There was a fire

by Rex Ivan
Feb 2012 write-off

A massive fire breaks out in the Everfree Forrest, and every pony must deal with the repercussions of the disaster in their own way.

I have edited this story heavily from the version that was first released. I've cut over two thousand words, and it's a better read now. Please comment to tell me what you liked and what I need to improve on, both in the story and with my general style.

This was my contest entry for the February 2012 FIM write-off, and originally it was horribly received by a majority of the readers.

Everyone
Complete
Adventure
Tragedy
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
 
OSZMM

5999 words: Estimated 30 minutes to read

1 Chapter:

  1. Chapter 1 2012-08-08 00:23:18 UTC
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