The Afterlife Of David Montes

by Unforgiving

Rating: teen
Tags: Crossover, Alternate Universe, Human, Main 6, Gore, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Princess Cadance, Dark, Comedy, Other, Romance, Changelings, Shining Armor
Length: 3556

Sometimes, there can be second chances at life, A good Example is David...

Sergeant Montes, David

K.I.A at New York, Times Square

This is the story of David Montes, right after being killed at Town Square. Let's see how the encounter between Ponies and an experienced Military Soldier Comes up...

Published 2013-07-01 21:20:02 UTC
Last updated 2013-07-10 20:01:24 UTC

Prologue

I was brought to a small room, with a window outside, and Blackburn sitting in a chair. Then They made me sit on a chair, while my hands were cuffed, It looked like Interrogation. I sat down in a chair right in front of Backburn, one of my unit's members. Guess they were finally arresting him or something. Either way, I didn't know what was going to happen...

"You saw this man shoot his commanding officer, right?" One of the men spoke

Blackburn just acted like he didn't know, for a very brief amusement

"Just knock off the bullshit, sergeant. Didn't Dima set you up?"

There was a very brief silence

"Didn't he talk you into shooting Cole and then escape to Paris where he triggered the nuke? Wasn't that Dima?"

"Solomon has the Nuke". Said Blackburn

I knew where this was going, although I perfectly knew Solomon Did have the nuke

"Solomon Is one of Ours" Said the Other man

Right before he Continued talking, Blackburn looked at me, Me looking at him, I knew he had an escape plan. It was damn crazy, but It was worth a shot

"He is an overseas asset, and he has been for years. We put him next to Al-Bashir for information."

Blackburn got up, and Raised himself and his voice

"You're shitting me. He's a murderer. You saw the Video" Blackburn said

Another man pushed him back to his seat, handcuffing him in the seat at the same time the other guy explained.

"Well, you get the good with the bad when it comes to assets, and sometimes sacrifices must be made for the greater good"

"Isn't that your angle?" the other guy asked as a tormenting question towards Sergeant Blackburn

"Jesus Christ. The nuke is Still out there. Solomon is still out there. You can't just walk away from the threat!" said Blackburn

"You might be right Sergeant. Maybe Solomon was too close to the fire. But I assure you we're on top of the situation. The russians are a clear and present threat"

The man took his phone, and answered it

"Yes?"

"What do you mean you lost a train?"

They both then walked away, leaving us both sitting here. Blackburn turned his head towards the wall, where maps and photos were placed. Then he took his head towards me

"The train map Inside the bank vault, what was the time written on it?" Asked blackburn to me

"Umm... 6.02, why?" I said

"Dave, you trust me?" Blackburn asked

I pointed out the fact that he called me Dave, but It was just a nick name. Of course, I said

"Oh yeah" While nodding my head

"Alright, Follow my lead" Blackburn said

Then a guard and the same man Both came. Blackburn kicked his foot, and Slammed his forehead to the table, leaving him Knocked out. The guard grabbed me, But blackburn took one of the table's mountings and Slammed him in the head. I took a gun from the guard's Body, and Followed Blackburn. We both ran out of the room, and jumped out of the window before we got shot.

"Aw fuck, Come on Move it!" I said

"The train's coming" I told Blackburn while running towards the Station

I knew I couldn't get in the train, So I shouted

"Get on the fucking train Blackburn. You've got one Shot. Go!"

He ran across the street, and then I saw a train Come. I knew it was obviously it. He then Jumped off the wall, and landed on the train. After that, I didn't see Blackburn...

I proceeded Towards the city, and I found, strangely, a poster of My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic at one of the street's corners

Thinking back of How my Daughter loves this... But No matter, I had to help Blackburn In any way. I found a police car, and I had to take it. I actually wasn't chased, weird. I proceeded towards the city with the police car, which that was the next train station.

The train wasn't arriving, and I heard gunshots in the sewers, So I followed the gunshots.

Then I saw him.

I saw Blackburn, that Old crazy bastard, at a sewer exit. I then drove towards him. I pulled over

"Don't ask. Get in!" I said

"Come on, they're getting away!" I seemed to snap him off his tiny trance

Blackburn got up and Got in the police car

"Police scanners are talking about armed men In times Square." I told Blackburn

"It's gotta be the PLR. Buckle Up" I said

I dodged a Lot of cars. It was about 7 Pm, But Damn, still Busy. It was Manhattan After all. Especially Time Square.

We were chasing Solomon, situated in an SUV. Blackburn tried shooting it, What a lousy shot

But then The Van Was blocking more of the way, and we crashed

I was almost flying out of the car because of that crash. At least I didn't. I saw blackburn getting out of the Wreckage, aswell as Solomon

There were people all around us, considering we were in the middle of Town Square

"He's Coming. He's coming, He's Coming!" I said Desperately

Then Solomon waked towards us. And he said

"So, Who dies first?"

