Unwanted Attention

by Sarcastic Brony

Applebloom

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You fall onto a stack of hay as a pile of mush. It was simple work to sort apples but it doesn't mean it was any less difficult. Applejack had hired you seeing as your hands were unique and delicate enough for the operation. She pays well enough and even lets you stay in her barn. So that was good enough for you to take her up on the offer.

Day in and day out are usually the same. You get up, you wait for Applejack to bring you apples and then you sort them into the right barrels. You get dinner with their family and then you sleep. Not much else to think of really, it was a simple life but something you’ve welcomed with open arms. Seeing as your arrival was anything but simple.

But no time for that! You are too tired to think of how you got here. It has already been many years passed and these ponies accept you now, no need to waste time thinking about something so trivial. You let out a happy sigh, it’s weird how working hard here makes you feel so fulfilled. You hear a chuckle coming from the open barn door.

“You sure look pooped.” Applejack says with a chuckle.

You sit up to properly address her. “You know me, always the hard worker.” You wipe the sweat from your brow.

She gives a sincere nod. “You sure are, best pair of hands we got here on the farm!”

“Applejack.” You pause for a second. “I’m the only one with hands here.” You deadpan.

She chuckles some more. “Well then that makes ya more special now don't it!?”

You can't help but smile at her. She’s definitely has a way with words.

She then takes a few steps towards you. “So are ya gunna head into town today? Maybe find a pretty marefriend?” She flutters her eyes at you in a jokingly manner.

This was her sister like way of playing with you, always trying to set you up with dates and the like.

You look to the floor with a sigh. “Applejack you know how awkward I am.” It’s true. “Everytime I try to smooth talk a mare it just ends up being weird, for both the mare and myself!”

She shakes her head. “I’ve already got problems with getting Big mac outside and socializing. Don't go and be the same way.” She says with concern.

“I’m sorry Applejack, its just, I can't help that I get nervous.” You say.

“Well you need to get some fresh air sometimes.Can't be having you all cooped up in this old barn. I know you like the simple things but everypony needs some time outdoors.”

You nod your head thoughtfully, you know she is just trying to help you out. She is right though, being locked away from the ponies doesn't really help anyone.

“Well, Applebloom invited me to help rebuild the club house. I know it isn't much but its something.” You remind Applejack hoping she will ease up.

She shakes her head with a smile. “You and those fillies are inseparable. I swear you interact with them better than ponies your own age.”

You shrug. “Well, they were kinda the only ponies to talk to me when I first got here.” You state matter of factly. Though its been awhile Applejack gets a look of shame on her face. You continue. “But its no problem, water under the bridge. She did ask me for help though and you know how she gets when someone breaks a promise.” You say honestly.

“Alright, alright. I’ll let you help out with their little club house, but I want you to promise me that you will keep an eye on them. Those fillies seem to get into all kinds of trouble when left alone for too long.” Applejack says with a sigh.

You chuckle a little knowing all too well what she meant, seeing as you were dumb enough to join the three in some “crusading”, as they called it. It left you with many cuts and bruises, as well as more than a few choice words from half of the town. I guess the “Firefighter” cutie marks weren't very much appreciated by the townsfolk, or Mayor Mare after town hall accidently got caught in the flash fire. After some time spent fixing everything up, all was forgiven, but never forgotten.

“I swear it’s just some fixing, no crusading.” You say holding up your right hand as you have seen in many courtroom based TV shows from your past.

Applejack soon learned that this gesture basically means you promise that what you’re saying is truthful.

She gives a nod. “Alrighty then.” She turns to leave but just before she looks back to you. “You should probably try and catch some z’s. I have a feeling those fillies are gunna wear you out.” She says with a chuckle.

You can't help but chuckle back, she it probably right.

“See ya Applejack.” You give her a wave as she walk out.

You can't help but take her words into mind. You guess she is right, a little nap will do yourself wonders for what is to come.


