A great mess

by discorded whooves

Rating: teen
Tags: Romance, Dark
Length: 2047

the doctor gets in over his head and soon gives into his dark side. leaving ponyville in a pitifull state. can his compaion derpy save him befor he breaks everyponys hearts?

the doctor has done it. putting ponyvill in a state of chaos, he gose insane thinking that theres nothing he can do. in his search to feel better he gets a little…"close" to some of the mane six. leaving derpy in the dust, lost and confused she has to keep the doctor away from the other ponies if its the last thing she dose.

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2013-07-23 07:38:55 UTC

Giving in

so....i guess this is it......

some how i've done it again.

put all my loved ones in danger.......

"d-doctor? are you okay?"asked derpy

"i....just wanted to help......now...well just LOOK derpy! ponyvill is in utter CHAOS! and why? because i tryed to help...."

"doctor....it's not your fault....it was discord...."

"discord? HA! even if it was I added to the already burning flame."

"doctor...i..."

"you what? nothing. im done. this is it. i've hurt one to many people......im done. *cries* its my fault all my fault...."

"d-doctor! your a different color!"

"go derpy."

"wha-"

"JUST GO."

now im here. in the TARDIS. alone. like i should be....ugh.

mabye i should talk to somepony......

mabye not.....

ugh. i need butter. *walks into TARDIS kitchen and opens up fridge* lets see....i need butter....milk....oooo!~ <3 some chocolate....and...that should be good.*brings food over to counter* i wonder what butter melted on chocolate tastes like.....*pours melted butter on the chocolate bar*.....mmmm~<3

okay. i really do need to go do something though....*walks to control room* WAIT! *backs up into bathroom* what?!?! why the? HOW THE HELL DID I GROW WINGS?!?!

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*pacing* okay......okay. breath.......i dont know how or why this happened but it's okay.....im sure somepony has a book on this.....TWIGHLIGHT! ah ha! she LIVES in a library! she MUST have some book that can help! *runs to control room*

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  *TARDIS landing*  I LOVE THAT SOUND!!!

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*walks out of TARDIS *  "Hello, twilight!" i said

"oh, hello doctor, what can i do for you?" asked twilight.

"i seem tho have grown pegasus wings....and these are bigger then normal..." i explained.

"you also seem to have changed color...are you looking for a book?"

"ah, yes.....do you have one?"

"on this no. but i have a hunch. did discord ever tap you on the head?"

"now that i think about....yes he did."

"that means your discorded."

"im what."

"discorded."

"and that means?"

*facehoove* "it means discord made you the complete opposite of how you normally are."

"no wonder i've been having feeling and urges i've never felt before....."

"okay, you have fun with that."

"maybe......maybe i'll try to please one.....twilight...can you help?"

"yeah.sure- wait. what?!"

"you can help me with one..." *walks over to twilight and gently pushes her down*

"d-doctor! w-what are you doing?!"

"just pleasing an urge" *takes tail and moves it slowly up and down twilight's chest down to her flank*

"d-doctor *moans* w-what are you- p-lease....don't...."

"why not? whats wrong? can't take a little teasing?"

"w-what about derpy?"

*pushes down hard on twilight and leans down into her face* "what about derpy? who cares for the little brat? she's quite childish....un-like you."

"w-what?"

*gets off of twilight* "oh, too bad you just broke the urge. i was really looking forward to fulfilling that one....i'll be at sugar cube corner if you want to talk" *walks into TARDIS*

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*walks to control panel* i dont see why twilight brought up that stupid girl. she was always just walking around the TARDIS breaking things and running into walls. *pressing buttons* i wander if pinkie pie has those extra buttery muffins i ordered....wait.....i ordered the cake...not muffins.....ugh! i need to get my mind off of derpy! *TARDIS landing* i dont even like muffins......*walks out of TARDIS*

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"hey pinkie pi-*glomp* UGH! get off of me pinkie!"

"hi doc! what can i do for you?"

"well for one GET OFF OF ME!"

"oh yeah! sorry *steps off doctor* anything else?"

"yeah, do you have the cake i ordered?"

"no....derpy just came and picked up that order....she said something like "maybe if i deliver the doctor his cake he will forgive me for what i did....whatever it was i did....." she looked really sad....what happened?"

"i- nothing.....nothing happened...."

"oh....okay! i just made some cupcakes, would you like to try one?!"

