Goneby thewafflepersonChaptersThe hospitalwe're homeMy endMORE in heavenThe end of my best friendThe hospitalAUTHORS NOTE PLEASE READ: I am only 11 (soon to be 12) so please be nice and if your insensitive that just means your a jerk who can't be nice (and Blue shift I do not care how many stars I get T_T") ============================================================================================= I am Carrot top and I want to tell you the story of how me and my best friend died here is how it starts: I walked in to the hospital trying to be brave and tell Derpy that she wouldn't make it through her unknown sickness the muffin basket I was carrying in my mouth seemed heavy and it was hard to smell the muffins without thinking of the time Derpy and I were fillies and I introduced her to blueberry muffins, she took 1 bite and instantly LOVED them. The hospital was colder then it usually is ans the white walls were torching me becaus many loved ponies die here every day the white, smooth tile floor seemed to be splintering my hooves. When I reached the desk and saw the cruel and harsh lady who sat their was more cruel to me then usual, "You here to see your 'precious' dieing Derpy?" she aske me, she said it in a rather rude and mocking way. I scowled at that witch of a pony and looked at her name tag, "Why yes, Coldhear- I mean sweet heart." I said trying to tease her back, she only gave me a dirty look and pointed to the room Derpy was in then she smirked "AAAAALLLLLRRRRRIIIGGGGHHHHT CARROT TOP G O OVER TH- " she tried to say but I walked off I knew she tried to call me stupid but that would only insult herself 'cause she pretty much called herself a jerk. I hope. I HOPE, that she doesn't cry I thought I dragged my feet on the floor, when I opened the door Derpy was wide eyed and had a big smile on her face she almost got out of bed she was so happy I wanted to hug her but I couldn't due to her being contagious, but I could still get near hear just I couldn't have any physical contact with her. "HI Derpy." I said trying to soothe her. "Carrot! Y-y-you brought those muffins for me?" she excitedly said as I handed her the large, woven basket full of blueberry mufins I tried to smile but it came out as a fake smile but Derpy couldn't tell. Derpy handed me a large book that was almost as big as one of Twilight Sparkle's books "I want you to like it." she said, I looked at the book's cover and it said "Carret Top & me (I'm Derpie)". I started to flip through the pages and they had me and Derpy all through out the scrap book, I loved it. Derpy smiled at me "You like it.Right?" she looked up at me with eyes of a scared child. "yes"I said "I worked on it allll night" Derpy looked up at me again. I cleared my throught "Derpy" I said "Yes Carrot Top?"Derpy replied "I don't know how to tell you this" I said and then I looked away for a minute and looked back at her "Whats wrong?" Derpy looked worried. "Your not..um..gonna...li-li-li-li" I tried to say but Derpy cut me off "What is it?" both her eyes locked on me she sounded worried. "Your not gonna live." I said our eyes both welled up. Then Derpy looked at me "Don't worry" she began "we had a lot of great times together, but it is life and it always turns in to a disaster.. But how are you going to break it to Dinky?" She looked at me hoping I knew the answer but unfortunatley I didn't. "It'll be okay Carrot top we can work this out, somehow but I don't know how. Maybe MAYBE I CAN ASK god to send you letters ONCE a month."She smiled weakly at me. "I gotta go buddy" I said, Derpy frowned "Okay..Bye"Derpy sniffed. we're homeWe both ran home not stopping for no pony. We reached the door in a matter of timme but we bumped into. "OWY!" Dinky had screeched. I patted her head then nudged her for comfort "We're home" I said with a sigh. Dinky scrunched her nose I assumed that her nose hurt, I opened the orange, maple wood door "WE are home Dinky" I said without relizing I had already said that "you said that already Carrot top." Dinky said with a bit of annoyance in her little girl voice "OH, sorry" I looked at her when I said sorry I made my voice sorrowfull again. I walked into the backroom to get the scrap book my dead friend gave me the said of the beep from the meter that checked her heart beat that noise played in my head for 5 minutes which was how long it took me to drag my feet across the wodden floor. When I sat on the plush, green couch I grabbed the scrapbook and looked at the first page that said: Carroty top whutever happens to me just remember the good times and know that you and Dinkie are my best friends and know you are the one who helped me git rid of my shyness after daddy