The Babs x human Clop saga
- Chapter 20 -
"Back to the riches"
*Warning foalcon*

Today, James was shopping in the marketplace and currently haggling with the carrot vendor, Carrot Top. After a couple more minutes, he finally succeeded in getting a bunch of carrots for a lower price. The catch is, she wanted something in return. Knowing what she wanted by the wanton look of desire in her eyes, he quickly looked around to make sure no one was watching.

A few mares could be seen nearby, but they didn’t seem to be paying attention so it didn't matter. He followed the yellow earth pony behind her stand and barely managed to pull his pants down and pull out his dick before the horny mare launched forward and wrapped her lips around his flaccid member, starting to suck him hard.

"Aww, shit! Take it easy!" James said. Carrot Top just snorted and continued. She was acting like a calf sucking on its mother's udders. She scraped her hoof on the ground and neighed in a needy manner from time to time. Thanks to the wonderful ministrations provided by her wide tongue, his member started to become hard.

"Greedy one aren't you...?" James mumbled. He looked down at the mare as she look up at him with her big eyes and giggled while she still was blowing him. He moaned as he felt the insides of her mouth vibrate as she did that. She continued to lick and suck his member like a lollipop.

The feeling was finally too much and he released inside the happy sounding mare's mouth. She was gulping his spunk down like a champ. He removed his dick from the giggling, dazed looking mare's mouth and paid the bits he owed her. She was still in a daze, her marehood leaking a steady flow down her thighs and onto the ground. James took his wares and departed. He didn't get far before he heard a happy "Welcome back!" from the front. A small line of mares–giving him knowing looks and sultry smiles–greeted him when he came out from behind the carrot stand. He tried to look nonchalant as he continued on his way.
He got home soon after that. As he approached his front door, he suddenly got his daily flank treatment from the local mailmare. After Ditzy Do removed her backside from his face and giving him his letter, she flew off with her usual dopey smile on her face. James looked at the letter briefly before opening it to read it.

Dear Mr. Burrlap,

I require your presence for an important announcement.
Come visit me as soon as you are able.
From your beautiful and sexy mother-in-law

XOXO
Mrs. Rich

James walked down the familiar road leading to the richer side of town, where the wealthier ponies of Ponyville resided. But that didn't mean that life is any different for the rich ponies than it is for the rest of Ponyville. For example, James spotted a young colt and a filly playing together near a fancy looking playground.

What was slightly less familiar was the stallion wearing a fancy suit and monocle, mounting a young mare in a maid outfit, thrusting a few times into her before getting off with a content smile on his face.

The stallion straightens the wrinkles on his suit and walks away while the maid goes back to sitting on her haunches, keeping watch over her two young charges. As he reaches the end of the road, James thinks he sees another well-dressed stallion entering the playground and approaching the maid. Before he can confirm this however, he turns at a corner and goes down a side street towards a familiar looking mansion.

He went past the gate and walked straight up to the front door. He gave the bell a tug and heard the sound of it ringing. A familiar looking maid opened the door.

"Greetings Mr. Burrlap, my mistress has been expecting you."

"Hello... Shining Spot, right?" James said, a little unsure of himself. The maid nodded. James then produced his summons.

"Mrs. Rich asked for me. She said it was important," he said. The maid nodded again and beckoned him to follow her. He walked behind her, watching her swaying flanks before she stopped in front of a set of double doors.

"She is behind these doors, Sir James."

James nodded before he knocked on the doors.

"Come in," he heard Mrs. Rich, or what she preferred to be called, Mrs. Rich say through the doors.

He walked inside a spacious room with a big white desk and a big chair behind it. Some fancy furniture was spread around the room, including a big, comfy sofa.
He saw Mrs. Rich sitting behind said desk. She seemed to be busy signing and sorting some important papers. She looked up after a few moments and spotted James, giving him a big smile.

"James, honey, so good to see you. I have some great news for you!"

She eagerly jumped down from her chair and trotted around her desk, heading straight for James. Her flanks began to sway from side-to-side in an alluring manner as she did.

She led him towards the sofa and made him sit down on it. She jumped up and sat herself beside him, leaning against his side and looking up at him in a teasing manner.

"Guess what stud."

"What?"

"It took."

"What took?"

"Your seed honey. You got me knocked up, isn't that great? I just got the confirmation yesterday. You will be a proud father to my new foal."