I became angered

"YOU'LL NEVER WIN!" I shouted

I saw solomon lift his gun, and Aiming it at my forehead. I noticed a loud bang.

After that, Everything instantly went Black.

I didn't know where I was. Was I lost in my thoughts? I didn't know. But then, I saw A light. A small, light, and I started to walk towards it.

No, I couldn't walk.

When I tried to Get up from my feet, I noticed they would only lift me up only a little

The light slowly became Dimlier, and Dimlier

"No..." I hissed

I knew I had a second chance at afterlife, but it was slowly leaving.

After the Light became So dim, I knew I couldn't reach it in time.

I had lost my Second Chance In life.

After the light went out, Everything was black...

What was going to happen? I don't know. But I knew It was going to be bad

But It wasn't.

then A huge White Hole appeared right in my feet, and I fell

After that, I noticed I was alive, not a wound that I felt.

I slowly opened my eyes...

"What the..." I said, amazed by what I was witnessing by my very own eyes

I saw a green field, with birds flying around and chirping at the same time. I thought was in heaven

I tried to get up, but It seemed I couldn't

When I tried to stand on all fours, it felt like I was already standing. Weird

I looked at my hands, and found I shouldn't use the word 'hands' anymore from my situation.

I was scared to death, knowing I was an animal, and not a human

I tried to walk on all fours, and It worked perfectly.

Well, almost perfectly

there were, obviously a few trips and accidents, but I got the hang of it pretty soon.

I then found a river at my left, and I proceeded towards it to drink some water, since I felt thirsty

But just before I would Drink it, I noticed my Own face was...

A horse

But what icked me the most was that I was smaller than an average horse...

I was a Pony

I widened my eyes, Since It would be extremely embarrasing for someone to look at me

it was extremely out of the ordinary to see a white Brown pony with a Dark brown tail and Hair, or Mane, in other words

But what was the most interesting thing about this new body was that I had a horn.

"A horn? What the fuck?" I said, without noticing, but then I covered my mouth

"I... I can talk? What?"

This couldn't be possible, I was a Pony... a Unicorn pony... That could talk....

No matter, It was Weird as fuck, I know, but I coudn't let myself freak out

I looked at some mountains, hoping to relax my mind off these odd things

But It just made it more Odd

There was a castle hanging on a mountain...

Since There was civilization, there would be people that I may find answers to.

Then I made my way to the castle...

Chapter 1

Dave Sighed "This is just Fucked up..."

But he still had no choice; He couldn't stay forever in the plains.

He walked toward the mountain, but heard a few people talking at his left

"Finally, at least some people I can ask question to this... Weird body" David Said to himself

"A-And then..." A woman was heard bursting to laughter

"That's great, Rainbow, but stop scaring me like that" Said another woman

"Huh, at least I can ask questions" Said David

As he jumped through a wall, he was caught being stared at by a Pegasus and a Unicorn

It was an alleyway, purple, and a little dark. It faced a treehouse of sorts, and the wall was between two Ponyville houses.

"Oh shit, Looks like I'm not the only one as an animal" Dave said outloud

Surely it was weird as hell, but he Knew they could talk, based upon His experience with himself

"Umm... Can we help you, sir?" The purple Unicorn said

"Uhh... yes, I need some help" Dave said

"What kind of help?" The Blue Pegasus Spoke

"Where am I...?" Asked Dave

"Ponyville..." Said the purple Unicorn while staring at Dave

"Uhh... Why are you staring at me?" Said Dave

"Oh... Hehe, sorry" Said The unicorn while blushing

"Anyway... I'm gonna go to sugarcube corner, see ya around Twi" Said the Rainbow maned Pegasus

"Okay, bye rainbow" Said The Unicorn

"So uhh... I take it that she's your friend" Said Dave

"Yeah... she is" Said The Unicorn

"So, What's your name?" Said Dave

"Twilight Sparkle, Haven't you heard of me?" Said Twilight

"If I don't know anything About Everything in here, Nope" Said Dave

"Wow, where have you been?" Said Twilight

"I... I don't know, honestly" Said Dave

"No no no, It's okay" Said Dave

"anyways, I told you my name, what's yours?" Said Twilight

"Da-" He was cut off, thinking it would be odd to use a human name, So he made one up

"Stone Lance?" Said Dave

"Hmm... Nice to meet you, Lance" Said twilight, while offering a shake with hooves with a smile on her face

"Nice to meet you too, Twilight" Said Dave, Or rather, Lance

Lance and Twilight both shook hooves, while twilight being really sweaty

"Hey, You ok?" Said Lance

"Yes, yes, I'm uhh... Fine" Said Twilight

"Okay... Anyways, do you know a place where I can sleep tonight?" Asked Lance

"You can sleep at my place" Twilight said almost inmeadietly

"Thanks, but, I don't really need to disturb you in particular" Said Lance, a little bit of flerting in that sentence

"Oh, don't be so Modest, You can sleep at mine until you find a place to sleep" Said Twilight

Lance cocked an eyebrow "you're just going to keep insisting, aren't you?"

