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A Mellow Encounter

by Naeruiih
A new pony has moved to Ponyville. After a run in with Rainbow Dash, her embarrassing secret is quickly revealed. Instead of the mocking she expects, Rainbow Dash and her friends try to help her overcome her problem. Will they succeed?

A new pony has moved to Ponyville. Mellow Note has had little time to acquaint herself with the other ponies around town. A chance encounter with Rainbow Dash reveals a very embarrassing secret. Will the new pony in town finally be able to overcome her problem? How will the rest of the mane six be able to help her? There is one way to find out.

I've made several updates to improve the flow and make it read a lot easier from the previous version.

Once again I ask that that those of you who read it to please comment when you are done. I would like to know if my updates have improved the readability and flow any better and to see what still needs work.

Everyone
Complete
Slice of Life
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
 
SMOA

8229 words: Estimated 41 minutes to read

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