She leaned down to lick his groin and play with his member and balls through his clothes.

"Now, all that is left is for you to let Diamond Tiara join your herd. Of course it will be my job to persuade you and try to get a good deal for it. Though, you knocking me up is a good start."

James moaned as she starting licking his tent in again, her hooves tugging at his pants to get them off. She succeeded in lowering his pants to free his penis. She wasted no time in swallowing his huge cock in an eager manner and started to bob her head.

"Hey, Mrs. Rich...please…stop it...." James tried to make her stop, but she just giggled at his futile attempts. She removed her mouth from his now saliva-coated member and moved herself so that she sat on his lap cowgirl style, her hind legs spread over his thighs and her ass cheeks rubbing against his throbbing length. She moved her plush rear up and down, making him hotdog her backside while she rubbed her teats against his groin.

"Time for my favorite part…negotiations."

She raised herself just enough to allow his stiff prick to rise up and point toward her pussy before thrusting herself down on him. They both let loose moans of pleasure as she rammed his member inside her in one go. Her tail happily wagged as she had a mini orgasm. She put her front hooves around his neck and pulled him into a passionate kiss, starting a heavy make out session while grinding her rump against his lap.

He sensually rubbed her cutie marks as she started to move up and down more. Then, his hands got a good grip on her plentiful light fushia ass cheeks, allowing him to take control of the pace by lifting her up and pushing her back down to meet every one of his own upward thrusts. Eventually, she pulled away from the kiss and pushed herself back a little, looking into his eyes as he continue to thrust.

"So, now onto business. Let's talk about adding my lovely daughter to your herd. I think that it would be best if she became your lead mare, though second place would not be so bad. I know my little filly has a bit of an ego, so maybe being second place would be good for her."

James moans began increasingly growing louder and more frequent. He tried to concentrate on what Mrs. Rich was saying, but every time he managed to gather his wits and focus, he would feel the horny mare’s pussy squeeze tightly and milk his stiff footlong, dispersing his train of thought in a sea of pleasure. This little mink was a crafty one.

"S-Sorry, *huff* but the lead mare spot is for Babs, *gasp* and I have a *moan* a p-pretty good idea who will take the second spot."

"So, you are saying that my daughter will only become an additional herd member?" she said with a false pout.

James groaned as Mrs. Rich pressed herself down firmly against his lap, grinding and twerking her flanks in a teasing manner. She slowly leaned forward, gently nuzzling the side of James face with her muzzle. James felt chills roll down his spine as he felt her warm breath across his ear.

"Any chance I could make you…reconsider?" she said playfully, right before she gently nibbled on his ear.

"N-N-No!" James cried as he squeezed his fingers harder around her pillowly soft rump, trying desperately not to succumb to the mischievous mare’s masterful ministrations. Mrs. Rich tapped her hoof on her cheek in thought, never breaking the sensual rhythm between herself and her human lover.

"Hmmm…how about giving me another foal then?"

"W-What?!"

"After I have popped out this little one," she said as she lightly patted her stomach, "you will give me another foal. Oh! And while you’re at it, impregnate Diamond Tiara when she goes into her first heat."

James blinked. He looked up incredulously at Mrs. Rich. She looking down at him.

"What?! I need to take the opportunity and get some class-A stud foals. If one or more of them turn out to be colts, all the better. They’ll make excellent bargaining chips for the future, especially if they’re even half as endowed as their dear daddy."

Spoiled Rich started to pump her hips faster, smacking her rear against his thighs at an alarming rate.

"So give me those foals stud. I will gladly become your mistress and pop out foals for you. I'm sure that in time, Diamond will also happily become nothing more than a cumhole for you.

"But at the moment, I want your seed inside my womb. I have missed the feeling."

She was gyrating her hips and riding him like a wanton slut, neighing and nickering like she was in heat, desperately craving a shot of his thick, white cream. It finally became too much for James to handle; with a grunt, he erupted inside the greedy mare. She shuddered in ecstasy as he fired rope after rope of his jizz inside her pulsating pussy. He couldn't help but grow addicted to the afterglow he feels whenever he shoots his load inside a horny mare.

He leaned back against the sofa, hands still gripping Mrs. Rich's soft, lush cheeks as adrenaline petered out and fatigue set in. Spoiled Rich laid her head to rest on James’ shoulder as her winking pussy continued to milk as baby batter from her lover’s length as possible. Her silky tail wagged from side-to-side across the human’s thighs, showing off her contentment.

