King of Shards: The First Fony

by Mr-Afrox

Rating: mature
Tags: Main 6, Gore, Original Character, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Dark, Comedy, Other, Romance, Sex, Tragedy, Adventure, Discord, Princess Celestia, Alternate Universe
Length: 3667

Who is the greatest scientist in year 2055 of Equestria? Kevin Sugarcoat of course. Majoring in all science-related school programs, and being the 1st to win...The Equestrian Scientist Skirmish.But what drives such man to madness is it to be rejec

Who is the greatest scientist in year 2055 of Equestria?
Kevin Sugarcoat of course. Majoring in all science-related school programs.
Being the 1st to win...The Equestrian Scientist Skirmish.
He is truly the worker that everyone would hire ,but what drives such man to madness.
Is it to be rejected by their faithful love?
Or the weight dropped on their shoulder all their life...Oh Kevin what have you done?

"The First fony" is the first fiction to analyze an hardcore and adventurous experience in the skin of an hybrid. With many secrets and a world that hopefully for me many would like to know.
But as to redirect everyone this takes place in equestrian territory.
Get ready for sadness,thrills,violence.romance,adventure and many more intriguing aspects
of this eternal slice of life...

The fiction will be divided in many chapters
From "Torments" to "Happiness?"
It will contain in depth information about the hybrid,his powers and many other aspects of him and surely.
For the most unveiling parts, many adventures,secrets and interactions in the now 2055 Equestrian world.

and if y'all sugar cubes like it i may make sequels all as unique as the first fiction
if this is successful a animation series will be made out of it :3 and maybe even more
All Art and Character drawing progress at : Link

Published 2013-07-11 17:10:01 UTC
Last updated 2013-07-11 17:10:01 UTC

The Never-Ending Torments of Life

(Summary)

Kevin's downfall and exile to his residence driving him mad into making his own little project.
Kevin's mind starts to break into many pieces.
Follow him as he does the unforgivable...

(The downfall of Kevin Sugarcoat.)

"Torment’s, engaging my every move."

In the new days of Equestria,
Science had changed the whole meaning of power.
As technology was taking over, being a scientist paid extremely well.
As you looked in the industry's and secret compounds, everypony worked as hard as they could to get a large pay check.
When they were done, many thought it was too much.
And so a few years after the Industrial breakdown, many left the industry's to make something else out of their lives.
Some did less productive things but as they loved it, it was fine, right?

One did not think like them.
He worked even extra hours; it was none other than the son of the past century's greatest scientist 'Rodrigo Sugarcoat'.
Kevin Sugarcoat’s pride was talked about in every Equestria Daily Magazines and he was famous for his hardened projects.
As you saw him working, you could see his work reflect in his deep black eyes covered by his protection glasses.
Not to only notice his red-dotted coat and blue mane.
But all great colts have secrets and his was his love for the great Celestia herself.
At night when Celestia slept along with her sister, he would sneak on the balcony and stealthily clop to her.
Kevin knew his obsession for her would bring him no g

So Kevin resigned himself and said while flying up Celestia's Tower,
"One more time and then I’m done." He grinned silently.
Kevin got up the balcony but as doing so he forgot he hadn't strapped his glasses well enough, they fell on the balcony.
He looked petrified and thought, “Ah, Fuck!” Said Kevin, as he lowered his head to pick them up he heard a familiar voice.
“What are you doing here?” said the voice.

He looked up and saw no other than Celestia's face and it surely did not seem pleased with his break-in.
The scientist gathered some fancy words in his head and said,
"Well you see thy Majesty; thou were just flying by and dropped his glasses."
Celestia looked at him as doubtful as she could get and said,
"Than what his in that bag you seem to carry preciously with you tonight?"
Kevin, shocked looked at her and said,
"Nothing special just some scientist stuff...Eeyup!"

Celestia grabbed the bag furiously as she saw he was lying and looked terrified at the contents of the bag.
She screamed out and said,
"You disgusting little pervert of a prick." Kevin looked and said scared as hell, "Love and tolerance remember majesty."
Celestia's face cooled down and she then said firmly, "Love and tolerate this."
She then burned Kevin's eye with her powers and told him to never come even near her or any land close to her
Or he would be banished to the sun.

"Kevin flew away in pain and despair."
He knew that's what he deserved so he landed in direction of his office, but to his surprise it was on fire.
He then fell to his knees and cried.
All his life's work was in his office, but now he knew he would never do what he loved or see his friends.
After a long time of crying in pain, he ran to the closest train station,
hoping that his family residence away from everypony wasn't on fire as well.
After a long 3 day trip, he finally saw his residence.

(False Hope)
"Lies, hitting sense with no remorse."

Kevin ran happily to his new house indeed he looked happier.
Deep inside him the feelings of losing everything had only broken a good colt.
He was not the Hard-working Kevin we knew all the days he passed in the house.
Kevin got hazier as there was nothing to do and there were no more plans to follow.