doo hit my head and made my eyes go all weird and funny and if I don't live I'll still be in your memory and I'll watch over you. But be glad you have this. I flipped to the next page the first pictures were when I played with her after daddy doo hit her head the next page was when we were getting chased by the P.E. teacher after tipped over his motorcycle when playing on it the next page showed us in middle school in art when derpy and I were squirting tubes of paint at the popular girls and the next page showed the popular girls covered in paint while yelling at Derpy and then I told them off (as in they carrot top said "You idiots don't know how to have real girl fun" or something like that) then I turned the page and it had a ticket taped to it and pictures of the prom when Derpy and I had fake mustaches on and we were jumping up in front of other ponies to scare them. Then the worst happened. My heart stopped hurting becauseit became numb it all went black. My endThen all of the world was white and clouds were under my hooves and Derpy's hoof around my waist at first I thought it was Minty or Berry punch, but it was Derpy she told me I was in heaven. END MORE in heaven______________________________________________________________________________________ Derpy and I stood on the soft, fluffy floors of heaven just enjoying the moment I looked at her and smiled, but her head was facing the ground and she looked through the underside of the ground and she looked there for five minutes and looked at me. "Hey um Carroty?" She was looking at me in a quizzical way, "Yes?" I replied soothingly. "I miss my little girl." She sniffed, I did not know what to say. I put my angel wing around her back, she smile at me one eye looking at me the other in a different direction. "Carrot Top." Derpy had a more serious tone, this made me concerned "Yes Derpy?" I looked at her, she got so serious her eyes straightened themselves out looking directly at mine, "Do you think she'll be ok?I mean in the future." "hmm" it was the only answer I could think of. "I think she will." I smiled. "Thank you for everything Carrot Top." Derpy's lips danced a smile. "Good-bye Carrot Top." A single salty tear had fell down her face. "Where you going?" I asked, my voice squeaked but I hadn't realized. "I'm going to be Dinky's guardian angel." With that she disappeared. I looked for where Dinky was, I surely saw Derpy. The end of my best friendWhen I shut the big white, oak door I began to cry. _________________________________________________________________________________________________ My house seemed darker then it was when I left but then I saw a tiny glow in the kitchen, it was Dinky. "Well how is she?" Dinky asked nervously, "She is perfectly fine" I said but that was a lie. "When can I see her Carrot top?" DInky asked, "Tomorrow little sweet heart." I told her I walked toward the back room and when I was an earshot away from DInky I whispered to myself "I hope." I fell asleep on couch in the backroom. _________________________________________________________________________________________________ The Morning sun taunted me it's usual "GOOD MORNING CARROT TOP" seemed more like a "Heya Carrot top." it seemed solemn and un-happy. Dinky hooves sounded loud down the maple wood and got louder across the kitchen floor and soon got soft on the backroom's carpet; "Are you awake?" Dinky asked, I sat up my hair probably was a mess. "when can we see my mommy?" she asked. "now" I said she looked up at me her golden eyes reminded me of Derpy and how Derpy looked at me when she was nervous. _________________________________________________________________________________________________ This time at the hospital desk was Starcatcher (Oh dear reader before we continue on...um Starcatcher is an older pony from the old series) she smiled at me. "We are going to see my friend Derpy Doo." I said, "Okay" Starcatcher's smil turned into a frown and she pointed to the room my pegasaus friend was in. Dinky nudged me and we walked to the door, it's number was 16 when I walked in Derpy was enjoying muffin. "Hiya Carrot top."Derpy said then Dinky walked in "Hey Dinky! How are you?" Derpy looked at Dinky, DInky smiled. "Did you tell her?" Derpy asked. "No" I said. "tell me what" DInky asked. "I'm gonna die" Derpy said. "NO!" Dinky cried Dinky started to cry. I myself started to cry to. "Dont cry girls." Derpy said "I want you two to be happy as I go and remember the good times" Derpy's eyes looked in two directions, like usual but one locked on me and the other staring at Dinky. Then. She drifted off a smile froze on her face. Dinky cried more and I held her close, still crying.
