Revenge of the Humans

by AWOL the Hipster

2. Slaughter

Previous ChapterNext Chapter

3. Revelations PT. 1 - They Call Me AWOL (Unedited)

THIS CHAPTER IS COMPLETELY UNEDITED. IT IS A DRAFT KIND OF THING. IT STILL NEEDS TO BE EDITED BY QUILLIN. HATE ME, I HAD TOO MUCH SCHOOL FOR THREE MONTHS AND MANY MANY PROJECTS. THREE MONTHS, I KNOW. THIS IS FOR CLARIFICATION OF REASON BEHIND THE ATTACK ON EQUESTRIA, I JUST HAD TO RELEASE THIS. AS SOON AS THIS IS EDITED AND PERFECT, I WILL ADD THE FINAL PRODUCT. THIS IS SHORT BECAUSE, ONCE AGAIN, THIS NEEDS MORE EDITING.

I think I am getting better at writing through. And screaming through caps.

Chapter Three

                                                                        Revelations PT. 1

Location: Pony Solar System

Year: 2994

Date: 7/4

Time: 1200

The Mane Six and Princess Luna are still in hiding.

I looked at my watch as I waited my turn for a meeting with the General. My whole a squad had to have a one on one meeting with him today. I tapped my right foot on the ground impatiently as I waited my turn.

I averted my gaze from my watch to Shadow who was sharpening his knife with another knife. He calls one Betsy and the other one Slaughter.

I don't see the logic in sharpening a knife with another...

I lightly shrugged and looked at the vast white expanse that is a ceiling as I entered the Land of Nod.


Briggs, wake up! Wake up! I heard very faintly.

Wake up!

WAKE UP! A voice screamed in my ear.

"Wha!- I ain't got no PILLS!" I exclaimed in surprise as I woke up from my dream and everything rushed into view.

I saw Hawkeye standing in front of my seat. "It's your turn." He grunted.

I made a little grunt as I stood up and picked up my bag, turning to the door next to me and opening it slowly but it still made loud creaking and groaning sounds. I stepped inside, and heard a muffled sound. My gaze immediately snapped to the right wall, where a door was slammed shut.

What was that?! ....Maybe a figment of my imagination....

The office was brightly lit but darkly furnished, creating anonimous effect. I saw the General sitting behind a desk.

I sat downt in the seat across him, the wood making a loud creak.

The General cleared his throat and began to talk, his chair slightly swaying sideways and with his hands making a triangle pointed at me.

"We have to talk about something very serious." He said in his rough voice.

Shit.

"You and your squad are excused of your positions. I require no more need from this squad. The other squad members have been... Relieved... Let's say, of their position. You shall recieve an reward."

"Go on." I said sadly and quietly.

"That reward is death."

I immediately stood up from my chair, the chair moving backwards a few feet from my abrupt movement.

I heard the distinct sound of guards pointing their weapons at me, their rifles making a high pitched whine.

"Goodbye, Briggs. See you in hell."

His form warped and was enveloped in black fire, only to reveal a dark coated PONY with a red jagged horn and green and purple eyes that have pure malice in them.

Before I could even move my arm, he gripped me around my throat with dark magic that suffocated me. I grabbed at my neck as I was lifted up and my vision started fading to black.

My vision started to get blurry but cleared up to a veiw of a dark and desolate landscape.

Fires burned around me, turning the grass to ash and the trees to charcoal. I heard the sound of guns firing around me, and I looked around. The clouds were dark black and suffocated the light of day, the only light being from the fires and the dimmed light that filtered through the clouds.

Where... Where am I!?

That question was immediately answered by a loud thunder that shook the earth, and a large shadow in the shape of a snake crashing into the earth and swiping soldiers off their legs. A dark shadow formed into a face that resembled the pony thing that the General morphed into.

Tendrils of... Shadow matter... started to fill the sky followed by a deep and distorted laugh that rumbled through the atmosphere.

The scene changed.

I saw a whole city get quickly engulfed by shadow and the inhabitants grow a halo of shadow around their heads. Their eyes turned to green and purple irises and pupils, while they marched in unison. Factories started to produce in maximum speed, and the same bone-chilling laugh was heard. My memories came back to me and I knew everything now.

The shadow-pony took over our minds and made us suffer without notice, taking the form of General Farnsworth and forcing us to invade a innocent world full of happiness and peace. Only to get his revenge.

No. This can't be. No. I killed... Innocent pe-ponies? Happy ones bouncing around with rainbows and sugar? WHAT? NO IT CANNOT BE!

The scene melted away, and the bright office came to veiw.

"IT CANNOT BE!" I screamed, the grip disappearing from my neck and allowing me to lunge at "The General", knocking him over and under the office desk. I heard the sounds of automatic fire that tore the desk to splinters.

I heard a growl and a pain shot up from my foot. I looked at the source and saw the shadow pony had grabbed me with a growl. I kicked him in the face and he released me with an "OW!" as I scrambled to my feet and stumbled to the door where the muffled yell was and crashed through it.

I quickly dusted the dust and pain off of me, and looked at a gruesome scene.

My squad's lifeless bodies all bloody and mangled.

My vision started to shake and all the colors took up a red hue, not like it wasn't already all mostly filled by red.

I grabbed a large knife from the table on my right, all covered in blood and licked down the other door, leading to the hallway. I let out a rage filled scream and I sprinted through the hallway, my body all filled up with drugs.

I ran towards two guards guarding a door and before they could draw their rifles, knocked them down. I found the weak spot in the body armour. The neck. I ripped through the carbon fiber mesh and also their flesh as I stabbed their necks repeatedly, their blood coating the walls and my clothes. I got up again and returned to running down the halls at full speed.

I heard some yells from behind me and turned around to ten guards rounding a corner from the other end of the hallway. They all opened fire and everything slowed down. I saw the pulse bullets fly towards me, and I instinctively dogged to the left, behind a pillar. Everything became the normal speed.

I heard the sound of marble breaking and I knew it was the guards. I breathed heavily, my vision regaining the normal colors for a split second then returning to having a red hue each time I breathed in and out.

I looked around frantically, seeing no exit. I looked at the window at my left.

JUMP!

I jumped from my pillar and through the window as the guards got dangerously close. The window shattered, sending me down off the third floor off the castle and into the streets below...

Next Chapter