A few days later.
Kevin was searching through his dad's old projects and found a box locked in codes.
He then remembered that when his father died, he had given him a paper containing some weird dialect.
He didn't understand back then and just held on it all his life as a constant memory of his role model.
He took the paper out of his coat and tried to match the codes with the one's the box had, and finally unlocked it.

To his surprise he saw blueprints for an old project his dad never truly completed.
He then started reading the name of the plans and it all said the same thing, "trans-dimensional portal."
It went from part one to part five.
Smiling and laughing in ecstasy, It was so many years since his dad was gone, but finally he came back to save him.
He looked in the window thinking about him
A few tears of joy slided down his face, he then hoofed his tears away and started working on the project day and night.

Only drinking his favourite coffee called, 'Equestria's Bliss.' After assembling all the elements, he was finally done.
"This portal would be his new life's work." He thought.
He looked at the machine in full joyfulness and pulled the 'on' lever he built. But the machine didn't seem to start.

Kevin looked down sadly. As he was quite sleepy he went to sleep, then the next morning he applied some repairs.
He then tried again...but with no surprise it didn't work.
The Colt punched the portal with rage, as he was going back to bed.
He looked back and saw the machine starting up the portal, swirling at the highest speeds.
Kevin ran as fast as possible to the control room and watched.
A flaming silhouette broke out the portal like if it was giving birth to a new-born.

The floor then bursted on fire. The creature then whipped her tail and extinguished the fire then looked straight at Kevin.
As he was a bit scared, the but had good manners. He came to the creature and said "Hey, my name is Kevin."
"The creature looked at Kevin for a while"
"Do u, speak?" Kevin said, slowly and out of breath.
"She then looked at him again."
"Yes sir, as a matter a fact I do speak, I’ll have you know that I was simply analyzing you."
"Analyzing, me?" Kevin said, worried more than ever.
"Yes, I was looking inside your mind to see why I was here." Said the flaming female.
"Looking into my mind!", "How..?" Kevin said, worried furthermore.
"Whoa! You don’t have to act all worried on me sir, it's only a power that I carry. Many of my race, have different powers, doesn’t your race have any?"
"Oh by the way now that can hopefully engage into a "grown-up" conversation."
"My name is Rose PaddleHat." Kevin calmed down and looked at Rose."

"Well I am a Pegasi."
"I'm sorry, I shouldn’t be surprised by magic anyway many unicorns use it."
"Us pegasi's can control the weather through clouds."
"That’s quite an interesting power." Said Rose.
"But enough talking, why am I exactly here. If I may?" Said Rose, as easy-going as she always was in her past.

Kevin grinned and said,
"Well in a way I have no idea, I was making this portal you came out of as it was my father’s creation."
"But I never knew such an outcome would be created." Rose looked intrigued by the subject
"So you wanted to make your dad’s work, shine again but why this work in particular?”
Kevin told Rose to sit down so they could talk; he at least owed her an explanation.
They started talking, as they finished talking it was already night.
"And well, now I’m here." Said Kevin, after finishing his life story.

Rose smiled.
"You have had quite the hard life Kevin, you are an admirable man. I think personally that I should help you in your work."
As you told me no one in this world saw my kind yet."
"In a way without selling myself out, you could gather information about me and release it to public maybe then..."
Kevin cutted Rose in exclamation.

"Celestia would accept me again for my great work in finding you, and then I could go back to my place." Kevin implied.
Rose happily replied "It could actually work!"
Rose got up showing her pink fur, piercing green eyes and flaming red hair.
Her tail strolling down in a trail of checkered shards, filling each one with red and white
The two started working, the scientist finally felt his flame inside him.
He was ready to work as hard as possible to get Celestia back.

After 3 months of gathering information, about her and learning all her aspect's.
From her magical sword to her never-ending powers.
Rose settled down and screamed in happiness
"Whoa, we're finally done."
Kevin looked in a Big Mac attitude and said "Eeyup!"

She then looked back at Kevin and said
"I guess I’m heading back, it was lovely to know you Kevin but after all my family must be worried."
Kevin smiled
"Oh yes of course, I’ll go start up the portal."
Kevin got to the control room and has she looked at Kevin"
"He grinned madly and pulled up his hoof in a cross symbol."
He then pulled down a lever, making all the doors shut themselves.
A wall door opened behind Rose, that door had a machine strapped to it.

That same machine absorbed Roses' powers making her vulnerable to Kevin.
"What the fuck is this Kevin?! Why are you are doing this?!" Exclaimed Rose in confusion.
Rose screamed as the machine strapped her to the ground in brute force.
Kevin came out the door and smiled. His mind was gone; his obsession had reached its peak.