Just as the debaucherous duo started getting comfortable, the sound of a familiar voice could be heard getting closer shortly before the double doors leading into the room were slammed open. A familiar pink filly marched into the room, though she nearly stumbled when she witnessed the scene before her. She stared with wide eyes as she saw James sitting half-naked on the sofa, her slightly disheveled mom straddling his lap, and cum dripping from her winking marehood and traveling down his member and balls.

The filly gasped harshly before storming up to the pair and looking at her mother with a pout.

"Mom?!"

Mrs. Rich blinked, only having now just shaken off her afterglow, before raising her head and looked behind her towards her daughter.

"Hello sweetie, I was just having a nice chat with my son-in-law. It’s good that you are here."
She removed herself from James’ dick–earning a wet plop as a small torrent of cum poured from her pussy–and moved to sit beside him. His cock was still hard and throbbing, making the filly look up towards it in wonder.

"We need to mold your petite pussy to fit his huge stallionhood. It’s better to start early, so come on up here and we can begin with your training."

Diamond blushed as she continued to look at his massive man meat. She nodded and jumped up on the sofa to get closer to his lap; she placed her front hooves on his thigh and looked at his throbbing member with big eyes.

"Go on sweetie, just like how we have been practicing on those dragon dildos mommy bought you."

Diamond Tiara didn't waste any more time. She used one hoof to bend James’ cock towards her, wrapped her small lips around the tip, and slowly pushed her head forward. Diamond went as far as she could go before slowly pulling back, starting a slow but steady back-and-forth rhythm along the top of the human’s member.

James began to squirm from the filly’s ministrations as her mouth slowly enveloped his dick, inch by painfully slow inch. Her mouth felt tight and wet like a virgin mare’s pussy. Meanwhile, Diamond timidly explored the tip of James’ dick with her tongue, licking it slowly from every angle she could as she grew accustomed to its strange, yet pleasant, salty flavor.

"Deeper sweetheart, show him what a good little mare you are! We have a reputation to uphold, you know."

'Yeah, of gold digging sluts....' James thought. His moans grew louder as Diamond pressed herself down further on his member; she couldn't help but gag, nearly choking as she stuffed his huge piece of meat further down her throat. James was certainly impressed. Looks like Sweetie Belle has some serious competition in terms of oral skills.

Soon enough, Diamond Tiara found herself desperately needing some air. So she removed her mouth from his now saliva coated cock and took a few deep breaths, her eyes fluttering as she displayed a distant look on her face. She licked her lips before opening her mouth wide, about to continue where she left off, but her mother stopped her by gently putting a hoof on her muzzle.

"I think he is ready, sweetie. As I said before, we have to form your petite pony pussy to fit his huge human hard-on."

Diamond nodded eagerly before scrabbling up on top of his lap, putting her front hooves on his chest as she raised herself up on her hind legs. His member rubbing against her lower stomach.

Mrs. Rich then used her hooves to guide his member towards her daughter’s entrance, rubbing it against her soaked vaginal lips. James and Diamond moaned at the feeling. The filly even gyrated her body, welcoming the new sensations and highlighting her newfound urges. Diamond Tiara then started to lower herself.

His tip parted her folds, pressing itself further inside the filly's tight and wet marehood. Diamond’s expression was that of bliss as her tongue was lolling outside her mouth as she sunk herself lower onto his lap. Eventually, her descent was halted as she felt James’ penis reach the opening to her cervix and she could go no further. James looked down at their union and noticed that the filly had almost reached halfway down his dick. Mrs. Rich seemed to notice that as well and put her fore hooves on her daughter's shoulders.

"That just won't do, sweetie. Let’s get your womb molded to to fit his wonderful member."

Spoiled Rich pushed her daughter down, forcing her to take in more of James’ hardened length into her pussy. James thought he heard a *plop* sound as the head of his member entered her womb. Diamond gave a shriek of pain and delight, cumming hard as her pussy became stretched further than she had ever felt before. Her quivering marehood sprayed her juices all over his groin.

"So how does my daughter feel Mr. James?" Gold asked.

"Tight," James replied. Mrs. Rich giggled.