You walk deep into the orchard to find the secluded club house with your toolbox in hand. You have been out here many times before but it still puzzles you as to why its so far away. Then again it is suppose to be a secret clubhouse. You just continue on your way as the tell tale signs of the clubhouse make themselves apparent.

When you first laid eye on it you were surprised to hear that Applebloom fixed it all up on her own. You have a very strong feeling that it could possibly be her special talent, but it is known that a pony needs to do some self reflection and find the answer on their own. You weren't about to take that away from her or the other two, seeing as its pretty obvious that they excel at certain things.

Anyways you break the treeline and soon come to the small ramp leading to the house. Now that you take a good look at the clubhouse, you can't really find anything wrong with it? Seems to be as immaculate as it ever was.

“Hello?!” You call out, hoping the girls weren't too busy to hear you.

Soon a head pops out. The little red bow is a dead give away.

“You’re early!” Applebloom calls down to you

You shrug. “You know me. I would rather be early than late.” You say with a smile.

“Well, uh, it's just..” She looks back inside as she then looks to you. “Everything is still not setup yet. C-can you come back in a few minutes?” She asks hesitantly.

“Uh, sure, I guess?” You don't know why you would need to come back but it’s just better to let it be. “I will just, walk around a little.” You say taking your leave.

You can't help but hear her sigh of relief as you walk off into the distance. It takes some time to circle the farm and back, definitely enough time for Applebloom to have finished whatever she was up too. Soon you take a few steps towards the clubhouse and find Applebloom is standing on the little balcony waiting for you.

“Just in time!” She says with a wide smile. She waves you up. “Come on!”

You do exactly as she says, setting your toolbox down and taking a few step onto the ramp. This entire structure was very study, you were surprised that it was able to take your weight. You take each step up until you were at the small entrance. You just sit outside for awhile. That’s when you take notice of a window opening, Applebloom sticks her head out.

“Well come on in!” She urges.

It was a bit of a squeeze but you managed to get threw the door. Once you enter, you take in the noticeable decor change. The entire clubhouse was decked out in a real fancy restaurant type look. A single table sat in the center of the room with a single candle lit. There was even music that let in a more smooth atmosphere to the entire place.

“What's going on here? Are you girls going to try getting your cutie marks in waitressing?” You ask looking around the clubhouse.

She seems to perk up a bit as she dashes over to a desk and pulls out a book. There she takes a pencil into her mouth as she scribbled something down. Once she is done she puts the book back and then returns to her position in front of you.

“No silly. I overheard Applejack talkin’ about how ya get nervous around mares. So I thought maybe we could practice!” She says with noticeable glee.

“Practice what?” You ask confused.

“Having a date!”

You suddenly feel your heart fall at that moment. The idea of a date with another mare was just something that never sat right with you, even if that mare was just a good family friend and a filly.

“Thats really sweet of you Applebloom, but I think I am fine. I’m just not interested in mares right now, with work and everything.. I mean, I just don't have enough time.” You try to convince.

“B-but I made food..” She says dejectedly as she looks towards some plates of food.

You have to admit that even though she is a filly, the Apples sure know how to cook, even Applebloom seemed to have a knack for it.

“Well, I wouldn't want food to go to waste.” You say trying to lift her spirits.

She immediately smiles as she quickly sets everything onto the table. You scooch over to the table, making sure not to hit your head on the ceiling. Once everything is setup the filly takes her seat on the opposite end of you. You both smile awkwardly at each other as you then slowly start to eat. Every once in awhile you will look at eachother then turn away.

I guess she was right. This feels like a real date, awkwardness and everything. You think to yourself as you try to contemplate why you were in this situation. The answer never comes to mind.

“S-so how was work?” Applebloom breaks the silence.

“I-It was fine. You know how fast Applejack is. I constantly have to be on my toes.” You reply. The silence comes back, so you try to steer the conversation. “How has school been?”

“Its been alright, though Cheerilee has been giving us a lot more homework.” She says as she pokes at her apple fritter.

“Yeah I didn't like school when I was younger either, but in time you will understand why it’s important.” You say feeling the awkwardness fade some.

