MLP: Sins Of Equestria

by MrSynndicated

Rating: teen
Tags: Dark, Comedy, Romance, Adventure, Random, Alternate Universe
Length: 3283

The manuscripts to the comic I'm drawing on Furaffinity.net

These are the manuscripts to the comic I'm drawing called "My Little Pony: Sins Of Equestria" on FurAffinity.net, they're not very well written or anything as their just manuscripts I use as a base for when I draw the actual pages, things change between the written and drawn forms.

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2013-06-28 23:51:03 UTC

The New Face In Equestria

*“Chapter 1: New Faces In Equestria.”

Part 1: “The Arrival.”*

The train bumped along casually as it followed the tracks through the tunnels up the mountain, the various ponies in the passenger cars chatted to each other normally. Alone in a seat all to his own a cloaked figure sits looking out the window, the cloak covered  him from the view of any nearest him. several of the ponies had noticed him since he stuck out against them, the only thing anyone could see of him was his hoof out the sleeve of the cloak, holding a single rolled up parchment. he breathed softly watching it fog up against the window as he looked out over the place, he had never been here or even thought of going till this parchment had come summoning him. the clip of hooves came closer to his booth before pausing beside it, the voice calling to him was young and lined with intelligence. “That parchment, you must be the one summoned by princess Celestia.”

he turns to look at the one who had spoken to him finally, the slender legs and light purple skin moving up to her hair highlighted by the mixture of purples with a pink strike beside the long horn atop her head. He looked into the deep purple of her eyes before answering her question, “Yes, I received this letter asking I come to a place called Ponyville. You must be Twilight Sparkle then, my escort.” he turned to face the opposing seat holding out a hoof to her, “Pleasure miss.” she smiles shaking his hoof before taking up a seat across from him, crossing her legs as she looked at him with a kind smile. “May I ask why you wear that cloak mister...” she rests her hooves beside her as he shifts to seat himself better before answering her again, “Synn, Princess Celestia said I may need to use some caution because of what I am.” he reaches up pushing the hood down to reveal his face, the dark brown hair rustling from the removal. the polished horns beside his head glint lightly as the light hits his face, the square glasses setting atop his nose as his green eyes looked at her.

She raises an eyebrow seeing why exactly he wore it, “I see now, We have no sheep here.  One zebra and only a couple of donkeys among hundreds of ponies.” she waves a hoof ideally at the ponies behind them chattering, he smiled chuckling lightly. he nodes glancing back as the train begins to make a turn on it’s course, “I suspected as much, Celestia wrote I should spend time getting to know some ponies here and report to her what I find.” Twilight giggles softly hearing him, the smile on her face bright. “Sounds like she has you on what she did me and my friends.” he smiles feeling the train shifting as it takes the turn, twilight shifting a little with it leaning on her hoof. he looked her over as her vest moved with the train, the light bounce of her breasts caught his eye though he kept the look to himself. he saw her eyes scanning over him trying to observe but the cloak made it hard.

“I don’t mean to be rude but can I examine you a little, I’ve never seen a sheep either nor are there any in my books like you and it intrigues me.” reaching up to tip her glasses down her nose as he smiles, “I understand, I don’t mind in the least.” he shifts to move the cloak from his shoulder, letting it fall to the bench seat behind him. a smile spread across her face as he came into light, she shifted forward on the bench resting on the edge as he reached down unclipping the snaps to his vest. as it came open she saw the extent of the cotton fluff that covered the upper part of his chest to his shoulders, running over and down his back stopping at the small of his back. she reached out picking up his forearm in hand, feeling the cotton fluff from his elbow to his wrist. she leans little forward feeling the fluff on his chest, running her hoof down his stomach.

She paused a moment at his waist, he looked at her resting his arms atop the booth. “I’ll restrain myself as best I can.” she glances up at him seeing the look upon his face before nodding, she pushed her glasses back up before examine closer. she rested her hooves on his thighs examine his sheath. “May I ask what..” he smiled catching her before she could finish, “I’m what you’d call a cross-breed, My father was a wolf and my mother was the sheep.” he felt her hoof brush against his sheath, their eyes meeting as she looked up to him. “My underlining anatomy is more wolf in nature but my features are more sheep, but being male I inherited my father’s breeding anatomy.” she nodes looking back down, he glances over the edge of the booth watching the other ponies at the other end.

He felt the cool touch of the steel shoes she had upon his sheath, coaxing him out unintentionally at least he believed so. he refrained a smile as his tip slipped free followed shortly by the rest of his shaft, it leaned over his thigh as he restrained any possible thought to make it progress further then that. “I’ve studied pony anatomy but your something new..” her words came out slowly as she traces her hoof over the side of his shaft, he could feel the cold against his base. “I think i need to examine further but not here..” she says swallowing quickly before seating herself again in the booth, he nodded starting to button up his vest again. “I understand Twilight, I’m sorry if anything felt too weird.” she shook her head breathing normally again as she regained her normality.

