Raven's Arrival

by JustSomeRandomGuy

Chapter 8:A Friend In Need

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                                                         Fluttershy's Cottage

Raven didn't know what he had to do next,he can either find out where Gilda is or he can ask for help.But if he wanted find to Gilda own his own there a few problems,he didn't know where a Griffon lives,he didn't know any of Gilda's ally's and he didn't know for sure it was her,it might have been her ally's.Raven was so furious that he pound his Nasod arm into the ground,leaving a huge hole in the floor.He demanded to find Fluttershy even if it kill's him,he decided to get some help from Twilight,he ran back to Twilight's home.

                                                               Golden Oak Library

Twilight and Chung were having a talk indoors,while Spike was eating some gems in the kitchen,Chung didn't much about Twilight,It was a rather interesting conversation between the two.

"So why do you wear so much armor?" Twilight asked.

"Like I said to Spike,where I come from,you have to wear armor." Chung responded.

"Why is that?" Twilight said.

"Because me and friends always fight gruesome,terrifying,gigantic,dangerous monsters everyday." Chung said.

Twilight's eye's grew big."Well what do you guys do when you're not fighting them?" Twilight asked.

"We fight each other sometimes." Chung responded.

"But doesn't that hurt?" Twilight raised an eyebrow..

"Yes it does, but to be honest with you,it's kinda fun." Chung said.

"How is it fun?" Twilight said curiously.

"We want more of a challenge,the monster's aren't that strong ,it's the bosses we have to worry about." Chung said.

"I see,do you get rewards for beating these monsters or bosses?" Twilight asked.

"Yes you do,sometimes you get potions,gear or ED." Chung responded.

"What's ED?" Twilight questioned.

"It's coins.Bronze,silver or gold." Chung said.

"Oh, In Ponyville, we have bits which are gold coins.Also what do potions do?":Twilight said.

"They usually give you health,do more damage,strength and a bunch more." Chung said.

"I see,do you have to get it from defeating a boss?" Twilight said.

"That's not the only way.You can buy it or make it." Chung said.

"Can you try to make one?" Twilight said.

"Right now?" Chung said.

"Yes." Twilight said.

"Well for starters,you guys don't have the requirements for a potion,so I can't make one,sorry." Chung said.

"It's fine." Twilight said,disappointed.

"Hey Twilight!" Spike shouted.

"Yes Spike?" Twilight said

"I'm heading to Rarity's,I'll see you in a few hours." Spike said.

"Okay Spike,be safe!" Twilight said.

Spike nodded his head and went out the door. "Now,I want to ask you one more question." Twilight said.

"All right." Chung said.

"How did you guys get here?" Twilight asked.

"My friend Eve,built a portal to receive some valuable artifacts from your world,but the from the looks of it,you have nothing valuable here but to be honest with you,I kinda like it here,In my world there are thousands of monsters to fight but in here,I've only seen a few and I kinda want to explore some more in this world of yours." Chung responded.

"Well I'm glad you like it and I really want to explore yours as well." Twilight said smiling.

"If your going to explore my world,you have to wear armor." Chung said.

"Don't worry about that,I can take care of myself." Twilight said.

"Let's hope so." Chung said.

Suddenly,there was a knock on the door."Who can that be?" Twilight said to herself.Twilight went to answer it.

"Raven? What are you doing here?" Twilight said.

"Twilight! Fluttershy's been kidnapped!" Raven shouted.

Twilight's gasped."Do you know who kidnapped her?" Twilight said.

"It might have been Gilda." Raven said.

"Are you sure it was her?" Twilight said.

"She attacked me and tried to hurt Fluttershy yesterday." Raven said.

"Do you know where she had gone off to?" Twilight asked.

"No,I was hoping you would know that." Raven said.

"Well Griffins normally hang out in Cloudsdale." Twilight said.

"Where is that?" Raven asked.

"It's a city up in the clouds but you can't get go there,only Pegasi ponies can live there." Twilight responded.

"Why can't I go there?" Raven said.

"You'll fall." Twilight said.