"Well, that will change, in time. I'm sure that in no time, we will mold her marehood to fit your mighty member perfectly, making her an excellent addition to your herd. And who knows? Maybe she’ll rise through the ranks and take the second lead mare position, or possibly the alpha mare spot. She is my daughter, after all."

James grunted as Diamond, lost in her own little world of ecstasy, started to move her light purple hips up and down his member. However, her movements were more like quirky twitches, as being stuffed so fully with James’ shaft had left her hips feeling weak and numb. Fortunately, her mother managed to help move things along by lifting and pressing her daughter up and down James’ dick by her rear hooves, like she was some kind of fleshy onahole. The filly's tight interior felt way too good to James, forcing him to reach his climax faster than he would’ve liked.

His balls quivered, pulling inward towards him just before he, with a final grunt, spurted inside the squealing filly. Her petite womb was filled to capacity with just the first two spurts. With nowhere left to go, his cum burst forth from Diamond’s pussy, pouring down James’ penis and balls as they went.

As James continued to spurt rope after rope of cum into the filly’s womb, the excess cum continued to leak down his groin, eventually forming an ever growing puddle of cum on the floor. Meanwhile, Diamond’s stomach began to expand outward, bloating her stomach to the point that it looked like she swallowed a watermelon whole. Not long afterward, James finally stopped cumming, allowing the pink filly to relax and moan in contentment. Diamond patted her pregnant looking belly with a confused smile, before she finally succumbed to exhaustion and fainted.

Her mother simply giggled, noticing the happy smile on her daughter's face as the filly slouched to the side. She caught the filly and moved her to lay on the sofa beside James. His member gave a wet *plop* sound as it was removed from the filly's petite pussy. A river of cum gushed and leaked out of her womb as a result. The mature mare giggling increased as she saw the content smile James had.

"You liked her tight snatch didn't you?"

James hated to admit it, but he did. Looking down at the filly and her pregnant looking belly, he had no problem imagining breeding with this filly, even if she was a brat. Maybe becoming a mother will cool her down. But he still wasn’t going to make her lead mare or second mare.

His thoughts were interrupted when Spoiled Rich leaned down and started to lick and suck on his dick, cleaning off the combined juices of Diamond and himself. While she serviced James, Diamond Tiara's eyes fluttered open as she began to awaken from her orgasm induced state.

"Come here, Diamond. He is still hard, and I have more tricks to show you for pleasing stallions."

The little filly scrambled to the other side of his groin, following her mother’s example by eagerly sucking and licking the juices from his dick and balls.

"Doing good Diamond, but you will get a better reaction if you do it like this and this."

As James watched Mrs. Rich instruct her daughter, he couldn't help but wonder how to explain this to Babs Seed. It seems that a certain bratty filly will be joining his herd (not that he didn't have much to say about it.)

'Well, at least her snatch feels amazing.' he thought as he saw more of his sperm leak out from the filly's marehood.

For the next couple of hours, James’ time would be spent rutting the wealthy mother/daughter team silly, leaving them stuffed with his sperm and silly expressions on their faces. Walking out from the mansion, he passed the now blushing maid and onto the street.

"I think I need to talk to Cheerilee about this before I see Babs. Maybe she has some advice on the matter. She seems to be the most calm and rational member of the herd, too."

***

"SHE WILL WHAT?!" A certain school teacher shouted from inside the school. James had paid her a visit during after school hours. He found her staying behind to grade some homework from her students, a perfect opportunity to get some advice concerning his most recent addition to the herd.

He was now, however, starting to have second thoughts as he laid on the floor with his foot-long dick hotdogging the plush ass cheeks of the mare he came to see. However, it wasn’t because of the physical position he found himself him that made him feel nervous. In fact, in almost any other context, having such a sexy mare in prime position to–as the locals would say–buck his brains out would be one of the highlights of his day. No, what was truly bothering him at the moment was the sour disposition of the mare currently straddling him. The normally calm and collected school teacher was now looking at James with a furious gaze, her nose flaring and producing steam as she lay atop him, keeping him pinned to the ground.

When James had first entered the classroom, his lovely mare quickly went into a “happy-flirty” mode upon seeing her stallion and took his visit as a time to have some fun with him. So, she excitedly pounced on him, subsequently succeeding in pulling his pants down and straddling his lap. She was just about to lower herself down on him, when her human lover brought up the reason for his visit. James wanted to tell her this before she started to ride him, so he told her that it appeared that Diamond Tiara would be joining their herd. Needless to say, Cheerilee wasn’t very thrilled with the news. So here they were, Cheerilee looking down at him like a court judge before a suspected killer and waiting for an explanation.