“No it’s just the only male I had to examine was spike and since he’s gone to find his dragon side it’s been a while since I’ve had a specimen.”  he nods in understanding finishing the buttoning of his vest, sitting back against the booth glancing out the window. “To restore some normality to what remains of our train ride I wanted to ask you about this place, Ponyville.” she brightens up some at the question glancing out the window spotting apple acres’ fields over a hill, “It’s a normal place most of the time, Every now and then troubles arise but me and the girls handle it as it comes.” he looks out over the landscape as the train gets closer, as it crests a rise the town could be seen below lively with those who lived there. “Anything to watch out for?” he asked looking back at her from the window, she snickered lightly thinking about it for the moment. “Only one I can think of and you’ll meet her when we get there.”

Part 2: “The Party On Hooves.”

He chuckled watching the look on her face as they came around and the train started slowing, he picks up the cloak starting to slip it back over before twilight stops him. “Oh you’ll be fine, the other ponies might ask questions but with me as your escort they won’t be too nosy yet.” they brace for a moment as the train comes to a halt at the station, the other ponies filing out normally while the two sit waiting. after the car was empty he motions with his hoof for her to move first being a gentlecolt, “Ladies first.” standing from her place she bows lightly before moving out of the booth, Synn standing to follow her to the doorway. her hooves clip on the wooden planks of the train station as she steps out into the bright afternoon sunlight, stepping aside she watches as Synn steps out blinded for a moment by the sun. that one moment was all she needed to hop over the ledge of the platform, the cloud of confetti and streamers flew from the small black cannon followed by the slender pink pony leaping from behind it.

“Welcome to Ponyville!!!” she was actually so close to his face he could smell the cakes she loved so much, he felt her lips press against his as they were blanketed by the shower of confetti, as the confetti settles onto the planks he finally got a good look at this new pony. Twilight stepping to the side to face between them as she motions twords her friend, “Synn, This is my friend Pinkie Pie.” he extends a hoof to her looking her over as she shakes his furiously, the light pink of her skin and the un-tamable maroon mane bounced as she hopped around with the handshake. “Hi, nice to meetcha!” he smiles getting his hoof free of her grasp as twilight giggles lightly at the two, “Can I show you around? Can I? Can I?” she hopped around the two in circles as they shruged starting off down the platform to the steps, pinkie hopping along trapping Synn between herself and twilight.

“Most of the town we’ll get to see in time, the main street here has most of the shops though Applejack’s orchard is were we get most of our food.” Twilight stated like she had done it a million times as pinkie bounced around beside him, he looks around watching the various ponies that were examining him between the two. “Oh, Twilight let’s go to my shop! We can have some cake then go see Applejack!” pinkie pie announces bouncing backwards in front of twilight helping convince her, she looks over at Synn seeking his opinion. “I could go for something to eat.” she smiles looking back to pinkie as a cheer erupts from her leading the way to her sweets shop, Synn trailing behind twilight finishing his examinations of these two. Although he wouldn’t admit it to them the swish of twilight’s tail gave him a good idea, pinkie’s bouncing around didn’t help either.

After the three were fully inside the shop Synn pushed the door closed with his back hoof, pinkie bouncing around behind the counter. He walked over to the main table next to twilight, “So how do you like Ponyville so far?” Twilight asks as he moved standing beside her, he looks to her as she pushes up her glasses. “I can tell so far I’m going to be examined for a distance and up close a lot.” she giggles before looking at the clock on the wall, gasping before galloping twords the door. “Sorry but I must leave for a few, I forgot to report to Princess Celestia you had arrived.” pinkie bounces over to the table with a couple of plates of cake, setting them down she waves at twilight. “I’ll keep him occupied!” twilight hurries out the door as it clicks behind her, the two nibbling on their pieces of cake.

“So, who are you that the princess asked you to come?” she says excitedly looking up from her cake, the frosting smeared on her cheeks as she smiled. he chuckled lightly looking at her swallowing down the mouthful of cake he had first, “Well from what she wrote me, my species is apparently none existent here.” she nodes vigorously munching on her cake again, looking up at him she looks him over seeing why. “Yeah, I could see that. I know everypony in Ponyville and there’s no sheep, a zebra and a couple of donkeys but nope, no sheep.” he takes the last bite of his cake, wiping the frosting off when he was finished. she looks at his empty plate and up at him, “Want something to drink?” before he can even answer she’s already bouncing over twords the main bar area, he watches her bouncing over his eye catching to her as her tail swished with the movement.

she glanced back to ask him what he wanted catching the looks he was giving her before he glanced away, “I totally forgot to ask what you wanted.” he glances back over at her from looking around her shop, she had turned back but he noticed her tail flicking slightly showing off. “Some coffee would be fine, I haven’t had anything since I got on the train.” he sets his hooves up on the table looking around as she moves around the counter making the coffee before heading back over holding the cup, she sets it in-front of him moving around to his shoulder whispering in his ear. “See anything else you like?” she moves back around him to the counter, glancing back at him as she sets her front hooves on the counter reaching for something on the other side.

