
There was a fire
Feb 2012 write-off
A massive fire breaks out in the Everfree Forrest, and every pony must deal with the repercussions of the disaster in their own way.
I have edited this story heavily from the version that was first released. I've cut over two thousand words, and it's a better read now. Please comment to tell me what you liked and what I need to improve on, both in the story and with my general style.
This was my contest entry for the February 2012 FIM write-off, and originally it was horribly received by a majority of the readers.





5999 words: Estimated 30 minutes to read
1 Chapter:
- Chapter 1 2012-08-08 00:23:18 UTC5999