"Yep" Said Twilight

"Well, I have no choice..."

"Great! I'll see you at nightfall" Said Twilight

Twilight then ran off to a gingerbread house with 'eeks' and more excitement reactions

"Guess she digs me, wow... that was fast" said Lance

As lance stepped out of the alleyway, he found a lot of Mares giggling at him

"Okay... this is weird" Said Lance while walking

As he walked forward, he noticed a White unicorn with a blue mane coming up to him, while twilight was on her side

"Oh, hey Lance" said Twilight

'Jeez, now she calls me Lance, As if I was his Friend for Five years...' Thought Lance

"So, this is Him?" Said The White Unicorn

"So uhh... What's going on?" Said Lance

"I'm pretty sure you know about it" Said The White unicorn

"Oh... Yeah, that" Said Lance while blushing a little

"You know, you're lucky" Said The Unicorn

"Why? You Uhh..." Said Lance

"Whoa, No no, I'm her brother" Said The white Unicorn

"Oh, Sorry heh" Said Lance

"It's just a lot... and I mean a lot of stallions have been dating her, you know, She's kind of lucky she's a cute mare" Said The White Unicorn

"Anyways, Even though you know my name, I'm Stone Lance" Said Lance

"My name is Shining Armor, captain of The Royal Guard" Said Shining

"Oh wow, Never expected this Place to have a Militia" Said Lance

"Why? You've been in any army Before?" Said Shining

"Yeah, I have...." Said Lance

"Oh wow, we could use someone like you, with Experience" Said Shining

"Well, Alright" Said Lance

"So, when does the training starts?" Said Lance

"Now" Said Shining

Before Lance knew it, His hoof was grabbed by shining and was about to throw him off, but Lance used his back hooves to kick Shining in his stomach and giving him a chance to headdbutt him, and finally pinning him in an executionl form

Every mare Stared at Lance, Since he just pinned one of the best at Equestria

Twilight was blushing Blood red

"Wow, you're pretty good" said Shining

"Thanks, but I could use More training" Said Lance

"You know, I like you" Said Shining

"Why?" Said Lance

"You're not like other Guards, who don't give me much of a challenge. Thanks to the training, they're better off..." Said Shining

"Well, again, I'm glad I got that out of my system." Said Lance

"Wow lance, where did you learn such skills?" Said Twilight

Lance wanted to impress the mare even more, and since the Hand to Hand Combat he knew of, wasn't of this world...

"I taught Myself How to" said Lance

Twilight had her eyes, open wide to Lance

"Well, one question Lance" Said Shining

"Yeah?" Said Lance

"We know you're capable of Hoof to Hoof combat, But are you capable of Long range combat?" Said Shining

"I'll need a gun for that, hehe, It's not Like I'll use magic or anything" Said Lance

"What's a gun?" Said Shining

Seriously... They have a Militia, but they don't have guns?

Well, Since He does have a horn... Maybe I can use magic... Fucking radical

"Never mind" Said Lance

"Let's start... Now!" Shouted Shining

Lance soon found out he was being Suppressed by Shining.

Lance found himself behind a table, and he did what had to be done

He lifted himself up, and then thought about an anesthetic hand gun, and Imagined himself shooting it.

He Imagined himself Shoot shining, and he found shining lying unconcious on the floor

"Whoa" Said Lance

"Shining!" Twilight Shrieked

"Don't worry Twi, I'm ok" Said Shining while Getting up

"You have some unique magic skills, Lance" said Shining

"Heh, thanks" Said Lance

"Well, I have to get back to Canterlot. I can't stay here much longer, since I only came here for a visit" Said Shining

"Have to train the Royal Guard?" Said Lance

"Yeah, Perhaps you can join the royal guard" Said Shining

Since all he could see were Ponies and Butterflies, a little girl's dream, He couldn't really think of anything Dangerous to fight. Besides, a lot of the stuff that Ponyville did was really boring, so he said

"It would be My honor" Said Lance

"Great, just pack your things, and You'll be ready to go" said Shining

"Uhh... I don't have any package" said Lance

"Well, we can go right now" said Shining

A carriage then came flying down, with black and white pegasi in front

Lance and Shining Armor Both Entered the carriage, and set way for canterlot

"He left...." Said Twilight

Author's Note

He he, Meh

Chapter 2

A Magic Bolt was shot towards a Pony Dummy

"Come on, You can do better!"

"NNhrgr! I'm trying!" Lance Struggled to Aim and make a strong shot.