"You see Rose, this is what friends are for when one friend gives you everything."
"You have to give them something back at least a little something."
"My gift is my little cock for my little vixen, I’m such a good rhymer!" He then proceeded towards Rose.
"You fucking bastard, I trusted you!" Rose said in rage.
"Trust is such a big word." said Kevin, calmly.
"NOW SHUT THE FUCK UP! And get ready for the time of my life."
Rose looked at Kevin and spitted in his face.
He then slapped her and started to mount her as his large member was entering her she started screaming,

"Hmph, this is even better than I thought."
"A virgin? How do you like it knowing that you’re just a worthless cum dumpster?"
Still in shock of the situation she cried but no words came out her mouth, she knew it would only pleasure him even more
While raping her.
He used his hoof and took the blood off her vaginal area, licking it once and making her gag on it afterwards.
"Don’t you like your virginity served rare, Oh fuck I’m hilarious!" He said, with no more equine soul inside himself.

Keeping her in mount until she couldn’t take anymore, then fainted.
"Don’t faint on me you cunt, it doesn’t mean I can't still have some fun!" He then processed to cutting her.
Licking her blood slowly then came "your no fun whore."
He then stabbed her hand.
Then took the no longer conscious Rose and threw her off the valley near his house without looking,
Without having a care in the world if she was alive.
Kevin walked back in his house planning to get out now and go to Celestia, he changed ideas and slept instead.

(Lonesome Revenge)
"Revenge, controlling my mind, destroying my vision."
The tides and winds of the valley ocean raged engulfing every living thing,
But it had seemed that Rose wasn't one of them, she was courageous in all ways.
By that maybe, the most vengeful of her kind.
Still bleeding from her lower regions,
She pulled the knife out of her paw and climbed the valley in pain.

It was not her mind driving her anymore, it was only rage and revenge contemplating her every move.
As she kept climbing, a rock fell off the valley.
Only a few moments of reaction were given now,
It was jump or die.
Rose stared at the humongous rock falling towards her and surprisingly sliced through the rock.
Her fur became rigid, her eyes red, her claws re-enacted from the grave they were put in.
She then rushed up the valley still in pain, but nothing could explain how revenge was more important than her body.

She then broke Kevin's door open and saw him asleep.
Kevin then woke up and threw acid at her, she then fell to the ground in pain.
"Oooh great so you weren't dead after all, well more fun for me it seems." Said the crazy pony.
One small word came out of her mouth "S...su...sucker!" Said Rose.
She then took out a knife and stabbed Kevin in the neck, he then fell backwards and choked on his blood.
"Y...you whore!" Said the scientist.
Rose looked at Kevin and hit him on the face many times as she could.

She then took him and threw him off the valley assuring his
body was now nothing but broken pieces of flesh.
The young vixen then burned Kevin's house down and walked away through the night, and as exhausted as she was fell asleep on the grassy ground.
No one would ever believe such horrors would happen in such a beautiful Equestrian night as this one.

But this was only the beginnings.

Character Sheet:Kevin Sugarcoat

(born Wed Apr 14 1999)

Kevin Sugarcoat.

Son of one of the Greatest scientist in Equestria "Rodrigo Sugarcoat".
An Equestria-renowned scientist himself.
He dedicates his life to work as a Scientist in Cloudsdale's Industry of Rainbows for 20 years all in search of Celestia's love,
The young scientist endures his rejection from her majesty then leaves the industry.
He then goes to his own residence in a faraway valley in Equestria working on his secret personal project.

Kevin locks himself out of the world.
He his quite an hypocrite bastard as the public will see in the story.
He his also quite Arrogant but the only seemingly good side of life is the passion for his work and cautiousness.
He is quite a bossy and a cruel pony in many ways something is awaiting Kevin.

he may not like it but its all he deserves for his terrible acts and his obsessive god complex.

Physical Aspects

[Status] : Deceased
A very tall pegasi with deep black eyes.
One of the eyes burned by Celestia for his constant stalking.
A deep red fur with small spots.

He is always in a lab coat and wears over the head scientist glasses on his dark blue colored mane and tail.

Double Persona Drawing here: Kevin Sugarcoat

Falsehood Beginnings

(Nothingness)
"from nothing,what am i truly?"

After being asleep for quite a while,Rose woke up and now she was truly smelling the ashes.
Not only those of what was left of Kevin's Burned Domain but the ashes of her soiled body.
Even as strong as this vixen was she broke in tears to her faith.
After a few hours,she felt a bump in her stomach she then only thought she was hungry so she told to herself
"gladly i took some food from this pricks retarded house" she then continued eating her food.

After a few hours the bump hit again but harder and painfully she tried to stay asleep and ignore it.
The next morning she woke up,only to see her lower regions covered in blood.
She looked terrified at the cord connecting her to her beautiful son.
She was weak and on the brink of death.
As she watched her son Rose laid her paw on his forehead giving him all her memories,experience and knowledge.
Now he could survive.
After doing so she fell on the ground and whispered "your name is ...Afrox..."