“How is schooling where you’re from?” She asks.

“Pretty much the same, just bigger schools. Imagine having over 1000 kids in one school and more than 30 in your classroom.”

Her eye widen at this. You can't help but chuckle a little.

“Wouldn't that be crowded?” She asks.

“At times, yes, though everyone made do. Remember that there are a lot more humans in my world than there are ponies in yours.” You remind her. “So sometimes we just have to deal with a lot of people.”

Silence falls to us again.

“Did you have a special human mare back at home?” She asks.

You are taken a little by surprise but quickly recover. “N-no.”

“Have you ever kissed somepony before?” She asks.

Again you feel like this is starting to get inappropriate but you still answer. “No.”

She shifts a little uncomfortably. “I-I never kissed a pony before.” She then looks up to you, obviously extremely nervous. “W-Would you like to try?” She asks with a blush covering her face.

You can't help but feel the fork in your hand leave as it falls onto the table. Your mouth hung open in shock as to what she just asked. Half of your mind is rapidly firing questions at you, while the other half it yelling directions. It was all starting to collapse upon you.

You gulp down a lump in your throat. “Y-yeah.” You felt leave your mouth.

Why the hell did I say that?! You shout internally to yourself.

You then find that Applebloom is leaning towards you as her eyes fall closed, her little lips puckered up in a display of juvenile understanding. You can't help but feel your body moving on its own as you lean forwards as well and allow your lips to touch. She was incredibly soft and smelled just like flowers.

You can't help but let your eyes close as well when you feel her against your lips. It didn't last long as you two pull away slowly. She opens her eyes with a small smile and cheeks that were on fire. You weren't faring much better as you just scratch your head nervously, trying to avoid eye contact.

“W-Was it good?” You ask.

“Yeah.” She says looking to you with a smile.

You both look to your plates to find that there was nothing left.

“I guess I should be going.” You says trying still understand what happened.

“S-sure.. This was, fun.” Applebloom says.

“Yeah, it was.” You say as you leave the clubhouse.

Nothing else was said between the two of you. The sun was starting to set and you were beyond tired. As soon as you got to the barn you fell onto your hay pile. All you could do was look to the ceiling and question what you had done. It was stupid and above all inappropriate! You just hope that this all can be put behind you.


It has been several days since you have seen Applebloom, mostly because you have been locking yourself away in the barn. Even going so far as to no longer entering their house to eat dinner. Seeing as none of the Apple family has come yet to throttle your neck, you can only assume Applebloom has kept what you two did a secret. You weren't sure if you were grateful about that, seeing as what you did was wrong.

Over the past few days Applejack had continued to try and get you to talk about what was bothering you so much, but you knew that telling her the truth would definitely end with a good amount of bucks to the face. So you remained silent of the matter and once she realised you weren't going to budge she let you be, though she still was nice enough to bring you dinner to the barn.

You had just finished sorting your last apple for the day. It was time to just sit around in isolation. The sound of the barn door opening takes your attention. It was probably Applejack about to attempt her hundredth talk on how she wants you to go outside. It was the same old same old, but you held strong in never leaving this barn again.

“Why haven't you been around?” That voice, it made your heart skip.

You couldn't help but clench your teeth a little. Well played Applejack. You think to yourself as you sit up and spot the little filly by the barn door.

“I’ve just been busy.” You say trying to hopefully avoid this all.

She looks around nervously as she slowly walks over to you.

“I-I didn't tell anyone.” She says quietly.

Again you felt yourself become cold.

“I know.” You admit.

“So why are you avoiding me?” She asks with a quivering lip.

“Applebloom.” You take a second to think. “What we did wasn't appropriate. I am an adult and you are a child.”

She stomps her hoof to the ground. “I’m a big pony and I can make choices too!”

“You can make choices, but now when it comes to this.” You say, oddly a tinge of regret filling you.

“I-” She looks to the barn door. You look over to see it was closed and locked. “I want to be your special somepony.” She admits.

You can't help just being thrown into total confusion as she springs this onto you.