"Talk mister. How is it that Diamond Tiara has to join our herd?"

James took a deep breath and started to explain.

Half-an-hour later, he was done with his story; he had chosen to remain where he lay while he told his story, not even moving to pull up his pants or cover up his length, which had grown soft during his tale. In that same time frame, Cheerilee had removed herself from him and was now walking around her desk in a circle. Every so often, she resorted to snorting and stomping her way around to display her displeasure while she was deep in thought. She finally stopped and turned to James, her face sporting a frustrated expression.

"Buck that good for nothing whorse! She seems to have all her roads covered with this. Since she’s pregnant with your foal, she legally has the right to enter the herd. But since she is married to another stallion, she can waive that right by having another member of her family take her place. No doubt if we try to refuse, she will spread harmful rumors about you being the type of stallion who fails to take responsibilities for his actions. Even worse, by rutting Diamond Tiara, you have in a way accepted her deal, so it will be even harder to break it off."

She snorted before walking up to James.

"I surely hope you didn't give her the alpha or beta positions."

"N-No, I didn't. Babs is the lead (alpha), and you’re the second (beta)."

Cheerilee nodded, looking satisfied.

"Figured that you would have Babs as your alpha; it seems that you developed a soft spot for her. Glad that I'm the beta, at least. So the spoiled filly will be just another herd member. I can live with that."

James nodded as his thoughts drifted towards Diamond Tiara. His flaccid member began to grow hard once again from thinking about the tight marehoods of the mother/daughter pair he had experienced earlier that day. This did not go unnoticed by Cheerilee. She marched up to him and poked him in his exposed thigh.

"Don't tell me you are thinking about that filly now?!"

James coughed in his hand and looked away in embarrassment. Cheerilee snorted before moving forward and grabbing his member with her front right hoof, slowly starting to stroke it.

"Don't tell me you prefer her spoiled pussy before my big, wet and soft one?"

"O-Of course not Cheerilee!" James grunted as she was jacking him off.

"Well mister, why don’t we make sure of that? When we’re done, the only one you’ll be thinking about is me," she said smirking deviously.

She then pounced on him and, like before, settled on top of him with his member placed firmly between her ass cheeks. She continued to slowly jerk James off by rubbing his hard member against her backside. She liked watching his tormented expression she teased him.

Unable to bear it any longer, James grabbed her luscious flanks, massaging her cutie marks and kneading her ass like a mound of dough. Every now and then, his fingers would lightly rub up against her tight pucker and marehood. If her happy moans weren’t enough of an indication of her pleasure, the trail of juices leaking from her puffy folds that were winking in excitement certainly were.

It was at this point where Cheerilee summarily decided to continue where they left off. She raised her plot a little so that his member was pressing at her entrance. She then pushed downwards, letting her folds part and his thick shaft slide inside her moist marehood, which began twitching and squeezing fervently upon James’ penetration.

Cheerilee started to ride her human lover like it was no tomorrow. She was happily moving her hips and pressing herself down on his groin, swallowing his member to the hilt. She was giving off cute, squeaky moans every time she pushed all the way down and his member hit the back of her womb. She thought she could feel her ovaries shudder and sing in delight, longing for his thick virile foal maker cream.

She soon started to feel his member throb inside her. Recognizing the tell-tale sign of his coming release, she began to ride him faster and harder, her teats pressing and rubbing against his stomach as she bent down to capture his lips with hers in a passionate kiss.

James moaned inside her mouth, shuddering as he finally came inside Ponyville's young teacher. She also moaned into his mouth as she felt him shoot load after load inside her womb. She pressed herself down on his groin and let her insides tug and milk him. She was laying on his chest, still kissing him hard until he eventually stopped cumming a minute later.

She raised herself to an upright position and looked down, purring in contentment at the distinct bulge that had formed in her stomach.

"As always, you know how to make a mare happy, James. By giving her plenty of cum to fill her womb, and then some."

She contently rubbed the bulge with one of her front hooves.

"H-Happy to...." James grunted as he still felt her insides squeeze and tugging at his member, trying to milk it more. Cheerilee giggled at that.