"i um sure....*click*....wait what flavor cupcakes?"

"CHOCOLATE! DUH!"

"oh...too bad...i was hopping it was a different type of "cupcake". you know what i mean right?"

"um....doc i don't really think that that's a goo-*roughly pushes pinkie to the ground* DOC!"

"whats wrong pinkie pie? don't want to let me try your cupcakes?"

"doc i-i don't i-i really uh..."

"calm down pinkie and shut up. *shoves hoof into pinkies mouth* better..."

*mumbles*

"what was that? this is going to be fun...*evil smile*...okay pinkie you ready?" *gently strokes pinkies stomach with tail*

*muffled moans*

"you like that pinkie? good to know....now. i'm going to take my hoof out of your mouth... you have to keep quite though. got it?"

*shakes head yes*

"good.*removes hoof from pinkies mouth.* now....to the TARDIS. *gets off of pinkie and pushes her into the TARDIS* okay....lets begin..."*pushes pinkie down as hard as possible and mounts the pony*

"ow...doctor are you sure that...i mean...."

"pinkie. shut up. i know what i want. and right now...that's your virgins. *roughly kisses pinkie* understood?"

"y-yes"

"good. now....*knock on TARDIS door* DEAR CELESTIA! buck this! *gets off of pinkie and kicks her in the process* i hate these ponies so much....*opens TARDIS door* what do you want?!"

"d-doctor! it's you! i-im really sorry for what i did. i dont know exactly what i did but...i really am sorry...." said a sad derpy.

"i-i.....derpy.....you should go...." said the doctor sadly

"cant i come in for a little though? if your kicking me out i need my stuff. *half smile* and heres your cake..."

"oh um thanks....i guess you could come in.....but, derpy im not in a good mood....*derpy walks to the TARDIS kitchen, doctor follows* you can put the cake here....*head gesture toward counter*"

"as pinkie says, okie dokie lokie!*puts cake up, pushes fork off counter* oh...sorry i'll pick that up *leans down and over*"

"derpy thats-......" thats flank thats what that is....... "thats..uh...okay...."

"*stands back up* oh! im sorry....i forget im a mare sometimes...."

"no....thats okay...*walks up to derpy making her walk backwards into a wall, thus pining her* its just fine. *puts muzzle on derpys* right? just perfect."

"d-doctor...i......i dont think that this a good idea...."

"why? every other pony wanted it to be you not them...who do you want it to be? *gently rubs derpys lower spine*"

"*moans then whispers* you..."

"who?"

"you."

"WHO? WHO DO YOU WANT DERPY? *pushes derpy down hard onto the TARDIS floor* TELL ME WHO?"

"YOU!"

"thats all i needed to hear.*dark smile*"

the urges

Pomf!~

"you like that derpy? ha, how about this. *nibbbles derpy's ears while gently stroking her wings*"

"d-doctor*moans*"

"quite now. im going to work. *smiles and kisses derpy on the nose*"

i pushed derpy down on the floor then gently caressed her as i slid my hardened genitals into the wet mare. this being derpy's first she made a some what hurt moan.  i paused and waited for the mare to gain back her strength, as soon as her breathing was normal i began moving my self in and out of her wet, warm,  sticky, delightful marehood. she moaned with delight as i gently kissed her neck. my delight was growing as slid into her warm virginals. derpy, though, seemed to be having a hard time. breathing in small gasps. soon blood was also greeted into our little party of wetness in derpy. at the arrival of derpys virgins, i reached my peek. i let out a ruff growl as i came into derpy. derpy moaned with the arrival of my fluids in her. i was done, for now, but derpy hadn't came yet. i exited the mare and ran a hoof down her stomach as i made my way down to her marehood. i gently licked at it, chancing different areas to see what fit her needs. at one area derpy let out a loud moan. i smiled at my discovery and continued licking untill suddenly derpys fluids squirted into my mouth. it was sweet on the tongue, i liked it. i continued until stopped moaning and no more of her sweetness was left. i was tired so i walked to the TARDIS bedroom. when i got there i remembered that i had left derpy in the kitchen....meh. she was fine. i slipped into bed and passed out. god, i am really tired after sex.

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when i woke up i forgot derpy was on the kitchen floor and tripped over the mare.

oops....

"*groans*"

i wonder if i should wake her up.....

"d-doctor~"

how odd.....she's dreaming about me....

