Exie's second Wind

by Theater Critic

Rating: mature
Tags: Other, Romance, Sex, Original Character, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Length: 1213

After Windwaker breaks up with his marefriend, he finds a mare, Exie, that will show him love and unvirginity.

Windwaker just broke up with his marefriend, and falls into depression, thinking about dark thoughts.

But when he meets a mare named Exie, she shows Wind a life of true love and unvirginity.

A Clopfic for IMJUSTANOTHERBRONY

Published 2013-06-30 18:10:02 UTC
Last updated 2013-06-30 18:10:02 UTC

Chapter 1

After a long day of working in the donut shop, I usually clean the dirt bar top with the pink frosting and the wads of gum on it. I get a washcloth and wipe it clean, scrubbing off the nasty things ponies leave on. My tears dropped on the bar. I was depressed after my marefriend cheated on me, that little slut. I banged on the table with my hoof and put my head down.

Cheer up, Wind, my conscious told me. She wasn't good enough for you.

I picked my head up and wiped the tears off my face. I continued to scrub the bar clean.

I was almost done until I heard the bell on top of the door ring and the door closing. I looked up and saw a mare. Not any kind of mare, but a beautiful one. She had a kind of pale skin, with red hair and black shades on it, and baby blue eyes. She had some kind of heart for her cutie mark, black pantyhose on her hind hooves, and black gloves on her front hooves with some sort of holes on top.

I quickly got a wingboner, but I quickly hid it. The mare noticed and giggled as she sat down.

"What can I get you?" I said to her.

"Just a cappuccino." She said. I went to the kitchen and got out a coffee cup. I poured the hot liquid into the cup and served it to the mare.

I turned around and was about to head into the kitchen again until she said, "Name's Exie."

I faced Exie and said, "Windwaker, but you can call me Wind." I got myself a donut and sat next to her. We had a bit of small talk, followed by silence and even more small talk.

"So, you live around here?" Exie asked.

"I live down the street here, in one of those apartments." I said, pointing at the three tall buildings.

"Well, I'm done with my coffee, and I have nothing better to do, so can I visit your place?" Exie asked. I was nervous and surprised. We just met, and already she wants to visit my home!

"Alright." I said. I took the cup of coffee and put it in the sink. Me and Exie walked out of the donut shop. "It's surprising that the streets of Manehattan at night is not bustling tonight. It's usually stuck in traffic!" We walked across the street and got to my apartment building, and, eventually, the apartment room. Then, we walked inside. It was pitch black, so I turned on the lights.

"Nice place." Exie said.

"Thanks." I replied. Exie looked around the apartment, gazing at the TV and the bedroom. "You need any water?"

"Nah, I'm good." She said as she sat down on the couch. She turned on the TV and surfed the channels. I sat down next to her, putting a gap between us. As she was busily looking for something to watch, I slowly scooted next to her, until my coat touched hers.

Exie turned her head to me. "You know, your kind of cute." Then, she did the most outrageous thing I've never expected. She leaned towards me and kissed me. Not on the cheek, but full lip action! I was overwhelmed at this.

"Y-You like me?"

"Of course. You're really cute, and really sweet." Exie turned off the TV. "So, you want to have some fun in bed?" Exie said with a smirk.

"I-I don't know." I said sheepishly.

"Why not?"

"B-Because." The rest was whimpered.

"Excuse me? Couldn't quite catch that."

"BECAUSE I'M A VIRIGN!" I said out loud. I quickly covered my mouth.

"Really?" Exie sat down next to me. "For a stallion as handsome as you, I thought you had sex with many mares."

"Well, I'm very shy, and I don't see a lot of ponies, not even my family a lot."

Exie stood up. "Well, after I'm done with you tonight, you will no longer be a virgin." Exie brushed her tail on my nose seductively. She walked into my bedroom, as I followed her. We both got on the bed, her on top of me.

"So, I will give you the experience of sex, so you can have a taste of them." Exie said. She seductively and slowly took off her pantyhose and her gloves. "You ready?"

"Yeah, I guess." I said nervously.

"First, let's have a look at your stallionhood." Exie got between my legs and examined my erected penis. "It looks ready." Exie drew near it and licked it. I had some funny feeling that I have never felt before. It felt erotic and good.

"I feel ready to begin." I said.

"Good." And with that, Exie got into position and thrusted her pussy in me. I screamed in pain, but it felt really good, though my penis was throbbing.

"Did you like that? Did I go too hard?" Exie said.

"No, no. Keep going." I said. Exie pushed her vagina in my red cock for a while. As each thrust came, it became less hurtful, and more of a good feeling. Soon afterward, Wind felt something in his dick. "Exie, I think I'm going to cum."

"Do it!" Exie said excitedly as the penis gushed the semen inside her. Wind moaned loudly. "How did you like that?"

"It...was...good." Wind said.

"Now you're no longer a virgin!" Exie said with a grin.

"Is that all?" I asked. "It was short for an 'Experience.'"

"Nope. Now I give you something don't usually do to others." Exie went between my legs.

"Wait, are you-"

"Yes. I'm giving you a BJ and a hoof job." Exie grabbed my penis. She examined it carefully, and started licking it like an ice cream cone. Then, she put the whole thing in her mouth. I felt really weird, because my dick is in a moist area. She bobbed her head up and down, covering my penis in saliva. She added pressure to it, which made me feel really good.

I moaned in delight. "Yes! Harder." Exie did it harder and harder until finally I gushed out semen. Surprisingly, girls like to eat stallion semen, which is kind of gross, but I think I know the reason.

After the blowjob, it was time for the finale: the hoof job. Exie just moved on to that without saying a word. She used both hooves and put them on the sides of my dick. She began to rub it up and down, harder and harder.

Now, I want you to guess what happens next. No, seriously, think of what's going to happen next.

If you didn't guess me cumming, get the fuck out of here.

"T-That was great." I panted. Exie laid down next to me and planted a kiss on me.

"Do you mind if I slept here for the night?" Exie said.

"Yeah, sure." I replied. We both got under the covers and snuggled together. "Hey, Exie?"

"Yeah, Wind?"

"What do you do as a day job?"

Author's Note

Wow. This is probably one of the worst Fanfics I've written. Totally flawed everywhere.

But I still enjoyed it

Exie will always be the hottest OC ever!