“Why?” You ask.

“You are so nice and helpful. You deserve a pony that likes you!” She says taking a few steps closer. “I-I don't know much, b-but I can try.” She then looks deep into your eyes. “I can learn.”

You feel your heart beating slightly faster.

“Applebloom, this isn't right.” You try to tell her.

She gives you a sad face. “I-If you want me to go.. I-I’ll leave.”

You gulp again. Tell her to leave! Tell her to leave!

“S-Stay.”

What?!

Slowly she inches her muzzle closer as you meet her halfway. You two lock to each other in a simple yet affectionate kiss. It seems that she takes to the idea very much as she slowly sits in your lap and allows you to hold her close. She pushes into you a little more as you feel her little tongue run against your teeth.

You let her in as you find the opportunity to violate her mouth with your own muscle. At first she is surprised by your actions but soon settles down as you two start to tie tongues with each others. She had a slight taste of apples as you kissed her. The thing is that all this closeness and affection was having a very profound effect in your trousers.

She jumps a little in surprise as she breaks the kiss.

“What was that!?” She says with surprise.

She looks down at your pants as she rocks a little back and forth. Not helping the hardness that was rapidly growing from her movements. It seems she soon understands what it is as she blushes.

“T-Thats ur...” Her voice tappers out.

“Yeah.” You say with a nod.

She looks to you with a blush. “C-Can I see it?”

You felt your cock twitch when she suggested that. Just the fact that it has gone this far was definitely not what you had in mind for the day but now that it was happening, you can't fight this feeling of trying to go a little further.

You gulp a little. “Sure.”

She crawls off your lap as she just sits in front of you waiting. You can't help but feel nervous as she curiously eyes your lower area. You decide that it’s probably too late to go to heaven anyways, so you slowly start to unbuckle your pants and promptly release your member from its cage. It smacks against your stomach from having been trapped in its denum prison for too long.

Applebloom just sits there in awe as she looks to this foreign appendage. This was only turning you on more as she slowly scooches forwards to get a better view.

“Can I touch it?” She asks out of the blue.

“Alright, just, be gentle.” You warn as she gives a small nod.

When she lays her hoof onto your manhood you can't help but take a sharp inhale. It wasn't that she was ruff, in fact her hoof was so soft it was almost unbearable. She flinched back a little when you did this but with a reassuring nod she went back to touching.

“I kinda like it.” She says to break the silence.

She slowly starts to move her hoof up and down along the length. All you could do was grit your teeth as the pleasure starts to set in immediately. She looks to your reaction and can tell that you like what she is doing. Soon she brings her other hoof in as she is now giving you a hoofjob. You weren't sure what was turning you on more, the contact or the fact that every time you looked at her she was just starting right at your third eye with total interest..

“Applebloom, if you don't slow down.. I-” She doesn't let you finish as she starts to work her hooves harder and faster, as if she was about to win a prize. “A-ap-ple b-bloom.” You can't talk steadily as she does this, it was driving you crazy. “I-Im gunna c-”

It was too late. With one final stroke from her, she caused you to explode with ecstasy. Ropes and ropes of your love coated her face before she pulls back shocked from what just happened but that didn't slow your orgasm down as you continued to cum. It honestly felt like years have past since you have came like that. In fact, it probably has been that long.

You look over to see Applebloom examining the fluids that splashed onto her. She plays with the texture some with her hooves, even smells it a little.

“What is this? It’s kinda like tree sap.” She says as she continues to play with it.

“I-it’s.. Well it just means you did a great job.” You say still in your post orgasm glow.

She smiles brightly at you as she looks to the mess you made.

“It means I did good?” She asks with a smile.

You give a nod. She seems to be happy by this. You decide that things have pretty much already went over the line, you might as well not leave the kid hanging.

“Come over here Applebloom.” You say in a calm voice.

She doesn't question as she comes over to you. You quickly take her into your grasp as you gently flip her onto her back. She was a little surprised by this but stays calm.

“What are yuh doin?” She asks unsure as to what was to happen.