"Damn,Is there any other way getting up there?" Raven said.

"Well I could try to use a spell on you but i'm not sure it will work 100 percent." Twilight said.

"I'll do whatever it takes,do the spell." Raven said.

"Okay...." Twilight said worried.Twilight horn started to glow and she shot a magical blast and Raven's feet,magic started to swirl around Raven's feet and then it stopped.

"Did it work?" Raven asked.

"Yes,you can now land perfectly safe on Cloudsdale." Twilight responded."I'll get the girls,you get Elsword."

"All right." Raven said.Raven ran to the Carousel's Boutique to get Elsword while Twilight get's her friends.

                                                                   30 Minutes Later

Raven,Elsword,Chung and the mane six were exiting Ponyville to ride the hot air balloon to Cloudsdale,Twilight did the spell on all of them including herself.

"Okay everypony,the reason I called all of you here is because Fluttershy's been kidnap." Twilight said.

The ponies gasp."Why would anypony do that to poor Fluttershy?" Pinkie Pie said.

"I don't know,but what I do know is that the kidnapper is probably Gilda." Twilight said.

"Why did she kidnap Fluttershy?" Rainbow Dash said.

"I don't know why,but I think she's holding Fluttershy captive in Cloudsdale,so we're going there.Everpony ready?" Twilight said.The ponies nodded so did Raven and his friends. Everyone entered the hot air balloon and they went up in the air to Cloudsdale.

                                                                          Cloudsdale

When Raven,Elsword, Chung and the mane six finally got up to Cloudsdale,they all got off and Pinkie Pie kept watch of the hot air balloon so it doesn't float away,Twilight and her discuss her plan.

"Okay here's the plan.Rainbow Dash, fly around so you can get a good view if Gilda's here." Twilight said.Rainbow Dash nodded her head and flew off."Rarity and AppleJack,you two look around the city to see if Gilda is hiding in one of those bulidings." Twilight said.Rarity and AppleJack nodded their head as well and ran off."All right, I guess this leaves me off with you three,let's go and save Fluttershy!" Twilight said.Raven,Chung,Elsword and Twilight walked forward to a road to the city.


Rainbow Dash was up in air,looking if Gilda is nearby and so far she didn't see her,she was getting pretty frustrated."Ugh,she has to be around here somewhere!" Rainbow Dash shouted.Rainbow was flying back to back over and over again,hoping to find Gilda,still,nothing so far."Ugh,I'll never find her!" Rainbow Dash said.Suddenly,someone came behind Rainbow Dash and tackled her,Rainbow Dash tried to fight back but the Kidnapper was too strong,he got out a bag and put Rainbow Dash inside the bag, he tied the bag up, then flew away.


Rarity and Applejack looked for any buildings that Gilda may be hiding at,Applejack saw an old abandoned warehouse.

"Rarity! Look!" Applejack said.

"Don't tell me that she's hiding in there,it's all old and filthy." Rarity said in a disgusted tone.

Applejack rolled her eyes."Just get in there!" Applejack shouted.

Rarity let out a heavy sigh and went inside the warehouse,Applejack followed her inside.

When Rarity and Applejack got inside, the huge door closed behind them,Rarity and Applejack were worried at this point.

"Y'all let us out right now!" Applejack shouted. No one gave a response back.The room was barley lit up,AppleJack could barley see anything,neither can Rarity.

Suddenly there was a shadow figure slowly coming towards AppleJack and Rarity.

Rarity fainted."Gosh darn it Rarity!" Applejack said.The shadow figure got out a big brown bag,AppleJack tried to buck him the face but the shadow figure dodge her hits.AppleJack was frozen in fear.The shadow figure grabs AppleJack by the throat and tosses her in the bag,he did the same to Rarity.He tied it and moved on.


Raven,Elsword,Chung and Twilight walked on the road,the houses were closed, windows were shut and there was no pony to be found,something was wrong.

"Where is everypony?" Twilight said.

"I don't know but I have a bad feeling this." Elsword said.

"Me too,this place is empty." Chung said.