Part 3: “Sweet Street Treats.”

he grins as she leans on the counter, “I told twilight I’d entertain you, and that happens to be my specialty.” he picks up the coffee taking a sip watching her tail swishing lightly, he grins as he looks on enjoying the view. “Would that include some licks and what comes after.” he says setting the empty cup down on the table before moving slowly around it’s edge to move twords her, she smiles back at him hearing the clip of his hooves. “Yes, I love making ponies happy though no one really asks for anything beyond a quick clopjob or a blow.” he nodes as he nears her, the swish of her tail now drawing him in as he eyed what she offered. “Well I’m not most...” she felt the brush of his hoof moving her tail aside as she leaned on the counter, closing her eyes as she felt his warm breath on her pussy.

she gritted her teeth restraining a moan as the tip of his tongue searched her out brushing her clit as he licked and tasted her offering, sitting down behind her as he licked moving to taste all she had and more. he grinned as he drew back for a moment licking his lips, letting more of his tongue hang out he moved closer. “Now let’s find that good spot.” he breathed against her wetness making her shiver, a moan slipped free as she felt what he really wanted as the tip of his tongue penetrated her folds and slipped in deeper with each lick. as he reached deeper inside her the tip of his tongue drawing out moans as they tasted all of her, she moved her arms gripping the other side of the counter as she felt his tongue touching her g-spot. leaning her head back as moans escaped her faster now, the feel of Synn’s cold steel hooves on her thighs making it so much better against her heat.

he listened as her breathing got faster with the moans trailing out in chains now, her hips moved against his nose with his licks into her depths. he smiled to himself as he thought she tasted kinda like cake ironicly, her back arched tossing her head back as she pushes her hips against his face. he could feel the rush of her flowing as she orgasmed holding his face hostage, her thighs were stronger then he would have guessed. withdrawing his tongue so he didn’t suffocate in her thighs as he licked at her, the sweet taste of her like eating a mouthful of skittles. the swipes of his tongue cleaned her heat of her sweetness, the sweet taste hanging on his lips as he sat back catching his breath. her hooves clipped on the ground as she slipped from the counter to rest, leaning against the front of it now on the floor she looked back at him as he licked his face of her. “I have never...had a tongue like that....so deep in me before...” she breathed in extacsy turning twords him, her eyes flickering over him as she moves closer.

“Well I’ve never had anyone who tasted like cotton candy yet.” he says getting his muzzle cleaned of her, looking up as she reaches him leaning nearer as if to kiss him. the slow swipe of her tongue cleans a small spot on his jaw he missed near his neck, “Now it’s my turn to taste something different.” she whispered in his ear as she looked at him, laying down before him eyeing the prize between his legs. she slow trail of her smooth tongue tracing up his shaft made him twitch alittle, her tongue moving and tracing every inch of flesh she could taste. he watched her knowing she would milk him of all she wanted, he no doubt too that’s exactly what she wanted too. to him it felt like her tongue was caressing every inch of exposed flesh, the smooth licks of her tongue as she tasted the beads of pre she worked from him. looking up at him as she licks it from her lips, “tastes like....pineapples.”

she moves back down setting her lips on his head sucking lightly, her tongue slipping out down his shaft as she moves him in little by little almost savoring the taste. synn leaned back on his arms letting her get closer as she works her way lower, the tip of her tongue brushing his base as she nears. his smile widens as he watches her taking him fully in, her starter pace slow and deep taking him into her throat. his eyes closed as her movements quickened with her lust, her tongue messaging as her lips held him in to her throat. he could feel it building now as her lust infected him further, the knots of his base swelling as his balls throbbed. she lifted herself to look at him with a sly smile plastered across her face, setting her lips back around his head as she worked faster now almost drawing it from him.

pinkie felt the throb of his shaft before it came, the thick ropes of cum splashing the back of her throat filling her mouth. the sweet taste of pineapples sat on her tongue as she drank it down, not a drop escaped her as she licked and cleaned his shaft all the way to his base. pulling free she licked at the knot of his base finishing her cleaning and licking, she sat back licking her lips breathing heavily. “Sweet like peaches and thick like cream.” she breathed as the two looked at each other, his knot shrinking and disappearing as he looked at her.  as he stood to give her more a knock was heard on the door, pinkie’s head turned with a look of despair. it disappeared though as she got up and headed for the door to see who was there, she smiled seeing two standing there. “Well hey you two, what’cha doing here?”

“We needed some of your special sweets pinkie pie, rarity and applejack said they’d help us in our ‘time’ right now.” pinkie nodded her grin returning as she already knew what they wanted, backing up alittle forgetting for a moment as she lets the two in. synn moving to the counter to hide himself alittle as the two mares entered the shop, pinkie gasps alittle as she sees synn again remembering, “Oh I totally forgot, Girls this is Synn the sheep!” the two come through the door as pinkie closes behind them, they bow lightly to him blushing madly. “Hey’ya, I’m Sweetie Bell.” the other spreading her wings as she bows, “And I’m Scootaloo.”

End Part 1.