“I am going to make you feel good. Do you want to feel good?” You ask making sure she is ready.

“Y-yeah.” She says with a small smile.

“Alright, this might feel weird but trust me.” You say as she gives a nod.

You lean down as you spot her little marehood. It was glistening a little in whatever light was available in the barn. It seems she was already getting turned on, even if she didn't know it. You slowly draw in breath as you catch the slightest scent of her musk in the air. You smile a little as you slowly inch towards her. You give one test lick over the entirety of her young flower.

“W-whoa!” She say as her hips buck instinctively. You pause for a brief moment. “D-do that again.” She says starting to pant a little.

You give her what she asked for as you run your tongue over her tiny flower but you don't stop there. You work your tongue to spread her folds a little as you dip inside her forbidden fruit. She tastes so sweet to you, even with the musk scent filling the air. Gently you push your tongue into her as you can feel her walls squirming around in excitement, even trying to pull you deeper.

You work her insides, licking ever part your tongue could reach. The little squeaks and moans you drew from her only helped fuel your attempts at pleasuring this filly. Soon you start to take notice of the little bucks of her hips as her tiny hooves found their way to the back of your head. She was gently pushing your head forward, as if pleading to go deeper. You pull back and run your soft muscle over her button as she arches her back and lets out a cute moan.

You get back to servicing her as she starts to pick up pace with her breathing and hip movements. You can oddly tell that she was getting close as you work her insides and play with her clit from time to time. .

“I-I think.”

She lets out a final moan as her entire body shakes a little as a gush of fluids fills your mouth. You don't stop yourself from greedily lapping as much as you could from this filly hole. The taste was divine, the sweetest thing you have ever had the pleasure of having upon your lips. Soon though she relaxed and removed her hooves as you sat back up, looking down to the filly as she pants heavily.

“How do you feel?” You ask.

“W-What was that?” She asks panting as if she ran for miles.

“It was an orgasm Applebloom. Same thing that happened to me earlier.” You inform her.

“It looked good, but I didn't know it would be that good.” She says.

You can't help but chuckle a little at her. You then start to take notice that the sun wasn't as high as it use to be.

“We should get you cleaned up and back to the house. Don't want Applejack worrying.” You say.

She nods while you escort her to the back of the barn where you kept a few barrels of water, encase you needed to wash up. You help her wash so it would go by quickly and also do a quick scrub of yourself. Once you both were dry enough you walk to the barn door.

“Applebloom.” You call to her. “Remember, this is our secret.” You say.

She smiles at you with a nod just before trotting to the farm house. You return to the barn as you close the door and promptly lean against it in shock. You had just fooled around with a filly and by god was it the best time you have ever had. You weren't sure where this would go and if you would get caught, but all you knew is you wanted to see how far you could take it.


A few weeks have passed since you and Applebloom started fooling around. Nothing too major happening but just the licking and kissing continued, you didn't want to pressure the little filly into something as serious as sex yet. So you played it cool and left it for her to decide when it should happen.

After that first time you slowly started to integrate yourself back into the Apple clan. Applejack was happy to see you around and obviously more happy than you ever were before. You ate dinners with them and even went out with Applejack to a few bars just to make her feel better about your socializing. While you never went home with a mare in the end, she was just happy you were trying.

Thankfully ponyville was none the wiser when it came to what you and Applebloom were doing and to her word she kept everything between you two a secret, even from the other crusaders. You are suddenly brought from thought as you hear a soft knock on the barn door.

“Come in.” You say as the door opens.

You see the little filly walk inside as she closes the door and locks it. You know this sign all too well on what it meant. Once she turns around you notice something odd. There is a certain fire in her eyes that you haven't seen before.

“I-I wanna try.. more.” She says hesitantly.

You and her had this talk before. When she meant more, you knew she was talking about sex.

“Are you sure?” You ask making sure she was ready for something so serious.

She gives a sheepish nod. “I-I am ready.”