Suddenly,a group of Griffins surround Raven and his friends."You ain't going no where freak show!" One of the Griffins said.

Raven,Chung, and Elsword were ready to attack,while Twilight tried to think of a spell to blast them all away.

One Griffin tackled Elsword to the ground,One clawed Chung in the face and one punched Raven in the stomach,Twilight got punched in the face by a Griffin,she was knocked out.

When Elsword got a chance,he pushed away the Griffin and used Crescent Cut.The Griffin got pushed back and went to the ground.

Chung's face was bleeding but it wasn't much,he pushed away the Griffin and shot him in the leg,preventing him from attacking his friends or escaping.

The punch that was blown to Raven didn't hurt as much,the Griffin tried to punch Raven again but he blocked,Raven then punched him in the stomach and did one final devastating blow to the face.The Griffin went to the ground,not moving.

The three warriors turned their backs to Twilight,she was put in a large bag by two Griffins and then retreated.

"Shit! They got away with Twilight!" Chung shouted.

"Help........please...."

Raven turned his back to see a Griffin,suffering to get up,Raven went towards the Griffin and grabbed him by throat,Chung and Elsword watched.

"Where's Gilda?" Raven asked.

"I can't tell you she'll...kill me." The Griffin said.

Raven gave the Griffin an angry look."What makes you think I won't?" Raven said.

Raven was about to punch the Griffin in the face but the Griffin confessed."Wait! I'll tell you! She's at the old abandoned warehouse!"

"Where is it?" Raven said.

The Griffin pointed.

"Thanks." Raven said.Raven drops the Griffin and leaves the scene."Come on guys,let's go." Raven said to his friends.Elsword and Chung followed Raven.

                                                             The Old Abandoned Warehouse

When Raven,Elsword and Chung got there, they noticed that the huge door won't open,they try to look for any buttons connected to the door but they haven't found any.

"Well shit,How are we going to get in there now?" Elsword said.

Raven started to think for a moment , judging how the door looks,it's pretty fragile and old,Raven then got an idea that might work.

"Guys." Raven said.

"Yeah?" Both of them said.

"Judging how the door looks,it's in a pretty bad condition so I'm gonna use a skill to break the door." Raven said.

"Okay." Both of them said.

Raven went towards the door."You guys might wanna back up a bit." Raven said.

Elsword and Chung got backed away from Raven.Raven makes a few steps away from the door and used Wild Charge,the moment when Raven's charged Nasod arm makes contact with the door,it leaves a huge hole.Raven went inside,Elsword and Chung did the same.When they got inside the warehouse it was very dark but then it was lit up.Raven then analyzed the room,he saw Fluttershy tied in the middle.

"Fluttershy!" Raven shouted.

Raven went towards Fluttershy to untie her but was stopped by a Griffin and then other Griffins came along as well,they were surrounded.

Then one Griffin landed right next to Fluttershy,it was Gilda.Gilda looked at Raven."Hi there Raven and I see you brought along some friends with you."

"Why are you doing this Gilda?" Raven said.

"To get revenge on Rainbow Dash and to torture you." Gilda said.

"Where is Twilight?" Chung said.

"Over there with her friends." Gilda pointed,Twilight and her friends were strapped to chairs.

"Now where was I? Oh yea,this."Gilda then puts her claw on Fluttershy's check and made a cut,she was crying in pain.

"Leave her alone!" Raven shouted.

Gilda then proceeded to make another cut,but on her belly,she was bleeding and a drop of her blood went to the floor.

"YOU FUCKER! I'LL TEAR YOU APART!" Raven shouted with anger.

Chung and Elsword stood there in shock.if they try to attack,Gilda might kill Fluttershy.

"If you want me to stop,tell your friends to back off or she dies." Gilda said.

Raven turned to his friends and nodded,they nodded back.Elsword drops his sword and Chung drops his Silver Shooters and Destroyer,one the Griffins picked up their weapons and threw them away.

"Now,I want you to hurt Fluttershy." Gilda said.

Raven's eyes grew big. "No."

"If you don't, I'll do it painfully." Gilda said.

