The Romantic View of Midnight Wings and Deadly Man

by Shining Jewels

Rating: teen
Tags: Slice of Life, Romance
Length: 1830

Will this romance last or not? P.S. This is my first fanfic, and my best friend gave me permission to use her OC. So I guess enjoy...

Midnight and Deadly start out not liking each other but when Deadly gets involved in activities with Midnight and her family, he is somehow drawn closer to her. When they hung out together he somehow feels a closer and is then attracted by her and is desperately in love with her but decides to take it slow so he won't scare her off! Will this romance last or not?

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2014-06-06 05:31:41 UTC

The Next Move

        So now that they are slowly being attracted to each other, Deadly starts coming to Midnight's house late at night only to see Midnight. Shining was getting suspicious when Deadly would camp out, stay up all night somehow, and sleep for the whole day the next day. She confronted Midnight and Midnight told her how Deadly would come to the house late at night to see her. Shining started investigating the subject of her brother and her best friend. For her, it just didn't seem right. She wished Deadly never started hanging out with Midnight because she knew how perverted her brother was and how much of a sneak, and a miss-goody-two-shoes her best friend was. She just wished her and Midnight were as close of friends as they used to before Deadly started hanging out with Midnight. They had just gotten spread out farther ever since Deadly started hanging around Midnight and Shining. It all started on a nice fall day when Deadly came to Midnight's house with a wagon full of watermelons. Shining was staying the night with Midnight and Deadly was bringing her all her things.

        Deadly had a wagon full of watermelons and was giving some of them to Shining and Midnight. Then Deadly came up with the idea of a watermelon war. So they all grabbed their watermelons and threw them at each other. Ever since that day, Deadly has been coming over to play games with Midnight. They mostly played video games but they also ate dinner on the sofa and watched movies. Shining wasn't as overprotective then as she is now. She only changed when she heard about their first kiss. She was shocked! Shining couldn't stand the fact of her brother and best friend because Deadly was just Deadly and Deadly was a problem. But then an idea creeped itself into her head. What if they got into such a close relationship that they got married when they were of age? Then she and Midnight would be sisters by marriage! So then she continued acting the way she did but then when she was alone, she would secretly rejoice that her best friend and her brother were growing stronger in their ''secret relationship''. Sometimes when she went to her friend's house, she would torture her with the thought of her brother.

        Shining would be so happy! She would tell Midnight how much she would like to be her bridesmaid and how romantic her honeymoon would have to be. Midnight would put her head down and make a small whine. Shining loved torturing her with the thought of her brother. Shining could tell they liked each other because how could you kiss someone you don't like?

It just wasn't right. Especially when they kissed five times, maybe more. Shining could tell Deadly wanted Midnight to marry him since he tried to get her to have sex with him twice and he got naked in front of her once, but they were yet too young. Shining couldn't wait to find out what happens next.

Easing up

       Well, things started easing up every once in a while at Midnight's house, but got worse at Shining and Deadly's house. For instance, things came up missing and they were in trouble a lot more than usual. Deadly would lie saying he was going to work but he was just using that as an excuse to sneak to Midnight's, day or night. Deadly wants to do it with Midnight desperately but Midnight doesn't want to. What is he getting himself into? They soon lost interest altogether and Deadly stopped going to Midnight's. In the year of 2014, though, it snowed. Midnight's mom was home but her dad was stuck elsewhere. Deadly, American Man, and Shining went to Midnight's and them, plus Mint Glade, all went sliding down the hill in trash can lids and swimming floats. Midnight bragged about how many guys she was dating. But Shining went to church and believed in God, so she was staying faithful to one guy. She didn't care about Midnight and her love life.

Finally, it was time to go home. Deadly and American Man raided Midnight's cabinets and took what food they could with them. Shining scolded them and told them not to do that considering they already get fed at home. The two were skinny and always hungry and Shining wondered if they had worms. Shining barely ate anything but she was in a healthy condition. When they got home they had hot chocolate and chili. The chili was a bit spicy, and Shining hated spicy things, but it was so cold she didn't mind it for once.