You can't help but get excited from this as she slowly walks up to you, swaying her hips in an attempt to be sexy.. It was working. Soon she closes the distance as she look up to you with half lidded eyes. You swear this filly picks up stuff quickly. You are almost helpless as your hard on is about to burst from your jeans from this display.

She brushes past you as she falls onto her back in the hay.

“A little roll in the hay?” You say with a devilish smirk.

She chuckles a little and seems to lighten up. You figured out quickly that playing around with her beforehand always helped her relax quickly. So you’re happy to make some small jokes to get things going right. You fall onto the hay pile next to her as you both lean towards each other, soon your lips meet in a battle of the tongues.

This was something she learned quickly as well and she was a natural at kissing. You wanted to enjoy it more but she pulls away panting.

“I-I want it now.” She pleads.

You are a little concerned, seeing as you haven't even got into foreplay yet. She must be pretty dry. As soon as you see her nethers dripping wet you immediately find any previous thoughts leaving your mind.

“Alright.” You say to her.

You get off the hay and drop your jeans in one swift motion on. Letting your manhood into the chilly air. It did little to deter you as you fall to your knees and gently spread her legs. You use the hay she was lying on to prop her up to an appropriate height.

“Are you sure about this?” You ask one more time as you line yourself up.

“Y-yes.” She says with a small nod and a furious blush.

You feel your skin become tingly as you slowly press your member to her entrance. She gasps a little at the touch, you can't help but do the same, feeling her little wet lips against your tip.

“Just try to relax alright?” You say trying to prepare her.

She gives a nod as you slowly start to bury yourself in. Each attempt is like hell as you try your hardest to just break thru. With one quick thrust you feel your head pop in. You both gasp when this happens. You can't believe how tight and soft she is. You look down to see she is panting more. You look down to see her dripping wet, she definitely is looking for more.

You don't let her down as you continue to push into her. Every inch was a struggle as you try to find her hymen. That was until you found yourself bottoming out, you looked to her surprised.

“W-whats wrong?” She asks seeing your expression.

“W-well I thought ponies have hymens?” You question awkwardly.

“I-I broke mine during a crusader accident.” She admits.

You let out a sigh of relief, at least it shouldn't be very painful then. You had heard that breaking a hymen was very painful, so this should be more enjoyable.

“Alright, I am going to start move now.” You inform her as she gives yet another nod.

You slowly pull out of her. Clenching your teeth as you feel her walls desperately trying to keep you inside. Once you were far enough to where just your tip was inside. You gently push all the way in again. Applebloom throws her head back as she lets a moan escape. You repeat this process to get her body use to the intrusion.

“Faster” She says between breaths.

You wouldn't deny her anything. You slowly start picking up the pace as you pound this filly. Each thrust in causes a wet slap to echo thru the barn as your two bodies meet. Each slam in causes her to moan out in pleasure as you tried to drive a little deeper. Her walls were trying everything they could to cling to you as you worked her over.

Her tightness never let up as you found your pace, you easily could feel you weren't going to last very long. Slowly the pressure started to build inside of you as you were nearing a peak.

“I’m getting there.” You warn her.

She looks up to you. “Inside.”

That was all you needed to know as you lean forward and take her lips to your own. She moans in your mouth as you double your efforts. You find her button with one of your hands as you press down hard on it. You can feel her scream a little in ecstasy into your mouth. You kept pounding and rubbing to give this filly something she would never forget.

The pressure was building and it felt like she was getting tighter by the second. Soon you give her a few more strokes as you then push all the way in. You can't help but grunt in her mouth as you release your seed into her womb. You can feel a gush of fluids slip past your cock and onto your legs as her body squirmed from her own orgasm.

You both break apart from your kiss as you pant. Locking eyes as you feel her insides slowly trying to milk everything you’re worth. Soon everything dies down. You pull out of her and flop onto the pile of hay next to her as you both try to catch your breaths. You feel the little filly snuggle up to you as she rests her head onto your chest.

“I love you.” She says with a smile.

You can't help but smile back at her. “I love you too Applebloom.”

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