The hospitalAUTHORS NOTE PLEASE READ: I am only 11 (soon to be 12) so please be nice and if your insensitive that just means your a jerk who can't be nice (and Blue shift I do not care how many stars I get T_T") ============================================================================================= I am Carrot top and I want to tell you the story of how me and my best friend died here is how it starts: I walked in to the hospital trying to be brave and tell Derpy that she wouldn't make it through her unknown sickness the muffin basket I was carrying in my mouth seemed heavy and it was hard to smell the muffins without thinking of the time Derpy and I were fillies and I introduced her to blueberry muffins, she took 1 bite and instantly LOVED them. The hospital was colder then it usually is ans the white walls were torching me becaus many loved ponies die here every day the white, smooth tile floor seemed to be splintering my hooves. When I reached the desk and saw the cruel and harsh lady who sat their was more cruel to me then usual, "You here to see your 'precious' dieing Derpy?" she aske me, she said it in a rather rude and mocking way. I scowled at that witch of a pony and looked at her name tag, "Why yes, Coldhear- I mean sweet heart." I said trying to tease her back, she only gave me a dirty look and pointed to the room Derpy was in then she smirked "AAAAALLLLLRRRRRIIIGGGGHHHHT CARROT TOP G O OVER TH- " she tried to say but I walked off I knew she tried to call me stupid but that would only insult herself 'cause she pretty much called herself a jerk. I hope. I HOPE, that she doesn't cry I thought I dragged my feet on the floor, when I opened the door Derpy was wide eyed and had a big smile on her face she almost got out of bed she was so happy I wanted to hug her but I couldn't due to her being contagious, but I could still get near hear just I couldn't have any physical contact with her. "HI Derpy." I said trying to soothe her. "Carrot! Y-y-you brought those muffins for me?" she excitedly said as I handed her the large, woven basket full of blueberry mufins I tried to smile but it came out as a fake smile but Derpy couldn't tell. Derpy handed me a large book that was almost as big as one of Twilight Sparkle's books "I want you to like it." she said, I looked at the book's cover and it said "Carret Top & me (I'm Derpie)". I started to flip through the pages and they had me and Derpy all through out the scrap book, I loved it. Derpy smiled at me "You like it.Right?" she looked up at me with eyes of a scared child. "yes"I said "I worked on it allll night" Derpy looked up at me again. I cleared my throught "Derpy" I said "Yes Carrot Top?"Derpy replied "I don't know how to tell you this" I said and then I looked away for a minute and looked back at her "Whats wrong?" Derpy looked worried. "Your not..um..gonna...li-li-li-li" I tried to say but Derpy cut me off "What is it?" both her eyes locked on me she sounded worried. "Your not gonna live." I said our eyes both welled up. Then Derpy looked at me "Don't worry" she began "we had a lot of great times together, but it is life and it always turns in to a disaster.. But how are you going to break it to Dinky?" She looked at me hoping I knew the answer but unfortunatley I didn't. "It'll be okay Carrot top we can work this out, somehow but I don't know how. Maybe MAYBE I CAN ASK god to send you letters ONCE a month."She smiled weakly at me. "I gotta go buddy" I said, Derpy frowned "Okay..Bye"Derpy sniffed.
we're homeWe both ran home not stopping for no pony. We reached the door in a matter of timme but we bumped into. "OWY!" Dinky had screeched. I patted her head then nudged her for comfort "We're home" I said with a sigh. Dinky scrunched her nose I assumed that her nose hurt, I opened the orange, maple wood door "WE are home Dinky" I said without relizing I had already said that "you said that already Carrot top." Dinky said with a bit of annoyance in her little girl voice "OH, sorry" I looked at her when I said sorry I made my voice sorrowfull again. I walked into the backroom to get the scrap book my dead friend gave me the said of the beep from the meter that checked her heart beat that noise played in my head for 5 minutes which was how long it took me to drag my feet across the wodden floor. When I sat on the plush, green couch I grabbed the scrapbook and looked at the first page that said: Carroty top whutever happens to me just remember the good times and know that you and Dinkie are my best friends and know you are the one who helped me git rid of my shyness after daddy doo hit my head and made my eyes go all weird and funny and if I don't live I'll still be in your memory and I'll watch over you. But be glad you have this. I flipped to the next page the first pictures were when I played with her after daddy doo hit her head the next page was when we were getting chased by the P.E. teacher after tipped over his motorcycle when playing on it the next page showed us in middle school in art when derpy and I were squirting tubes of paint at the popular girls and the next page showed the popular girls covered in paint while yelling at Derpy and then I told them off (as in they carrot top said "You idiots don't know how to have real girl fun" or something like that) then I turned the page and it had a ticket taped to it and pictures of the prom when Derpy and I had fake mustaches on and we were jumping up in front of other ponies to scare them. Then the worst happened. My heart stopped hurting becauseit became numb it all went black.