The Final Ending

Well, one of Midnight's animals had a baby, but then she died of worms. Midnight and Mint Glade was home schooled, Deadly and Shining went to a public high school, and American Man went to a public middle school. American Man got more evil, Deadly grooved himself for the girls, and Shining stayed a loner, reading and being with her boyfriend, and not hanging out with anybody else. It's so sad considering I never got the ending I wanted. Watching these two was melodramatic. I was hoping they would develop a stable relationship but one was dating multiple guys and the other was chasing after this one girl who didn't like him. No pony can keep a stable relationship because they just don't know how to get committed. If you do have a good relationship, you're awesome and you're smart. But keep it simple. Only fifteen percent of relationships survive in the real world, where we are, so don't give up. Things will turn out great if you have hope and love, for everyone around you. Deadly Man decided that since they wouldn't last long, he should try to take over her. He almost succeeded if it hadn't been for some random pony bursting in on them. Deadly Man swore he would take revenge. And he did. He ran away and hid from everypony. He went to where ponies would least expect to find him- the deepest and darkest part of the Forbidden Forest, located far beyond Equestria's borders. He was never found again.

The Beginning

         Midnight Wings is a girl who moved from one side of a state to another. When she moved, she met Shining Jewels and Shining introduced Midnight to her brother, Deadly Man. It started out when Shining was visiting Midnight for two years before Deadly starts showing up. He went places with them. Then, about a year later, Midnight kisses Deadly in her backyard. A few weeks later, Shining finds out they kissed five times, Deadly tried to get her to have sex twice, and she saw him fully naked once. So now they're both fifteen. Shining always teased Midnight about liking her brother and Deadly would deny even touching her. Shining always knew when her brother lied and she knew all this stuff and she knew how hormonal Deadly and Midnight were. They both loved chocolate, video games, and each other.

         Shining liked the idea of Midnight and her brother because if they ever got married, Shining and Midnight would be sisters-in-law. They both admitted they didn't like each other and Midnight was homeschooling and Deadly and Shining was going to a public school. Shining couldn't wait until Deadly was in the eleventh grade and she was in the twelfth because she was sure he would take Midnight to the prom. Shining wanted to be sure that he did and she also wanted they were the cutest couple and that they were voted Prom King and Queen. But Shining didn't realize that this was all part of the dream that would never come true. Shining was too ignorant to accept the fact that you couldn't force two people in love but that she would have to leave it up to fate. So she camped out on the night of the full moon and on the full minute of midnight she recited a poem to help Romeo Deadly and Juliet Midnight:

He is my special friend

and my only special friend.

Brought together by fate

and by gravity also.

There is no other like him:

He's sweet when he's calm,

he's funny when he's mad,

and cuddly when he's sad.

His poor heart's been broken

and now I've fixed it.

He's like a teddy bear to me,

and I'm the world to him.

        Midnight never knew what she would do about Deadly. She thought about him at night before she fell asleep. She thought about his still-adorable-baby-face every night. She would doze off thinking about him. She couldn't get him off her mind ever since their first kiss. After the second and third kiss, it was easier for them to keep a secret relationship going and keep it unknown to everyone except Shining and all because Shining was Deadly's sister and Midnight's best friend. Shining just didn't know how to catch them together and show everyone the things she told them about Midnight and Deadly were true.

The Hard Year Comes

     So they have been hanging out together for nearly a year. In the summer of 2013, Midnight and her sister, Mint Glade, are very busy taking care of their animals and the garden. They also have a strict schedule for band, camps, and air cadets. Deadly joined air cadets and band with them. Pretty soon, American Man and Fifty Shades found out about Midnight and Deadly. The more ponies found out, the tougher it was for Deadly to stay calm about the ''secret relationship''. Of course, Shining helped that relationship grow a little by running a few errands that I cannot share the details. Some of Midnight's animals died and she got to where she barely wanted to do anything anymore. Deadly stopped coming over except for band which he rarely came to.

Shining knew something was desperately wrong and she wished she knew what it was. Then, if she knew what was the problem, she could come up with an idea to fix it. So Shining talked to Midnight more secretly. Deadly knew his sister was hanging with Midnight even more so he didn't go over there much anymore because he didn't want to make it seem like he was interested in Midnight. Their band director said that if Deadly didn't start coming, he would replace him. Deadly didn't like that but he couldn't make the ''secret relationship'' public yet.

     Now that Midnight and Deadly weren't as close anymore, Deadly started dating other girls, knowing Midnight couldn't possibly find out. And Midnight didn't ever find out even though Shining knew that Deadly was dating somepony else but she didn't dare tell Midnight for Midnight's own safety. She would act like it didn't matter but Shining knew her friend well and she knew that she would be very upset.