The Raven

by Evilworld

Rating: teen
Tags: Dark, Sad, Romance, Tragedy
Length: 1129

When a strange pony that don't want to do with any pony else he just want to be aloned. Moved to Ponyvilled, after he fail goto his welcome to Ponyvilled party, the mane six started investegate they find a dark secret hold dear to him.

I don't owned MLPFIM I owned the oc Raven
When a Pony with a dark past that he wish anyone not to find out, moved to ponyvilled, but after his fail attempt not to got to his welcome too Ponyvilled party. The main six investgate why he didn't show. To find out pony that moved in was a murder. But that not the dark secret, the dark secret he has hubor those past years, that he wish he will never use ever again.

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2013-07-14 22:40:35 UTC

Chapter 1: Pony with a raven cutie mark

Another fine day in Ponyvilled, everypony were hard working at their stall selling verserties of their vegetables and fruits. Two young earth pony talking about were about expected pony that is moving in. "Did you heard that this new pony is moving in?" said a stroung green earth pony selling melons. He was talking to another pony he was red and big.

"Eyup" said the red pony. He was selling Apples at his stall.

"You know what that means Big Mac?"

"Eyup"

"That mean welcome to Ponyvilled party." a gray earth stallion with black mane and have a raven and a red crested moon has walked up to the melon stalled. "Hello walcome to my stalls, what will I get you today?" he said with a smile on his face.

"I want buy a couple of melons." he said with a serious tone like he just don't want to be here right now, but he have to.

"That will be six bits" the gray stallion gave him the bits he need and trade for the melons. The gray stallion put melon in his black saddle bag. He then without a word. "That must be the pony that is moving in."

"Eyup" said Big Mac

"You don't talk much do you."

"Nope"

The gray stallion is walking black his new home with a angry look on his face. Why are they looking at me. Is because who I am and what i done. the I am a son of- His train of thought was interrupted when ran into a pink party mare Pinky Pie.

When Pinkie Pie saw who he was she smile with a excited look on her face. "You must be the pony everyonr talk about. I'm Pinkie Pie what yours." she was shaking his hooves uncontrollablyand stoping until he say who he is.

"R R R R av en" he said with a scare look on his face.

"That a nice name." said Pinkie Pie  she stop shaking his hoove and handed him a invitation card. "Here you go you are invited to welcome to Ponyvilled party where you will meet your new naighbor."

Raven look at invitation its said 'hello new ponies that moved into Ponyvilled you are invited to welcome to Ponyvilled party.' He look at Pinkie Pie with a angry look on his face.

"Is this a joke?"

"No, this no joke, why did I write somthing funny on your invitation and forgotten about it?"

"No, that not it. You invite sompony you barely know and think they will show up to your show called party and be happy about it."

"Will yes almost everypony I meet and made friend with comes to my party they enjoy it."

"I'm not going to the party." he was serious about not going.

"Oh I don't think you didn't read the last part of the invitation" she said

' He look at his invitation again found what she was talking about. 'P.S. If you don't show to the party I will go Pinkie commando on you.'

"I'm still not going Pinkie Pie" he didn't hestidated on the fail threat Pinkie Pie pute in his invitation. He throwed away the invitation Pinkie Pie gave him and stared to leave.

Pinkie Pie started to followed him. "Why won't you go?" she asked. He didn't say anything for her ansewed. "whywhywhywhywhywhy won't you go please tells me pleasepleaseplease." she beg for the ansewed allthe way to his new home.

He turn around and look straight into her eyes and say "You want know why" he said. Pinkie nodded "Well one day when you wake up and realize that party isn't about life and game. No that about meeting yours show called 'friend' that  will one day stab you in the back." turn to the door open it went inside and slam it in Pinkie Pie face.

Pinkie Pie just stand there confuse of what he said. "huh stab you the back, he may have made any good friend." she shake it off stared walk to her friend Twilght Sparkle to talk about this new pony she has met.

Good she left I hope It the last time see that carzy mare. He was looking at her through a peephole he walk away from it and looked down. He was sad and disapointed. If only you know that this land an't sunshine and smile at all. He walk further into his new home. His house was dark and gloomy and his decore  was resemble death and sadness and nothing else. He went to his bedroom there inside was his bed that have black sheets and at the end of his bed that seem  out of place was a bright yellow chest. He open the chest and what lay there was two pony doll one was a mare and the other was a stallion.

He pick up the two pony dolls and started to talking to them like their alive. "Hi Mama and Papa I finally all move in...I know you worry about me Ma that you disaprove my tast... Please I'm a grown stallion there nothing to get emotional about it." he started shed tears then he stared to cry. He hug the two dolls that resemble his parents " I so sorry what did to you two. I so sorry I murder you I'm truely am." He there and cry for the rest of the day.

Pinkie Pie was at Twilght Sparkle home the Oaken Library. She went inside to be greeted by Spike the Purple baby dragon. "Hi Pinkie Pie how are you today?" said Spike.

"I'm doing just find met the new pony that moved into Ponyvilled today." said Pinkie Pie.

"Ho was he?" asked Spike.

"I don't what to think about him. He ether a depress pony need to go to my Welcome to Ponyvilled party or he a meanie pants that don't want goto the party so I may go Pinkie commando on him."

"What are you two talking about."  both turned to see it was Twilght Sparkle the lavender unicorn. Twilight Sparkle has walked into their conversation.

"Ho I just met the pony that moved in." she started talk about him and what she think about him.

"What dose the pony look like?" asked Twilight.

"He has black mane and is gray. Also his cutie mark is raven with a red crested moon." said Pinkie

"Raven with a red crested moon for cutie mark that be bit strange for a cutie mark. Did you asked what his special talent is?"

"Nope I sure didn't asked he just slam the door in my face."

"Wait a minnute he did what?" ask Twilight shock what she just heard he did to her friend.