail can meet Twilight Sparkle. They are perfect for each other they both love to read, study stars, write, and learn."

"Sorry I have this thing with Octavia." replied Noteworthy. "Maybe another Time??"

"Ok see you later Note!!!!!!!!" said Comet Tail

Then Comet Tail walked out.

"Yep , better plan a double date for us soon." said a smiling Noteworthy.

Chapter Three Discussing Love

WORK IN PROGRESS.............................................

Hi guys I know it has been a while since I have wrote the third chapter but I have a lot going on. SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO IT MAY TAKE AT LEAST September or longer to work on it.

I need to start working on stories I have not even started yet.

School is coming up for me and I need to get ready for that.

Writing a story is a lot of work and my schedule is pretty full.

I also need to manage my tumblr. Ps feel free to ask questions @blossomforth in love.

5.Well im out of reasons\

So be patient AND THANKS 4 YOUR SUPPORT

In other words

dEADLINE 4 ME IS sEPTEMBER 4 2013 OR SOONER

COMING SOON

Chapter One Returning Thoughts

One day in Ponyville, Twilight Sparkle was in the library  doing what she did every Monday.

"Re shelving day!!" Twilight announced.

"Ugh why do you have to do this every Monday ?" Spike groaned.

"Well In don't want the floor as one big shelf unlike some people!!" Twilight narrowed her eyes at Spike.

Knock Knock !!

"Spike are you going to get the door ?"  asked Twilight

"Sure Twilight happily !!" Spike exclaimed.

Spike ran to get the door. Suddenly three fillies ran through the door. It was Applebloom, Sweetie Belle, and Scootalo.

"Hi girls!!" Twilight said cheerfully. "What can i help you with??"

"Oh we don't need anything we are here to return the book from Hearts and Hooves Day!!" Applebloom said.

"Sorry Twilight!!" The three fillies said.

"That is quite alright girls why your here I do have some nice books I think you would love !!" Twilight exclaimed happily.

"Uh Twilight??"  Spike said.

" Yes Spike??" asked Twilight.

"They are already gone!!" exclaimed Spike.

Twilight turned around.

"Oh." Twilight said feeling a bit embarrassed.

"Guess your love of books got ahead of you again." Spike responded.

"He! he!" Twilight said sheepishly.

"Well back to shelving books!!" Twilight exclaimed

Spike looked at Twilight.

"Speaking of Hearts and Hooves day Twilight !!"

"Do you ever think about falling in love??" Spike asked curiously.

"No Spike I am  to busy for love why books are my love!!" Twilight exclaimed.

"I can see that."said Spike looking around the room with all the shelves of books and all the books on the floor.

"So what your never going to get married and fall in love?" asked Spike

Oh Spike i plan to fall in love !! Said Twilight just getting even more embarrassed by the thought.

"When??" Spike asked.

"Oh come on Spike  we have more work to do!!" Twilight says ignoring Spikes question.

But for the rest of the afternoon Twilight wondered about love. She never really assumed how she would fall in love she just she would end up in love . Twilight didn't want to really think about this anymore but she couldn't help it . How would she fall in love she didn't know. When she was a filly she had no attentions of falling in love. She didn't have really any friends. In school she met this great colt who loved reading with her. He was her colt friend. But it was nothing serious. A few months later she got accepted into Celestia's  school for gifted unicorns.

"Twilight Twilight!!" Spike called.

"Yes Spike what is it??" Twilight questioned.

Rarity and Rainbow Dash are here.