Lance was situated in a Giant, Crystal Room. All guards were Aiming at their targets and easily destroying them with their magic. Since Lance was only able to make Shining Armor Unconcious, he had to work more on his killer instinct.

A blue, small Lightning bolt fired again towards the dummy, this time, Ripping it's left arm apart.

"Nice try, soldier, But I want the entire Dummy destroyed! Keep it up soldier!" Shining Armor shouted

"Damn, when did he piss his pants off?" Lance mumbled to himself

He then shot a Blue Lightning bolt, Bigger than the last one.

The dummy's Right arm and head were clean off

"That's enough for today, Soldier" Shining Armor said

Lance Sighed "Finally. I'm not used to this kind of training"

"Permission to speak, SIR!" Lance shouted

"Remember Lance, you're not much of a Soldier to us, yet" Shining Armor said

"Okay, I have a question" Lance Said

"What is it?" Shining asked

They both started walking towards a crystal hallway, the temperature was rather cold, No sound could be heard except for our echoes, we were walking towards his office

"Well, It looks like we're under tough training, and there seems to be no threat towards... Umm" Lance forgot the City's name

"Canterlot?" Shining said

"Yeah"

"It looks like you haven't heard of what happened then..." Shining said while frowning

Lance was a Little confused, Shining could clearly see it

"Well, there are these Creatures called 'Changelings'" Shining Said

"They don't sound that Dangerous" Lance said

"But they are. They can morph into anypony they can think of, and on top of that, they absorb your Love" Shining said

"Absorb your love? You're kidding me, right?" Lance said with a smirk on his face

Although Lance could see that Shining was Dead Serious

"Oh, heh, Sorry"

"Well, the good news about them, they're very weak when they have no love. They feed on it, in other words" Shining said

"Big deal, they Absorb your love. You can walk right past them with no problem" Lance said

Shining sighed "When they absorb enough love from you, you literally become... empty"

"Wait... Like, No emotions?" Lance asked

"I'm afraid so" Shining Concluded

"Whoa..."

"And Changelings are not the only threat In Equestria" Shining said

"Wow..." Lance was a little scared of what he might hear next

"There's Dragons, Gryphons and... 'Special' Kind of threats"

"What do you mean, special?" Lance Asked Right when stopping in front of a green door, same as Shining

"Well, there's Nightmare Moon, Which she's taken care of, She's in the castle, Discord. But again, Taken care of. And finally, King Sombra, Which you might already guess what Happened" Shining Said

"Wait, but you just said that... Nightmare Moon is in the Castle?" Lance said

"Indeed I am, my fellow Subject" a Feminine Voice spoke just behind Lance

Lance quickly Turned around, with his Lance and Horn pointing at Nightmare Moon

"Get your Ha- I mean... HOOVES UP!" Lance Shouted

But then Lance took a better view of 'Nightmare Moon'. She didn't seem that Scary, nonetheless she didn't look like a threat

"Umm... Shining Armor, is this Nightmare Moon?" Lance asked, confused

"Well, if you take it like that, she is. She just forgave herself, and well, She's a royal princess now" Shining Said

"So... She's not Evil?" Lance asked

"Not anymore, I am not" Nightmare Moon said

"Oh well, Sorry Nightmare Moon" Lance said while Chuckling

"Please, Call me Luna" She said

"Alright, Luna" Lance said, with a Smirk on her face with a little Hint of Flirting

Luna blushed a tiny red, which made her walk away

"Easy there soldier, you already have my Sister to begin with" Shining said, while Opining the door

"Well, I don't Really have her..." Lance said

Shining just rolled his eyes and sighed, while unlocking the door

"Well, this is my offi-" Shining was cut off By spotting a Black pony with both Wings and Horn in his Desk

"CHANGELING!" Shining shouted, which startled the Creature

"Whoa! They certainently look... Creepy" Lance said

The changeling dove for Lance, which he had his guard down a little, for the moment

"LANCE! I'll help you!" Shining shouted

"No! Go get help! Grr!" Lance shouted while holding the Changeling's head

After hearing that, shining Inmeadiety ran outside to find anypony that could stop this changeling

As soon as he did...

"Here, have this!" Lance shouted, while hittinbg him in the face

The changeling flew back, a little disoriented.

Lance punched the changeling once again, in the left cheek again.

He then used his back hoof to hit him between the legs. He could swear he saw the changeling Plead for mercy after that...

But he didn't back down

He charged his horn while the changeling was trying to recover, and he stopped charging

And shot a Blue, Medium sized lightning bolt towards the changeling, making the Changeling Explode

"Wow, this is some crazy shit" Lance said, while Cleaning some of the Blue blood he had in his face

Shining just came to the door with princess Luna, He looked at Lance

"Hey, can I get some Help cleaning here?" Lance asked, while Luna and Shining Armor were both staring at him in disbelief

Author's Note

Better? :P