"n-no...no. NO! NO DOCTOR! *jumps up heaving* o-oh, hi doctor......*blushes and stares at the ground*.....i-im sorry...."

"i...uh...mm...dont be derpy. you were.....good....i..um...yeah..."

"yeah........"

"do you..uh..want to have breakfast with me? i have muffins....."

"really?"

"um...yeah, sure."

"okay!~ <3 *walks over to closet with dry food like muffins*"

i hope she doesn't think i wanther here.....

"hey, doctor.....why is pinkie pie in the closet?"

"why is who where?!"

"pinkie pie...she's in the closet...."

"i uh, stayed here last night....i couldn't get the TARDIS door open....." said a very sketchy pinkie

"*twitch* you stayed...here...as in....in the closet?"i asked disturbed.

"uh....yeahhhh....."she answered.

"*walks over to pinkie pie and pushes derpy over* what all did you hear? *pushes pinkie down and jumps on top of her*

what did you see?! *shoves muzzle into pinkies face* what all do you know!?"

"i-i-i....u-ummm....."

"PINKIE?!"

"y-you and derpy had sex......"

*pushes pinkie hard into the floor and gets off of her.* "go. both of you. leave. pretend like nothing happened. and if anypony hears about what happened here.......lets just say you wont be happy with the consequences......now go."

"d-doctor im sorry please, just-"

"GO YOU MINDLESS FOOL! NOPONY LIKES YOU DERPY! I BUCKED YOUR FLANK FOR THE SIMPLE MATTER OF YOUR EASY! NOW LEAVE!"

"i-i....im so sorry...*runs out of TARDIS crying*"

"doc, that wasn't nice"

"not nice? i'll show you not nice. *smiles dementedly*"

"i,um, dont think thats necessary"

"*click* whats not  necessary you asked for it. *kicks knife off of counter. flips and catches it in mouth*"

"n-no."

"oh yes."

"no."

*smiles and drops knife into hoof*

"NO!"

*twitch*

at that moment i remembered the dream i had watched derpy have earlier. remembering the pitiful mare i had a burst of passionate, hate. the anger that flowed through me drove me to use the damned thing in my hand. i ran to the pink mare and slit her arm open...

"pinkie....i...."

"i-i h-how could you....doctor.....your a MONSTER! WHY?! WHY DOCTOR?!"

"pinkie i think you should leave....NOW."

"DONT EVER SPEAK TO ME AGAIN! *limps out of TARDIS*

thats probably a good idea....

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i feel like a monster. i can't believe that i just....hurt her....one of my friends. i pushed away my companion....scared away my friend..... sexually teased another.....im horrible.....i....should die. why can't i just bucking die. all the time, every time......i deserve death....dont i? wait no......i deserve to live....to live with what i've done and bare it forever....ponies are lucky....they get to die. they can finally rest, but i can't......I JUST WANT TO DIE! * begins crying* i-i just want to sleep....sleep forever. and never have to wake up to this horrible world....i-im done.........i cant do this....i need to clear my mind.....somewhere where nopony is. that way i can't hurt anypony eles. *pacing* where to go...where to go......i know! the everfree forest! *runs to TARDIS control room* lets go! *pushing buttons* *TARDIS landing* a walk here cant hurt anypony!

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*walks out of TARDIS* this will be good for my health.....the trees.....and flowers.........and cute animals.........and that loud screa-.........loud screaming? what the hay?! *walks toward the screaming* why the hay are they here......

i saw the...what did they call themselves.....ah, the "cutie mark crusaders" thats what they had said...i remember.....when me and derpy were fighting discord. i saw them. i saved them. one of my few accomplishments i had made during that fight.....what were their names again......the yellow one was...applebloom! and the white one.......she's related to rarity....oh....oh yeah! sweetie bell! and the orphan, um, scootaloo.....i think....i should say hi!

*walks over to the cutie mark crusaders*

"hi girls! how are you today?"i said with a smile.

"howdy, doc!" said applebloom happily.

"no dont ta-" stared scootaloo, but sweetie bell cut her off.

"AhHhHhH!!!!!!!!!!! RUN!!!! REMEMBER WHAT HE DID TO PINKIE!!!!!"yelled the filly

"i-i what...."i whispered.

"what'cha talkin' bout' sweetie bell?" asked a confused applebloom

"h-he cut pinkie....she told me...w-we need to get out of here guys...."