Rose never woke up after this it was her last words brought upon her son

(Surviving Innocence)

"Rejected,i dive into life"
My name is Afrox there's not much i can say else than this.
I've learned to kill when i only started walking my mother died a few minutes after having me.
I lost everything it seems but i only feel in my heart that there is more for me in this unknown and strange hateful world.
As i looked at the chariot of food lurking through the night
i stalked them slowly.

Afrox was ready to kill and as he kept an eye on one the preys.
He fearlessly dived into the chariot's livestock then ran off with the dead chicken's he held in his mouth.
As he ran away he could hear the farmer’s behind him scream in rage.
He was sick of all the hate they pushed into him,
Only if he could explain to them why he needs the food.
Maybe they could be friends but the young fony knew this wasn’t a possibility and so he ran and ran as far as he could.
After reaching is home and eating he fell asleep under the bright blaze of the stars of Equestria.
But little did he know that when he would see day again,not only a new beginning would be offered but his life may be too...

Afrox woke up and smelled the beautiful fresh air that the forests of this land could deliver.
As he took a walk into the forest he heard noises,
Some of the most creepy and unsubtle noises,
Afrox ran into faith toward the noises but to his surprise.
The trees shattered themselves in a fiery blaze of brute force Shards of wood revolving everywhere.
The young lad got to cover but as he looked into the broken wood dust.
It revealed one of the most disgustingly humongous monsters to ever live...

(The Beast)
Song i made for this encounter: Song

"What are the monsters,inside me i ask again what am i truly?"
Sharp teeth,Tentacles as arms,a gryphon’s lower regions,this monster was surely unheard of.
But Afrox knew he could not back down or he would perish,the beast charged,he did as well.
As both of the opponents were charging only manliness could fit in this battle,sweat,blood,stress and pressure.
The first slash Afrox threw glances the monster’s neck while he was dodging its charge in 10 seconds flat.
The beast noticed too late that it was a feint , though, when the second slash doubled him over.
It expelled the last bit of choking air from his throat.

He grabbed Afrox and launched him on the ground.
Afrox broke his ribs,the young soul was literally choking on air from the monster’s view,Afrox was weak.
He started laughing.
"Heads Up...Punk!" said Afrox falling from the sky.
The monster looked up surprised as Afrox slashed through his face.
The blow felt too sluggish and Afrox knew it.
The monster grasped on Afrox yet again but this time by his tail.
He threw him through a boastful of trees,Afrox’s body crashed through every of them.
The beast grinned in his direction,and started walking towards him slowly.
Afrox in a fainting situation got a quick flashback from his mother’s life.

"Daaad...I can't do this,i won’t be able to pass this test."
"now Rose what did i tell you about giving up."
"I know,i know, never stop fighting for your future"
"Good Rose now let’s prove them wrong!"
"Yes Daddy!".

Coming back to his senses the monster was closer and walking faster and faster towards him.
A light cracked through the ground.
The foundation of the forest engulfing itself.
Only to reveal a top of the line Afrox in a glowing shape no one would have been after all this damage.
"You..are dead" said Afrox with a sadistic yet a serious smile.
The now more powerful than ever fony.
Broke through the air slicing it at split second.
The monster now scared tried to run.
Afrox got to his neck then suddenly a shard of energy appeared on his hoof,only to reveal its devastating power.
Half of the monster’s neck was now torn out like a beef.
Afrox landed on the ground leaving a fiery trail behind him.
As the monster choked on his blood.
Afrox fainted,this was yet another obstacle for our young hero as many other await...

(Suffering Maps)

"Roads , carrying me further towards what seems to be my faith"
As Afrox was waking up,he could see the now dead monster in a blurry vision.
He then got up and walked to the monster’s corpse.
He could smell the rotten corpse and covered is nose as he searched its remains for clues and important belongings.
After a few minutes of searching the giant body,he found a map,covered in blood,it said "Land Map of Equestria".
It covered a few points of the world but Afrox seemed interested by only one region and it was named Ponyville.
Why was our young one interested by such?you may ask,it was all because of the small note it carried saying"

Ponyville : where everypony is accepted.In this note he saw a way that he could get accepted.
Even if Afrox was rough,aggressive and sometimes very mean,inside is heart he always wanted to be accepted.
A few moments later...
Afrox was done packing is stuff for the journey towards PonyVille,but to is surprise after looking at the map.
He noticed that it was at the other side of Equestria.
"Wha...the fuck!"said the young soul.
Afrox looked down for a while and got up.
"im not...gonna give up,ill travel there by foot if i have to,ill find my place in this cruel world!!!"exclaimed The protagonist.

Our courageous young hero,sets out to his destiny,it is time for the Adventure to begin...