"I bet you say that to any whorse that you buck. Like that rich, whorse and cheating mare that you knocked up."

"B-But..." James stammered. However, Cheerilee silenced him by putting a hoof to his lips.

"Just be careful with who you buck and empty your thick, virile load into from now on, honey. There are plenty of wanton whorses that are eager to get their hooves on a stallion like you, and they are not above using getting knocked up as blackmail material against you."

Cheerilee slowly stood up, allowing James’ dick to slide out of her with a wet slurp. She moaned in disappointment as it slid out. James could see some of his cum leaking out from her winking, stretched pussy. She looked back at him over her shoulder.

"If your urges are really so uncontrollable, then maybe you should buck some other species that is harder to impregnate like gryphons, cows, dragons, or maybe an alicorn."

James thought back to his test results on his sperm and the number of races that he was capable of impregnating. Unknown to his beta, the list was rather long. He mentally groaned before he stood up and started to put on his clothes. He tried to not think about the sticky feeling he felt when he put on his pants over his smelly groin, stained in cum and mare juices. He just needed to cover himself and endure it until he managed to get home, take a shower and change.

But he knew that the musky smell he is now emitting might attract the attention of more horny mares as he walks down the street. Fortunately, he knew most of the shortcuts in town, so he had a good chance of sneaking past most of the mares that would be out and about at this time of day.

Even if it felt good having his member slide inside an eager mare's pussy, or getting a sloppy blowjob, he needed to head home. Babs Seed would be paying him a visit this evening and he needed to get ready for her arrival. He also needed to tell her about Diamond Tiara.

***

As expected, Babs Seed did indeed pay James a visit in the evening, and she proclaimed that she would be staying in town for a few days. She didn't waste any time and dragged him into his bedroom to buck her silly almost immediately after she arrived.

It didn’t take long for him to shoot his load insider her tight pussy; she loved it when he did that.

Now, they are resting in the afterglow of their lovemaking. With Babs’ lusts temporarily quelled, James chose this as the best moment to break the news to his alpha about Mrs. Rich and Diamond Tiara. Remembering Cheerilee’s initial reaction to the news, he steeled himself in case Babs happened to feel the same way.

As expected, she was not happy. She was laying on top of him and giving him an adorable angry pout as she scolded him. She hit him in the chest a few times to emphasize her displeasure, though it didn't hurt since she didn't really add that much force into it. He thought the scene was cute and silenced her by giving her a deep kiss on her lips. So now, instead of lecturing her human, she was snuggling him.

"Ah'm still angry at ya, ya know," She murmured into his chest, snuggling into it and basking in the warmth.

"I know," James replied, gently patting her on the head. She snorted and looked up towards him. James couldn’t help taking in the cute scene.

"So what do you think about Diamond Tiara joining?" James asked. Babs Seed snorted at that.

"Ah think that ya have bad taste in fillies," Babs answered, snuggling further into his chest before continuing to voice her opinion.

"It’s yer choice, but as yer Alpha mare, ah don't really like it. But with the blackmail Mrs. Rich has over yer head, ah guess ya have to let Diamond join. Why did ya have to buck her loose snatch?"

James couldn't help thinking about Mrs. Rich’s soft and wet marehood that milked his member in such a pleasurable way as well as Diamond Tiara's tight, petite one. His member starting to become alive again, and bopping Babs between her ass cheeks. She looked back behind her at his hardening length before looking back at him with a deadpanned expression on her pouting face. She hit him again in the chest.

"Stop thinking about those whorses!"

She then turned around and start licking and playing with his cock.

"Ah’m gonna make you forget all about those two. And then in the mornin’, we’re gonna head down to the hospital and make an appointment to see if you done made me pregnant. Ah have been sick for the last week, so that's promisin’."

Soon moans were heard from inside his bedroom as Babs started to make sure that his focus was on her and nopony else.

• End chapter

Author's Note

Author Note-
Heat have ended will come back a new one after 3 months in the event running for the leaves.
So next up is Babs visit to the hospital.
So stay tuned folks
Hope you are enjoying this story.

Edit by the helpful Starblade, give him a warm applause
Update: 27/2 2016 have edit so that the cannon Mrs Rich took my OC place

Also big thanks goes to Stardust for editing this chapter and also chapter 18-19. Thanks man!