My endThen all of the world was white and clouds were under my hooves and Derpy's hoof around my waist at first I thought it was Minty or Berry punch, but it was Derpy she told me I was in heaven. END
MORE in heaven______________________________________________________________________________________ Derpy and I stood on the soft, fluffy floors of heaven just enjoying the moment I looked at her and smiled, but her head was facing the ground and she looked through the underside of the ground and she looked there for five minutes and looked at me. "Hey um Carroty?" She was looking at me in a quizzical way, "Yes?" I replied soothingly. "I miss my little girl." She sniffed, I did not know what to say. I put my angel wing around her back, she smile at me one eye looking at me the other in a different direction. "Carrot Top." Derpy had a more serious tone, this made me concerned "Yes Derpy?" I looked at her, she got so serious her eyes straightened themselves out looking directly at mine, "Do you think she'll be ok?I mean in the future." "hmm" it was the only answer I could think of. "I think she will." I smiled. "Thank you for everything Carrot Top." Derpy's lips danced a smile. "Good-bye Carrot Top." A single salty tear had fell down her face. "Where you going?" I asked, my voice squeaked but I hadn't realized. "I'm going to be Dinky's guardian angel." With that she disappeared. I looked for where Dinky was, I surely saw Derpy.
The end of my best friendWhen I shut the big white, oak door I began to cry. _________________________________________________________________________________________________ My house seemed darker then it was when I left but then I saw a tiny glow in the kitchen, it was Dinky. "Well how is she?" Dinky asked nervously, "She is perfectly fine" I said but that was a lie. "When can I see her Carrot top?" DInky asked, "Tomorrow little sweet heart." I told her I walked toward the back room and when I was an earshot away from DInky I whispered to myself "I hope." I fell asleep on couch in the backroom. _________________________________________________________________________________________________ The Morning sun taunted me it's usual "GOOD MORNING CARROT TOP" seemed more like a "Heya Carrot top." it seemed solemn and un-happy. Dinky hooves sounded loud down the maple wood and got louder across the kitchen floor and soon got soft on the backroom's carpet; "Are you awake?" Dinky asked, I sat up my hair probably was a mess. "when can we see my mommy?" she asked. "now" I said she looked up at me her golden eyes reminded me of Derpy and how Derpy looked at me when she was nervous. _________________________________________________________________________________________________ This time at the hospital desk was Starcatcher (Oh dear reader before we continue on...um Starcatcher is an older pony from the old series) she smiled at me. "We are going to see my friend Derpy Doo." I said, "Okay" Starcatcher's smil turned into a frown and she pointed to the room my pegasaus friend was in. Dinky nudged me and we walked to the door, it's number was 16 when I walked in Derpy was enjoying muffin. "Hiya Carrot top."Derpy said then Dinky walked in "Hey Dinky! How are you?" Derpy looked at Dinky, DInky smiled. "Did you tell her?" Derpy asked. "No" I said. "tell me what" DInky asked. "I'm gonna die" Derpy said. "NO!" Dinky cried Dinky started to cry. I myself started to cry to. "Dont cry girls." Derpy said "I want you two to be happy as I go and remember the good times" Derpy's eyes looked in two directions, like usual but one locked on me and the other staring at Dinky. Then. She drifted off a smile froze on her face. Dinky cried more and I held her close, still crying.
