Bright lights in fields of Roses

by Thekeirens
The story of (ex)Commander Bright Storm as he pays the price for making a tough call. But is it all bad?

Bright Storm, thrust into guard training at a young age, he has became one of the most well known Commanders in the whole of Equestria. He loves what he does. But don't let that fool you, he doesn't enjoy killing and with that weakness he is persuaded to let a great "evil" live and must suffer the consequences! It can't be all bad, right?

Rose… A normal abnormal mare with abnormal skill when it comes down to a fight, or ordering idiots around…

And Mystery…. You're run off the mill physchotic angry mare!

Rated teen for possible light gore and occasional sexual references. Nothing too graphic but It's still going to be there…Note: This is the brainchild of a roleplay I did with a friend of mine. tags shall be added as I progress through the story.

Teen
Incomplete
Slice of Life
Dark
 

1060 words: Estimated 5 minutes to read

1 Chapter:

  1. Prologue part 1/ Everyponies favourite introduction 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
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