"No,I won't do it."

Gilda made a X in the middle of Fluttershy's belly,she did very slowly,Fluttershy cries in pain.

"I'LL RIP YOUR FUCKING HEART OUT GILDA!" Raven shouted.

"I said I wanted to torture you Raven and the only to torture you,is torturing the ones you care about." Gilda said.

Raven couldn't bare to see Fluttershy getting tortured.Raven let out a tear."Oh,is the big guy crying?" Gilda said in a mocking tone.Gilda then punches Raven in the face and grabs Raven by throat,choking him."Any last words hero?" Gilda said.

"Nuclear."

When the nuclear missile drops to the floor,everything went blank for a minute.When the explosion was over,Raven looked around him.His friends and the Griffins were on the ground,unconscious but Gilda was on the floor,struggling to get up.Raven went towards Gilda,grabbed her and rose her up.

"Go ahead,kill me." Gilda said.

"Sorry Gilda,maybe next time." Raven said.

Raven punched her in face,knocking her out cold.

Raven drops Gilda on floor and went to help Fluttershy.

"You okay Fluttershy?" Raven said.

"Y-Yes." Fluttershy said.

"That's good to hear." Raven said.

Raven untied Fluttershy."Can you move?"

"Y-Yes." Fluttershy said.

"Ok,I'm going to untie the others." Raven said.

"O-Okay." Fluttershy said.

Raven went to help the other ponies.

"Ugh,what happened?" Chung said as he's getting up.

Elsword opened his eyes.

"Come on Elsword,get up." Chung said.

Chung let out his hand and Elsword grabbed it,Chung pulled Elsword up."Your all right?" Chung asked.

"Yea,I'm fine." Elsword responded.

Elsword looked next to him and saw his swords and Chung's weapons."There 's our stuff." Elsword said. Elsword picked up his swords and Chung picked up his weapons.

Elsword and Chung looked around,they saw that the Griffins were not moving and that Fluttershy is released from her torturing.

"Fluttershy! Are you okay?" Chung said.

"Y-Yes,I'm o-okay." Fluttershy said.

"Where's Raven?" Elsword asked.

Fluttershy pointed,the ponies were released as well and Raven was with them.

"Raven! What happened?" Chung asked.

"I used Nuclear,it knocked everyone out,including you guys." Raven responded.

"We don't go down so easily Raven." Elsword said.

Raven chuckled.

"Is Fluttershy okay darling?" Rarity asked.

"Well Gilda made some cuts to her body but it wasn't too major,she's fine." Raven said.

"But what do we with the cuts?" Rarity said.

"Just use some bandages on her and she'll be okay." Raven said.

"Oh,very well then." Rarity got out bandages from her bag and puts them on Fluttershy.

"Raven." Twilight said.

"Yes?" Raven said.

"I am amazed what happened here,you've learned to control your rage,even in the most dangerous situations but there's still one thing that I haven't figured out yet." Twilight said.

"And that is?" Raven said.

"Why didn't you kill Gilda?" Twilight said.

"The reason why I spared her life is because killing doesn't solve anything,the problem is still there and no matter what you do,you can't figure it out.That's why I didn't kill her." Raven said.

"I see,well I learned a lot today from you." Twilight said.

"That's great to hear and by the way,what are we going to do with Gilda and her friends?" Raven said.

"Don't worry about that,the guards will  take care of them." Twilight smiled."I think there's somepony here who wanted to thank you." Twilight said.

Raven turns around. Fluttershy went towards Raven and gave him a big hug."Thank you for saving me." Fluttershy said.

Raven returned the hug back "Your welcome,now let's get you home."

Raven and Fluttershy smiled at each other and went out of the warehouse,the others did the same and they went to the hot air balloon.

When they got there,they saw Pinkie Pie fallen asleep on the basket,the group chuckled and went on the basket.

Twilight lowered the hot air balloon down with her magic,the hot air balloon slowly goes down.

They arrived on the ground and went out,Raven was very relived this day was over and that no one died today,The three warriors went to their homes where they were assigned too and slept for the day.

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